The Enchanted Forest: An Erotic Fairy Tale

by Victoria Rush

Sometimes it’s not just the grass that’s greener on the other side….When wayward youth Clover passes through a hidden portal on a nature hike, her eyes are opened to a whole new world of wonders in the fantasy land of Abbynthia. As she stares in wonderment at the sensual shape of the plants and trees, she soon loses her innocence succumbing to their intoxicating lure.When she’s surrounded by wolves after a moment of distraction, she’s saved by exiled elf Tara, who takes her back to her fort in the woods. The two bed down for the night where Clover quickly learns that elves have some additional magic skills.But before long she yearns to return home, and when she can no longer find the location of the portal that brought her to Abbynthia, Tara suggests they meet the local warlock who might be able to help. But upon meeting the comely young girls, the warlock only seems interested in taking advantage of them in a different way.When they’re rescued by handsome bandit Jessop, the three miscreants set out to find the magic portal. After coming upon an injured dragon and nursing him back to health, the dragon offers to give them a ride to expedite their journey. On route, they come upon a kingdom of giants where the new friends experience a whole new set of erotic thrills and chills…

Genres: Fantasy, Erotica, Romance, Fiction, LGBT

96 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 22, 2021

Reviews

[SlaughterBat · Rating 1 out of 5]

Cute idea, but horrifically executed. The idea that Clover falls into a world where plants use human pleasure as a way of pollinating is a really good plot line and I thought it was going to continue from there. However, the introduction of Tara is where everything goes downhill. For a lesbian romance, this book is not only lacking the intricacies of lesbian sex, but also randomly throws in a man? If the book is about women and them exploring each other, why the hell are we putting in men?!

Secondly, this entire book feels like it was written by a man who has no clue how to pleasure a woman, or has only seen wlw sex through porn. There is no buildup or any real touching Clover does to herself, the way Tara and Clover touch each other feels hollow and empty and like there’s only one thing they can do which is humping.

It’s a poorly written story, but my favorite wtf moments are the way Clover talks about her brothers. The first few moments we really get to hear about her brothers, Clover is not only sexualizing them, but using them as a point of reference of how men’s body look and how it would feel against her. As well as, how men masturbate AND what their dicks look like. The weird incest tidbits thrown in as so egregious and vomit inducing.

The phrasing of how some of the way things are described are one of nightmares. As someone else mentioned, flapping of their pussies is going to haunt me for the rest of my life.

Not a good read, save yourself the trouble.

[Crow Gray · Rating 5 out of 5]

This seems to get some mixed reviews, but I thought it was pretty hot. Keeping in mind this is called a "fairy tale" you don't have to explain every plot hole, as some things are just taken for granted. Like when a hot naked girl ends up in another world, she immediately starts f*cking the sexual plants. Seemed a little odd, but perhaps the plants emit some type of aphrodisiac. Then there's some hot lesbian action, more plant action, some combo lesbian/plant action, then some straight male/plant action, then we get a ffm threesome. I noticed some readers didn't like the positions used, but I thought it was just a writer trying to get creative.

There's also a bit of a story in between the sex, and like I said, keeping in mind it's a fairy tale, it's not going to always make perfect sense.

Overall I enjoyed this, but it's an erotic "fairy tale", so don't overthink it.

[GetBooked101 · Rating 3 out of 5]

3 stars
An interesting fantasy mixed with erotica story enjoyed majority of the story while some parts felt lacking in qualities, while other parts where just plain odd but kinky.

Pros
Odd kinky plants they where romancible but gave off human body parts odd but slightly enjoyable.
Good mixture of erotica and fantasy with enough erotica and fantasy for both worlds.

Cons
The romance between Clover and Tass moved way too quickly like they only knew each other for 2 days and tass would die for Clovar.
Lacked description in majority of the book needed more description and a more clear painted picture.

Can read it online for free 22 pages long.

[A.J. Newton · Rating 1 out of 5]

I wouldn't recommend this to a single soul, even if neglecting to do so would unalive me. It started out with a brilliant plot, Clover falling into another world, where plants use human pleasure to pollinate. That's a unique and inspired idea. But, then, it all goes to hell. The positions described are simply not possible for two women. There's no *emotion* involved. It's a dry, mechanical, horrid excuse for erotica. I'm surprised I managed to finish it.

[Saidah Gilbert · Rating 2 out of 5]

The concept is interesting but the typos are a bit distracting. Also, I didn't gel with the narrative style. However, the book scratched the itch I was feeling at the time so it wasn't a waste to read. I may collect other books in this series when I have extra money. The other adventures looked interesting as well.

[Nicole · Rating 1 out of 5]

WTH did I just read. This sucked. No character development, no story line, just take main character and plop her in a field of sexual plants then introduce a nimpo elf. Ridiculous. Thankfully this was a free book as I'd be annoyed if I wasted money on this.

[A Story Explorer · Rating 4 out of 5]

Great start to this steamy fantasy adventure! Loved the interesting and fun erotic fantasy aspects the author wove into the world. It's easy to dive into and I'm curious as to where Clover and her friends will end up next.

3.5 out of 5 rating for me!

[Jeff · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fun story

I am having fun enjoying this wonderful adventure of erotic and exotic fun Clover is having in this fairy tale.

[Fancy]

DNF at "sloshing of their flapping pussies". Cute plants, great cover art.

[Tristan · Rating 2 out of 5]

Rather bland porn in a rather bland portal fantasy setting. A forgettable novella.

[Jurnee · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF at 36%

Boring, lazy writing, not fun or interesting.

[Kenneth · Rating 3 out of 5]

Not too bad but I'm curious to read more

[Tinks Keller · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved this book, just the perfect mix of steamy and adventure. I can't wait to read more from this author she's a beautiful writer!

[Dominque Simmons · Rating 5 out of 5]

So good. This was such a good story from start to finish, i was reading it at work to pass the time and I did not wanna put it down, I even read it on my patrols and walked into a building. I love the comradery between the characters and the fact that they've known each other less than a month but are willing to fight for one another. That said I do need to read the rest of the books in the series.

[Ash Reads Books · Rating 2 out of 5]

Nope nope nuh uh nah nope nope nope!

[Cody Smith · Rating 4 out of 5]

The book was interesting to say the least, it started with my favourite type of genre, person gets transported to a new world.

This world is a fantasy medieval world with Elves and Giants and Dragons.

When I first started, I really didn’t know anything about this book, other than it is a fairytale erotica book.

After reading, I can say it is definitely erotica, first chapter pretty much spells that out quickly, then the second chapter brings in lesbian erotica, and later a male component in the later chapters.

Other than the erotic sex scenes, this wasn’t a bad book, I just wish it had been longer.

[James Adams · Rating 5 out of 5]

Put my silly butt in the mood

Hot, hot, hot. That's all I can say. It was like watching a good porno. Can't wait to get the next book