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A Longbourn Entanglement
Elizabeth has a secret. If Darcy discovers it, will it spell the end of their fledgling romance?
When Mrs. Bennet falls ill after the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley postpone their trip to London to offer their assistance. But things are never what they seem. Before long, Darcy is entangled in a chaotic situation at Longbourn, and Elizabeth is faced with a thorny dilemma that could drive Darcy away from her forever.
Will Elizabeth and Darcy muddle their way through the mayhem, or is everything just too tangled for them to find love?
If you are looking for a sweet, frolicsome Jane Austen short read, this romantic comedy is just what you need.
When Mrs. Bennet falls ill after the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley postpone their trip to London to offer their assistance. But things are never what they seem. Before long, Darcy is entangled in a chaotic situation at Longbourn, and Elizabeth is faced with a thorny dilemma that could drive Darcy away from her forever.
Will Elizabeth and Darcy muddle their way through the mayhem, or is everything just too tangled for them to find love?
If you are looking for a sweet, frolicsome Jane Austen short read, this romantic comedy is just what you need.
151 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 27, 2021
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Monica Fairview
32 books226 followersMonica Fairview writes Jane Austen variations and sequels as well as Fantasy P&P variations. After graduating from the University of Illinois, she worked as a literature professor and then as an acupuncturist in Boston before moving to London.
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Monica enjoys reading Jane Austen, historical , fantasy and post-apocalyptic novels , but avoids zombies like the plague. She loves to laugh, drink lots of tea, and visit Regency houses, and she is convinced that her two cats can understand everything she says.
If you'd like to be notified of her latest release, please press the FOLLOW button on Monica Fairview's Amazon page.
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January 30, 2026
Worse than telling a lie is spending the rest of your life staying true to a lie. ~ Robert Brault
“A Longbourn Entanglement” begins with a cover-up. Lydia’s curiosity spikes during Elizabeth Bennet’s proposal from Mr. Collins.
Quote from the book: Lydia’s head ached as she chewed over the implications. No wonder Mama was so desperate for one of them to marry Mr. Collins! Mr. Collins may not have looked at plain old Mary, but Lydia had caught him glancing at her own bosom more than once. She was the handsomest of her sisters. She could capture Mr. Collins easily. She had not wanted to, but that was only because no one ever told her anything. And now it was too late. Lizzy had sunk her teeth into him, and in a few minutes, he would be hers. Imagine being mistress of Longbourn! Lydia began to dream of the possibilities. She would have precedence over all her sisters, and they would need her permission if they wanted to buy a new hat or order a new gown. Why, even Mama would bow to her wishes!
To help Lydia secure Collins, Mrs. Bennet interrupts the current proposal by faking apoplexy.
All the Bennet sisters must support the pretense that their mother is seriously ill. This might not be an issue with Mr. Collins, but Bingley and Darcy must also be kept in the dark.
One of life's regrets is that you didn't always tell the truth, and now it's too late, because the truth has changed. ~ Robert Brault
Mrs. Bennet’s illness causes a change in plans for the Netherfield Park residents. They postpone the trip to London and attempt to aid the Bennet daughters. Mr. Bennet has departed to visit a friend. The sisters do not want to call him home since they know there is not an emergency but they run into opposition from their well-intended neighbors.
Quote from the book: Darcy looked grim. “If I were Mr. Bennet, I would certainly want to know what was happening in my own home.”
“I would rather wait before sending for him,” said Elizabeth, irritated by Mr. Darcy’s persistence.
“We cannot keep such a serious matter from him, surely,” said Mr. Darcy. “What if Mrs. Bennet’s condition takes a turn for the worse? How long would it take him to come back? How far away is his friend?”
Honesty doesn't always pay, but dishonesty always costs. ~ Michael Josephson
As Elizabeth’s attitude toward Darcy evolves, she feels increasing pressure to confess the truth.
How will Darcy respond to a confession?
Why does Mary spend so much time with Mr. Collins?
Why does Darcy go shopping for lace with Mrs. Phillips?
“A Longbourn Entanglement” combines drama and chortles. The book is well-written, quickly read, and light-hearted. I recommend it when you need a break from angst.
Once an absurdity is accepted as truth, it will seem truer the more absurd it is shown to be. ~ Robert Brault
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
“A Longbourn Entanglement” begins with a cover-up. Lydia’s curiosity spikes during Elizabeth Bennet’s proposal from Mr. Collins.
Quote from the book: Lydia’s head ached as she chewed over the implications. No wonder Mama was so desperate for one of them to marry Mr. Collins! Mr. Collins may not have looked at plain old Mary, but Lydia had caught him glancing at her own bosom more than once. She was the handsomest of her sisters. She could capture Mr. Collins easily. She had not wanted to, but that was only because no one ever told her anything. And now it was too late. Lizzy had sunk her teeth into him, and in a few minutes, he would be hers. Imagine being mistress of Longbourn! Lydia began to dream of the possibilities. She would have precedence over all her sisters, and they would need her permission if they wanted to buy a new hat or order a new gown. Why, even Mama would bow to her wishes!
To help Lydia secure Collins, Mrs. Bennet interrupts the current proposal by faking apoplexy.
All the Bennet sisters must support the pretense that their mother is seriously ill. This might not be an issue with Mr. Collins, but Bingley and Darcy must also be kept in the dark.
One of life's regrets is that you didn't always tell the truth, and now it's too late, because the truth has changed. ~ Robert Brault
Mrs. Bennet’s illness causes a change in plans for the Netherfield Park residents. They postpone the trip to London and attempt to aid the Bennet daughters. Mr. Bennet has departed to visit a friend. The sisters do not want to call him home since they know there is not an emergency but they run into opposition from their well-intended neighbors.
Quote from the book: Darcy looked grim. “If I were Mr. Bennet, I would certainly want to know what was happening in my own home.”
“I would rather wait before sending for him,” said Elizabeth, irritated by Mr. Darcy’s persistence.
“We cannot keep such a serious matter from him, surely,” said Mr. Darcy. “What if Mrs. Bennet’s condition takes a turn for the worse? How long would it take him to come back? How far away is his friend?”
Honesty doesn't always pay, but dishonesty always costs. ~ Michael Josephson
As Elizabeth’s attitude toward Darcy evolves, she feels increasing pressure to confess the truth.
How will Darcy respond to a confession?
Why does Mary spend so much time with Mr. Collins?
Why does Darcy go shopping for lace with Mrs. Phillips?
“A Longbourn Entanglement” combines drama and chortles. The book is well-written, quickly read, and light-hearted. I recommend it when you need a break from angst.
Once an absurdity is accepted as truth, it will seem truer the more absurd it is shown to be. ~ Robert Brault
I received an ARC of this book with no promise of a review, good or bad.
October 28, 2021
A comedy of errors ensues when an unwelcome proposal to one sister must be redirected toward another and a fabrication for the purpose gets out of hand precipitating a new series of lies and a startling romantic possibility.
A Longbourn Entanglement is a novella-length Regency RomCom something along the lines of a light, engaging Georgette Heyer novel though the characters are pulled from Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice.
