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The DOLL
In the wake of Jenna Hess' sudden death, Jeremy Dillon is devastated. His only hope of easing the pain lies in alcohol...until he meets The Dollmaker.
Meet CR1XY, the Dollmaker's Elite doll, created especially for Jeremy. But is she?
Meet CR1XY, the Dollmaker's Elite doll, created especially for Jeremy. But is she?
- GenresScience FictionFantasy
146 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 28, 2021
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About the author
Laura Daleo
12 books535 followersLAURA DALEO is the author of nine published works that blend the supernatural with high-stakes suspense. Her portfolio ranges from deep-rooted vampire lore to the chilling sci-fi thriller THE DOLL and the supernatural reimagining of the Angel of Death in MY NAME IS DEATH.
Her latest release, THE WOLF EXPERIMENT, marks a gripping evolution into urban fantasy thriller territory, exploring the dark intersection of military science and forced transformation.
Born and raised in San Diego, she now resides in Tucson, Arizona, with her two beloved dogs, Rose and Cooper. When she isn’t reimagining the shadows of the modern world, she can usually be found with a Starbucks coffee in hand.
Her latest release, THE WOLF EXPERIMENT, marks a gripping evolution into urban fantasy thriller territory, exploring the dark intersection of military science and forced transformation.
Born and raised in San Diego, she now resides in Tucson, Arizona, with her two beloved dogs, Rose and Cooper. When she isn’t reimagining the shadows of the modern world, she can usually be found with a Starbucks coffee in hand.
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October 31, 2021
The Doll, like most books I read lately, is written in 1st person past tense. I prefer 3rd person, but happily, this story is skillfully written by the author, making it a pleasure to read regardless. The story engages the reader from the beginning and maintains a favorable pace throughout. However, it does not go in the direction I would have guessed, which ought to be a plus, though a creepier "doll" might have appealed to me more and would have made it a better Halloween read. But this is not a horror story or even the "unhealthy obsession" story I had expected. Rather it is a sci/fi futuristic tale. The story made me uncomfortable because the main characters act as though there is nothing wrong with having a romantic relationship with a man-made creation rather than a live human being. In this story, there is no actual sex between the doll and Jeremy; however, the doll and Jeremy discuss the fact that they will wait to "make love" until the doll is "ready." The doll in this story has super-normal powers and abilities, so she is more human-like than anything we have at present. Sex dolls already exist in real life, and there might be beneficial uses for them, but in general, I consider them to be a detriment to society that will lead to people not knowing how to have "real" relationships. Sci/fi fans should enjoy this story, and maybe I'll read another of Daleo's books in the future since I think she is a talented writer.
December 22, 2021
The Doll is based on the concept of humanoids with artificial intelligence who are capable of perfectly imitating human behaviour and emotions. Jeremy has recently lost his fiancé in a car accident. He is wracked by guilt about Jenna's death because he asked her to drive to his home late at night, knowing she was tired. The fact that he asked her to do this is an early indication of Jeremy's character which is a bit spoiled and selfish. Jeremy has a successful career as a restorer of properties which he acquires at good prices due to their run-down states, and sells at significant profits.
Jeremy is wallowing in self pity and has started drinking heavily when he is approached by a man in a bar and given a card for The Dollmaker who, the stranger assures him, can help him overcome his grief. He decides to go ahead and make contact with the company and is introduced to the idea of replacing Jenna with a doll. The doll has artificial intelligence and will be capable of interacting with the outside world in the same way as a human would. It will be programmed as a replica of his dead fiancé, although it would be built to look a bit different so as not to raise unnecessary questions. Jeremy will pass the doll off as his new girlfriend.
Jeremy orders the doll, an expensive piece of electronic equipment, based on the specs he is given by the company. It did require a bit of suspension of belief to accept that a young man would actually think he could replace his girlfriend with a machine and, having received the humanoid, almost immediately substitute his affection for his real life girlfriend with affection for a doll.
The humanoid that Jeremy receives is not a run-of-the-mill specimen. Carley has a greater ability than the other humanoid dolls to make decisions based on her experiences and learnings. She has unusual physical strength and abilities and has more human-like emotions. Jeremy quickly becomes devoted to Carley, the doll, and when it becomes apparent that people are hunting for her, he choses to oppose them and behaves as if Carley is a real person.
The story is entertaining, if a little unbelievable, and the idea of a humanoid like Carley is rather thrilling. Jeremy comes across as a bit wishy-washy and overly reliant on Carley to make any decisions and find ways to protect them both.
I think this concept is to complex for a novella and needs a longer book to develop the ideas more fully, both in the context of storyline and from a character development point of view.
A fun and quick read which will be enjoyed by readers who like a fast-paced plot with less characterisation and detail.
Jeremy is wallowing in self pity and has started drinking heavily when he is approached by a man in a bar and given a card for The Dollmaker who, the stranger assures him, can help him overcome his grief. He decides to go ahead and make contact with the company and is introduced to the idea of replacing Jenna with a doll. The doll has artificial intelligence and will be capable of interacting with the outside world in the same way as a human would. It will be programmed as a replica of his dead fiancé, although it would be built to look a bit different so as not to raise unnecessary questions. Jeremy will pass the doll off as his new girlfriend.
Jeremy orders the doll, an expensive piece of electronic equipment, based on the specs he is given by the company. It did require a bit of suspension of belief to accept that a young man would actually think he could replace his girlfriend with a machine and, having received the humanoid, almost immediately substitute his affection for his real life girlfriend with affection for a doll.
The humanoid that Jeremy receives is not a run-of-the-mill specimen. Carley has a greater ability than the other humanoid dolls to make decisions based on her experiences and learnings. She has unusual physical strength and abilities and has more human-like emotions. Jeremy quickly becomes devoted to Carley, the doll, and when it becomes apparent that people are hunting for her, he choses to oppose them and behaves as if Carley is a real person.
