It has my attention. The plot is already different from most novels I have read. Interested in reading more. But there are quite a few typos. I would like to finish reading it if I could find the full book.
No character development. This girl is rejected and runs away and within two days she has two new bffs and pack mates who will follow her to the ends of the earth, and a 300 year old vampire who dedicates his life to her, including all the people he's the leader of. A day or so after that, she creates a medicine that allows vampires into the sun. Two weeks later they travel to her father's pack where she kills a rogue alpha, and begins training with her father.
Everyone she meets immediately dedicates themselves to her. She's not beautiful until she loses weight. She's a stronger alpha than anyone in the book and yet her mate who rejected her and can hardly do anything becomes alpha of their pack in the end (because of her help) and she's his just Luna. Horrible all around, with insta-everything and endless grammar errors, and a fated mate in the end for the vampire who stuck by her side and fell for her but who she cast aside the moment the guy who rejected her came back into the picture. Oh and she turned him into a wolf without his permission, but after he finds his own fated mate, he's ok with it and all is well. Yikes.
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