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23 pages, ebook
First published January 1, 1939
Transformed into vapor by the fog, the white light of a street lamp bathes my hands in its pale beam, turning them ashen, spreading my vague silhouette on the grass. And it is then, suddenly, that I see a shadow next to mine.
A man, a young man, stands in front of me. He has light-colored eyes set in a dark face, and one of his eyebrows is slightly arched, giving to his countenance an almost supernatural aspect. From him, like an odor, comes an animal heat.
Her eighteen years: her chestnut braids that, unbound, cascaded to her waist: her golden complexion: her dark eyes so wide and questioning. A small mouth with full lips; a sweet smile; and the lightest, most gracious body in the world. Of what was she thinking, seated by the fountain’s edge? Of nothing. “She is as silly as she is pretty,” they used to say. But she did not mind being silly, nor acting the dunce at parties.
“Oh, it was awful!” she explains. “I was in a horrible place. In a park I often visit in my sleep. A park. Giant plants. Ferns tall as trees. And silence… I don’t know how to describe it… Silence as green as chloroform… and suddenly, beneath the silence, a low buzzing sound, growing louder, coming nearer… Death, it is death. And then I tried to escape, to wake up. Because if I did not wake up, if death ever found me in that park, I would be doomed to stay forever, don’t you think?”
“¡Qué absurdos, los hombres! Siempre en movimiento, siempre dispuestos a interesarse por todo… listos para huir siempre hacia cosas fútiles. Y tosen, fuman, hablan fuerte, temerosos del silencio como de un enemigo que al menor descuido pudiera echarse sobre ellos, adherirse a ellos e invadirlos sin remedio.”Sin ser de los relatos que más me han gustado de la autora, la belleza de su prosa sigue brillando en cada página.
[t]he Guerra-Cunningham translation tends toward paraphrase, frequently omits images, glosses over intentionally repeated language, explicates what is left ambiguous in the original, and interpolates countless similes of the translators' invention. Reading the Guerra-Cunningham translation, one would be hard pressed to recognize Bombal as a precursor to magical realism, a fact so evident in the Spanish that Carlos Fuentes said, "María Luisa Bombal is the mother of us all."