I really wanted to give this 4 stars, because I genuinely enjoyed these two together, and they were just so sweet and made me feel swoony at times.
But...I think at times it was just a little too boring, storywise. And these two, while sweet and sometimes sexy together (once they actually got together), they weren't exactly...holding me to the page all the time.
There also wasn't much story to this. The Aaron/Nyx being oblivious thing was some good story at first, but then it was going on a tad too long - with Patrick taking *forever* to even say anything, and then he never actually says anything. It's others finding out that Patrick wrote the book under a pseud and it's basically all about his feelings for Nyx, and for Nyx to finally realize when he knows Patrick wrote the book...to Nyx and his brothers being the ones to do something.
Also I don't get why Patrick called Nyx Aaron in this. Aaron is obviously Nyx's pen name and all, but Patrick knows him personally, so why wouldn't he use his real name? It doesn't make much sense to me. Especially once they get together. Why does he continue to call him Aaron? It's like with this author's Single Dad Support Group series they wrote under the Piper Scott pen name, where even when the Single Dad's knew each other in person, they would call each other by their usernames and it's like....what? Why? There's an intimacy we didn't get there with Patrick calling him Nyx, instead there's that distance of using his not real name.
I liked Patrick, he was so sweet, but he started to frustrate me with how long he was keeping telling Nyx his feelings off over and over. And I get it, I do. I understand being scared to let yourself out there, but...I'd have liked to have seen him take initiative at some point in this, but he doesn't. Nyx does all of that (with the help of his brothers). And I'm not too annoyed at that, because I understand being scared to tell someone how you feel, but...eventually, in a novel about Nyx being so oblivious that Patrick has to say *something* or nothing will ever happen, you'd think he'd do it...but no.
Nyx finds out another way and does it all himself, so Patrick ends up not having to put himself out there and do the sink or swim thing of telling someone how you feel, the drama of all that...it annoyed me a bit.
Once they got together, the steam was good, but then I started to find it lacking - well, it did a fair bit of fade to black, which was fine in some parts and in others I think we could have gotten more.
Also we spend so much time on the first few days after they got together, and then there was more story, but not much actually happening in that story, and it just continued to be slow at points for me.
Really, Nyx being such an adorable himbo, and the kindest and sweetest guy ever, and these two being so adorable, really saved this for me. I think, if they hadn't been so good together, I would have given this fewer stars. There just was something missing in this story for me.
And I've loved stories where not much happens - hell, the first one in this series didn't have a ton going on and I loved it - so it's not that, but more how the not much happening happened...like while these two were so sweet and adorable together, they didn't exactly carry this at the times when it was slow or not much was happening. It just didn't suck me in, even when not much was happening. Which, if stories are written well and the characters and relationships are written well, I can get past. Not here, because it just didn't quite work here.
So overall...it wasn't quite a win for me. It still was fun and enjoyable at times, and these two were so damn adorable together, and Nyx was a great character, but...it just fell a little flat for me. It was fine. It was enjoyable...but it could have been better, I think, overall.