The fact that I got thru the whole thing bought it a star, but... that's really not saying much.
First, the story can't even start with a decent opening paragraph. "It was a dark and stormy night", cliched as it is, is better than being chucked headfirst into a murder scene like we are in this hot mess. Why value and draw in your readers, when you can pelt them with emotion before even developing the scene for them? Screw details, people, Bailey has a #$!*% deadline, and YOU'RE in her way!!
Our heroine is a moron. She can't even walk up the steps on page one (for no apparent reason), she drops her pepper spray (who wouldn't be *CLUTCHING* it in a moment of fear, hello?), she leaves her purse at a crime scene... it's just awful from moment one.
The writing is abysmal, too. "Ivy Bridges. You save me a trip to your house," baddie says. 'How does he know I have a DAUGHTER!!!???!!!' is her immediate thought. Um... he never said anything about your kid, so... what the heck left field did *THAT* just come out of...???
How about this: "He headed across the den, where his leather recliner waited for him at an angle to the red plaid sofa that was a hand-me-down from Angie." Soooo... we can't bother with describing a crime scene or giving a decent intro, but when Bailey has a mind to, she can waste a LOT of page space describing the angles of the hero's furniture?
More fun: A FOUR YEAR OLD CHILD named 'Wren' can pronounce the 'wr' with no problem, but speaks in 2-year old talk. "I Wren!" she declares. But later, she can't pronounce the 'r's when the author feels like adding baby talk in. Drives me crazy.
NOT a keeper.