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149 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 16, 2021
I’m going to make sure she’s mine forever when I claim her, fill her with my seed over and over and over again, swelling her belly year after year as we celebrate the annual births of our children.
-Carlito
If the hero hadn't been human, I'd let it pass but the use of the word 'seed' is just so strange to me when the hero IS human. The repetitive use of it was also an issue for me.
“Daddy’s going to lick his Little Girl clean, spit shine her private parts.”
“Okay. It’s good to be clean.”
“Especially when Daddy does it his way,” he mumbles into my flesh and continues doing what he was doing.
I...— This is not hot 😬🥶
Somehow he manages to cock back his hips one last time and drive into me, the head of his dick pressed firmly against my womb as he unleashes a hot geyser of seed inside me, painting my womb like a Jackson Pollock, splattering his baby making fluids all over inside me.
-Carolina
I said it in my book notes/update and I'll say it again!
↳ Leave Jackson Pollock out of this✋🛑