The story is entertaining, if a little unbelievable, and the idea of a humanoid like Carley is rather thrilling. Jeremy comes across as a bit wishy-washy and overly reliant on Carley to make any decisions and find ways to protect them both.
I think this concept is to complex for a novella and needs a longer book to develop the ideas more fully, both in the context of storyline and from a character development point of view.
A fun and quick read which will be enjoyed by readers who like a fast-paced plot with less characterisation and detail.
January 1, 2022
First of all, the cover is amazing and extremely eye-catching. The blurb sounded intriguing and it told methis was a book that I wanted to read.
When Jeremy’s fiancée dies in an accident, he turns to the bottle to drown his sorrows. In the bar, he is approached by someone who suggests he contact The Dollmaker as he could help.
So, he makes an appointment and the wheels are set in motion for Jeremy to purchase his very own walking, talking, breathing, eating doll – a replica of his late fiancée. Her name is Carly and she changes his life forever.
At first, I thought this was creepy – that someone would create an AI doll in a dead person’s image and that a loved one would buy it, but the more I read, the more I loved this idea.
Carly is not Jenna. She even makes that clear herself. She is her own person. The author very skillfully does not let us forget that Carly is not human but that does not stop the reader liking her and rooting for her.
As it turns out, Carly is a whole lot more than human. And this is where the author ramps up the sci-fi, and gets the Russians and the FBI involved.
And she does it brilliantly. This is a great page turner that I could not put down and The Doll is one of the most exciting books I have read this year. I mean, last year because I finished it yesterday evening and it is now New Year’s Day!
If you like an easy-to-read book with a great plot, you will love The Doll.
When Jeremy’s fiancée dies in an accident, he turns to the bottle to drown his sorrows. In the bar, he is approached by someone who suggests he contact The Dollmaker as he could help.
So, he makes an appointment and the wheels are set in motion for Jeremy to purchase his very own walking, talking, breathing, eating doll – a replica of his late fiancée. Her name is Carly and she changes his life forever.
At first, I thought this was creepy – that someone would create an AI doll in a dead person’s image and that a loved one would buy it, but the more I read, the more I loved this idea.
Carly is not Jenna. She even makes that clear herself. She is her own person. The author very skillfully does not let us forget that Carly is not human but that does not stop the reader liking her and rooting for her.
As it turns out, Carly is a whole lot more than human. And this is where the author ramps up the sci-fi, and gets the Russians and the FBI involved.
And she does it brilliantly. This is a great page turner that I could not put down and The Doll is one of the most exciting books I have read this year. I mean, last year because I finished it yesterday evening and it is now New Year’s Day!
If you like an easy-to-read book with a great plot, you will love The Doll.
January 25, 2022
The Doll is the first book I have read by Laura Daleo. This book had all my emotions going!! I cried, laughed, got mad, and fell in love with characters. CR1XY and Jeremy have an exciting adventure with twists and turns galore. The ending was perfect. I highly recommend this fun, exciting, heart wrenching, and fast read book.
October 31, 2021
When Jeremy’s fiancée passes away, he is left devasted, choosing to drown his sorrows in a bottle. Enter The Dollmaker. Jeremy receives an anonymous tip to visit The Dollmaker, a company that specializes in lessening grief with a unique solution. When Jeremy contracts them to create a doll in his fiancée’s image, will he end up with a happily ever after or way more than he bargained for?
The book begins with a bang and draws you in immediately. The writing is succinct and easy to follow. It has a good flow and makes for a pleasant reading experience. The characters are believable and the grief experienced when a loved one passes suddenly is relatable.
The storyline is a unique blend of tragedy, grief, journey, high-tech and sci-fi. It moves at a nice pace to keep the reader interested in discovering what will happen next. The only oddity in the story is how easily Jeremy accepts life with a non-human as natural.
I will also note the story contains some foul language. It is not heavily used or overused, but for those who prefer a story without it, this book would not be a good fit.
All-in-all, I found the story to be unique and entertaining. I would recommend it!
The book begins with a bang and draws you in immediately. The writing is succinct and easy to follow. It has a good flow and makes for a pleasant reading experience. The characters are believable and the grief experienced when a loved one passes suddenly is relatable.
The storyline is a unique blend of tragedy, grief, journey, high-tech and sci-fi. It moves at a nice pace to keep the reader interested in discovering what will happen next. The only oddity in the story is how easily Jeremy accepts life with a non-human as natural.
I will also note the story contains some foul language. It is not heavily used or overused, but for those who prefer a story without it, this book would not be a good fit.
All-in-all, I found the story to be unique and entertaining. I would recommend it!
October 27, 2021
Jeremy Dillion, the protagonist of the book, is devastated at the sudden death of his fiancee, Jenna, and blames her death on himself. Jeremy's solution to his misery and depression is to find relief in alcohol until one day Dillion meets a stranger who will change his life forever. The stranger, having a similar experience, gives him a business card for The Doll Maker and encourages Jeremy to seek their unique solution to his situation.
I began this book thinking it would be just another super AI humanoid adventure. Boy, was I wrong! Laura Daleo created a storyline that was entertaining, suspenseful, and riveting at every turn. The characters were exceptional, from Alicia the Doll Maker's primary contact and information liaison officer, the Russian Dollmaker, Jeremy's close friends, the FBI Agents, and finally Carly, the DOLL. Jeremy is expecting a duplicate of his beloved Jenna, but Carly proves to be much, much more.
I didn't give this novel a five-star rating merely due to the editing and grammatical errors, but the story itself was unusually good. I definitely recommend The Doll by Laura Daleo.
