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My Vampire System #3

My Vampire System: Book 3

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The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.



Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.



Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.



Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.



But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.



He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.



"It is time to feed!"

"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"

"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."

225 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 24, 2021

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Jack K. Sherwin

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151 reviews
February 16, 2025
This is a review for chapters 100 to 1500 in the audiobook. Really enjoy the storyline. There are lulls in between each mini plot that could loose some listeners.

FOR ME ..
Quinn's system has evolved and we have discovered that Jim, Vincent's uncle and night is behind the dalkey advancement. He has learned how to make clones and has made it his goal to control and grow the dalkey powers. Quinn system has given him the task to become something more than a vampire noble and he has learned that his ancestor is a god, a red dragon. The vampire king and Arthur have beef since the king killed his family. The original leader of the 4thbfamily reincarnated the original king, a psycho religious freak. Quinn defeated them all, and became the vampire king. He has become a complete badass, Arthur transferred his power, the old king transferred ultimate blood control, and Quinn "beat" the system unlocking all his stats. Pure is trying to create hybrid super soldiers to defeat everyone, though I am a bit confused what their goal is. Currently Quinn has joined the vampires in humans for all out war against the Dalkey
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15 reviews
January 26, 2026
A good entry in the continuing series badly edited

This story said are series is very good with many different elements some fantasy some science fiction some just a little on the bizarre side! Except for atrocious editing this series is quite interesting and I continue to enjoy it!
16 reviews
April 18, 2025
Another great installment

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Unlike other books, with each book the world and characters expand in natural logical ways, showing the author's forethought and/or natural talent for writing.
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13 reviews
May 16, 2024
Improving

Still has room for improvement, especially in spelling and grammar, but it is getting stronger every time they meet. The story is still pretty great.
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1,557 reviews7 followers
September 3, 2024
As the story progresses we get more and more involved in the characters. Quinn is an amazing person and cares for the little people who are being bullied.
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Author 3 books2 followers
May 17, 2025
It's definitely one of the best stories I have read. I can't wait to read book 4
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131 reviews1 follower
June 26, 2025
This was by far the longest, but also the most complete book/arc so far.
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December 4, 2025
too pricey

Not wroth the money. Costs more than a New York Times bestseller. Should be on kindle unlimited. So sad good story greedy writer.
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