The Eternal Moment is on the longish side for a short story. It is similar in feel to "A Passage to India", in that it describes the personal mental and emotional journey of its central character, as much as her literal journey in the Italian Alps. By the end the destination is reached, both physically, and in the sense of her inward revelations about herself.
A common motif in Forster's works, is that of a long-remembered fleeting experience, which affects an individual's later life far more than could ever be expected at the time. There is such a pivotal moment in this story, around which the story forms itself. The central character, Miss Raby, is a successful novelist, yet feels unsatisfied in her emotional life, and distanced from all her social peers. She pays only lip service to the middle-class attitudes and behaviour of those around her, frequently making comments, or behaving in a manner which startles her friends.
"It was her habit to speak out; and there was no present passion to disturb or prevent her ... She was still detached ... And by speaking out she believed, pathetically enough, that she was making herself intelligible. Her remark seemed inexpressively coarse to Colonel Leyland."
In this quotation, the author's clinical eye is clear. He views both his main character, and the circles in which she moves, with equal detachment. Here is another time when Forster reveals another common feature or preoccupation; the rigid boundaries of a particular social class,
"she had hurt him too much; she had exposed her thoughts and desires to a man of another class. Not only she, but he himself and all their equals, were degraded by it."
In the story, the ageing Miss Reby has returned to the setting of the first novel she had written. It is an obscure Italian mountain village, which she is shocked to now find entirely different. The village has been irrevocably changed, through the subsequent tourism, due to the success of her novel. Her fond memories are quashed by what she now perceives as ugliness and vulgarity. But she still has one special moment which she cherishes, concerning a youthful flirtation. This perfect "Eternal Moment" of the title has informed all her subsequent experiences, although it was merely an elusive momentary experience. Forster's significant moments such as these, are often very subtle and undefined. Miss Raby has constantly reflected on this special moment, building into it great significance for her own life experience.
She is disillusioned and shocked to now encounter the man who had inspired such a beautiful memory, and to see the person and the moment with a new devastating perspective. Yet, on consideration, she feels she has learnt a great truth, by having this later experience, and thereby recognising the worth of her spontaneous joy and genuine feeling,
"In that moment of final failure, there had been vouchsafed to her a vision of herself and she saw that she had lived worthily. She was conscious of a triumph over experience and earthly facts, a triumph magnificent, cold, hardly human, whose existence no one but herself would ever surmise."
One event near the ending, comes as a surprise, a spontaneous gesture from one of the characters, outside the expectations and predictability of their class. This also is a favourite device of Forster's and gives the reader pause for thought, where other characters are often represented as puppets, entirely controlled by their status in the social class.
The Eternal Moment is from the volume on my shelves "Collected Short Stories volume 2"