I began this book thinking it would be just another super AI humanoid adventure. Boy, was I wrong! Laura Daleo created a storyline that was entertaining, suspenseful, and riveting at every turn. The characters were exceptional, from Alicia the Doll Maker's primary contact and information liaison officer, the Russian Dollmaker, Jeremy's close friends, the FBI Agents, and finally Carly, the DOLL. Jeremy is expecting a duplicate of his beloved Jenna, but Carly proves to be much, much more.
I didn't give this novel a five-star rating merely due to the editing and grammatical errors, but the story itself was unusually good. I definitely recommend The Doll by Laura Daleo.
March 12, 2024
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November 12, 2021
Sometimes you can tell right away when a fictional work is not for you. I noticed that almost immediately in reading “The Doll” by Laura Daleo, a book with a plot that intrigued me but fell flat.
The story begins with the main character, Jeremy, getting loaded in a bar while mourning the tragic death of his former fiancée, Jenna. A few pages in, readers are jarred with Jeremy’s sudden flashback, with the preface, “The memory unfurled in my brain unbidden, with me helpless to stop it …”
What follows is a memory—frankly, not all that stimulating of a memory—of how he met his future fiancée. Now, I don’t profess to be an expert novelist, but I’ve read enough about writing fiction to know that writers should present flashbacks in novels in a careful, discerning way. Daleo didn’t do that, inserting a sudden memory from a character that readers are hardly invested in so early on. That made me think that the writing to come would be on the amateurish side, and unfortunately, that’s what I observed.
I’m surprised by all the 4- and 5-star reviews I’ve seen for this book, because I didn’t find it engaging. The characters didn’t hold my interest, and the story that unfolded was bland. Daleo’s main idea for "The Doll" has promise, but the writing is lacking.
The cover is cool, however, and that, along with the title and vibe of the book, drew me in. As a side note, Daleo should consider writing a more extensive book description.
The story begins with the main character, Jeremy, getting loaded in a bar while mourning the tragic death of his former fiancée, Jenna. A few pages in, readers are jarred with Jeremy’s sudden flashback, with the preface, “The memory unfurled in my brain unbidden, with me helpless to stop it …”
What follows is a memory—frankly, not all that stimulating of a memory—of how he met his future fiancée. Now, I don’t profess to be an expert novelist, but I’ve read enough about writing fiction to know that writers should present flashbacks in novels in a careful, discerning way. Daleo didn’t do that, inserting a sudden memory from a character that readers are hardly invested in so early on. That made me think that the writing to come would be on the amateurish side, and unfortunately, that’s what I observed.
I’m surprised by all the 4- and 5-star reviews I’ve seen for this book, because I didn’t find it engaging. The characters didn’t hold my interest, and the story that unfolded was bland. Daleo’s main idea for "The Doll" has promise, but the writing is lacking.
The cover is cool, however, and that, along with the title and vibe of the book, drew me in. As a side note, Daleo should consider writing a more extensive book description.
April 14, 2023
Laura Daleo's science fiction novel The Doll grabbed my attention at the beginning and didn't let go until the end. For a shorter work of fiction, Daleo packs in love lost and love found, AI, moral dilemmas, and liberty, plus much more.
Daleo approaches a subject that is especially topical at the moment (artificial intelligence or AI) and gives it a spin. While the AI in this novel is more advanced than what we currently are working with, there could be a time when sentient AI could become reality. And Daleo brings up some moral questions that we should ask ourselves before we get to that point. These questions make us delve deeper than just "Why create AI?" and "Should we create AI?", though these questions are important as well.
Interwoven with the moral dilemmas of sentient AI are the topics of loss and grief on multiple levels. Loss of friendships and love are front and center; however, we are confronted with the possible loss of liberty and autonomy as well.
Jeremy Dillon is mourning the loss of his fiancée Jenna when he is approached by someone who knows The Dollmaker and is promised a way to lighten his misery. Jeremy calls the number on the card given to him and starts on an adventure that will take him and us readers through all the emotions of a roller coaster ride: excitement, fear, judging our decisions that lead us to a certain point, etc.
Jeremy makes new friends along the way, finding someone new for whom he could very possibly have feelings. While Carly is like Jenna in many ways, she is her own person. Her reactions to certain situations intrigue Jeremy and present him with a new way of looking at the world. Carly's and Jeremy's exploits with the government and the private sector keep the reader intrigued and questioning whether they would make the same decisions. Daleo presents us with possible answers from more than one point of view and presents us with what the power of choice really mean for both human and AI.
The novel works hard to deliver so much in a small amount of pages. I wish the ending was given a few more chapters to really connect with the characters and their decisions. Also, Jeremy's friends provide an interesting backdrop and insight into his life with Jenna before she dies. There were a few moments with those friends that could have been explored further. There are some editorial errors, but they did not distract from the powerful storyline.
I received a complimentary copy from the author. This review is honest and voluntary.
Daleo approaches a subject that is especially topical at the moment (artificial intelligence or AI) and gives it a spin. While the AI in this novel is more advanced than what we currently are working with, there could be a time when sentient AI could become reality. And Daleo brings up some moral questions that we should ask ourselves before we get to that point. These questions make us delve deeper than just "Why create AI?" and "Should we create AI?", though these questions are important as well.
Interwoven with the moral dilemmas of sentient AI are the topics of loss and grief on multiple levels. Loss of friendships and love are front and center; however, we are confronted with the possible loss of liberty and autonomy as well.
Jeremy Dillon is mourning the loss of his fiancée Jenna when he is approached by someone who knows The Dollmaker and is promised a way to lighten his misery. Jeremy calls the number on the card given to him and starts on an adventure that will take him and us readers through all the emotions of a roller coaster ride: excitement, fear, judging our decisions that lead us to a certain point, etc.
