I cannot believe that LLM wrote this book.
There are so many things wrong with it. I don’t even know where to begin.
I finally started keeping notes every time I wanted through my iPad through the window…
Country Proud
Linda Lael Miller
Oh this book is making me so angry!
I read the first in the trilogy and hated it too. I said I wouldn't read the others but purchased it because it was cheap.
I usually enjoy Miller's books.
But these feel like someone else wrote them. So many extra words and flowery descriptions just to use up the space!
The language is dated!
They are taking about MySpace but refer to Facebook and the Book of Faces??
They claim a female deputy was a Navy Seal but according to the news, that only just happened this past summer!
It feels like there was no research done at all.
Who has a 'big holiday dinner' on New Year's Day?
Worst sex scene ever
It happened then. Eli shifted in his chair and Brynne, straddling him in much the same way she had during the snowmobile ride, shattered, arching her back, crying out in startled release. Eli groaned and slid his hands up under her sweater and bra, stroking her hard nipples with the pads of his thumbs. Brynne ground against him, in glorious frenzy, and came again, harder than before, so hard that she convulsed in Eli’s arms. When she’d finally finished, she collapsed against his chest, resting her head on his shoulder, her breath fast and shallow.
.and a white straw hat with a matching band.
What?? It is the middle of winter. Who wears a white straw hat to a funeral in the middle of winter??
Brynne drives an MG in the winter in Montana??
The sheriff doesn't take any precautions when he goes home and notices the dog doesn't greet him. Then he is surprised when he is jumped!
Why did Freddie have a pillow case over his head before he hung himself? Why did the sheriff cut him down before the forensics team got there?
Brynne runs hot and cold and is very emotional. Yet they say she is usually calm. What?
The last book I read, the woman suffered a blow to the head. They had to relieve the pressure and because there was an open wound, only one visitor for 5 minutes each hour. Suited up to prevent infection. For a whole week!
In this book, the sheriff gets hit with a shove, a surgeon flies in from another town to drill a hole, he is a wake and talking and having visitors all in the same day! Ugh!
Why are they asking the doctor who is watching the woman who attacked Eli? Where are the deputies and local police?
Three weeks with a fractured skull and he lets his dog knock him over and wrestle with him? OMG
Then he is up for sex right away?
I don't recall how long Brynne was with her ex, but she grew to love his kids so much that when she moved back to Montana, she bought furniture and decorated bedrooms for the to visit. What? She was never their step-mother and even if she was, she is no longer a part of their lives. So weird.
The language sounds more like an old man wrote this. What 35 year old says he needs get “spiffed up?”
I must remember NOT to buy any more books by LLM. Books should be enjoyable and not make me angry!