too heavy on the sex scenes at the expense of relationship
I’d guess these stories are 1/3 sex scenes and that’s too high a proportion for me, especially because there’s more sex in them than any other type of relationship building. Ms Chant seems to be depending on the Fated Mate trope to handle turning two strangers into an actual couple and it just doesn’t work for me. Mostly because it ignores all the rough spots and negotiations inherent in two people getting to know one another and figuring out how they best fit together. Even in the last story, where the woman initially denies her mate and then gets angry enough to cut him off, those conflicts last only hours or at most a couple of days.
Yes, the author is in a time crunch because of the resort setting, but still, to me anyway, instalove is lazy writing and just not very satisfying as the basis for a lifelong commitment. Relationships are built over time and the instalove trope blithely ignores that part. It’s both more believable and more deeply affecting when mates must work to define and invest in their relationship, rather than have it handed to them from the moment they meet.
So that aspect is a sizable ding for me.
The stories themselves are generally decent and some of the characters are interesting, though not the MCs. It’s some of the other inhabitants of Shifting Sands that I’d hoped to learn more about—Magnolia, Scarlet and Gizelle especially. Perhaps in Volume 2? though I don’t think I’ll be reading it.
SPOILER
In the last story, there was no explanation offered as to how Jenny could change from nonshifter to shifter, and to me that alteration desperately needed to be explained. Nothing in the world-building even hinted that this was a possibility, so that plot development shattered my willingness to suspend disbelief and just go along with the story.