Mr. Darcy is prepared to decamp back to London and escape the temptation of sparkling country miss, Miss Elizabeth Bennet and he is determined to drag his amorous friend, Mr. Bingley with him. Bingley has fallen hard for the gorgeous and serene eldest Miss Bennet, but Darcy is convinced that the romping, vulgar youngest sisters, their mother, and their connections with trade will do Bingley no favors.
But, before he can push Bingley into the carriage and be off, the silly Mr. Collins comes upon them with word of dire health at Longbourn. In spite of his desire to conquer his feelings, Darcy will not leave and will offer all he can to relieve Elizabeth’s fear and stress over a parent’s health collapse.
Meanwhile, Elizabeth isn’t pleased that her mother pretended to have apoplexy and her sister caused it by wanting Mr. Collins, the future heir of their estate, to herself- not that Elizabeth wanted the fawning, silly man for herself. But, the lie grows as now they must hide the family antics from Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley and then the apothecary. How will she ever get it all untangled and without losing Mr. Darcy’s respect and regard?
Not meant to be taken seriously, this was an old-style Regency romp that entertained with the hilarious plot points and had a budding romance tucked inside for good measure. Elizabeth formed a bad impression of Darcy because of his arrogance and her family caused him to shudder and want to avoid them in spite of his feelings, but Lydia’s shenanigans put the pair on a new path and a second chance to form different impressions. It read quickly and was great light entertainment that I can heartily recommend to sweet historical romance fans who love a dollop of humor.
A Longbourn Entanglement is a novella-length Regency RomCom something along the lines of a light, engaging Georgette Heyer novel though the characters are pulled from Jane Austen’s Pride & Prejudice.
Mr. Darcy is prepared to decamp back to London and escape the temptation of sparkling country miss, Miss Elizabeth Bennet and he is determined to drag his amorous friend, Mr. Bingley with him. Bingley has fallen hard for the gorgeous and serene eldest Miss Bennet, but Darcy is convinced that the romping, vulgar youngest sisters, their mother, and their connections with trade will do Bingley no favors.
But, before he can push Bingley into the carriage and be off, the silly Mr. Collins comes upon them with word of dire health at Longbourn. In spite of his desire to conquer his feelings, Darcy will not leave and will offer all he can to relieve Elizabeth’s fear and stress over a parent’s health collapse.
Meanwhile, Elizabeth isn’t pleased that her mother pretended to have apoplexy and her sister caused it by wanting Mr. Collins, the future heir of their estate, to herself- not that Elizabeth wanted the fawning, silly man for herself. But, the lie grows as now they must hide the family antics from Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley and then the apothecary. How will she ever get it all untangled and without losing Mr. Darcy’s respect and regard?
Not meant to be taken seriously, this was an old-style Regency romp that entertained with the hilarious plot points and had a budding romance tucked inside for good measure. Elizabeth formed a bad impression of Darcy because of his arrogance and her family caused him to shudder and want to avoid them in spite of his feelings, but Lydia’s shenanigans put the pair on a new path and a second chance to form different impressions. It read quickly and was great light entertainment that I can heartily recommend to sweet historical romance fans who love a dollop of humor.
September 27, 2021
Devilishly delightful!
"The voices of all his relations flitted through his head like ghosts, clamoring against him." (quote from the book)
The morning after the Netherfield ball, Mr.Darcy is determined to leave for London and must convince Mr. Bingley that he should too! Insisting they speak while walking outdoors, they are interrupted by the appearance of Mr. Collins trying to stay on top of a horse and completely lost! Upon learning the cause for his appearance in the area, Mr. Darcy insists on taking control of the situation...a situation involving the Bennet family. A crisis that he feels he must act on to aid them...or in particular Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Mr. Bingley is only too pleased to offer his support as well.
"There is no way out of this tangle." (quote from the book)
Not wishing to spoil your shock of what has occurred at Longbourn, just know that Lydia and Mrs. Bennet, with their mean understanding, have combined efforts to...no I wont spoil it! La! What a fine joke!
"The trickle of guilt was fast turning into a flood, and she was in danger of drowning." (quote from the book)
I have never seen this 'idea' before and the results cause the rest of the family much concern, especially Elizabeth. She is, however, seeing a whole new side to Mr. Darcy. That is until she confesses.
Just know that Lydia is plotting; Mr. Bingley is clever; and Mr. Darcy is falling...that is until his pride comes roaring through.
I was completely engaged, highly diverted and read this story in one evening. There are laugh-out-loud moments, swoon-worthy moments, angsty moments and all I can say is, thank goodness for Mr. Bennet!
I fortunate to receive an ARC of this book for a fair and honest review!
"The voices of all his relations flitted through his head like ghosts, clamoring against him." (quote from the book)
The morning after the Netherfield ball, Mr.Darcy is determined to leave for London and must convince Mr. Bingley that he should too! Insisting they speak while walking outdoors, they are interrupted by the appearance of Mr. Collins trying to stay on top of a horse and completely lost! Upon learning the cause for his appearance in the area, Mr. Darcy insists on taking control of the situation...a situation involving the Bennet family. A crisis that he feels he must act on to aid them...or in particular Miss Elizabeth Bennet. Mr. Bingley is only too pleased to offer his support as well.
"There is no way out of this tangle." (quote from the book)
Not wishing to spoil your shock of what has occurred at Longbourn, just know that Lydia and Mrs. Bennet, with their mean understanding, have combined efforts to...no I wont spoil it! La! What a fine joke!
"The trickle of guilt was fast turning into a flood, and she was in danger of drowning." (quote from the book)
I have never seen this 'idea' before and the results cause the rest of the family much concern, especially Elizabeth. She is, however, seeing a whole new side to Mr. Darcy. That is until she confesses.
Just know that Lydia is plotting; Mr. Bingley is clever; and Mr. Darcy is falling...that is until his pride comes roaring through.
I was completely engaged, highly diverted and read this story in one evening. There are laugh-out-loud moments, swoon-worthy moments, angsty moments and all I can say is, thank goodness for Mr. Bennet!
I fortunate to receive an ARC of this book for a fair and honest review!
September 21, 2021
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars
This tale begins the morning after the Netherfield Ball, with Darcy warning Bingley that Jane does not seem to return his affections. However, Bingley disagrees. He does agree, though, to travel to London with Darcy and to spend several days thinking the matter over. Darcy has decided that the only way to not succumb to his own feelings for Elizabeth is to also put some distance between them.
Their plans to now pack and leave are disrupted as Collins (on a horse) comes upon them out walking all in an uproar…he is supposed to be summoning the apothecary as Mrs. Bennet has suffered an apoplexy and is on her deathbed. (Mr. Bennet is not at Longbourn, as he departed that morning to visit an old Oxford friend who has taken seriously ill.)
What has really happened…Lydia, all of a sudden, realizes what becoming Mr. Collins’ wife will mean for Elizabeth…she will be the mistress of Longbourn, will spend as she pleases and the others, including her mother, will have to follow her directives. She muses that she can handle Mr. Collins very well, thank you. And so Lydia implores her mother to help interrupt Collins’ who is in the act of proposing to Elizabeth by pretending she is ill. Throughout this story we also read that Mary thinks she will be a better wife.