Jeremy makes new friends along the way, finding someone new for whom he could very possibly have feelings. While Carly is like Jenna in many ways, she is her own person. Her reactions to certain situations intrigue Jeremy and present him with a new way of looking at the world. Carly's and Jeremy's exploits with the government and the private sector keep the reader intrigued and questioning whether they would make the same decisions. Daleo presents us with possible answers from more than one point of view and presents us with what the power of choice really mean for both human and AI.
The novel works hard to deliver so much in a small amount of pages. I wish the ending was given a few more chapters to really connect with the characters and their decisions. Also, Jeremy's friends provide an interesting backdrop and insight into his life with Jenna before she dies. There were a few moments with those friends that could have been explored further. There are some editorial errors, but they did not distract from the powerful storyline.
I received a complimentary copy from the author. This review is honest and voluntary.
August 22, 2024
Intriguing, compelling plot with a contemporary premise
The Doll by Laura Daleo is an intriguing blend of soft science fiction, techno-thriller, and psychological drama that kept me engaged from start to finish. The story revolves around Jeremy Dillon, a man grappling with the loss of his fiancée, Jenna, and his subsequent introduction to CR1XY, an AI doll created by the enigmatic Dollmaker. Daleo does a commendable job of exploring themes of grief, human connection, and the ethical dilemmas posed by advanced AI technology.
The plot is well-paced, with enough twists and turns to keep readers on their toes. I particularly enjoyed the suspenseful moments involving the FBI and Russian operatives, which added a layer of complexity to the narrative. However, there were moments when the story felt slightly rushed, with certain character interactions and plot points needing more depth and development.
The concept of an AI doll designed to replace a lost loved one is both fascinating and chilling, and Daleo handles it with skill, blending the emotional with the technological in a way that feels believable. Carly, the AI doll, is an intriguing character, and her interactions with Jeremy raise important questions about identity, autonomy, and the nature of love.
While The Doll is an entertaining and thought-provoking read, it does have its shortcomings. Some of the dialogue can feel a bit stilted, and a few plot elements rely on familiar tropes, which may detract from the originality of the story. Additionally, I would have liked to see more exploration of the ethical implications of creating and owning sentient beings.
Overall, The Doll is a solid, four-star read that will appeal to fans of sci-fi and psychological thrillers. It’s a story that lingers in the mind, raising questions about the future of AI and the ways we cope with loss. Daleo has crafted a compelling narrative that is well worth the read.
The Doll by Laura Daleo is an intriguing blend of soft science fiction, techno-thriller, and psychological drama that kept me engaged from start to finish. The story revolves around Jeremy Dillon, a man grappling with the loss of his fiancée, Jenna, and his subsequent introduction to CR1XY, an AI doll created by the enigmatic Dollmaker. Daleo does a commendable job of exploring themes of grief, human connection, and the ethical dilemmas posed by advanced AI technology.
The plot is well-paced, with enough twists and turns to keep readers on their toes. I particularly enjoyed the suspenseful moments involving the FBI and Russian operatives, which added a layer of complexity to the narrative. However, there were moments when the story felt slightly rushed, with certain character interactions and plot points needing more depth and development.
The concept of an AI doll designed to replace a lost loved one is both fascinating and chilling, and Daleo handles it with skill, blending the emotional with the technological in a way that feels believable. Carly, the AI doll, is an intriguing character, and her interactions with Jeremy raise important questions about identity, autonomy, and the nature of love.
While The Doll is an entertaining and thought-provoking read, it does have its shortcomings. Some of the dialogue can feel a bit stilted, and a few plot elements rely on familiar tropes, which may detract from the originality of the story. Additionally, I would have liked to see more exploration of the ethical implications of creating and owning sentient beings.
Overall, The Doll is a solid, four-star read that will appeal to fans of sci-fi and psychological thrillers. It’s a story that lingers in the mind, raising questions about the future of AI and the ways we cope with loss. Daleo has crafted a compelling narrative that is well worth the read.
March 26, 2025
If you love books that mix sci-fi, psychological suspense, and romance with a dark twist, The Doll by Laura Daleo is a must-read. This story takes the concept of loss, artificial intelligence, and the boundaries of human connection and turns them into something deeply unsettling.
The book follows Jeremy, a man drowning in grief after losing his wife. Desperate to fill the void, he stumbles upon the mysterious Dollmaker a company that creates hyper-realistic, AI-driven dolls designed to mimic lost loved ones. Jeremy is drawn into their world, purchasing Carly, an advanced model crafted in his wife’s likeness. But while Carly is meant to be a comforting companion, she turns out to be far more than just a machine. She learns, she evolves… and she isn’t exactly what Jeremy signed up for.
Laura Daleo creates an eerie, immersive atmosphere, making you question what it truly means to be human. While the novel doesn’t dive deep into the ethical implications of AI and autonomy, it keeps you hooked with a fast-paced, emotionally charged narrative. Carly’s transformation is the heart of the story, and watching her grow beyond her original programming is both fascinating and haunting.
Now, let’s talk about Jeremy because whew. He comes off as needy, entitled, and honestly, a bit of a spoiled brat who doesn’t like being told no. His constant insecurity and emotional outbursts can be frustrating, but surprisingly, it doesn’t take away from the story. If anything, it makes Carly’s journey even more compelling.
If you enjoyed Blade Runner or Westworld, you’ll love The Doll. It’s a thought-provoking, unputdownable read that blurs the line between love, technology, and control. Laura Daleo
May 11, 2022
Not what I expected
This book starts with Jeremy grieving the loss of his girlfriend. When he’s offered a way to get her back by a strange man in a bar, he jumps at the chance.
