This was a lazy Sunday afternoon read, and I didn't go in expecting much. I really enjoyed it, though. Not sure how unique a story of a ghost-assisted romance is across all of fiction, but it is unique among the books I have read. Quite nice to get some variety.
I also really enjoyed the characterization for Griffin and Byron. I have become keenly aware in these Kindle Unlimited romances that while it might be a story about two guys, they tend to be stereotypes, and one is usually clearly written as a surrogate for the female audience. It never rings quite true with my actual experiences as a gay man, where we rarely fit so neatly into dom/sub and masc/fem boxes. These characters were very well fleshed out, though, and were a mix of traits. They seemed like real people I meet, not archetypes.
If I had an issue with the story, and this might get slightly spoilery, it was that I didn't see the moment West evolved from dude-bro to just a confident guy who actually cared about other people. It happened, I think, but I don't know when. After the fiasco at the Halloween party, West just kept doubling down on the "you did nothing wrong ripping his clothes off, he wanted it" spiel. It was an uncomfortable vibe for me. Even later when Byron confirmed he kinda did like the aggression, the story still backed off it by having a more conventional "sweet" date and then sex after that. But I don't know that I saw when West suddenly decided to see Byron as a person to get to know and not a notch for Griffin's bedpost. Griffin wanted Byron like that from the beginning, but West's change of heart didn't strike me. He just suddenly backed off being the voice in Griffin's head telling him to get on with it and bang the dude. But I'm not sure I know why based on anything that came before.
That's just a nitpick, though. I did like the story quite a bit, and unlike most where when I reach the end I'm just kinda done with the characters, if there is another one with these guys I think I would like to see what happens. And given this author managed to give his characters (the human ones, at least) more depth than I am accustomed to seeing in gay romances, I plan to delve into the rest of his catalog with my fingers crossed.