So it is that Bingley and Darcy come to check on Mrs. Bennet. Jane, OOC, refuses to allow Elizabeth to tell the truth to the gentlemen. Darcy in acting to help sends his carriage to bring Mr. Bennet back to Longbourn. Furthermore, he distracts Mrs. Phillips from visiting her sister who is abed, by going into Meryton with her to shop for lace so that she will not spread the news/gossip about her sister. He has picked up on this desire to keep Mrs. Phillips and Mrs. Bennet apart in observing the Bennet sisters, although he doesn’t know Mrs. Bennet is actually well.
Darcy and Bingley, now continuing their stay at Netherfield, and being reassured that Mrs. Bennet is on the mend, invite the Bennets to visit and explore the maze. It is there that they discuss accomplishments, etc. and he kisses Elizabeth! Elizabeth, the next day, confesses that Mrs. Bennet’s illness was all an act to Darcy. They have a big argument during which he then also tells her that he and Bingley were going to leave Netherfield and not return…not quite the whole truth. He now paints her as deceitful ignoring the fact that he has spoken some half-truths also!
Yes, we have some misunderstandings as in canon. I have given you enough hints and will not SPOIL it further. Know that Darcy does have some conversations with Mr. Bennet, also.
This Darcy reacted with more anger than I would have expected from a man who has not only kissed/compromised Elizabeth but who also has interfered in Jane’s and Bingley’s relationship. I did enjoy this story and it kept my attention. I recommend it.
This tale begins the morning after the Netherfield Ball, with Darcy warning Bingley that Jane does not seem to return his affections. However, Bingley disagrees. He does agree, though, to travel to London with Darcy and to spend several days thinking the matter over. Darcy has decided that the only way to not succumb to his own feelings for Elizabeth is to also put some distance between them.
Their plans to now pack and leave are disrupted as Collins (on a horse) comes upon them out walking all in an uproar…he is supposed to be summoning the apothecary as Mrs. Bennet has suffered an apoplexy and is on her deathbed. (Mr. Bennet is not at Longbourn, as he departed that morning to visit an old Oxford friend who has taken seriously ill.)
What has really happened…Lydia, all of a sudden, realizes what becoming Mr. Collins’ wife will mean for Elizabeth…she will be the mistress of Longbourn, will spend as she pleases and the others, including her mother, will have to follow her directives. She muses that she can handle Mr. Collins very well, thank you. And so Lydia implores her mother to help interrupt Collins’ who is in the act of proposing to Elizabeth by pretending she is ill. Throughout this story we also read that Mary thinks she will be a better wife.
So it is that Bingley and Darcy come to check on Mrs. Bennet. Jane, OOC, refuses to allow Elizabeth to tell the truth to the gentlemen. Darcy in acting to help sends his carriage to bring Mr. Bennet back to Longbourn. Furthermore, he distracts Mrs. Phillips from visiting her sister who is abed, by going into Meryton with her to shop for lace so that she will not spread the news/gossip about her sister. He has picked up on this desire to keep Mrs. Phillips and Mrs. Bennet apart in observing the Bennet sisters, although he doesn’t know Mrs. Bennet is actually well.
Darcy and Bingley, now continuing their stay at Netherfield, and being reassured that Mrs. Bennet is on the mend, invite the Bennets to visit and explore the maze. It is there that they discuss accomplishments, etc. and he kisses Elizabeth! Elizabeth, the next day, confesses that Mrs. Bennet’s illness was all an act to Darcy. They have a big argument during which he then also tells her that he and Bingley were going to leave Netherfield and not return…not quite the whole truth. He now paints her as deceitful ignoring the fact that he has spoken some half-truths also!
Yes, we have some misunderstandings as in canon. I have given you enough hints and will not SPOIL it further. Know that Darcy does have some conversations with Mr. Bennet, also.
This Darcy reacted with more anger than I would have expected from a man who has not only kissed/compromised Elizabeth but who also has interfered in Jane’s and Bingley’s relationship. I did enjoy this story and it kept my attention. I recommend it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
September 22, 2021
Rating: clean, but PG-17 a least due to a lot of snogging and readjusting of clothing. Nothing described, just hinted at. Angst Level: slight… depending on the reader. The lovers’ angst raised the bar a bit. Source: ARC from the author [9-8-21]
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** spoilers ***
Mrs. Bennet: “Don’t be pushed around by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.” –Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
Mrs. Bennet had always lamented the entail hanging over her head. And now, Collins was in the house making eyes at one of her daughters. As she discussed what it would mean for one of her girls to marry the heir… a very different daughter suddenly took notice as to just what that meant and all it entailed. OMG! That was hilarious.
Darcy: “It’s only after you’ve stepped outside your comfort zone that you begin to change, grow, and transform.” –Roy T. Bennet
Darcy was a man possessed. On the one hand, he was a man in love and fighting it tooth and nail. On the other hand, he was trying to escape a pair of fine eyes and get Bingley the heck out of Dodge. Poor Bingley wasn’t going anywhere and he was wondering what had suddenly possessed his friend. He was certainly acting strangely.
Collins: “When someone tells me [no,] it doesn’t mean I can’t do it, it simply means I can’t do it with them.” –Karen E. Quinones Miller
Poor Mr. Collins was not having a good day. He was right in the middle of a most excellent proposal to his beautiful cousin Elizabeth when he was interrupted by Lydia bursting into the room screaming that she needed help. Her mother had fainted, had suffered apoplexy, or something, and she needed HIM to ride and get the apothecary. OMG! What followed was hilarious or tragic at best.
This was a series of misinformation, redirection, subterfuge, out-and-out lies, and confusion. Poor Elizabeth nearly suffered her own apoplexy. She… um… I can’t say. I don’t want to give it away. La! Elizabeth was sure this was a nightmare and hopefully, she’d wake up. ICNPID [I could not put it down]. I highly recommend this for something that is crazy, very different, and engaging. We see a whole new side to Lydia. I can’t tell if that was good or bad.
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** spoilers ***
Mrs. Bennet: “Don’t be pushed around by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.” –Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart
Mrs. Bennet had always lamented the entail hanging over her head. And now, Collins was in the house making eyes at one of her daughters. As she discussed what it would mean for one of her girls to marry the heir… a very different daughter suddenly took notice as to just what that meant and all it entailed. OMG! That was hilarious.
Darcy: “It’s only after you’ve stepped outside your comfort zone that you begin to change, grow, and transform.” –Roy T. Bennet
Darcy was a man possessed. On the one hand, he was a man in love and fighting it tooth and nail. On the other hand, he was trying to escape a pair of fine eyes and get Bingley the heck out of Dodge. Poor Bingley wasn’t going anywhere and he was wondering what had suddenly possessed his friend. He was certainly acting strangely.
Collins: “When someone tells me [no,] it doesn’t mean I can’t do it, it simply means I can’t do it with them.” –Karen E. Quinones Miller
Poor Mr. Collins was not having a good day. He was right in the middle of a most excellent proposal to his beautiful cousin Elizabeth when he was interrupted by Lydia bursting into the room screaming that she needed help. Her mother had fainted, had suffered apoplexy, or something, and she needed HIM to ride and get the apothecary. OMG! What followed was hilarious or tragic at best.
