Humans in Thorn Valley? That sounds like it mi- F****.
I thought my fanfiction was cringe. The Rats of NIMH, but in control of Canada, but NO, this is even worse.
This has the "being talking down to like a child" feel to it just like Racso, painfully obvious with the snippet where one of the rats talks about them only growing vegetables. (Which, unless this included stuff like potatoes, would be a sure fire way to kill the entire colony via malnutrition. Even sentient rats need bulk calories!)
I could go on for a couple hours raging about the logistical issues or things Jane got wrong, like the colony not having a sump pump to prevent flooding (which HAPPENS!), how they got running water, or Margaret DRINKING RIVER WATER! (Mmm... Untreated water... Deadly!) But, I'll focus more on the literary stuff.
Some people say they where disappointed in Timothy and Mrs. Frisby not being in this book. To that I say: Blessing in disguise!
Timothy was moderately annoying in the second book, but hey, atleast he GOT characterization! He was glossed over in the first one. (Then again, the plot didn't really require it so...)
But Mrs. Frisby... Ugh! From fleshed out character with solid depth to mediocre coward in the second. Robert was misogynistic, but atleast his writing talent mostly overrode it when he wrote Mrs. Frisby.
Jane somehow increased the misogyny, and made it worse by making it more "clandestine"/trait driven. The female characters here are just AWFUL! (Probably some weird subconscious thing, similar to phenomenon like "internalized transphobia") So it's nice to not see a favorite character get ruined even more.
The male characters don't get off scott free either. Just like Racso, people like Nicodemus and Justin act wildly different. And usually NOT for the better, everyone's depth is flattened.
Nicodemus fake banishes Christopher! That is somehow MORE out of character then the last book!
But what about the humans? Heh.... The human characters....
Sticking with the "make it overtly obvious this is a children's book" theme that I've so fare only seen in Jane's stuff, both main human characters are kids! And spoiled ones! Even better, one is egotistical, and the other is neurodivergent and treated horribly! (I want to scream.)
Character development, just like depth, is one dimensional. Like, they "just get morally better suddenly" one dimensional. Somehow more one dimensional then Marc Antony's military campaign into Western Asia.
There's also the cringe. Like the carnival scene that Jane probably added as emotional closure, but just comes off as extremely forced and brash. Or the efforts of the rescue team, which is even more incompetent then the US government's attempts at pretending to be democratic. Or Marc Antony's military campaign in- okay, I'll stop. That joke stopped being funny over 2000 years ago.
But what about the plot? Uh... The kids reunite with the parents, after learning they where declared dead in absentia, something Nicodemus knew about but just DIDN'T TELL THEM! Something that could of become reality as WINTER was setting in, which would of very much made the kids dead! Brilliant.
The arc where the humans learn about Thorn Valley was a little interesting, but that's about it. Also, there's no way in God's green EARTH your erasing evidence of a colony from existence. Completely erasing something from both history and archeology is actually REALLY difficult!
Oh, and there's this completely off topic ocean thing Nicodemus is dedicated to that comes right out of left field.
If memetic torment agents from the SCP wiki where real, I would of rather read those then read this.