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The Vampire's Servant
For the last fifteen years, Victor Nightshade has been searching for his wayward childe, Paul Springer. Springer stole millions from him, then disappeared. The night finally arrives when Victor locates Springer, but he finds out something even worse. Springer has been feeding off of a minor for the last ten years. Victor vows to right this wrong and ensure that the girl is safe again. In doing so, he finds something that surprises even the most ancient of vampires.
Echo Gale has been feeding vampires for over half her life. Told by her parents that she's evil, Echo has lived a life of servitude for her family. Though her siblings love her, there wasn't much they could do to go against their parents. Instead, they did everything they could to make things easier and always told her how much they loved her to make up for their parents.
When Victor finds Echo, a chain of events begins that creates a bond neither thought possible. An instant connection neither one was prepared for. Things heat up in the second book of the Twisted Design Series.
(This book contains polyamory)
Echo Gale has been feeding vampires for over half her life. Told by her parents that she's evil, Echo has lived a life of servitude for her family. Though her siblings love her, there wasn't much they could do to go against their parents. Instead, they did everything they could to make things easier and always told her how much they loved her to make up for their parents.
When Victor finds Echo, a chain of events begins that creates a bond neither thought possible. An instant connection neither one was prepared for. Things heat up in the second book of the Twisted Design Series.
(This book contains polyamory)
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September 18, 2023I’d really like to read this book but can’t find it available anywhere as an ebook or otherwise.
January 7, 2024
Saw the description and was interested. It took a while to find the story, and it cost more than i really thought was worth on the dreame app. I didn't read the first book in the series, and i dont think it is necessary to understand this story. At most, I think it would have expanded on the supporting cast and given more detail about events mentioned in this book but ultimately would probably suffer from the same main issue I have with this novel.
The story was good for the most part. Had no issues with the poly or gender fluidity or any other progressive thing. Usually, vampire novels all have these kinds of troupes. I will say I didn't expect from the description that it would include so many descriptive sex scenes. I like a good erotic tale, but after a while, I got the feeling that instead of enhancing the story with the sex scenes, this story is just filler for the time where sex happens. The novel would be shorter but essentially unchanged if the scenes were implied or even omitted altogether.
I rather enjoyed the main storyline but felt the sex was too over the top and more of a focus than anything else. Would like to give 3.5 stars, but since I can't, this story earns 3 stars. Overall, it was too expensive and not widely available.
The story was good for the most part. Had no issues with the poly or gender fluidity or any other progressive thing. Usually, vampire novels all have these kinds of troupes. I will say I didn't expect from the description that it would include so many descriptive sex scenes. I like a good erotic tale, but after a while, I got the feeling that instead of enhancing the story with the sex scenes, this story is just filler for the time where sex happens. The novel would be shorter but essentially unchanged if the scenes were implied or even omitted altogether.
I rather enjoyed the main storyline but felt the sex was too over the top and more of a focus than anything else. Would like to give 3.5 stars, but since I can't, this story earns 3 stars. Overall, it was too expensive and not widely available.
April 2, 2022
Love this series. Victor was exactly how I pictured him. Gray was a surprise that I loved. Echo is probably the sweetest character ever. But my favorite couple in this story turned out being Marius and Lila with Sean and Rosario coming in a close second. Great story.
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May 14, 2023
A part of me hated this book and the other part loved it. I thought Echo was very selfish and Grey was very stupid in chapter 58.
It's very hard to watch the love of your life, be absolutely in love with someone else. Echo could feel that raw pain In Victor and yet she acted like he betrayed her. No one should have to share and I know is only fantasy but is to unrealistic even for fantasy. And I was ANGRY when Victor was shown his death, simply because he took a step back.
He should not have to go through that, during that stage, he practically scared Victor into being relationship with her.
If Echo really loved Victor, she would have accepted his decision and give him time to warm up to this new experience. She should have stayed with Grey and in time, both her and Victor will realise thier raw attraction and come together.
The way it was done, was childish. Not everyone must kiss Echo's feet, just because she is the main character. Yes it was new for her, but it's very new for Victor too. I have always been a wolf girl, but this book almost made me hate wolves. I don't think I can listen to chapter 60, my heart is braking for Victor; he deserves better.
VICTOR MY LOVE, I CAN BE YOUR TRUE MATE AND U WILL NOT SHEARE ME.😭😭😭😭
It's very hard to watch the love of your life, be absolutely in love with someone else. Echo could feel that raw pain In Victor and yet she acted like he betrayed her. No one should have to share and I know is only fantasy but is to unrealistic even for fantasy. And I was ANGRY when Victor was shown his death, simply because he took a step back.
He should not have to go through that, during that stage, he practically scared Victor into being relationship with her.
If Echo really loved Victor, she would have accepted his decision and give him time to warm up to this new experience. She should have stayed with Grey and in time, both her and Victor will realise thier raw attraction and come together.