This was a series of misinformation, redirection, subterfuge, out-and-out lies, and confusion. Poor Elizabeth nearly suffered her own apoplexy. She… um… I can’t say. I don’t want to give it away. La! Elizabeth was sure this was a nightmare and hopefully, she’d wake up. ICNPID [I could not put it down]. I highly recommend this for something that is crazy, very different, and engaging. We see a whole new side to Lydia. I can’t tell if that was good or bad.
December 14, 2021
3.5 rounded up. This was short and sweet. Darcy kept waffling about his feelings for Elizabeth, and that made him seem a bit inconstant to me. Both D & E act very young for their ages. Bingley is the one determined to find out his own feelings and Jane’s. Darcy can’t imagine a life without Elizabeth one minute; he can’t imagine that he even considered polluting his family with her and the Bennetts the next. Mr Bennett was mostly absent, but when he finally appears, he’s wiser in this telling. Mrs B & Lydia were idiots. It was interesting seeing several sisters vying for Mr C’s attentions; he wasn’t described with personal hygiene issues or looking like a toad - just a blabbering fool.
Which reminds me…I have yet to read a P&P with Mr Collins as a feasible choice for a husband. I’d like to see him depicted as clean and acceptable looking, but maybe on the autism spectrum & misunderstood. Not paired with Lizzy, but finding someone who will understand him & help him stand up to Lady C.
Low angst. No Lady C, no Wickham, and a basically harmless Caroline. Just a lie concocted by Lydia and Mrs B that starts weaving a tangled web. I liked the two spontaneous Darcy kisses! Also, once he gets Elizabeth away from the group in the hedge maze, he starts running! It seemed so free and undignified!
Contents: clean language and zero sex. Read this when you’re in the mood for Mrs Bennett to pretend apoplexy and force her girls to go along with the charade. Fun and short.
Which reminds me…I have yet to read a P&P with Mr Collins as a feasible choice for a husband. I’d like to see him depicted as clean and acceptable looking, but maybe on the autism spectrum & misunderstood. Not paired with Lizzy, but finding someone who will understand him & help him stand up to Lady C.
Low angst. No Lady C, no Wickham, and a basically harmless Caroline. Just a lie concocted by Lydia and Mrs B that starts weaving a tangled web. I liked the two spontaneous Darcy kisses! Also, once he gets Elizabeth away from the group in the hedge maze, he starts running! It seemed so free and undignified!
Contents: clean language and zero sex. Read this when you’re in the mood for Mrs Bennett to pretend apoplexy and force her girls to go along with the charade. Fun and short.
January 7, 2023
What If Mrs. Bennet Falls Ill and Interrupts a Proposal?
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Just as Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy are about to depart from Meryton together they cross paths with a distraught Mr. Collins who was charged with fetching the apothecary. It would be unconscionable for them to leave the Bennets to fend for themselves (especially with Mr. Bennet being out of town), so the gentlemen postpone their departure. Does this delay allow for affections to be engaged and matches secured, or does the entangled webs of deception and disguise have the potential to ruin these relationships…
MY THOUGHTS:
This is such lark! Mrs. Bennet is too much! She will do anything for her daughters, especially her favorite daughter, Lydia! It was so interesting to observe what kind of changes this small twist produced. I especially loved exploring what happens between these couples when they remain in company with each other a little bit longer.
This story presents Mr. Darcy’s character in a wonderful new light – he is kind, considerate, helpful, and a man of action. I loved seeing Elizabeth recognize these more admirable qualities of Mr. Darcy’s character and how it caused her to revise her opinion of him. He makes her feel safe and cared for, yet at the same time her regret of being involved in her family’s duplicitous schemes causes her no small turmoil. As for Mr. Darcy, his distress for Elizabeth’s family and his insuppressible concern for her happiness reveals to him that his feelings for Elizabeth are not a passing infatuation. And just when his ardent love cannot be repressed anymore, he discovers an abhorrent disguise… I enjoyed seeing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship develop with these new circumstance – how they softened and felt blossoming regard for each other, how they lost trust, and how they learned to forgive.
SPOILER ALERT: The other element of this story I greatly enjoyed was its humor. The premise itself is a little bit of an outlandish farce – to mimic Sheldon Cooper, “in what universe does Lydia Bennet want to marry Mr. Collins?” lol. In this one apparently! I appreciated how Ms. Fairview found a plausible angle for this new twist. The ensuing chaos and confusion that results from Mrs. Bennet and Lydia manning the steering wheel is so entertaining to witness. Seeing these characters become embroiled in their own schemes and machinations felt akin to a Georgette Heyer storyline. And I wouldn’t have minded seeing some more of the madcap elements of this tale as they were so well done – more Mr. Collins, Lydia, Mary, and Mrs. Bennet, more rollicking comedy, more banter and wit.
A Longbourn Entanglement is an excellent blend of romance, comedy, and drama. Readers who love when chaos abounds with the Bennets will adore this delightfully diverting novella. I loved seeing Ms. Fairview flex her comedy muscle in this story, and I hope we see her do it again in the future!
Austenesque Reviews
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
Source: Gift from Author
TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation
THE PREMISE: Just as Mr. Bingley and Mr. Darcy are about to depart from Meryton together they cross paths with a distraught Mr. Collins who was charged with fetching the apothecary. It would be unconscionable for them to leave the Bennets to fend for themselves (especially with Mr. Bennet being out of town), so the gentlemen postpone their departure. Does this delay allow for affections to be engaged and matches secured, or does the entangled webs of deception and disguise have the potential to ruin these relationships…
MY THOUGHTS:
This is such lark! Mrs. Bennet is too much! She will do anything for her daughters, especially her favorite daughter, Lydia! It was so interesting to observe what kind of changes this small twist produced. I especially loved exploring what happens between these couples when they remain in company with each other a little bit longer.
This story presents Mr. Darcy’s character in a wonderful new light – he is kind, considerate, helpful, and a man of action. I loved seeing Elizabeth recognize these more admirable qualities of Mr. Darcy’s character and how it caused her to revise her opinion of him. He makes her feel safe and cared for, yet at the same time her regret of being involved in her family’s duplicitous schemes causes her no small turmoil. As for Mr. Darcy, his distress for Elizabeth’s family and his insuppressible concern for her happiness reveals to him that his feelings for Elizabeth are not a passing infatuation. And just when his ardent love cannot be repressed anymore, he discovers an abhorrent disguise… I enjoyed seeing Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s relationship develop with these new circumstance – how they softened and felt blossoming regard for each other, how they lost trust, and how they learned to forgive.
SPOILER ALERT: The other element of this story I greatly enjoyed was its humor. The premise itself is a little bit of an outlandish farce – to mimic Sheldon Cooper, “in what universe does Lydia Bennet want to marry Mr. Collins?” lol. In this one apparently! I appreciated how Ms. Fairview found a plausible angle for this new twist. The ensuing chaos and confusion that results from Mrs. Bennet and Lydia manning the steering wheel is so entertaining to witness. Seeing these characters become embroiled in their own schemes and machinations felt akin to a Georgette Heyer storyline. And I wouldn’t have minded seeing some more of the madcap elements of this tale as they were so well done – more Mr. Collins, Lydia, Mary, and Mrs. Bennet, more rollicking comedy, more banter and wit.
