2.5 stars. It was fine.
Plot- Very fun opening with them sitting by each other on a train that ends up breaking down, and then having to find their way to NYC together. Loved the forced proximity.
Romance- Started out cute with them learning that the other likes them. Loved the situations they find themselves in. Very strong start!
But then it became a negative motivation where the FMC is pushing him away because she had her life mapped out and a boyfriend wasn’t part of it. That got old fast. She was constantly overthinking everything. Both characters were in their heads too much (and dragged me along for the ride).
Writing- There was a lot of ruminating by the characters, sometimes in the middle of conversations. There was even a point where I distinctly remember thinking, “blah blah blah,” and wishing I could edit it all out. This isn’t my favorite style of writing. I don’t want to hear every last thought in the characters’ heads, especially in this case with a FMC who is overly anxious.
Characters- The MMC is a really nice guy and I liked his character. He was cheated on by his ex, but he took half the blame because he said he wasn’t a good communicator and claimed that he had caused her pain too. I mean, I think forgiveness is awesome, but he went above and beyond… and I’m not sure how I felt about it, tbh. He even apologized for not being a good boyfriend to her. I thought that was a bit of a stretch (!), but I guess more power to him for having such a level head and not hating her guts like most people would.
However, it was indicative of how he took too much blame upon himself. There was one lame scene where the FMC got upset she missed a crucial interview because she was hanging out with him with her phone on silent, and in essence punished him by leaving him in the middle of NYC to go back to the hotel. Like, she just tearfully said, “I’m going back. Alone.” And she ditched him to find his own way back, separate from her. Without saying as much, it was clear that she partly blamed him (ridiculous!). Her reaction was horribly inconsiderate, selfish, and hurtful. But he wasn’t offended. He felt bad that he had had anything to do with her missing the interview (this is unreasonable, self inflicted guilt, folks) and tried to make it better for her. That’s when I struggled to like her anymore and was thinking he was too kind to be paired with someone who was willing to treat him that way.
By the end, I thought they were a cute couple and they had a LOT of emotional growth along the way (😳).
I’m tempted to think maybe YA isn’t for me anymore if it’s this heavy on emotional maturing, but I’ve enjoyed a lot of YAs so I don’t necessarily think that’s the issue. Maybe it is just this writing style that doesn’t appeal to me.
Content-
Language- not much
Substance abuse- no
Spice- just some sweet kisses. No innuendo. Appropriate for a young teen audience.
Cover- cute!
Format- audiobook via Everand
Narrator- good