3.5☆ YA "man vs. Society", freewill vs dictatorship, young romance.
Please refer to the blurb. I read this as part two of the trilogy binge. Ensemble cast of "diverse" and as yet emotionally immature students team up to help the main female character fight a group of extremists while going to an acadamy for young mythical beings and dealing with teen angst and hormones. It is tagged as "multi-racial", but is more accuratly Multi-Cultural. I thought this episode would be a continuation of the novella from Koru's point of view since there is a vague depiction of him is on the cover. No, this is more of a friendship story. Of which there are fewer to be found as girls become young women possably in proportian to the disillusionment girls, young women, then women have in real life romance and physical love. It is also hard for men, according to my husband, to know what women want. So how can boys and men get inside our heads because WE'RE not going to come straight out and tell them! Friendship stories reappear with and for women in life-after-men catagory fiction. Are women (and other readers of romance, yes you) brave enough to share thier favorite romances with their spouce/partner? Do you like that book because of the hero(ine), the love interest, or some other reason? Spoiler for book three, Mal's friendship with Leela and Nik helps her face her messy feelings regarding Koru. If this episode had been written from a split perspective of all four of the ensemble cast how much richer and diverse could it have been? A prince, the son of a millionaire, the pacifict daughter of bounty hunters, and Mal (who we already hear from) all caught in the push-pull of parents who want to protect them while simultaniously being expected to figure out, right now, what they want to do with and for the rest of their lives. There are 30, 40, even 50-year olds who haven't figured that out. We have stumbled into or settled for whatever pays the bills and are not happy. Where are OUR career councilors, because decoding the indeed blurbs, and other such ads is like reading a forigen language as much as Mal, a white girl with brown skin is expected to understand a people, culture and family history sprung on her from out of seemingly nowhere. Everyone around her seems to have a better understanding for this thing called life than she does. I would not call her a Mary-sue because readers have followed her struggle through two episodes so far. She improves slower than I would think most movie goers would have the patience for, but that is a more realistic life. I appriciate her moments of Aphasia because I get them too. An empathetic connection has been made. Will the other characters get stories told from thier viewpoint? I hope so.
This was my honest feedback of a KU title read using TTS on my ancient Kindle keyboard. I admit to being momentarily jerked out of the story-flow by things that should have been caught before it posted or by an odd turn of phrase so 3.5 is my highest offer of stars at this time. Thank you for sharing the fruit of your muse.