this was my 1st book by Rilzy Adams and not gonna lie, after reading this, i’m kinda hesitant to pick up her other books, cos i wasn’t really a fan of this one…
the characters weren’t all that developed. i didn’t manage to connect with both of them at all. i really wanted to, but i found them to be a bit mundane. i caught myself just reading about them for the sake of it, not because i actually rooted for them or cared for them at all.
the writing style, in my opinion, was highly repetitive. the things they’d done were also told in a way which failed to grip me and make me feel things. again, i just wasn’t feeling it. it was like, stating things he’d done to her and not each thing actually prolonged, properly felt between the characters and their connection explained better to the reader. everything was told on the surface level, if that makes sense. i just failed to really connect with everything.
the plot… there wasn’t much. the best summary is this: “In twelve years unless we’re with other people I’ll fly you somewhere and you’ll give me two nights…” i mean, it was original, but chances of that happening purely for sex lmaoo. regardless of that, again, i didn’t connect with it. it would’ve been a little more interesting if the female character, Yara, was more resistant and made herself harder to get in some way. in any case, it wasn’t a book for me unfortunately.