I have a lot of thoughts about this book, but I'll try to keep it quick.
This book is about the mysteries that unravel for a lonely boy named Jack who has photosensitivity. He has to use a special lotion which was invented by his dad, who has mysteriously disappeared. He eventually embarks on an adventure around his and neighboring towns looking for his dad. Joining him on his quest is his new friend. She is a girl named Beth who holds strange secrets behind her dark, gothic makeup ridden eyes.
Now, I’ll explain the main character first. His name is Jack, and in my opinion is that he is selfish. He is a selfish boy about a multitude of things. He expects too much yet too little from Beth and criticizes everyone for everything. His only concern is getting the medicine and seeing his dad again. While, admittedly, he is going through a lot, he hurts Beth’s feelings, snaps at his mom, and jumps to assumptions about his dad far too quickly.
Now, who is Beth? Beth is a girl who meet Jack at the beginning at the book. She wears dark and brooding clothing, lots of eye makeup, and white face paint. The reason she did that is because she had recently lost her parents and thinks it’s her fault, so she is avoiding all people, and wants people to avoid her. Jacks end up finding out that she carried two mysterious wooden boxes in her backpack. The boxes contain separate parts of her parents ashes. (I’m not entirely sure that’s legal actually.) Now, we have found yet another thing that Jack is selfish about. He and Beth later get into a large argument about how her carrying around the ashes is stupid and is slowing them down. While Jack does apologize, the things that end up being said in that argument are not the kind of things that you can forgive someone for as quickly as Beth does.
Why don’t I like this book? That’s the question that I’ve been trying to answer for a few days. And honestly, I don’t know. There isn’t anything inherently very wrong with this book, I suppose the dislike is in the eye of the beholder in this situation. I suppose it felt like every situation was formulated to surprise you. Like Beth’s parents being dead, her carrying the ashes, Jack not only has photosensitivity but his dad, the only person who can make the lotion which heals his skin, has disappeared. While there are many other books that are even more far-fetched, those books seem to accept it more than this book. It always was trying to make things relatable, and make you feel sorry for them, when actually, you become shocked at the lack of realism. Another example, right after Beth and Jack decide to embark on a giant quest to save Jack’s dad, they get in a bus crash. Said bus crash was caused by a dog which was experimented on in Jack’s father’s lab. Yes, coincidences exist, but that seems more than a little far-fetched. I’m not trying to insinuate that this book was badly written, the way it was written was actually very good, yet the plotline made me have to put the book down a few times in pure astonishment.
Next, what was the ending? And why do I think they could’ve done better. So what happened. Well, Jack gets a new lotion, him and Beth have found a (wonderful??) new wave of friendship, and Jack’s parents are considering getting back together. This isn’t a bad ending, let me make that clear, but it is not what I wanted. I don’t know what I wanted, but the ending was not it. It didn’t feel climactic, and it easily could have. It was lacking the small amount of imagination that the rest of the book held.
This book felt flat. There were too little internal conflicts, and the ending didn’t hold that specialness. The edge of your seat, you simply must know what happens quality. The books and the ending didn’t hold the pizzaz and the sparkle I was looking for. This book had potential, but it just didn’t make jump.