OK, so something to know about me before reading this review is that Alice in Wonderland is by far one of my favorite stories of all time, so I was super excited to read this book and see a new take on the elements of the story I loved, so I might be a bit harsher on this book than others I have reviewed in the past.
So enough about me and on to the book! So, Maddie is by far the best character in the whole book. She is a manic pixie goth girl with just enough madness to make her lovable instead of annoying. Maybe this is just me and my aesthetics, or I've consumed too much Alice in Wonderland content, but this character wrote herself, which is a credit to the author for respecting the legacy of the Hatter for sure, but also made her feel basic in a way that had my eyes rolling a bit. The Hatter, and the Mad Tea Party, are my favorite elements of Alice in Wonderland, so that's why I will always be more critical of these parts than others in any Alice-adjacent story.
The other main character, Noah, was also basic to the point where he felt like a generic character than you are supposed to imagine yourself as. Having his motivation mirroring Maddie's was a nice touch, but I largely felt "meh" towards him to the point where I didn't care if he survived the transition or not. On the positive side, I enjoyed the chemistry and the relationship-building between Noah and Maddie. It's definitely a slow burn, which I enjoy.
Speaking of the relationship, I have to talk about the spice. All of these scenes felt sooooooo cringy to me because the author uses phrases like "he slid into her warmth" and that really pulls me out of those feelings. She also describes Maddie's parts as "folds" so much that it definitely gives the ick. I am curious to see if the author's writing style will evolve in later volumes and works much like Sarah J. Maas did from Throne of Glass to A Court of Thornes and Roses.
Aside from Maddie's and Noah's motivation to save Mouse and Alice, everyone else felt very basic in terms of motivation. Chess wants to find the White Queen (which is the plot of the next book), and his mother, Imagen (the Red Queen) wants to torment Maddie because she thinks that Maddie knows where the White Queen is, but why not just torture her instead of playing the long game with keeping Mouse as a prisoner for 2 years? Like if you are *that* convinced Maddie knows where Ava is, then just torture the information out of her (which is not outside this character at all). Imagen felt like such a default device used to engineer the plot of the book to the point where I didn't understand her motivations at all, which undercut her death to me. I would have liked to get a better understanding of the political ramifications of the Red Queen's death other than Maddi and co being fugitives. Like how will Wonderland be impacted and what changes will happen? I'm sure this will be covered in subsequent books, but other than my love for the property, I honestly am not sure what my motivation would be in continuing this series, which is sad because I love the premise of it all.
Speaking of the plot, I felt like certain parts of the book were done really well (like after Noah turned and the process of him learning how to be a vampire), and other parts felt absolutely rushed (like the quest for the cure). The scale of the quest for the cure made it sound like that was going to be the main plot of the book with the rescue of Mouse being in the next book, but it felt like they got it done in one day once they crossed into werewolf territory, which also made me feel like having Dee and Dum (love the use of the Tweedles BTW!) be guides feel completely unnecessary. This made the book feel inconsistent in terms of timeline and scale.
One of the things I would like to highlight is the setting of Wonderland. On the whole, I was very happy with how Wonderland was designed. It felt magical and it piqued my curiosity (which is paramount for me to like any Alice in Wonderland content). One thing I never really thought about was whether Wonderland had a sun or not, so not having one made it even more interesting to me. It felt like Wonderland was underground, but it still had the impression of having an open sky overhead which is exactly what Wonderland is for me. Having the cities of Scarlett and Ivory was also interesting and I'd like to get a better understanding of the layout of the land. As far as I know, Scarlett and Ivory are a day and a half apart with a forest between them, and werewolf territory is on the other side of Ivory. It just feels linear in my head, which Wonderland should be the exact opposite of. I think this series would benefit from some serious world-building to flesh out Wonderland and why this one is different and unique than every other Wonderland.
One of the things I really enjoyed about this book was the vampirism and the rules surrounding vampires. We are talking super classic vampires that are immortal, the sun kills them, their fangs descend, and they have superhuman strength and senses. When it comes to feeding, they were using dried powder mixed with water (which I am obviously picturing like the Kool-Aid packets), and live feeding. One of the elements I really liked about the live feeding was that Maddie and Ava put *a lot* of focus on consent. I even enjoyed that there was a whole company that would send consulting humans around to feed the vampires! That was a nice touch!
On the whole, I had high hopes for this book, and I felt like I was unfair in my expectations going into it. If you like vampires and Wonderland, I would still recommend this book and let you make your own decisions on what you like/don't like about it. I'm giving it 3 stars because the concept has so much potential and there are parts I really enjoyed, but like I said, I'm not motivated to read the next one or anything.
Plot: 3/5
Characters: 3/5
Representation: 0/5
Spice: 2/5
Kink: 1/5