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327 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 16, 2021
Tom McCarthy is a writer of ideas. Though his novels may be ornamented with inventive prose and a subtly morbid satire, they draw their animating force from the kind of idiosyncratic concepts that can only be arrived at through deep interrogations of reality’s nature, involving the deceptively simple, apparently naive questions which, in the words of Milan Kundera, “set the limits of human possibilities, describe the boundaries of human existence.” What, as McCarthy asks in 2005’s Remainder, is motion? Are movements discrete, singular phenomena, briefly existent then gone forever, or are they ontologically identical to their subsequent reproductions? Can a past action - even the past itself - be repeated? Can it be perfected? At his best, McCarthy poses questions like these in terms of narrative and character, constructing fluid, intellectually visceral stories that seem to incarnate the abstract concepts upon which they’re based.
It’s fitting, then, that his latest novel should be so explicitly concerned with the ethics, tensions, and maddening beauty of his primary creative strategy. No longer limiting his philosophical purview to the purely physical realm of bodies and spaces, The Making of Incarnation finds McCarthy employing his consistent interest in science and technology to expand his conceptual storytelling into the domain of virtual reality, a subject replete with its own ontological quandaries (derivative of, and therefore pertinent to, those of our own physical reality). And therein lies the novel’s ostensible goals, if McCarthy’s past efforts are any indication - to locate these quandaries, reify them in the context of a specific narrative, and formulate fresh (if somewhat amorphous) insights about them, particularly their effect on human experience. Such goals underpin The Making of Incarnation’s parallel storylines, while also assigning a third, decidedly meta valance to the already punny title. And so the question of the novel’s success becomes a question of how skillfully and insightfully McCarthy has incarnated his ideas within it.
Although the story takes shape gradually, with the first hundred or so pages demanding rather diligent attention for the reader to sense the emergent trajectory, it’s all relatively straightforward: on the one hand, there’s Mark Phocan, a motion-capture expert working as a consultant on the production of an upcoming space epic film titled Incarnation; on the other is Monica Dean, a junior legal associate whose research into the field of time and motion studies on behalf of a mysterious client sparks an international search for an artifact missing from the archives of Lillian Gilbreth, the field’s pioneer, a search in which Phocan ultimately finds himself embroiled. Reading this synopsis, one might expect a story laced with urgency, driven constantly forward by the inexorable momentum of conflict and shifting alliances between characters. That’s not quite the case. McCarthy is patient, perhaps too patient - it isn’t until just past the novel’s halfway point that the storylines begin to appreciably intersect, and even then, the narrative voice’s loquacious tendencies continue keeping the burn slow. Neither is there much overt conflict to speak of, owing to McCarthy’s wise decision to amplify the mystique of the aforementioned international search by withholding as much information as possible about it, relegating all but the most potent details to the realm of the extratextual.
Unfortunately, it often feels like the same has been done with the characters themselves. Even Phocan, whom we first see during a formative boyhood experience and whose story comes to take priority over that of Dean and the mysterious client, seems strangely hollow or undefined, as if McCarthy is less interested in illustrating his characters’ interiors and arranging their interests into conflict than he is in describing their external physicalities, the courses charted through space by their bodies. Many of the more minor characters have little to distinguish them, causing their presences to blur together and cast a vague pallor over certain stretches of the novel (the group interaction in the opening chapter of Book Two (“And Down We Went”) is a glaring example). But there are still other moments, like the dinner scene in “The Norbert Wiener Appreciation Society”, that are handled excellently. Here, Anthony Garnett, a veteran of the mo-cap industry and Phocan’s boss, dines with old college buddy Pilkington, now a member of an undisclosed intelligence agency, who shares with Garnett the information compiled by Dean about Gilbreth’s missing artifact, which Pilkington’s agency has “passively captured.” The scene, ranking among the novel’s high points, is a formidable synthesis of science, intrigue, and character, moreover serving as the crucial link between storylines and therefore as the catalyst for the second half’s more robust pace. What also contributes to the greater sense of plot movement is the gradual recession from the foreground of Incarnation, the titular film-within-the-novel, the sardonically formulaic story of which seems intended to exemplify the rote ends to which the creative act of incarnation can be applied by unthoughtful practitioners operating within a system as unabashedly capitalistic as the contemporary film industry. This comparative approach, though certainly interesting from a formal perspective, might have yielded more fruit had the passages detailing the film’s plot more fully cohered with the novel’s other elements, and, more importantly, had The Making of Incarnation’s own story acted as a stronger counterpoint.
As it stands, that story is a bit of a dud. Rather than focus on the search for the artifact to any extent further than Phocan’s leisurely climactic trip to the dacha of the former Soviet physicist who might hold the mystery’s key, McCarthy instead expends his ink on profuse descriptive flourish and vague gestures toward a philosophical depth which, by novel’s end, feels more rhetorical than substantive. This isn’t to say that he should have written a thriller - for it’s the abundance, quality, and sheer propulsive force of these descriptions that constitute the novel’s chief virtue and testify to McCarthy’s mastery of prose writing. Consider the following passage regarding a window pane - the sole remaining original, its counterparts having been long since broken and replaced - in the Soviet physicist’s study:
“Unlike the newer ones, it contains bubbles, waves, inclusions, reams and pleats. Looked through from study side, it introduces to the garden little folds, occlusions, doublings - each one near-imperceptible alone, but in amalgam overlaying the flow of branches, well and wood stump with a set of tiny visual hiccups, backwashes or eddies that’s at once bewildering and quite hypnotic.”
Despite the inhibitions such visual descriptiveness puts on the plot, its vibrance and dynamism is often electrifying, denoting a genuine passion for incarnation’s tangible possibilities. But if prose of this density isn’t deployed for purposes of storytelling, it would nevertheless seem necessary for McCarthy to articulate some relevant philosophical point to it, and his failure to do so is what shifts more weight to the story than it’s structurally capable of bearing.
There are some notions that recur and accumulate undeniable import. Suspicions of predestiny; the contingency of reality systems; a hope or fear that everything, from air particles to people, are indelibly marked by their previous states (whence the significance of Mark’s name and his introductory boyhood chapter) - although these each find adequate incarnation at one point or another, McCarthy never manages to assemble them into a comprehensive and compelling perspective. That the key to the central mystery of the missing artifact lies in a private moment of interpersonal love once experienced by the Soviet physicist might be understood as an admission of defeat by McCarthy, whose questions about the meaning of existence can only be answered in the highly specific terms of the inquiring individual, terms unintelligible to any external observer. With questions of this implacability at its foundation, small wonder that The Making of Incarnation stumbles where McCarthy’s earlier efforts soar.