For such a short book, The Second Experiment by J.O. Jeppson took forever to read. The plot was weird enough to keep me reading, but overall I didn’t care for it all that much. I don’t think I’d read another one of this author’s books because the dialogue was wooden, the characters were undeveloped, and plot drove the story.
Tec is a gardening robot for the Roiiss, but he has a fatal flaw—curiosity. His creators programed him with human emotions and intellect and one day Tec decides to explore the Tower of History, a building that is full of knowledge that is forbidden to him. The Roiiss discover his snooping and almost decide to destroy him, but Tec talks them out it. They decide to allow him full access to the Tower because they underestimate his intelligence and ability to grasp their knowledge. One day when exploring, Tec discovers a container of embryo tubes—the offspring of the Roiiss? He takes a tube and decides to see if he can grow a baby Roiss. His actions that day change the future plans of the Roiss and their implementation of the mysterious Second Experiment.
None of the characters are fully-formed and didn’t make much of an impression on me, especially the minor characters. Tec, R’ya, and a few other characters have larger roles to play in the story, but so much of the dialogue is generic that any of the characters could be saying it. Ka, the telepathic and empathic baby wooly mammoth, is sweet and I wouldn’t mind having him around. The novel is basically an origin story of how life developed and spread throughout the universe and meh, it’s interesting enough. I just couldn’t really get into the characters so I wasn’t so invested in the story.
Aside from the story, I thought the author had good insights into human behavior, particularly our response to climate change. The Roiiss are us, and they destroyed their Home planet by continuing to pollute and overpopulate, despite the known dangers. They cared only for their own survival, not for any of the species around them, and when the planet was nearly uninhabitable, they built a space ship and left. The author (in a different context) states that humans don’t do what they should about the environment unless they are certain of an immediate solution or reward. Along with an environmental message, the author offers up the message of how diversity is necessary for the universe to survive and these philosophical musings: “His mind shuddered with fear; he knew now with complete certainty that each individual mind in the universe is fundamentally alone, facing its own destiny no matter who or what tries to share the journey, each bearing total responsibility for its own awareness and its own life” (18) and “I don’t believe in a God who listens to the prayers of mortals and adjusts the universe to save their lives” (103). Thank you, Ash. I agree 100% percent.
The Second Experiment isn’t a terrible book. I just didn’t find the story all that fascinating and had only lukewarm feelings for the characters (although R’ya is annoying as shit). This is more of a personal taste kind of book. It didn’t really do it for me, but someone else might enjoy it more.