When She Disappeared follows Margo, a thirty something who returns to her hometown after a long time away to help her Dad recover from a surgery. Upon her arrival, she finds out that the body of Jessie Germaine, her formed best friend, has been discovered in the town after being missing for a number of years. The disappearance of Jessie was never solved, and a TV show called Into Thin Air did an episode on it. With the discovery of the body, the TV show returns into town, with Austin, Margo's high school friend and crush, to do a follow up episode. Margo is offered to help solve the murder/create the episode, interviewing leads and trying to find as much information as possible to hopefully avenge her friend.
This review has spoilers! I want to start by saying I really enjoyed Family Tree last year-it was a great read. This unfortunately was extremely disappointing. I think the idea behind the story was really good and had so much potential, enough to keep me reading until the end. But the execution of this was so poor. The writing felt extremely amateur, if you took away Austin and Margo's names, you couldn't tell who was who. None of the characters have any personality whatsoever, and Austin was written to sound exactly like Margo, very feminine sounding (even though he was not described that way) and unrealistic. Half of this book could've been cut and you would've ended up in the same place, there were so many added details that added nothing to the story. I guessed the ending right away. It was almost too obvious because literally nothing is happening throughout the entire story except these minor throwaway details. Margo is horrible! Like this is so unrealistic. She kills her former best friend, by accident, in regard to this horrible situation and she's just able to recover? And all that happens is she has bad dreams? Like, what? She can't be that good of an actress, sorry. She's able to go on and be around her Dad, live her life and just nothing happens? I just can't buy it. It was so predictable, especially her Dad's involvement in everything. I thought the stuff with her ex husband was so unnecessary because it never talks about her doing it in the present, so why mention it at all ? To show how she does questionable things but doesn't remember, or realize, but then she does remember the murder? And then she goes and visits the site, relives it, burns her stuff and she's over it and feels alive? No. Super disappointed in this one, it took me forever to get through, I would literally read a couple pages, get bored and exit out. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the free preview in exchange for an honest review.
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When She Disappeared follows Margo, a thirty something who returns to her hometown after a long time away to help her Dad recover from a surgery. Upon her arrival, she finds out that the body of Jessie Germaine, her formed best friend, has been discovered in the town after being missing for a number of years. The disappearance of Jessie was never solved, and a TV show called Into Thin Air did an episode on it. With the discovery of the body, the TV show returns into town, with Austin, Margo's high school friend and crush, to do a follow up episode. Margo is offered to help solve the murder/create the episode, interviewing leads and trying to find as much information as possible to hopefully avenge her friend.
This review has spoilers! I want to start by saying I really enjoyed Family Tree last year-it was a great read. This unfortunately was extremely disappointing. I think the idea behind the story was really good and had so much potential, enough to keep me reading until the end. But the execution of this was so poor. The writing felt extremely amateur, if you took away Austin and Margo's names, you couldn't tell who was who. None of the characters have any personality whatsoever, and Austin was written to sound exactly like Margo, very feminine sounding (even though he was not described that way) and unrealistic. Half of this book could've been cut and you would've ended up in the same place, there were so many added details that added nothing to the story. I guessed the ending right away. It was almost too obvious because literally nothing is happening throughout the entire story except these minor throwaway details. Margo is horrible! Like this is so unrealistic. She kills her former best friend, by accident, in regard to this horrible situation and she's just able to recover? And all that happens is she has bad dreams? Like, what? She can't be that good of an actress, sorry. She's able to go on and be around her Dad, live her life and just nothing happens? I just can't buy it. It was so predictable, especially her Dad's involvement in everything. I thought the stuff with her ex husband was so unnecessary because it never talks about her doing it in the present, so why mention it at all ? To show how she does questionable things but doesn't remember, or realize, but then she does remember the murder? And then she goes and visits the site, relives it, burns her stuff and she's over it and feels alive? No. Super disappointed in this one, it took me forever to get through, I would literally read a couple pages, get bored and exit out. Thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the free preview in exchange for an honest review.