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My Vampire System #2
My Vampire System: Book 2
The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
321 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 24, 2021
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May 15, 2024
Like the first book
I love the story, but it could still use some more editing for spelling and grammar. There's always room for improvement.
I love the story, but it could still use some more editing for spelling and grammar. There's always room for improvement.
February 21, 2025
Good book, needs editing
I've read books 1 and 2 so far. I like them. I am a teacher, and I've taught K-8th grade. I think this is a book older students would enjoy if the parents would allow it due to the violence. I think students who like adventure and gaming would enjoy these.
Con - The two books have several typos. Words are spelled wrong or the wrong word is used. As an adult, I understand where the mistakes are and understand what is being conveyed. The interest level of this book is great for an older student who struggles to read as it is an easier read. A student learning to read could struggle with the typos and when the wrong word is used.
Another con is that at the end of certain chapters, advertisement of the next chapters being released was left in from the original publishing. It's not awful but could be cleaned up for book release.
I did enjoy books 1 & 2 and will probably keep reading.
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I've read books 1 and 2 so far. I like them. I am a teacher, and I've taught K-8th grade. I think this is a book older students would enjoy if the parents would allow it due to the violence. I think students who like adventure and gaming would enjoy these.
Con - The two books have several typos. Words are spelled wrong or the wrong word is used. As an adult, I understand where the mistakes are and understand what is being conveyed. The interest level of this book is great for an older student who struggles to read as it is an easier read. A student learning to read could struggle with the typos and when the wrong word is used.
Another con is that at the end of certain chapters, advertisement of the next chapters being released was left in from the original publishing. It's not awful but could be cleaned up for book release.
I did enjoy books 1 & 2 and will probably keep reading.
Hire me to edit your translated books!
April 26, 2025
Fast!!!
The author could definitely benefit from an editor but he certainly knows how to keep the story moving. There wasn't a time I wasn't fully engaged. This is written for a younger audience but it moves so well and the characters are interesting enough that older readers can appreciate the work. I'm not personally a fan of the system trope but I find this actually engaging and fun. The the abuse and prejudice is overwhelming and may affect my continuation of the series but I'm enjoying it at the moment.
The author could definitely benefit from an editor but he certainly knows how to keep the story moving. There wasn't a time I wasn't fully engaged. This is written for a younger audience but it moves so well and the characters are interesting enough that older readers can appreciate the work. I'm not personally a fan of the system trope but I find this actually engaging and fun. The the abuse and prejudice is overwhelming and may affect my continuation of the series but I'm enjoying it at the moment.
June 23, 2025
The story is improving with every book. The plot is moving along at a steady pace with minimal hesitation, back tracking or long expositions. The spelling and grammar still isn't the best but hey, at least I don't need to know about stones and mass releases on a purchased novel this time around! Looking forward to book 3.
October 31, 2024
good
another good book, moving the story on a bit , felt a little short to me but still enjoyable. good characters and fast.moving action.
another good book, moving the story on a bit , felt a little short to me but still enjoyable. good characters and fast.moving action.
November 5, 2024
I'm really enjoying it, which was unexpected because I'm not usually a fan of vampire stories. However, this fresh take with the gamer and alien twist gives it a whole new vibe
January 29, 2025
Second better than the first
The series continues to get better with each book and each chapter of each book. Best so far in the series.
The series continues to get better with each book and each chapter of each book. Best so far in the series.
February 20, 2025
Can't put it down
March 7, 2025
Other than some spelling and grammar issues, very enjoyable.
March 19, 2025
Pretty good
Interesting world concept, good characters. Translation is off in places but I could tell what was intended. Refreshingly different. I would recommend it.
Interesting world concept, good characters. Translation is off in places but I could tell what was intended. Refreshingly different. I would recommend it.
May 17, 2025
It's definitely worth a read very good story
June 12, 2025
Great story
I enjoy the story, but would prefer a full length book. It feels like a game that never quite ends, so I have to buy another and another
I enjoy the story, but would prefer a full length book. It feels like a game that never quite ends, so I have to buy another and another
July 15, 2025
It was okay
It was a good read can't wait to read the next book, but there were alot of typos and grammatical errors.
It was a good read can't wait to read the next book, but there were alot of typos and grammatical errors.
August 11, 2025
Boring and wandering pointlessly
July 14, 2024
Book is suitable for teen readers and people who enjoy vampire fiction and litrpg. Although quite an easy and somewhat enjoyable read I would not recommend. It is a slow story progression and the books are small. It feels as though you are only left with small scraps of the story. Considering the cost of one book and the sheer quantity that is apart of this series you would be spending hundreds of dollars to make a small dent in the storyline.
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