I was hooked by this opening. Who wouldn’t give anything for one more moment with a loved one? When Jeremy found his way to the Dollmaker - a company that makes synthetic humans to replace your loved ones - I expected the unfolding story to examine grief, love, humanity and consent. At the very least, judging by the cover and description, I thought there would be some horror and dark themes.
Unfortunately, this book is nothing like I expected. It has a science fiction thriller plot, which could have been good, but unfortunately is very safe and bland because every revelation and important piece of information is revealed to the main character in a cosy conversation, usually in a luxurious house.
I didn’t believe that Jeremy was a rich, successful 27 year old business man who had run his own company for over a decade. He behaved at times like a spoiled teen, at others like a nervous middle aged woman.
I didn’t understand Jeremy’s instant devotion to his doll. She wasn’t even like his dead girlfriend (which defeats the whole purpose of spending a lot of money for a synthetic replica) and he set his old love aside very fast.
I was also disappointed that no issues of the morality of synthetic life (which seemed akin to slavery, given the doll’s powers) and owning a sentient being were brought up within the book.
This is a 2.5 star for me rounded up to 3, purely for the fact I liked the two different plot ideas swimming around in this book.
This book starts with Jeremy grieving the loss of his girlfriend. When he’s offered a way to get her back by a strange man in a bar, he jumps at the chance.
I was hooked by this opening. Who wouldn’t give anything for one more moment with a loved one? When Jeremy found his way to the Dollmaker - a company that makes synthetic humans to replace your loved ones - I expected the unfolding story to examine grief, love, humanity and consent. At the very least, judging by the cover and description, I thought there would be some horror and dark themes.
Unfortunately, this book is nothing like I expected. It has a science fiction thriller plot, which could have been good, but unfortunately is very safe and bland because every revelation and important piece of information is revealed to the main character in a cosy conversation, usually in a luxurious house.
I didn’t believe that Jeremy was a rich, successful 27 year old business man who had run his own company for over a decade. He behaved at times like a spoiled teen, at others like a nervous middle aged woman.
I didn’t understand Jeremy’s instant devotion to his doll. She wasn’t even like his dead girlfriend (which defeats the whole purpose of spending a lot of money for a synthetic replica) and he set his old love aside very fast.
I was also disappointed that no issues of the morality of synthetic life (which seemed akin to slavery, given the doll’s powers) and owning a sentient being were brought up within the book.
This is a 2.5 star for me rounded up to 3, purely for the fact I liked the two different plot ideas swimming around in this book.
November 20, 2021
Reviewed by Natalie Soine for Readers' Favorite
The Doll by Laura Daleo is set in 2024 and tells the story of Jeremy Dillon who mourns the passing of his fiancée, Jenna Hess. Jeremy’s friends Matt and Missy help Jeremy to process the loss of his love. A stranger introduces Jeremy to The Dollmaker, an innovative, high-tech company helping people cope with the loss of a loved one, managed by Alicia and scientist Wayne. What begins as a dream come true soon turns into a nightmare when Jeremy’s new love, Carly, turns out to be someone completely different, influenced by Vsevolod Bykov who lost his daughter when she passed away. FBI agents Green and Finch, code hackers, fatal commands, and a Russian spy have side-tracked Jeremy’s life. The United States Special Forces, Russian intelligence, and a software program called TriCel - giving the ability to learn, transform, and adapt – all hold the answers to Jeremy’s questions.
The Doll is a thrilling, intriguing novel filled with many twists, turns, and surprises from start to finish. The variety of characters are all well described and easy to relate to with their quirky personalities. I especially enjoyed the way Laura Daleo portrays the relationships between the various characters and how Jeremy learns who he can trust and who could bring harm to him and Carly. Carly’s kind heart and empathy are just what Jeremy needs to help him through his pain and confusion, with a little help from her parents. The story is smooth flowing and a quick, easy read. All round, a fantastic novel and highly recommended to all adults.
The Doll by Laura Daleo is set in 2024 and tells the story of Jeremy Dillon who mourns the passing of his fiancée, Jenna Hess. Jeremy’s friends Matt and Missy help Jeremy to process the loss of his love. A stranger introduces Jeremy to The Dollmaker, an innovative, high-tech company helping people cope with the loss of a loved one, managed by Alicia and scientist Wayne. What begins as a dream come true soon turns into a nightmare when Jeremy’s new love, Carly, turns out to be someone completely different, influenced by Vsevolod Bykov who lost his daughter when she passed away. FBI agents Green and Finch, code hackers, fatal commands, and a Russian spy have side-tracked Jeremy’s life. The United States Special Forces, Russian intelligence, and a software program called TriCel - giving the ability to learn, transform, and adapt – all hold the answers to Jeremy’s questions.
The Doll is a thrilling, intriguing novel filled with many twists, turns, and surprises from start to finish. The variety of characters are all well described and easy to relate to with their quirky personalities. I especially enjoyed the way Laura Daleo portrays the relationships between the various characters and how Jeremy learns who he can trust and who could bring harm to him and Carly. Carly’s kind heart and empathy are just what Jeremy needs to help him through his pain and confusion, with a little help from her parents. The story is smooth flowing and a quick, easy read. All round, a fantastic novel and highly recommended to all adults.
December 19, 2021
I read this book via a free copy from the author, for Rosie Amber's Review Team. The fact that it was free has not affected this honest review.
When I started to read this story and realised that it involved a man who couldn't get over the death of his girlfriend and heard about a company who made synthetic humanoid replicas, I was immediately reminded of a TV programme I saw a couple of years back in which the same took place - I don't think it was Black Mirror, but something similar. It's a basic idea that I've come across a few times, and it's an interesting one.
