Trigger warnings for this book:
Sexual assault, rape, violence, sexism, xenophobia, racism, gore, animal violence, incest, explicit sexual scenes.
*Contains spoilers*
Moth by Melody Razak was a provoking book and had many memorable scenes, as well as beautifully written sentences and paragraphs, yet the book did not follow through well as a novel. While her writing offers many poignant and insightful moments, the longevity of her writing is quite drawn out and slow for a novel. For instance, there would be a scene that would change the trajectory of the plot, or add more insight into the historical context, but then the author would continue to stress that point with other depictions that felt very contrived and wanting more for shock value than added relevance to the novel.
That being said, I appreciated Razak’s commentary on religion, nationalism, colonialism, fascism, feminism, classism, etc. As I now understand, this period, the Partition Era, and India's Independence were wrought with political and social upheaval. To Razak’s credit, I felt that with her debut novel she attempted to speak on the multiplicity of issues that were occurring during this period, through the experience of this fictional family. I believe this story was meant to elicit relatability and emotionality to the circumstances via a domestic setting.
For the first 60% of this novel, I was very invested in what would happen to this family. But, towards the end, I found myself losing interest because the plot wasn't really going anywhere, instead, the duration of the book was meant to emphasize the suffering that the family felt, which I felt empathy for but also felt could have been concluded within a hundred pages less than the book had. Unfortunately, I felt that the characters in her book were more plot devices than characters. There were also several scenes that I did not understand the relevance of. For example, the recalling of the past and the allusions to incestuous feelings that happened--what was the point of that? Other than to emphasize the darkness that encapsulated these people.
I felt that the last part of this novel was more of a "misery, begets misery, begets misery, begets misery, etc." We know. She did not understand that her setting and time period spoke to that implicitly without having to overexplain or emphasize.
Finally, I do not understand the inclusion of the first scene of the book juxtaposed with the last scene of the book. The scenes seem unrelated, yet they are placed in a strategic and poignant way but do not offer any strategic or poignant meanings. The narrative is disorganized and while I enjoy Razak’s writing style I was very frustrated at the end scene. I felt that I already knew what happened to Alma and I could have known what happened earlier and gained nothing from reading the last 40% of the book.
Also, the end is meant to be inspirational despite the previous gratuitous and horrifying scene but I struggled to see the point of inspiration or the point of that last scene. Was it really her India? No. Her body wasn't even her body. She was abducted. You can't take your audience through that entire novel in which you emphasize that women are not equal humans in this scenario and don't have the same agency as men in any capacity and then try to convince us in the last scene that it is somehow "her India", it felt patronizing. Why end on a high note when the entire point of your novel was meant to emphasize suffering and horror, and the crimes of humanity against one another? It's like putting a bow on a pile of shit, what's the point?
She is a talented writer but this book is not for me, though I know I will think about this novel quite often. I think having read it and understood the gravity of the events that took place during this period, I can't help but be grateful to Razak for illuminating and explicitly showing the horrors that the people in this part of the world, specifically the women, had to endure. I can appreciate and validate that I know that this author has done extensive research into this topic, which from what I can tell would not be easy, but has many stories still to tell.
I rented this book from the library and I will not be purchasing it at a future time. I will not be reading this book. I do not necessarily recommend this book either.