Wow. This is by far the worst book JR has ever written. I'm so sad. I thought "Claimed" was the lowest I'd ever rate one of her books (2-stars), but this one... There wasn't a single thing I liked about it. At least I couldn't put "Claimed" down, but this dragged on and on, I had to force myself to read it.
Fair warning that this will be full of spoilers and swearing because I'm pissed and can't control myself.
So... What the hell is this so-called "romance"? I already thought the "falling in love in one day" instances were ridiculous, but this wasn't more than a few MINUTES? Lucan literally started saving and bonding with Rio THE. SECOND. he saw her, WTF??!?! And this was a character we already knew from the first Prison Camp, so there was a chance for character development there, but noooo, why bother?
Neither of them have any personalities whatsoever, they are the single most generic characters I've ever read about, and I think J. R. Ward had it this was purposely so that they are completely interchangeable with the "Claimed" characters, to the point where LUC ACTUALLY SAYS RIO "CLAIMED" HIM, WTFFFFFF!!!!!
But instead of having lore about werewolves (Wolven), there is absolutely none, when she could've used this opportunity to make a connection between this book and Claimed and build upon that universe, but I guess the lore will be this watered down mess. Oh, and can anyone possibly justify why Luc ran into the sunlight for no good goddamn reason, when Rio could've brought the bodies out herself?
There are almost no physical descriptions, we only got a very brief one of Lucan's hair towards the end, it seems all Ward describes nowadays is "how enormous" all the characters are, with no other distinctive personality traits. As for Rio, even worse, we don't get anything on her beside her hair color and length.
Oh, and how is she an ex FBI agent turned cop? She has no training, NONE. She CRIES when she's taken by a drug dealer when she's been undercover and knew full well this could happen. She takes unnecessary risks, is (sorry, but it's gotta be said) stupid with decisions, and resorts to beating Mozart when she finally meets him without any consideration to... um... the law?!
To make the physical part of it worse, both of the sex scenes are so ridiculous I couldn't read them without rolling my eyes every five seconds. The timing on the first one isn't funny or laughable, it just makes it unbelievable to the point it breaks any immersion I could possibly have. And the characters themselves keep making remarks on how "rushed" it is, but they even have time for foreplay!
I don't even know how they met the second time they had sex, they just ran into each other's arms out of the blue with no explanation and had sex I don't even know where.
Same with how Rio finds out Luc is a hybrid - what the hell was that cousin running toward Rio's car all of a sudden? At no point was there any explanation provided!!!! And she just accepted it and they move on to kill Mozart together, just like that, easy peasy.
Why did it take so long, then, to the point that whole arc with cops dying had to be a part of A. SUPERNATURAL. BOOK??? I don't give a shit about cops here! (really, not even Butch at this point)
I'm also sick of reading about fucking Jose De La Cruz, I sweat to God if I have to read one more paragraph about him I'm gonna tear my hair out! I simply DON'T CARE.
Then comes Vishous. I never understood why anyone even liked him, much less why he's one of the most popular (if not the most) BDB character. But he's been getting worse and worse in each book he appears, losing his temper over every little thing, treating Jane despicably and now... he's downright disgusting - and I'm not talking about that sex scene, though that's not my cup of tea either and I found myself uncomfortably accelerating my reading speed in order to get through it faster (I mean, WHO in the their right minds wants to read about SYRINGE play?! I'm TERRIFIED of needles). Oh, and to add salt to the cut, Marissa and Butch are apparently ACTUALLY there, and not just a fantasy of V's, which is even worse.
But the fact he IS in love with Butcher and is still with Jane, lying to her AND to himself, is just gross. Just because his POV says he's not in love or lying, it doesn't mean he isn't. It's the actions that define something, not the words, and the truth is that all of V's emotional needs are fulfilled by Butch while Jane is basically just a (forgive my words, but) fuck hole. Seriously, I can't remember any cute and tender moment shared between them since book... I don't even know, since the many, many books ago. In fact, as while Vishous becomes more and more of a scumbag, Jane loses her personality altogether. She no longer anything other than the Brotherhood's doctor, and that's her whole character arc. It's a tragedy.
Even Rhage, one of my top 3 favorite BDB characters ever, is starting to annoy me. Almost all of his scenes are about eating now, it's basically his only personality trait these days. I'm also a Taurus and it gets on my nerves that this is all we're ever described as - liking food IS NOT something interesting about someone, because, guess what, MOST PEOPLE like food!!
The Prison Camp's storyline itself doesn't make a lot of sense - why is the Brotherhood seemingly doing nothing about it if they have nothing else to do now - or rather, when is this even happening in the BDB timeline? And how come the Command was able to not only get from the previous camp to this prison while moving over 300 prisoners, but also set up an entire drug operation - which, btw, Lucan is able to destroy within a matter of minutes - when the fucking king of the vampires and the strongest, most badass vampires in the world can't find even one piece of information? It's extremely hard to believe all of it. And I'm getting sick and tired of WOMEN being the torturers of that prison - especially in a sexist vampire world.
The Jackal's bit of storyline was also completely unnecessary, since in the end it served absolutely no purpose but to... stall? Increase the word count? Like Vishous himself said, a moot point.
The ONLY thing I liked about this book was Apex and Kane's possible relationship, and all the "prison crew", Mayhem, etc. But at this point, I'm pretty sure Ward is about to butcher that as well, and shove their romance with no buildup and a rushed plot crammed into a single senseless book that adds nothing to the BDB universe.
Oh, btw, when did it become okay for supernatural beings to be with humans?! Because as far as I remember, that was COMPLETELY FORBIDEN for vampires. And while there are many humans within the Brotherhood itself now... it's not like Wrath made a proclamation saying it's totally okay now, is it?! We, as readers, know that it would be eventually accepted, but the rest of the characters DON'T!! They're not omniscient, they have to BE TOLD that in order to acquire that knowledge!
I simply can't defend J. R. Ward anymore. And boy, did I try my best.
Example of bad writing, not even justifying anything:
"Lucan had found Kane in the rubble. The collar blast had somehow been turned away from him, maybe from a malfunction, who the hell knew"