The way it was done, was childish. Not everyone must kiss Echo's feet, just because she is the main character. Yes it was new for her, but it's very new for Victor too. I have always been a wolf girl, but this book almost made me hate wolves. I don't think I can listen to chapter 60, my heart is braking for Victor; he deserves better.
VICTOR MY LOVE, I CAN BE YOUR TRUE MATE AND U WILL NOT SHEARE ME.😭😭😭😭
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January 28, 2026
I liked the premise of the book, the world building was decent and there was a decent amount of character growth with Echo, Gray, and Victor. Strong female characters, vampires, werewolves, fae, and some spice? Heck yeah.
It did follow a lot of familiar tropes in romantasy, but it was nice that Echo wasn't backed into a "love corner" like a lot of other romantasy novels. Some parts seemed a bit predictable (the cat) and people kept trying to coddle Echo, but I do like the "power of friendship" type tropes so it worked for me. Echo does fall a bit into the abused heroine that is a manic pixie dream girl type trope - where she can do almost no wrong but there are a few points of character growth.
Some parts dragged a little or seemed slow, but there were enough interesting and action filled bits that kept me reading. The supporting characters were well fleshed out, and I enjoyed that the novel is from multiple perspectives.
Overall, not bad, and I will read the next books because the world is interesting enough although somewhat cliche. I do hope there is more exploration with the other siblings in the next books.
It did follow a lot of familiar tropes in romantasy, but it was nice that Echo wasn't backed into a "love corner" like a lot of other romantasy novels. Some parts seemed a bit predictable (the cat) and people kept trying to coddle Echo, but I do like the "power of friendship" type tropes so it worked for me. Echo does fall a bit into the abused heroine that is a manic pixie dream girl type trope - where she can do almost no wrong but there are a few points of character growth.
Some parts dragged a little or seemed slow, but there were enough interesting and action filled bits that kept me reading. The supporting characters were well fleshed out, and I enjoyed that the novel is from multiple perspectives.
Overall, not bad, and I will read the next books because the world is interesting enough although somewhat cliche. I do hope there is more exploration with the other siblings in the next books.
March 17, 2024
I was really enjoying this until I realized at about chapter 20 that there was going to be forced polyamory and I absolutely hate that. If everybody wants that ahead of time, I can live with it, but if one of the characters doesn't want to share and the MFC basically says "Too bad, share me or lose me!" I'm out. That's not a relationship or romance, that's having your cake and eating it too. Not only that, but Victor was the better character, so sad to see the story go this way.
August 18, 2025
It had such a strong start. The beginning was what drew me in the most. There was so much lost potential with the rest of the story. It felt like too many books and plot lines thrown into one. I really didn't like how
the mates thing went with the main characters. Overall, everything was good to read at least once, but not enough for me to purposely read it again. One major thing I appreciated, though, was that it's a sequel that doesn't require the first book to understand the story.
the mates thing went with the main characters. Overall, everything was good to read at least once, but not enough for me to purposely read it again. One major thing I appreciated, though, was that it's a sequel that doesn't require the first book to understand the story.
February 28, 2024
The concept is interesting. There's actually a good plot here, unfortunately it's layered in horribly written smut. I almost gave up finishing the book it got so bad at one point. When the story came back to the main plot line it was palpable.
February 29, 2024
This was one of the best books I have read. Thoroughly entertaining and kept me entertained. It was hard to put the book down and I even chose to read the book rather than sleep. I love the whole series and enjoy discovery each new character.
March 20, 2024
This book was a surprise to me. At first I was a bit sceptical about it. The beginning was a bit "nerve-wracking" to me. I was nervous about the MFL. But I am so glad I gave this book a chance, because I ended up loving it and wanting more! I like the writing style, the characters, the dialogues. 💜
April 2, 2022
Amazing!!!!!
April 2, 2022
I've re-read it MULTIPLE times.... it's just THAT good.
April 11, 2022
Absolutely love this book!
April 11, 2022
Another Amazing Story! She makes you go through all the emotions! It was hard to put down!
November 24, 2022
Victor is a person on your side. Not only does he have "people" but he "knows" people. What he finds in this story is just an add on bonus to the likeability of his personality. #TeamVictor
February 28, 2023
Love this Book. I just couldn’t put it down.
October 10, 2023
Started this on a different app and I am loving it can’t wait till I am able to fully able to read it all probably become one of my favorite books
November 13, 2023
So far this book is pretty good.
Will keep reading
Will keep reading
Want to Read
February 11, 2024I've read a teaser..I can not find it anywhere. I'd really like to continue the series!
February 15, 2024
Loved it, great twists and turns couldn't put it down. Now I'm trying to find the next book.
February 19, 2024
Totally enjoyed this book. Well written, good story line. Just not your expected read. Stayed up late 2nts with this one! Doesnt happen often but story held me so I wanted to know what was next.
