I can’t with this nonsense! Had to dnf right around the half-way point. It and enough the storytelling is all over the place and the author is missing even an iota of common sense (as is repeatedly shown through her characters also having zero common sense) but also couldn’t even be bothered to use google for two seconds to write with any kind of believability.
What makes it worse that a book written by a female is there are so many anti-woman elements and they’re really just patriarchal societal expectations that people seem to just accept as perfectly normal mindsets.
I wound up spending more time noting all the issues than actually enjoying the story because there was so little to actually enjoy.
They know her teeth were pulled out but do they know for sure she was dismembered? There’s nothing at the scene itself saying (evidence left) this happened other than the character just assuming it.
If this is the second victim and it’s clearly an extreme death scene why wouldn’t Blythe or the assistant be at the scene.
Anyone who is so easily flustered or gives up so easily isn’t a good candidate for a death scene investigator.
A potential employer cannot ask about a disfigurement, deformity, or disability.
Had Val known all that the job entails she wouldn’t have applied? Ummm she couldn’t be bothered to google it for two seconds?
“I can handle anything you through at me” even though she JUST had an emotional breakdown because she was being questioned about glaringly obvious gaps and awkward answers (but wasn’t even told she didn’t get the job she just assumed and had a pity party for herself). And then immediately vomits and cries (again her pity party) after having the first interaction with a body in the morgue.
Despite being absolutely brand new and zero experience and essentially lying to get in there she immediately questions why she has to wear a certain set of gear and then casts moral judgment on song choices? Lol for someone who has absolutely nothing and is on the verge of living in her car she’s sitting awfully high on her entitlement high horse.
Also, also, how would she not have some kind of settlement from workers comp and the county/city for leaving her unattended with a clearly very violent criminal. She should hardly be poor.
How does the victim supposedly go into hiding and then her sister manages to reach out to her easily enough? Not much good at hiding apparently.
Can’t help notice that the sister is on edge? Why wouldn’t someone be on edge when their sister is kissing, they’re meeting at a official building she likely is hesitant to go to due to her history, and someone with a drug problem would be edgy to begin with.
And no, she doesn’t have to listen to this. Gavin has not put her under arrest and is therefore there strictly as a courtesy unless she’s officially detained/arrested and given her rights. Anyone with three convictions would absolutely know this.
Gavin illegally accessing her record and then demanding that he “cares” for her side of the story is absolutely preposterous and the character has already thought enough that she’s not the right kind of person who could be this killer yet he persists. So this is just needlessly contrived tension for zero reason beyond lazy writing.
NOW every single woman is a potential victim? Does this writer live under a rock? As a female herself this is a weird statement since women are always potential victims. That’s the issue!!!!
Why would howie or anyone else (especially knowing she needs to be trained) send her to the scene without even a liver thermometer so she can do the time of death maths? Moreover, why leave her unattended at all and risk ruining a scene?
Wait, so apparently after being told to assess the scene and tries to bluster through it with saying the room is hot, told to deliver death notice to a senile lady, then comes back to move the body to check for lividity and THEN finally uses the thermometer?!?!? That should have been the first thing she did.
Did that guy really just mansplain how the wife might not know the husband is dead exactly after the nurse JUST said that same thing?
Then howie said after she did so well at the house (lol no she didn’t) she should take the next one solo - ummmm… she was solo on this one too. Howie offered zero help.
Oh please, a newbie calling to confirm if a more experienced person was on scene is hardly a bad move. Finding the most outlandish excuse to avoid making the call is once again poor writing and contrivance. Especially since she was just told it was such a major scene/case. Moreover after then immediately reiterating how major the case is. Even if Blythe can’t be reached there are countless others with superiority and experience she should’ve notified.
Why keep calling what happened to her thumb an accident. It was, in no way, an accident. And why act like her whole life stopped because she got a boo boo on her thumb she can still use? People who were attacked and harmed or in legit accidents with far worse outcomes go about their lives way better than this whiny baby does.
Ahhhh yes, leave it up to a man with zero dentistry experience to know better and stump a female doctor specialized in dentistry. Are we sure this was really written by a woman? Or maybe she’s just brainwashed into believing toxic male behaviors is acceptable?
Lol what? Her long ago eaten lunch “dissipated.” In a physics sense this would be technically correct but really in the context of the statement and the general language of the book “long ago digested” would have been most appropriate.
A pharmacy filling TWO pain killer vials? No way. It would be one bottle with the full amount prescribed. Not multiple bottles within days.
Since the boyfriend is there and it’s not established whose house it is the DSI cannot help herself to drawers and such without a warrant. Typically they’re only allowed “wing spread” search.
How does finding the body parts out the case in a different light? Or indicates escalation? He isn’t killing anyone more rapidly which is what escalation typically means in this context.
Pathology does not mean speculation, which is what that one guy was doing when he mentioned putting the arm in the oven. If he did actual tests and found proof then that’s science, evidence, and pathology.
Gavin calling out a doctor who has a history of making hasty claims is not crossing a line.
It’s amazing how many scientists/doctors/experts (supposedly) in this ME department is utterly incapable of scientific thinking or working. It seems all everyone does is merely speculate and declare opinions as empirical data.
Ahhhh yes, a silly little woman is so ruled by her emotions and hormones she can’t even think straight when around an attractive (married) man. Once again proving how stupid women are, ruled by emotions, and shouldn’t be allowed in positions of authority clearly.