This was an easy-read, entertaining book and I did enjoy the middle third. I had a few misgivings, though, mostly to do with the main character, Jeremy, in whose first person POV the story is related. He is meant to be a rich, good-looking, hipster sort of guy who flips houses for millions of dollars, but I felt I was seeing inside the head of a rather nervous woman, not a confident, successful man. He kept referring to his 'man bun' (do men who wear their hair this way actually call it that?), describing the clothes he put on in the way that women do, and coming across hesitant and rather gauche. He just didn't feel ... masculine.
I think it's got potential, but needs more thinking through, maybe with the help of a good professional developmental editor. However, from an 'is this a fun read or not' point of view, it certainly ticks a box - if you're not as picky as I am you may enjoy it a great deal!
When I started to read this story and realised that it involved a man who couldn't get over the death of his girlfriend and heard about a company who made synthetic humanoid replicas, I was immediately reminded of a TV programme I saw a couple of years back in which the same took place - I don't think it was Black Mirror, but something similar. It's a basic idea that I've come across a few times, and it's an interesting one.
This was an easy-read, entertaining book and I did enjoy the middle third. I had a few misgivings, though, mostly to do with the main character, Jeremy, in whose first person POV the story is related. He is meant to be a rich, good-looking, hipster sort of guy who flips houses for millions of dollars, but I felt I was seeing inside the head of a rather nervous woman, not a confident, successful man. He kept referring to his 'man bun' (do men who wear their hair this way actually call it that?), describing the clothes he put on in the way that women do, and coming across hesitant and rather gauche. He just didn't feel ... masculine.
I think it's got potential, but needs more thinking through, maybe with the help of a good professional developmental editor. However, from an 'is this a fun read or not' point of view, it certainly ticks a box - if you're not as picky as I am you may enjoy it a great deal!
February 26, 2025
The Doll is so much more than just a sci-fi novel. The main character, Jeremy, has lost his significant other and in his broken-hearted state, orders an AI android “doll” that looks like her. What should have been a simple transaction turns darker and more dangerous than Jeremy could have imagined when multiple groups of bad actors start attacking him and his “doll”. But which group are the “good guys” and which are the “bad guys”? Any of them? All of them? None of them? And how and why are they all connected to Jeremy’s doll? What makes her so special?
There are so many things to like about this book – first, there’s a lot of great action along with a good plot that keeps you guessing. There were twists and turns that I expected to go one way, but I was plenty surprised when things went in a different direction and new characters arrived on the scene.
In addition to the great plot, characters, and action story line, there were deeper themes too. It makes you wonder, as technology goes forward, what exactly does it mean to be human? What would eventually separate a flesh and blood human companion from an AI android companion that can be “programmed” to respond the way the “owner” wants them to. This is definitely a book I’d recommend, and as it was a fairly quick read, it would be a great book to have poolside or at the beach.
There are so many things to like about this book – first, there’s a lot of great action along with a good plot that keeps you guessing. There were twists and turns that I expected to go one way, but I was plenty surprised when things went in a different direction and new characters arrived on the scene.
In addition to the great plot, characters, and action story line, there were deeper themes too. It makes you wonder, as technology goes forward, what exactly does it mean to be human? What would eventually separate a flesh and blood human companion from an AI android companion that can be “programmed” to respond the way the “owner” wants them to. This is definitely a book I’d recommend, and as it was a fairly quick read, it would be a great book to have poolside or at the beach.
August 12, 2024
‘The Doll’ is the story of a grieving man who gets the opportunity to essentially have his dead fiancée recreated as a human-like android doll. It’s an interesting premise, and could have gone in various directions. From the cover, I was thinking ‘horror’, but it actually turns into a kind of thriller, as the FBI and the Russians become involved, wanting to get hold of the doll (named Carly) and especially, some mysterious device that seems to give her extra powers and personality.
The writing itself is competent, and I did enjoy this… initially. But after a while, the main character – who is the narrator and sole POV – started to annoy me. As other reviewers have noted, he just didn’t seem like a high-flying successful man: to me, he seemed to vacillate between getting outraged and cross and then stepping away, and always at the wrong juncture. I really wanted to shake him and shout into his face ‘sort yourself out!’ And then the coincidences started piling up, and the plot became a bit silly. The Dollmaker dreams he gets a bizarre new chip from his dead mum, awakens with it in his hand, takes it to the new doll, and it sort of levitates into its partly formed brain and Carly become some sort of superwoman doll? Yeah, right. And the last quarter of the book is no better.
The writing itself is competent, and I did enjoy this… initially. But after a while, the main character – who is the narrator and sole POV – started to annoy me. As other reviewers have noted, he just didn’t seem like a high-flying successful man: to me, he seemed to vacillate between getting outraged and cross and then stepping away, and always at the wrong juncture. I really wanted to shake him and shout into his face ‘sort yourself out!’ And then the coincidences started piling up, and the plot became a bit silly. The Dollmaker dreams he gets a bizarre new chip from his dead mum, awakens with it in his hand, takes it to the new doll, and it sort of levitates into its partly formed brain and Carly become some sort of superwoman doll? Yeah, right. And the last quarter of the book is no better.
March 13, 2023
There is a fair mix of dialogue and narrative prose throughout the work, but rare is the page that does not possess a character flapping their gums about something. Writing aside, the characters will test your patience while the plot insults your intelligence. “The Doll” toys around with several Sci-Fi elements, but none of which ever get fully fleshed out. There’s a hodgepodge of half-baked ideas about androids, artificial intelligence, and what it means to be alive. The author injects these ideas into the narrative, but only so far as to go skin deep. I had a difficult time overlooking all the possible logistical issues of Jeremy’s relationship with Carly, because the emotional aspects surrounding it were so damn superficial (let alone artificial) to empathize with his situation throughout the book. Seriously, what the hell was stopping Jeremy from walking away? Love? Give me a break. I surmise that “The Doll” is more or less an experiment by an author who wanted to publish something in a genre that was clearly out of her wheelhouse.
