I did not finish the book. --- Rating: minus 5
I really thought that I would not again need do a "Did not finish" review. Yet here we are. The plus is that I doubt anyone will read this. With that said, my practice has become to watch YouTube videos as an encouragement to write.
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My negative reaction was to the first hint of body image issues and developing romance. I gave some serious thought to the "Why" of my reaction. At first I thought that the beginning of the romance element was backsliding into something less grounded. That did not make sense, given that first book of this series included an ornicopter in a secret hanger, a billionaire murdered with no one the wiser, a witch who does not ward her property and other things. Becoming a less grounded story was obviously not the explanation.
This series might have originally felt more substantial than her "Legacy of Magic" series but that did not feel right. Two main characters who begin and end the first book without personal histories do not make for depth in either. When main characters lack depth, the secondary characters are fated to serve as contrivance vehicles or touches of unimportant background colour. That definitely described the first book's secondary characters and it continues in this book.
I considered the character choices in the first book and again there were questionable decisions and contrivance adjacent scenes in both series. This was a pattern she used extensively In her "Legacy of Magic" series. That was a romance series clothed In medieval fantasy garb. This series is headed towards romance wrapped In urban fantasy finery. The characters faded from personalities to stock romance roles and this series seems headed In the same direction.
In the end I came back to the lack of world building. Without a well mapped history and well considered present as background, the books can only travel down the same lanes as every other fantasy romance. The Low Effort category is not reserved for Amazon's science fiction novels and these urban fantasies suffer from the same limitations.
Emotional depth is not allowed. Explanation for the present has nothing to attach itself to. In-universe history is a fuzzy catchall of other similar fantasy romance books. Because the action is so uneven and the background conditions are so illogical or implausible, the characters are reduced to the cover models of romance novels.
I do not read much romance but I think it is a very underrated genre, especially in terms of the effort and time required to craft usually many different types of character. I once read two and a half volumes of a supernatural romance that was incredibly engaging before I even realized that it was a romance series. I really enjoyed the romance story until the writing degenerated into every decision becoming a function of how much this one does or does not love that one. It is assumed that male characters have agency, though that is reduced to male stereotypes acting stereotypically.
By comparison, a romance wherein a woman actually expresses her emotions through action and word without becoming a helpless sock puppet is a treasure. They do exist but only in stories with solid personal and world histories. There are lines drawn to limit character choices and those lines can be crossed but not without cost and are often the most severe challenge that propels the development of a good protagonist. Ironically it frees the writer to use male characters who also express a wide range of emotions, not the usual shades of rage. They can self-examine. They falter and they can recover. It seems to me that writing real women makes writing real men possible regardless of the writer's sexual identity.
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The local billionaire is murdered in book one and had only one employee, a butler. He had no live-ins, such as cooks, gardeners, drivers, personal secretary, personal assistant, maids, no business attorney, no accountant, no civil attorney, no property manager (though that last might have been one of the butler's functions). The only reclusive billionaire (in today's terms) that I can think of would be the American Howard? Hughes. Even he was surrounded by members of some religion or other and was never alone.
I was becoming depressed by my examination of these books by a better writer than many on Amazon. That was one detail and a minor one at that. There were no multiple levels of investigators, various police or a search for the identified murderer because ....., because ....., I remember now -- Reasons. I do not understand what world the writer is describing. There were no relatives or business associates untangling financial transactions and assets, etc. The main character was not interviewed by various levels of police for her role in the discovery of his death and the circumstances of that discovery. These are not just plot points but a failure of the background universe to create a logical or somewhat plausible pathway to these passages.
A single sheriff's deputy is assigned to a billionaire's death in America of all p!aces was too bizarre. I may be wrong but America shrugging at a billionaire's death, as if this were just another Russian oligarch or their associate accidentally falling out of a window must knock any reader out of the story. In Russia asking questions after police and FSB have ruled the 38th instance of same in fifteen months to be an accident, is a guarantee of a sentence to a penal colony , a fatal accident or some quality time with FSB torturers. Russia is officially a fascist state, not state fascism.
The USA is not fascist because Capital not the state sits at the top of the triangle envisioned by Mussolini. Unlike Russia, American billionaires can not even be insulted with impunity. I can not believe that any American reader can read that story section without loss of immersion. This writer for this series at least, stopped trying.
I could go on but there is no benefit or need and my enthusiasm has faded. The opening scene does not agree with the ending scene of the first book. This urban fantasy much like her last is just another paranormal romance. The real world background is more fantastical than the magic. The magic observes no laws and is inconsistent. Her "relationship" with the good witch involving learning magic, is agreed upon in the first book but never appears again. All the characters behave in an almost random fashion, in support of the love story based on the isolation of the main character. Even as a romance this series is judged "Not fit for purpose". 😑
There are only three categories of the low end Amazon fiction collection. They seem to be Minimal Effort, No Effort and Insulting. This series falls into Insulting handily. Amazon include in their loan library some real gems. Rachel Aaron, Ann Christy, Jim Butcher, The Silo series, The Junkyard Druid and others are good examples. The overwhelming majority however are godawful. I have lost my taste for science fiction, fantasy and horror print. I hesitate to invest even several pages on any author or series not previously vetted. I still watch science fiction on occasion but while better written than print, TV and film do also produce failures which are still more entertaining.
