I'm Punching Out
Something about Ella Dark and her FBI partner didn't completely click from the beginning. But I felt like part of my problem might be the poor narration, so I wanted to give the series another shot. Having now finished book three in the Ella Dark series I'm going to cut bait and admit that this series just isn't thrilling me.
My issues revolve around a couple of things. Foremost is that authors should never try to save money by using a narrator that doesn't do their books justice. Amanda Goettl seems to have narrated all the books in this series, and that's a shame. I hate to disparage anyone's work, however, I did not enjoy the narration in any of the three books I listened to. It was stilted, had no natural flow, occasionally had mispronounced words (you know, the wrong emPHASis on the wrong syLABel), and basically sounded like it was the first read-through.
While I generally enjoy Mr. Pierce's works, the first three books in this series all have the same thing going on. The agents are called in for heinous murders, they latch onto a suspect that seems to be perfect, they get all excited, build their perfect case, then realize it's not the killer. The next day, they do the same thing with another person, and so on. Instead of using the standard red herring that nearly every mystery writer uses, the author just goes for the big guns and makes the agents look inept at every turn. Once or twice would be effective, but multiple times for three books in a row? That's a pattern I can live without.
Then there's the matter of extreme survivor's guilt, or agent's guilt, or whatever title is appropriate. Each time the serial killer strikes, Agent Dark berates herself unmercifully that she didn't catch the killer right away: she missed clues, didn't act fast enough, etc. While I can see this emotion as quite possible for some agents, especially new field agents, after three serial killer cases, I would hope to see some signs of growth in this.
So, sadly, while the stories are good, they're not good enough to overcome these major speedbumps for me. My time with Ella Dark ends here.