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March 20, 2024
What would you do if you lost the love of your life? How far would you go to get that person back? Enter The Dollmaker.
Jeremy is still reeling from losing the love of his life, Jenna. In a moment of a hazy hangover and a crushing loss, Jeremy visits The Dollmaker. Though he thinks he will get a replica of his dead finance, he gets Carly.
Carly looks just like Jenna. However, in terms of personality, amazing strength, and cunning, Carly is nothing like Jenna. Carly, an above board AI, seems to good to be real. But is she hiding something that could destroy both her and Jeremy?
Laura Daleo has delivered a great sci-fi read. Her characters are amazing, and the story development was very good. The only drawback I had with the storyline is that I wish it had been a little more fleshed out more. I wish it had been a little longer than a novella. However, overall, this is a great, quick sci-fi read.
Jeremy is still reeling from losing the love of his life, Jenna. In a moment of a hazy hangover and a crushing loss, Jeremy visits The Dollmaker. Though he thinks he will get a replica of his dead finance, he gets Carly.
Carly looks just like Jenna. However, in terms of personality, amazing strength, and cunning, Carly is nothing like Jenna. Carly, an above board AI, seems to good to be real. But is she hiding something that could destroy both her and Jeremy?
Laura Daleo has delivered a great sci-fi read. Her characters are amazing, and the story development was very good. The only drawback I had with the storyline is that I wish it had been a little more fleshed out more. I wish it had been a little longer than a novella. However, overall, this is a great, quick sci-fi read.
January 23, 2025
Very Impressed! As Always, Laura creates these characters u feel for with the most inviting worlds! Her words captivate u and keep that hold from the moment you open the book to the moment you close it.
CR1XY was a doll created for Jeremy to cope with his fiances recent death. She was supposed to be created just like Jenna's image and personality, but he found out, head on, that CR1XY was her own "person." Was this something sinister or something all of it's own nature? This book took a completely different approach than what I was expecting, and let me tell you....I am here for it!!! I felt like I was on the wild goose chase that CR1XY and Jeremy went on. They had to encounter so many lies to get to the truth.
I quickly fell in love with CR1XY. There were a couple moments that made me tear up. You should meet her too and see what I'm talking about! It's quite the encounter!
CR1XY was a doll created for Jeremy to cope with his fiances recent death. She was supposed to be created just like Jenna's image and personality, but he found out, head on, that CR1XY was her own "person." Was this something sinister or something all of it's own nature? This book took a completely different approach than what I was expecting, and let me tell you....I am here for it!!! I felt like I was on the wild goose chase that CR1XY and Jeremy went on. They had to encounter so many lies to get to the truth.
I quickly fell in love with CR1XY. There were a couple moments that made me tear up. You should meet her too and see what I'm talking about! It's quite the encounter!
March 4, 2023
I was sent a copy of this book by the author in exchange for an honest review.
I really liked the story, but the writing fell flat. The plot was far too rushed and the ending cleaned up too nicely. It was hard to connect with the characters and the interactions, and a few events, just didn’t feel right. I understand it’s Sci-Fi, but too many things (almost every FBI interaction) were just too unbelievable. Jeremy being able to forget Jenna and fall for Carly so quickly proved he was just lonely, and the fact that he didn’t want to do more, especially after Carly brought up sex, was very uncharacteristic of a man. I just wish the book had been longer, and it probably would have been way better as a series. The way it ended just didn’t sit right with me.
I really liked the story, but the writing fell flat. The plot was far too rushed and the ending cleaned up too nicely. It was hard to connect with the characters and the interactions, and a few events, just didn’t feel right. I understand it’s Sci-Fi, but too many things (almost every FBI interaction) were just too unbelievable. Jeremy being able to forget Jenna and fall for Carly so quickly proved he was just lonely, and the fact that he didn’t want to do more, especially after Carly brought up sex, was very uncharacteristic of a man. I just wish the book had been longer, and it probably would have been way better as a series. The way it ended just didn’t sit right with me.
January 26, 2022
I had no real idea what to expect with ‘The Doll’. The marketing blurb suggested this might be a horror story, and it certainly starts off creepily enough.
But what emerges is difficult to fit into a single genre. Part romance, part techno-thriller and part spy yarn, it is a compelling cocktail of themes based around an AI core element. The characters are deftly drawn without any superfluous details. ( I hate unnecessary padding.)
The fast-paced and skillfully-constructed narrative kept me turning the (virtual) pages, and I read the entire novel in two sittings.
Highly recommended. I look forward to sampling more of Laura Daleo’s work.
But what emerges is difficult to fit into a single genre. Part romance, part techno-thriller and part spy yarn, it is a compelling cocktail of themes based around an AI core element. The characters are deftly drawn without any superfluous details. ( I hate unnecessary padding.)
The fast-paced and skillfully-constructed narrative kept me turning the (virtual) pages, and I read the entire novel in two sittings.
Highly recommended. I look forward to sampling more of Laura Daleo’s work.
June 7, 2023
Book: The Doll
Author: Laura Daleo
Rating: 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Doll is about Jeremy who is trying to survive his broken heart when he discovers the Dollmaker. Someone who could design a doll to help Jeremy cope. This is a quick, easy read that is super enjoyable. A great book to get you out of a reading slump. The storyline picks up quick, is easy to follow and is very unique. I loved it.
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Book Description:
In the wake of Jenna Hess' sudden death, Jeremy Dillon is devastated. His only hope of easing the pain lies in alcohol...until he meets The Dollmaker.
Meet CR1XY, the Dollmaker's Elite doll, created especially for Jeremy. But is she?