I began searching for better book recommendations on YouTube. I hoped to find science fiction criticism and discovered essayist, hobbyist, educational and lifestyle channels galore. The science fiction and essayist channels led me to the best channels of all. I found the book and writing channels. 😍 These host some wonderful communities of thoughtful readers enamoured of the world of books. Through the sponsor spots on educational channels, I was introduced to the dedicated educational video sites. I like Nebula because they were founded by content creators. They are all modestly priced and worth a look.
Ah, Goodreads discourse. About eighteen months ago, I wrote a short negative review of Powers of the Earth, a sorry salute to the January 6, 2021 hero by Travis Corcoran (US veteran, employed by an unnamed US agency, self-described Libertarian, vocal advocate of both Putin's Russia and a return of chattel slavery to the industrialized world - of course). He and a half dozen maniacs wrote increasingly disturbed comments for months, including several comments involving the re-enslavement of Black Americans as a privilege of libertarianism or something. Amazon helped not at all. Interestingly a Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 wrote a comment in which he declared that They had "won" (?).
I hope that the followers of Travis Corcoran/JP and Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 now realize that They need not continue to flood channels which I list with vile sexual and racist comments. The English teen boater and her mother, the Swedish essayist, the American book group leader, the German particle physicist and the other female content creators deserved far better, as does any human being. Using my name on some of them was a delightful touch. They also delivered a better portrait of the arrogant, aggrieved US man-child than I ever could and needlessly added to the world's overabundance of unpleasantness. Good show! USA! Yay?? 😐
My YouTube picks of the moment.
Joe Blogs, Ro Ramdin, Skip Intro, Boat Time, Mia Mulder, Ben and Emily, Abney Park, NFKRZ, Ryan Chapman, Crow Caller, Alizee, Dr Becky, Jake Broe, Depressed Russian, Mandy, Brittany Page, Meidas Touch, Beau of the Fifth Column, Sarah Millican, Biz Barclay, Times Radio.
About Amazon/Goodreads. Please consider treating this as potentially hostile site. 😐
Ominous music begins. 🙂 I described above some of the members who lurk on his site. These nutcases have often on mine and other reviews claimed to speak for all Americans and sometimes imply the same for all English speakers on Goodreads. Unfortunately dangers are not limited to mental members but include the corporation. See my reviews of "Dark Horse", a good novel by Diener, Stellar Heritage #1 or Powers of the Earth for details of a number of very nasty or petty actions. These include on site and off-site activity by these offended American twits, of which I had only read previously being directed against Lindsay Ellis (famous essayist, formerly on YouTube). About eleven years ago, she, her friends, family and work associates had been subjected to over two years of privacy violation, threats and more because she discussed the "male gaze" in a PBS literary criticism series. It all began with one very troubled, outraged middle class male quickly and easily organizing a campaign of the like minded. I wonder now if Farage learned his trade in America.
That type are very nasty nutcases even by Amazon (or American) standards and violated several laws to attack me. Goodreads shared my limited message history with these unhinged members. One of the results was an insane attempt to investigate my private life by Australian Intelligence through a friend. This was apparently a favour for some US agency at Pine Gap Intelligence Centre on behalf of the Corcoran (who had been previously questioned by others about his Russian connection). I was offended that Australia was more concerned about my private life than that of one of their citizens (Julian Assange) being detained in a British prison illegally at the behest of successive offended (Bush, Obama, Trump, Biden) American governments. My friend was afraid for my safety and I began looking at other instances of the mental American cowards punishing the socialist, green or any other pro-human criticism of their beliefs (whatever they've been told they are in the moment). If curious, disbelieving or outraged I recommend a scan of the one star reviews of the trashiest US science titles. For my part, I begin to suspect that any further efforts on my part to encourage improved Amazon customer service practises are futile. 😊
As a start, I suggest minimizing profile information, removing lurkers (those friends who monitor but never post), taking screenshots of the odd or the ugly and maintaining wariness as regards Goodreads messaging. There is a second layer including email addresses but you can think those through. Please do not forget that these animals, both members and site employees know little restraint and no morality because they believe that their being American males entitles them. Ominous music ends. 🙂
May we all find Good Reading! 🤗
I do not know the meaning of many terms, which I have seen on YouTube from Chad to clapping. I did enjoy the channels below. Some of my favourite channels.
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I wish you a great morning, a splendid afternoon, a pleasant evening, a wonderful night and may we all continue learning.
The Aggressor demanding acquiescence can not consider the other a Human, because They themselves are not.
Lore, Sisters of the Light