A Longbourn Entanglement is an excellent blend of romance, comedy, and drama. Readers who love when chaos abounds with the Bennets will adore this delightfully diverting novella. I loved seeing Ms. Fairview flex her comedy muscle in this story, and I hope we see her do it again in the future!
Austenesque Reviews
October 8, 2021
Oh what a tangled web we weave…
Well that was fun! Lydia oh Lydia! I would have never thought I’d see the day! And Mary—a girl wants what a girl wants! A tale that will cleanse your palette from the usually more serious read. It is farcical, entertaining and lighthearted, mixed with some romantic prose near the end. And—Bingley stands up to Darcy and fulfills his own desires for a satisfying change! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Well that was fun! Lydia oh Lydia! I would have never thought I’d see the day! And Mary—a girl wants what a girl wants! A tale that will cleanse your palette from the usually more serious read. It is farcical, entertaining and lighthearted, mixed with some romantic prose near the end. And—Bingley stands up to Darcy and fulfills his own desires for a satisfying change! I thoroughly enjoyed it.
September 28, 2021
Lydia thinks she should marry Collins
First to be married and next Longbourn mistress. That’s what Lydia is thinking about. Alas we never get to see if she would drive Lady Catherine mad or vice versa.
First to be married and next Longbourn mistress. That’s what Lydia is thinking about. Alas we never get to see if she would drive Lady Catherine mad or vice versa.
November 28, 2021
Madcap Mrs Bennet
This was so cute but more. Original, Original, Original! Everyone was in character however, one grew that elusive backbone while another displayed his least favored traits when forced to confront his disappointment. You know that oft-quoted passage about 'being taught good principles but being left to follow them in conceit' (or some such...) ? In this story this talented author shows us what the brilliant JA meant. There are twists and turns of plot that keep the reader turning pages, even knowing the expected end, the road there, to my knowledge of JAFF, has never been traveled. One only has to contemplate how this scenario might have resolved differently. Very enjoyable. Bravo.
This was so cute but more. Original, Original, Original! Everyone was in character however, one grew that elusive backbone while another displayed his least favored traits when forced to confront his disappointment. You know that oft-quoted passage about 'being taught good principles but being left to follow them in conceit' (or some such...) ? In this story this talented author shows us what the brilliant JA meant. There are twists and turns of plot that keep the reader turning pages, even knowing the expected end, the road there, to my knowledge of JAFF, has never been traveled. One only has to contemplate how this scenario might have resolved differently. Very enjoyable. Bravo.
April 30, 2022
Affecting, heartwarming and satisfying
This is my first read of the author, and I am very glad and privileged to have found this variation of hers. It is wonderfully written, and although the angst is mostly limited to the inner conflicts of our beloved couple and between them, it is satisfyingly adequate to have me affected. It is a highly recommended read for those who wish for a short and sweet heartwarming variation with a few humorous scenes for balance.
This is my first read of the author, and I am very glad and privileged to have found this variation of hers. It is wonderfully written, and although the angst is mostly limited to the inner conflicts of our beloved couple and between them, it is satisfyingly adequate to have me affected. It is a highly recommended read for those who wish for a short and sweet heartwarming variation with a few humorous scenes for balance.
October 12, 2021
This story travels a road I have not been down - Lydia Bennet has decided that she will marry Mr. Collins. As a result, Mrs. Bennet fakes an illness to interrupt him proposing to Elizabeth. They have him run to the apothecary, as a distraction. He runs into Darcy and Bingley as they plan to leave town after the ball. In learning that the girls need help, they arrange for everything and stay in town to ensure everything is OK.
There are quite a few misunderstandings and LOTS of discomfort about lying to make the story interesting. Our dear couple does find their happily ever after, but of course, only after a few misunderstandings.
There are quite a few misunderstandings and LOTS of discomfort about lying to make the story interesting. Our dear couple does find their happily ever after, but of course, only after a few misunderstandings.
September 28, 2021
Action packed
A frivolous, enjoyable and action packed variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Monica Fairview.
A frivolous, enjoyable and action packed variation inspired by author Jane Austen’s classic novel Pride and Prejudice by Monica Fairview.
September 29, 2021
Not what I thought it would be
After reading the book summary, I was expecting a humorous romp, a purely flighty story designed to pass a couple of hours nicely. This was not it. There is humor, which is always lovely, but the story is largely serious in tone. After the Netherfield ball, Darcy is determined to quit Hertfordshire, and take Bingley with him, in an attempt to separate himself from the temptation that Elizabeth is to him, and to rescue Bingley from what he believes is a foolish pursuit of Jane Bennett. They never get to leave, having heard that Mrs Bennett is gravely ill, Mr Bennett is away, and the daughters are alone with their troubles. They stay, both of them secretly happily, to be available to assist the Bennett family in their time of need.
Mrs Bennett is not ill, it's a ruse, and this is a case of a lie that just grows larger and more difficult to get out of. Of course, we all remember that Darcy abhors deceit, and that his good opinion once lost, is lost forever. So when Elizabeth starts to view Darcy with a more positive attitude, she knows that revealing the truth will most likely send him running in the opposite direction.
I actually love the scene in which Elizabeth finally has the courage to reveal the truth to Darcy. Typically in these Regency era tales, people don't come right out and say anything in a clear and specific way. They beat around the bush, and couch their messages in superfluous language. In this scene, Elizabeth comes right out with a clear statement, and Darcy comes back with a ringing setdown, spoken in very clear terms. It's fabulous, even though we know Darcy is digging quite a hole for himself, one that he'll need to climb out of eventually. Still, it's very satisfying to have two characters speaking straightforwardly to each other.
The romance is lovely, and for once Mr Bennett is given a worthy role, since he shows up to insert some gems of wisdom just at the right times. There's a lot of angst, and more than a little acrimony, but it's interspersed with lighthearted banter and gentle humor. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
After reading the book summary, I was expecting a humorous romp, a purely flighty story designed to pass a couple of hours nicely. This was not it. There is humor, which is always lovely, but the story is largely serious in tone. After the Netherfield ball, Darcy is determined to quit Hertfordshire, and take Bingley with him, in an attempt to separate himself from the temptation that Elizabeth is to him, and to rescue Bingley from what he believes is a foolish pursuit of Jane Bennett. They never get to leave, having heard that Mrs Bennett is gravely ill, Mr Bennett is away, and the daughters are alone with their troubles. They stay, both of them secretly happily, to be available to assist the Bennett family in their time of need.
Mrs Bennett is not ill, it's a ruse, and this is a case of a lie that just grows larger and more difficult to get out of. Of course, we all remember that Darcy abhors deceit, and that his good opinion once lost, is lost forever. So when Elizabeth starts to view Darcy with a more positive attitude, she knows that revealing the truth will most likely send him running in the opposite direction.
I actually love the scene in which Elizabeth finally has the courage to reveal the truth to Darcy. Typically in these Regency era tales, people don't come right out and say anything in a clear and specific way. They beat around the bush, and couch their messages in superfluous language. In this scene, Elizabeth comes right out with a clear statement, and Darcy comes back with a ringing setdown, spoken in very clear terms. It's fabulous, even though we know Darcy is digging quite a hole for himself, one that he'll need to climb out of eventually. Still, it's very satisfying to have two characters speaking straightforwardly to each other.
