I would have hoped for more nature inspired poetry from this title - while there is some, it's scattershot throughout the book and definitely a small portion of the contents. The layout of the book is to have a poem on the left, usually with a rather long title that itself contains a full idea, and then a smaller poem on the right, reflective on the poem it's paired with (which I quite liked). One example I enjoyed is titled The bravest thing you can do is tell yourself the truth, which is already an inspirational tweet of the day. The poem itself is about a bad relationship (as is seemingly half the book):
"... We built a home on paper beams, ignored the way the walls would shake anytime things got heavy. I guess the lonely cling to the lonely, and the starving feed off of each other. If only I could have seen how thin we were becoming. If only I realized how hard the ground hits when the falling finally does stop."
Opposite, one of my favorite sections: "You can fool the world for a period of time; you can even fool yourself, but one evening you will come home all heavy shoulders and fake smiles, and you will catch your eyes in the mirror. You will try to look away, try to hide, but they will hold you. You won't speak the truth, not yet, but you will know - you will know there is no more lying."
Direct, emotional, and with very little metaphor or attempt to do something interesting with language - it's not exactly what I expected from a book of poetry. I think the weakness of the book is exactly this: that a lot of it feels like elevated instagram poetry; like social media vagueposts. Obviously, I don't find that to be a show-stopper for my enjoyment, but there's a disconnect from the expectation set by the title, as I don't think My current obsession is fitness with the line "Half-naked fitness girl posing in mirror with inspirational quote" repeated eleven times is what we're learning from the trees - and this particular poem is surrounded by several other pieces of a similar theme and content.
When the book is on target, I think it shines, with passages like "The forest I ran in as a child is overgrown now. Paths made by bare feet there but hidden by trees and weeds. Sunlight scarcely makes it past the branches now. From where I stand, the center looks dark, and thick, and hungry. Still, it begs me to enter, or maybe it's just me calling to me."
Another favorite section: "There is a detachment in humans not often found in nature. Maybe this is proof of our creation, this feeling of other that keeps us disconnected from the world. Anything birthed from the dirt of this planet knows its place in the web, in the circle that connects systems, and lives, and souls all together. This exchange of energy. This take only what is needed to survive, this giving when it is time. But humans, we move forward making ghosts as we go, consuming lives for no reason, thinking creation comes from destruction, believing we are gods in a world that was never ours to own. -- I think we are unhappy because we are walking conundrums. All of us puzzles with round pieces and sharp edges. So lost and so sure. So unkind and so sensitive. So selfish and so self-loathing. So stuck on this world, and yet, so not a part of it anymore."
I like this thought, but it never develops into a serious analysis, or roots itself to a place or time, or gives me a new image or turn of phrase. I also struggled to relate to the author - she lays out calls to be mindful in so many of her poems about society ("It's how we watch the news and feel nothing. it's how we turn it off and return to our lives. It's how we drive over bodies [roadkill] and don't even care enough to count.") but in her relationship poems, she seems resigned to incredible passivity ("It's not your fault, how we respond with open bodies. We givers. We healers. We lambs who only know how to allow others to feed. You need me. I'm saving you, and it isn't murder if I sacrifice myself willingly.") and that passivity pervades everywhere.
There's clearly a lot of talent here, and I really enjoyed the layout and approach, even if the content and themes mostly did not click for me. I'm looking forward to seeing how this author develops in the future.