May 20, 2024
Totally enjoyed this book. I was able to find the full book on the welikereading.com website for free.
January 27, 2026
Fantastic book. Perfect mix of everything. Loved every bit of it. Highly recommended
September 25, 2026
Disappointing book. Started strong and in the middle felt boring with forced love triangle. I am not against multiple mates but here it felt fake.
April 24, 2026
The Vampire’s Servant was another five-star read for me, and it’s one of my favorite books in Rory McCauley-Hayman’s interconnected paranormal world. If you’ve already read her other books, you’ll appreciate all the familiar faces, references, and connections that make the universe feel so alive. Every story expands the world a little more, and I honestly think I’m a little obsessed with everything Rory has created.
This isn’t just a vampire romance. The world is filled with vampires, werewolves, witches, trolls, bear shifters, magical beings, and more, all existing together in a way that feels natural and well thought out. I love that every new book explores a different corner of that universe while still tying back into the larger story.
The story follows Echo, a young woman who has spent years being exploited because of her rare blood, until an ancient vampire, Victor Nightshade, steps in and changes the course of her life forever. From there, the story becomes so much more than a romance. It’s about healing, found family, learning your worth, and discovering that the people who truly care about you will fight for you.
One thing I really enjoyed was the romance. It’s not an instant-love story, and it isn’t a traditional love triangle either. The relationships develop naturally over time, and I loved how the emotional connections were given just as much attention as the romantic ones. It felt refreshing and genuine rather than forced.
For anyone wondering about the spice level, I’d call it moderately spicy (around 3.5–4/5). There are definitely some steamy scenes, but the plot and character development always come first. The romance enhances the story instead of taking it over, which is exactly how I like my paranormal romance.
A huge part of why I loved this book is simply the world Rory has built. Every time I finish one of her books, I find myself wanting to dive straight into another because the characters all feel connected, and each story makes the universe richer. Few authors make me care this much about an entire cast of characters across multiple books, but Rory has absolutely accomplished that.
If you enjoy paranormal romance with vampires, witches, shifters, rich world-building, emotional character growth, meaningful romance, and an interconnected universe that keeps getting better with every book, I can’t recommend The Vampire’s Servant enough.
This isn’t just a vampire romance. The world is filled with vampires, werewolves, witches, trolls, bear shifters, magical beings, and more, all existing together in a way that feels natural and well thought out. I love that every new book explores a different corner of that universe while still tying back into the larger story.
The story follows Echo, a young woman who has spent years being exploited because of her rare blood, until an ancient vampire, Victor Nightshade, steps in and changes the course of her life forever. From there, the story becomes so much more than a romance. It’s about healing, found family, learning your worth, and discovering that the people who truly care about you will fight for you.
One thing I really enjoyed was the romance. It’s not an instant-love story, and it isn’t a traditional love triangle either. The relationships develop naturally over time, and I loved how the emotional connections were given just as much attention as the romantic ones. It felt refreshing and genuine rather than forced.
For anyone wondering about the spice level, I’d call it moderately spicy (around 3.5–4/5). There are definitely some steamy scenes, but the plot and character development always come first. The romance enhances the story instead of taking it over, which is exactly how I like my paranormal romance.
A huge part of why I loved this book is simply the world Rory has built. Every time I finish one of her books, I find myself wanting to dive straight into another because the characters all feel connected, and each story makes the universe richer. Few authors make me care this much about an entire cast of characters across multiple books, but Rory has absolutely accomplished that.
If you enjoy paranormal romance with vampires, witches, shifters, rich world-building, emotional character growth, meaningful romance, and an interconnected universe that keeps getting better with every book, I can’t recommend The Vampire’s Servant enough.
February 9, 2025
Why choose between Vampire ML and Werewolf ML.
FMC suffered childhood trauma and abuse. Is rescued from the situation by the Vampire ML...but quickly comes into her own. Definete green flags and morally grey MMCs. How is it this book is BETTER then the first in the series?! I do not know nut this author writes SO DAMN GOOD! Honestly I do know know a better author in werewolf/vampire lore and world building then Rory McCauley-Haymen. Please Please Please Physical Copy NEED IT!! Read all your books on dreame appe. My gosh they are long, but there are no chapter I would leave out! So damn good!!
FMC suffered childhood trauma and abuse. Is rescued from the situation by the Vampire ML...but quickly comes into her own. Definete green flags and morally grey MMCs. How is it this book is BETTER then the first in the series?! I do not know nut this author writes SO DAMN GOOD! Honestly I do know know a better author in werewolf/vampire lore and world building then Rory McCauley-Haymen. Please Please Please Physical Copy NEED IT!! Read all your books on dreame appe. My gosh they are long, but there are no chapter I would leave out! So damn good!!
May 31, 2024
Amazing
I have re read this book over 9 times and it is my most favourite book. 100% recoend this book to everyone.
I have re read this book over 9 times and it is my most favourite book. 100% recoend this book to everyone.
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