The romance is lovely, and for once Mr Bennett is given a worthy role, since he shows up to insert some gems of wisdom just at the right times. There's a lot of angst, and more than a little acrimony, but it's interspersed with lighthearted banter and gentle humor. The book is well written and well edited. I recommend it highly.
October 3, 2021
Adorbs!
When Lydia realizes that if Lizzy marries Collins she gets ALL THE THINGS when Papa B dies she decides that she should be Mrs. C. Of course Mama B is on board for this. One faked swoon interrupts the proposal and hijinks ensue.
No Wickie, minimal Caroline, no Lady Cat polluting Longbourn.
This is a fun and refreshing read!
When Lydia realizes that if Lizzy marries Collins she gets ALL THE THINGS when Papa B dies she decides that she should be Mrs. C. Of course Mama B is on board for this. One faked swoon interrupts the proposal and hijinks ensue.
No Wickie, minimal Caroline, no Lady Cat polluting Longbourn.
This is a fun and refreshing read!
October 6, 2021
This was another great story from Monica Fairview! It is an original and fun idea that I haven’t encountered before in JAFF. It’s not deep and super substantive, but for a short and light read, it was very enjoyable!
The story was engaging and kept my attention. The characters were very recognizable and their words and actions seemed consistent and true to the original. I really enjoyed seeing D&E getting to know each other better and having original opportunities to reveal more of themselves to each other in the situation the story placed them in. The way they came to see one another differently and care for each other was very sweet and romantic. I also enjoyed the dialogue and the banter. One of my favorite lines was said by Mr. Bennet to Darcy:
“I would appreciate it if you could distract Mrs. Bennet while I can get away.” “But sir—” “I am sure you will find a way, Mr. Darcy. Use your imagination. I would suggest falling to the ground in a faint. That always succeeds in drawing attention.” 😂
My only complaints were that IMO, Darcy really really overreacted when Elizabeth revealed the truth to him about Mrs. Bennet. I felt his response and his chastisement of Elizabeth unjustified and lacking reason. He acted personally affronted when the whole situation never had anything to do with him directly.
I also felt that since the whole premise of the book was Mrs. Bennet’s feigned illness, the resolution and getting past it should have been made more clear. It was just dropped never to be mentioned again after the whole D&E argument even after a big deal was made about Bingley and Collins being told or not being told. She was just suddenly receiving visitors in the drawing room again without any real explanation.
Overall, this was a great read and the time I spent reading it was time well spent! I have enjoyed every book I have read from this author and hope she continues to use her talents to entertain us!!!
The story was engaging and kept my attention. The characters were very recognizable and their words and actions seemed consistent and true to the original. I really enjoyed seeing D&E getting to know each other better and having original opportunities to reveal more of themselves to each other in the situation the story placed them in. The way they came to see one another differently and care for each other was very sweet and romantic. I also enjoyed the dialogue and the banter. One of my favorite lines was said by Mr. Bennet to Darcy:
“I would appreciate it if you could distract Mrs. Bennet while I can get away.” “But sir—” “I am sure you will find a way, Mr. Darcy. Use your imagination. I would suggest falling to the ground in a faint. That always succeeds in drawing attention.” 😂
My only complaints were that IMO, Darcy really really overreacted when Elizabeth revealed the truth to him about Mrs. Bennet. I felt his response and his chastisement of Elizabeth unjustified and lacking reason. He acted personally affronted when the whole situation never had anything to do with him directly.
I also felt that since the whole premise of the book was Mrs. Bennet’s feigned illness, the resolution and getting past it should have been made more clear. It was just dropped never to be mentioned again after the whole D&E argument even after a big deal was made about Bingley and Collins being told or not being told. She was just suddenly receiving visitors in the drawing room again without any real explanation.
Overall, this was a great read and the time I spent reading it was time well spent! I have enjoyed every book I have read from this author and hope she continues to use her talents to entertain us!!!
March 20, 2022
Elizabeth tries to stop Jane from marrying her cousin Mr. Collins to save the family estate. In order to try and stop it, she lies to Mr. Darcy. Darcy finds out and throws a fit.
Not sure I liked this story enough to want Jane and Bingley to make a match, honestly if Mrs. Bennet wanted Jane to marry Mr. Collins and Jane agreed, I thought she should marry the man. This Jane was a bit too wishy-washy for my tastes. Elizabeth was being the strong, protecting sister and Darcy was being too judgmental.
I thought the ending was okay.
Not sure I liked this story enough to want Jane and Bingley to make a match, honestly if Mrs. Bennet wanted Jane to marry Mr. Collins and Jane agreed, I thought she should marry the man. This Jane was a bit too wishy-washy for my tastes. Elizabeth was being the strong, protecting sister and Darcy was being too judgmental.
I thought the ending was okay.
September 27, 2021
Very sweet variation. Lydia wants to become mistress of Longbourn so Mrs Bennet feigns illness to interrupt Collins proposing to Lizzy. Things get out of hand when Darcy and Bingley find out. I loved this and finished it quickly. I put this in my reread pile. I liked Mr Bennet's reactions.
December 11, 2021
I just finished A Longbourn Entanglement by Monica Fairview. It’s a “sweet and short” Pride and Prejudice variation. In this variation, Mrs. Bennet falls ill the morning after the Netherfield Ball while Mr. Bennet is away visiting an old friend. Instead of leaving abruptly for London, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley stay to help out the Bennet sisters in their time of trouble. Will this situation bring the Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy closer together or drive them apart?
I loved the variation in this one. Monica Fairview always captures Austen’s characters so perfectly. I love how Elizabeth finally is able to tell the truth of the situation to Darcy and how he responds with a crushing set-down. It seemed so in character! I also loved how Mr. Bennet came back and had some wonderful moments. This was just the type of book I needed right now.
Overall, if you are looking for a sweet variation on the classic Pride and Prejudice tale, I highly recommend A Longbourn Entanglement.
Book Source: A Review Copy from author Monica Fairview. Thank-you! I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
This review was first posted on my blog at: https://lauragerold.blogspot.com/2021...
I loved the variation in this one. Monica Fairview always captures Austen’s characters so perfectly. I love how Elizabeth finally is able to tell the truth of the situation to Darcy and how he responds with a crushing set-down. It seemed so in character! I also loved how Mr. Bennet came back and had some wonderful moments. This was just the type of book I needed right now.
Overall, if you are looking for a sweet variation on the classic Pride and Prejudice tale, I highly recommend A Longbourn Entanglement.
Book Source: A Review Copy from author Monica Fairview. Thank-you! I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
This review was first posted on my blog at: https://lauragerold.blogspot.com/2021...
March 22, 2023
Cute and clean
The whole premise was pretty funny. And the idea of Lydia even wanting to pursue Mr. Collins is hilarious. It did seem a bit odd to me that the deception didn't make Jane want to confess but that's just my opinion. The ending was spot on. No
epilogue but this is definitely a nice light read. I recommend it.