Author: Laura Daleo
Rating: 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
The Doll is about Jeremy who is trying to survive his broken heart when he discovers the Dollmaker. Someone who could design a doll to help Jeremy cope. This is a quick, easy read that is super enjoyable. A great book to get you out of a reading slump. The storyline picks up quick, is easy to follow and is very unique. I loved it.
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Book Description:
In the wake of Jenna Hess' sudden death, Jeremy Dillon is devastated. His only hope of easing the pain lies in alcohol...until he meets The Dollmaker.
Meet CR1XY, the Dollmaker's Elite doll, created especially for Jeremy. But is she?
December 24, 2021
It is not a huge book but I started and then finished this book within a few hours. It is just under 200 pages but still. I got straight in to it and just couldn’t put it down!
The book pulled me in from page one and the pace continued for the rest of the story. I didn’t think there was any unnecessary filler and it kept me interested.
The story itself draws on a lot of topics. It has Sci Fi, technology, government agencies and relationships. Jeremy is going through the grief of losing his fiancé and he takes unusual measures to get though it. I really enjoyed the journey. It was a well written story that I cousin out down and I will definitely look for more this author.
Thank you to @rabtbooktours and @author_laura_daleo for the #gifted copy for review.
The book pulled me in from page one and the pace continued for the rest of the story. I didn’t think there was any unnecessary filler and it kept me interested.
The story itself draws on a lot of topics. It has Sci Fi, technology, government agencies and relationships. Jeremy is going through the grief of losing his fiancé and he takes unusual measures to get though it. I really enjoyed the journey. It was a well written story that I cousin out down and I will definitely look for more this author.
Thank you to @rabtbooktours and @author_laura_daleo for the #gifted copy for review.
January 12, 2022
The highlight for me was the dynamic characters that Laura Daleo brought in this story. There were so many aspects in their personalities and journeys that added to the story. They are well developed.
The beginning of this story is great, but from the midpoint on, the book took off for me. An incredible story with great world-building, not too predictable.
I love an author who can create such a fun and unique world. Laura Daleo brought us into a fantastic setting and made her world and her characters stand out.
The beginning of this story is great, but from the midpoint on, the book took off for me. An incredible story with great world-building, not too predictable.
I love an author who can create such a fun and unique world. Laura Daleo brought us into a fantastic setting and made her world and her characters stand out.
July 13, 2023
Laura Daleo's The Doll is a captivating and transformative tale of Jeremy Dillon, whose life unravels after his fiancée's death. Introduced to the enigmatic Dollmaker by chance, Jeremy embarks on a thrilling journey. The well-developed characters, including Alicia, the Doll Maker's liaison, the mysterious Russian Dollmaker, loyal friends, FBI agents, and the enigmatic presence of Carly, the DOLL, add depth and intrigue. Despite minor editing issues, the exceptional story leaves a lasting impression. I highly recommend Laura Daleo's novel, The Doll.
January 18, 2025
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The Doll
By Laura Daleo
Sci-fi/dystopian
The Doll follows our main character, Jeremy, as he experiences a heartbreaking event. The event is losing his fiancé. But when he goes to the doll maker for his own custom doll everything goes wrong. Jeremy meets his doll named Carly and they become the best of friends. Carly is special and even Jeremy doesn’t know it.
This book got me hooked from the very beginning and I could not put it down. I thought that it was a very cool idea and very well thought out
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/ 5 stars
The Doll
By Laura Daleo
Sci-fi/dystopian
The Doll follows our main character, Jeremy, as he experiences a heartbreaking event. The event is losing his fiancé. But when he goes to the doll maker for his own custom doll everything goes wrong. Jeremy meets his doll named Carly and they become the best of friends. Carly is special and even Jeremy doesn’t know it.
This book got me hooked from the very beginning and I could not put it down. I thought that it was a very cool idea and very well thought out
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/ 5 stars
March 4, 2023
This book is amazing i couldnt put it down and when i did i didnt want to pick it back up because i didnt want it to end it had me hooked from start to finish . It was amazing with twist i didnt even expect at some points i found my self with my jaw on the floor and people asking what had happened you fall in love with jeremy from the start and feel for him along this adventure he goes on
My favorite quote is * ill allways believe in you i knew youd find your way back to me *
My favorite quote is * ill allways believe in you i knew youd find your way back to me *
November 8, 2021
A refreshing take on sci-fi
This book is a refreshing take on sci-fi and unique in most ways. Losing the love of your life, then having a doll created to look like the one person you loved and lost, might sound ridiculous to most, until you read the whole story. Five stars for the unique take in a book of this genre.
This book is a refreshing take on sci-fi and unique in most ways. Losing the love of your life, then having a doll created to look like the one person you loved and lost, might sound ridiculous to most, until you read the whole story. Five stars for the unique take in a book of this genre.
January 7, 2022
Laura Daleo offers just the right amount of action, order, and fantasy.
I loved this story from the very beginning. From the first chapter of this book I was hooked & couldn't put it down. I loved meeting all the new characters getting just enough of their backstories to keep me invested and following them along the way.
Light-hearted in places with good characterization and an enjoyable plot
I loved this story from the very beginning. From the first chapter of this book I was hooked & couldn't put it down. I loved meeting all the new characters getting just enough of their backstories to keep me invested and following them along the way.
Light-hearted in places with good characterization and an enjoyable plot
August 8, 2023
This book was a sci-fi thriller that was fun to read. Jeremy lost his fiancé and would do anything to get her back. But what he did will shock you and keep you reading because the story was so compelling. The rollercoaster of his emotions and excitement will keep you glued to each page. I’m hoping they’ll be a sequel because I wasn’t done with the story lol. I highly recommend reading this book.
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