Something absolutely horrible has happened to this series, Ted Bell, the editors, or all of the above.
The Alex Hawke series is one of my favorites in some time. However, this book - as well as the proceeding book in the series "Overkill" - is an unmitigated disaster.
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Let me just say that this book bounces back and forth from 1940's to present day, which really hampers the cohesiveness of the story. The 2 timelines do not connect in ANY cohesive or relevant way. At the very least things would have been better if the book was simply divided directly into 2 parts with the first half of the book being 1940's, and the second half being present day. The 1940's story has absolutely no relevance or impact whatsoever to the present-day plot.
The only way this book would be tolerable is if you hadn't read any previous books in the series, but since I have, the inconsistencies, uncharacteristic actions, and revised history found in this book for anyone who knows the characters from previous books is too much to forgive.
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I could literally go page-by-page and provide some issue as it relates to the rest of the series. Here are just a few that I can remember:
1. The most egregious of all the blunders in this book is the entire backstory of "China Moon" - Apparently China and Hawke had a previous relationship, and China had a twin sister that she "lost because of Hawke's actions in Hong Kong" NO. None of this is right. China Moon did not have a twin. Hawke has no relationship with China Moon ever. He has never met China Moon. Also China Moon's name is spelled "Chyna" in previous books. She has a run-in with Ambrose Congreve, and is currently locked up in a max-security prison. Hawke has literally never seen her before. Chyna did have 2 sisters who were twins. Jet and Bianca. Hawke had a relationship with Jet, which is loosely accredited to China in this book. Hawke had nothing to do with the killing of the twin sister Bianca. Jet killed her. Hawke later killed Jet without even knowing it was her at the end of Book 8, Warriors. - Where I might add he also kills her farther General Moon, in a way that is not even remotely close to Stokely's retelling of events to China Moon in this book.
2. The end of the chapter 24 talks about how Stokely's former friend and business partner, a man referenced as being one "Sharkey Rodriguez-Rodriguez" was killed in a shark attack in the Florida Keys. Actually he was eaten by sharks after being killed by 2 cuban brothers working for the KGB, and his freaking name.......... throughout the whole series......... was "Sharkey GONZALES-GONZALES"!!! NOT RODRIGUEZ-RODRIGUEZ.
3. Chapter 36, Stokley is impressed by the Walleytender 48 speedboat Hawke has borrowed from the Tang Brothers.... asks a bunch of questions about it. Only in the previous book, Stoke piloted the same book in France when he and Hawke kidnapped and tortured the hotel owner who was in league with the russians who had kidnapped Alexi. It is later mentioned that the Wally has a speed of 38 knots. Then it is later and previously mentioned in Overkill that the Wally has a speed of almost 60 mph. Then near the end of this book, a chinese frigate chases them down across open water while they are fleeing the island with the prince... The chinese frigate has a speed of 27-30 knots max.
4. Chapter 36 mentions that Stoke had chosen the new Russian rebreather equipment - "the latest thing for underwater combat operations" because they dont leave bubbles. These are called Draeger rebreathers and are German. They are used several times in earlier books and referenced correctly.
5. Chapter 44 page 1 talks about the Minox B camera that Hawke is using. It then says "... it had first been conceived in Latvia in 1922. And it was finally invented and produced in 1936 by a Baltic German named Walter Zapp. It was the camera of choice on both sides of the Iron Curtain during the whole of the Cold War" - This is directly a word-for-word copy paste of the Wikipedia page for the Minox B. Seriously - go have a look.
6. Hawke is dumbfounded with China Moon's vehicle - a Fiat Jolly. With its wicker seats, fringe on the roof, no doors.... This whole part is INSANE. ALEX HAWKE used the same vehicle around Bermuda from Tea Kettle cottage in earlier books, and Congreve and Pelham always gave him hell about it. In this chapter it is apparent that Hawke has never seen such a vehicle before, and thinks it is ridiculous.
7. The book uses a reference to Ambassador Tang's driver Bobby Ray being from "lower bottom Georgia which is right down the mountain from upper bottom Georgia" Ugh... this same line has been used in previous books but about Kentucky. Just annoyed me. Then Bobby Ray talks about how Georgia Bulldogs are playing the Alabama Crimson Tide in the Sugar Bowl. The 1942 sugar bowl was between the Missouri Tigers and the Fordham Rams. I get that this book is fiction, but the book's generally are accurate when they mention historic events. No reason for this fictional match up to be referenced when Georgia actually played Florida in the Rose Bowl that year.
8. Chapter 72 talks about how Hawke has just commissioned a new Yacht that will be a sailing yacht over 200 feet long, and that she would be a war ship - appearances to the contrary. THIS BOAT HAS ALREADY BEEN BUILT and used since book #7 Phantom. Absurd.
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In closing, I can only believe that Ted Bell did not write this book, but that is was spliced together in no particular order from random notes, names, products, and places that a ghost writer found laying around in Ted Bell's desk drawer. It is unforgivable from the standpoint of a reader and fan of previous Alex Hawke installment. This is one of my favorite series and writers that i have found in the past 10 years, but the destruction of the central character and the disloyalty to the fanbase shown in this book may have ruined my entire view of the writer and series.