The whole premise was pretty funny. And the idea of Lydia even wanting to pursue Mr. Collins is hilarious. It did seem a bit odd to me that the deception didn't make Jane want to confess but that's just my opinion. The ending was spot on. No
epilogue but this is definitely a nice light read. I recommend it.
September 29, 2021
Good book
Nice story, good Darcys and Lizzy. Glad no elopement or lady Catherine causing problems!! Needed a be better epilogue! Nice Lydia!
Nice story, good Darcys and Lizzy. Glad no elopement or lady Catherine causing problems!! Needed a be better epilogue! Nice Lydia!
June 6, 2023
“What a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive.” A cute story… It had its moments, but I was more offended by Darcy’s highhandedness than Elizabeth was. He just can’t stop helping the Bennets even though he doesn’t like them, and he still tries to warn Bingley away from Jane. The new take on Collins, Lydia and Mary was amusing.
September 27, 2021
“O what a tangled web we weave, when first we practise to deceive!” said Sir Walter Scott, and such were the words that ran through my mind when I found myself entwined in the uniquely amusing events of A Longbourn Entanglement by prolific Austenesque author Monica Fairview.
On the day after the Netherfield ball, Fitzwilliam Darcy is tormented by thoughts of his charming dance partner, Miss Elizabeth Bennet. “He had known with absolute certainty that if he stayed a day longer, he would find it impossible to leave. And leave he must, because duty and position and the weight of centuries of tradition dictated that he could not even consider her a suitable candidate for marriage.” (23) Furthermore, his friend Bingley is on his own path to a potentially unsuitable attachment with Miss Elizabeth’s sister Jane. Darcy resolves to save them both from the delightful danger the two beguiling country misses represent by insisting he and Bingley depart for town immediately. “His friend’s unhappiness mirrored his own. They would have to weather the storm together – they would have to stay strong against the temptation to give in to their feelings.” (89)
Meanwhile, at Longbourn, Elizabeth is miserably ensnared in the parlor with her father’s heir and cousin, Mr. Collins, who is in the throes of a passionate proposal when circumstances turn chaotic. As he flees Longbourn on an urgent mission, he crosses paths with Darcy and Bingley and divulges the dire situation. Darcy perceives a dilemma of either saving himself or being Elizabeth’s hero. With his emotions vacillating between feeling foolish and unaccountably joyful, he concludes that “ultimately, he had no choice. It was, quite simply, the only honorable thing to do.” (147) He remains at Netherfield, determined to assist her and equally determined to protect himself from her influence.
But not everything is as it seems in the Bennet household. “That was how these things began, with a single precarious moment when the distinction between truth and deceit was hanging in the balance.” (1197) The tangled web only grows more elaborate as Elizabeth and Darcy grapple with the consequences of pride and ploys. What will they do when deception threatens to unravel their fragile connection?
Although the synopsis sounds quite serious, I assure you, dear readers, that this story is full of ample amusement. What a storytelling skill, to be capable of mixing some heartbreaking angst in the midst of some humorous antics! Unfortunately, I cannot include any of my most favorite quotes in this review for fear of spoiling the diverting larks in this short and sweet story. Suffice it to say that I laughed out loud more than once at the witty turns of phrase on display in this comedy of errors that is also somehow a somber tale and a beautiful love story all in one.
Austen enthusiasts will be delighted by the engaging and entertaining mischief, as well as the heartfelt declarations, in A Longbourn Entanglement.
5 out of 5 Stars
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On the day after the Netherfield ball, Fitzwilliam Darcy is tormented by thoughts of his charming dance partner, Miss Elizabeth Bennet. “He had known with absolute certainty that if he stayed a day longer, he would find it impossible to leave. And leave he must, because duty and position and the weight of centuries of tradition dictated that he could not even consider her a suitable candidate for marriage.” (23) Furthermore, his friend Bingley is on his own path to a potentially unsuitable attachment with Miss Elizabeth’s sister Jane. Darcy resolves to save them both from the delightful danger the two beguiling country misses represent by insisting he and Bingley depart for town immediately. “His friend’s unhappiness mirrored his own. They would have to weather the storm together – they would have to stay strong against the temptation to give in to their feelings.” (89)
Meanwhile, at Longbourn, Elizabeth is miserably ensnared in the parlor with her father’s heir and cousin, Mr. Collins, who is in the throes of a passionate proposal when circumstances turn chaotic. As he flees Longbourn on an urgent mission, he crosses paths with Darcy and Bingley and divulges the dire situation. Darcy perceives a dilemma of either saving himself or being Elizabeth’s hero. With his emotions vacillating between feeling foolish and unaccountably joyful, he concludes that “ultimately, he had no choice. It was, quite simply, the only honorable thing to do.” (147) He remains at Netherfield, determined to assist her and equally determined to protect himself from her influence.
But not everything is as it seems in the Bennet household. “That was how these things began, with a single precarious moment when the distinction between truth and deceit was hanging in the balance.” (1197) The tangled web only grows more elaborate as Elizabeth and Darcy grapple with the consequences of pride and ploys. What will they do when deception threatens to unravel their fragile connection?
Although the synopsis sounds quite serious, I assure you, dear readers, that this story is full of ample amusement. What a storytelling skill, to be capable of mixing some heartbreaking angst in the midst of some humorous antics! Unfortunately, I cannot include any of my most favorite quotes in this review for fear of spoiling the diverting larks in this short and sweet story. Suffice it to say that I laughed out loud more than once at the witty turns of phrase on display in this comedy of errors that is also somehow a somber tale and a beautiful love story all in one.
Austen enthusiasts will be delighted by the engaging and entertaining mischief, as well as the heartfelt declarations, in A Longbourn Entanglement.
5 out of 5 Stars
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February 27, 2023
This is my second reading of this work (apparently, it's my thing right now). I had rated this 3 *'s last time, and I can't think why. I can't think of anything I didn't like about this book!
As Mr Collins is on the verge of making his offer to Elizabeth, Lydia comes to a realization of what being married to the heir to Longbourn could mean for her, and what it could mean should one of her stricter, less fun sisters become mistress of LB. So, she and Mrs Bennet concoct a plan to interrupt the proposal--this being for MrsB to feign apoplexy.
Unfortunately, Darcy and Bingley catch wind of her illness as Collins is riding out for help and come to the Bennets' aid. E hates the deceit but can't see a way out of it that won't throw her family into an even worse light, so goes along with it. The burden becomes greater as she develops feelings for D.
This book is entirely about D&E growing to love one another. There is no Wickham, no LCdB, and very little Caroline Bingley. Collins is present and crucial to the plot but acts as little more than an annoyance. This is entirely about D&E and I love it! Even MrsB and Lydia are bearable in their wild antics and it was highly entertaining seeing Mary and Lydia compete for Collins' attention. This take on MrB is refreshing and I loved him.
Sweet, cute, and everything swoon-worthy Whole-heartedly recommended.
As Mr Collins is on the verge of making his offer to Elizabeth, Lydia comes to a realization of what being married to the heir to Longbourn could mean for her, and what it could mean should one of her stricter, less fun sisters become mistress of LB. So, she and Mrs Bennet concoct a plan to interrupt the proposal--this being for MrsB to feign apoplexy.
Unfortunately, Darcy and Bingley catch wind of her illness as Collins is riding out for help and come to the Bennets' aid. E hates the deceit but can't see a way out of it that won't throw her family into an even worse light, so goes along with it. The burden becomes greater as she develops feelings for D.
This book is entirely about D&E growing to love one another. There is no Wickham, no LCdB, and very little Caroline Bingley. Collins is present and crucial to the plot but acts as little more than an annoyance. This is entirely about D&E and I love it! Even MrsB and Lydia are bearable in their wild antics and it was highly entertaining seeing Mary and Lydia compete for Collins' attention. This take on MrB is refreshing and I loved him.
Sweet, cute, and everything swoon-worthy Whole-heartedly recommended.
November 21, 2021
On the whole I enjoyed the book which was the first novel I've read from Ms. Fairview. Although I read the entire novel I am confused as to how Mr. Collins arrived and determined to set his cap on Lizzy. Perhaps I need to go back and reread that part. If it was right in front of my nose than please excuse the remark. I did like the Darcy, Elizabeth, Darcy, Elizabeth view points which seems to be a popular writing style lately. But I think Lizzy was far too forgiving of Darcy after he verbally lambasted her after she admitted the whole of the truth to him (no spoilers here.) Perhaps her love for Darcy allowed it. :)
I must add that as much as I did enjoy the story, I would have liked to have seen less "flair" used. By this I mean; I liked the right corner scroll very much but I would like to have seen one in each corner so each new chapter page didn't feel lopsided. In addition to that, one new chapter pages the first letter in a sentence was enlarged by a text style that was ill fitted for the century. On other chapters the first four words were all in caps. At times I did feel as if I were reading two or three different novels.
Though, on the whole I did enjoy "A Longbourn Entanglement."
I must add that as much as I did enjoy the story, I would have liked to have seen less "flair" used. By this I mean; I liked the right corner scroll very much but I would like to have seen one in each corner so each new chapter page didn't feel lopsided. In addition to that, one new chapter pages the first letter in a sentence was enlarged by a text style that was ill fitted for the century. On other chapters the first four words were all in caps. At times I did feel as if I were reading two or three different novels.
Though, on the whole I did enjoy "A Longbourn Entanglement."
November 25, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story is devilishly delightful, highly diverting, crazy, very different, and engaging. Elizabeth has a secret, and if Darcy discovers it, will it spell the end of their fledgling romance? When Mrs. Bennet falls ill after the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley postpone their trip to London to offer their assistance, but things are never what they seem. Before long, Darcy is entangled in a chaotic situation at Longbourn, and Elizabeth is faced with a thorny dilemma that could drive Darcy away from her forever. Will Elizabeth and Darcy muddle their way through the mayhem, or is everything just too tangled for them to find love? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This story is devilishly delightful, highly diverting, crazy, very different, and engaging. Elizabeth has a secret, and if Darcy discovers it, will it spell the end of their fledgling romance? When Mrs. Bennet falls ill after the Netherfield Ball, Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley postpone their trip to London to offer their assistance, but things are never what they seem. Before long, Darcy is entangled in a chaotic situation at Longbourn, and Elizabeth is faced with a thorny dilemma that could drive Darcy away from her forever. Will Elizabeth and Darcy muddle their way through the mayhem, or is everything just too tangled for them to find love? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
April 16, 2023
Shenanigans is the term of the day. Mrs. Bennett commits a ruse to aid her beloved Lydia that backfires for the elder sisters. The premise is definitely something Mrs. Bennett would do and it helped the storyline that Mr. Bennett had to be away at the time so he couldn't prevent it. Elizabeth was torn due to lying continually and Darcy's turn around at having a reason to stay was very abrupt.
That being said I wasn't a big fan of the way Jane or Darcy were portrayed. Mary was fairly annoying because they had her stretch beyond where I thought Mary would push to in regards to courting. Lydia was quite amusing in a sense but I'm not sure I could see this particular storyline actually playing out. The argument between Elizabeth and Darcy was brutal, but they made up very quickly afterwards which was a bit of a stretch.
It was well written and engaging, just didn't sit right with me.
That being said I wasn't a big fan of the way Jane or Darcy were portrayed. Mary was fairly annoying because they had her stretch beyond where I thought Mary would push to in regards to courting. Lydia was quite amusing in a sense but I'm not sure I could see this particular storyline actually playing out. The argument between Elizabeth and Darcy was brutal, but they made up very quickly afterwards which was a bit of a stretch.
It was well written and engaging, just didn't sit right with me.
January 21, 2022
3 1/2 stars rounded up
This is an entertaining enough story, but it really needed another pass by the author. Time after time, the author seemed to forget that something had already happened or had already been described and wrote it again in different words. For instance, early in the book, Lizzy heard the doctor arrive. Then, she heard the doctor arrive again, not a second time but the same time.
Also, I got REALLY tired of hearing that something touched Darcy to his very core, or his soul, or every fibre of his being. Those phrases are drastically overused in books in general, so it's better to avoid them, but even if that weren't the case, please don't use a phrase like that more than a dozen times in a fairly short book!
Other than those two issues, the book was sweet and enjoyable. With another pass of editing, it could be a very good book.
This is an entertaining enough story, but it really needed another pass by the author. Time after time, the author seemed to forget that something had already happened or had already been described and wrote it again in different words. For instance, early in the book, Lizzy heard the doctor arrive. Then, she heard the doctor arrive again, not a second time but the same time.
Also, I got REALLY tired of hearing that something touched Darcy to his very core, or his soul, or every fibre of his being. Those phrases are drastically overused in books in general, so it's better to avoid them, but even if that weren't the case, please don't use a phrase like that more than a dozen times in a fairly short book!
Other than those two issues, the book was sweet and enjoyable. With another pass of editing, it could be a very good book.
October 24, 2021
Avid Reader
Mrs. Bennet pretends to be at deaths door because Lydia wants Collins to marry her instead of Elizabeth. There are several problems with that scheme. Jane doesn't want Elizabeth to tell the truth because she is afraid that she will lose Bingley. Collins still believes that he had a chance at winning Elizabeth. Mary feels that she should be the future mistress of Longbourn. Mr. Bennet is away. Elizabeth decides to tell Darcy the truth after Darcy and Bingley delay their departure to London for several days.
Mrs. Bennet pretends to be at deaths door because Lydia wants Collins to marry her instead of Elizabeth. There are several problems with that scheme. Jane doesn't want Elizabeth to tell the truth because she is afraid that she will lose Bingley. Collins still believes that he had a chance at winning Elizabeth. Mary feels that she should be the future mistress of Longbourn. Mr. Bennet is away. Elizabeth decides to tell Darcy the truth after Darcy and Bingley delay their departure to London for several days.
December 23, 2021
This was a very sweet novella that was comedic and endearing. Taking place after the Netherfield ball, a comedy of errors occurs that happens between all of the usual key players. I loved how many of the secondary characters were honoured and elevated - the whole Bennet family, Bingley. Darcy and Elizabeth were charming, and their big argument had me on tenderhooks to see how it would be resolved. Also Darcy winked in this book, and I can't say enough how much I enjoyed it. More winking please!
An excellent, light-hearted read!
An excellent, light-hearted read!
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