Likes:
- The mystery surrounding the heroine. Would have never guessed who the baddie turned out to
be!
- The slight paranormal aspect that had me hooked and the only reason I didn’t DNF.
- Both MCs lost their virginity to each other (before the separation)
- No OW/OM dramalama.
Dislikes: (Too many to count!)
- I am not a fan of long separations – especially 15 yrs as this one was! Too much time, people &
experiences to claim they always loved each other.
- Weak Hero who allowed his Mother to enable the behavior she was shelving out and no
resolution in the end about that!
- Didn’t care for the heroine. Loved her relationship with her son but couldn’t stand her cold,
rude & standoffish behavior towards good people who wanted to befriend her like the Hero’s
sister for example who defended her to town folks and wanted to get to know her & be close.
Instead, heroine ran away and made no effort. No resolution on that front in the end either.
And what the hell was with heroine’s wardrobe? She was described as always wearing Black
and looking like one of those Gothic chicks. Lol.
- Didn’t feel any chemistry or bonding between the 2 MCs. Heroine kept pushing Hero away for
most all of the story which is why the ending was just Blah. No romance or feeling they were
in love at all.
- No intimate scenes at all. Sex at the end was off page, as well as the one before the separation.
Also, if I am not mistaken, there was I believe 3 short kisses in total for the entire story. So
very PG which is not my jam.
- The confusing mixed feelings Hero had about the ex. When story begins, we were told that he
had a GF that he was dating for a year and the night before he enlisted, he was having a
graduation party and was going to break things off with her. However, after catching her
cheating with one of his friends, he felt betrayed & angry. Then throughout the story, every
time she was mentioned or he came in contact with, he was still angry (even though he no
longer wanted her or felt any attraction). So why would he be angry & hurt if he never had
feelings for her? Seems to me he would be more upset at his friend then her but it was not
written that way. And also, it was never explained why he never had sex with his GF or
anyone else since he was described as dating a lot in High school.
- Another major dislike is that the MCs kid was described as a mini-me/dead ringer of heroine’s
dead brother. Over & over again this was mentioned to the point I couldn’t understand why he
would resemble the brother and not the Hero. There was even a rumor by town folks that the
reason the kid looked like the brother is because the brother raped heroine and got her
pregnant and that is why he committed suicide. Of course, that was not true but there was
absolutely no reason to make the kid look like the brother. It served nothing to the story at all.
- As for Heroine’s Brother & Father’s death, there was some mystery there how they died.
Author just left it open ended, as she did the same with the mystery book that was supposed to
contain “riches” and whatnot. Don’t you hate it when you invest your time, money & energy
on something and have things not wrapped up? Ugh!
- Lastly, my biggest pet peeve lately is when writers incorporate their careers into the story arc.
For example, the heroine is an Editor who works with several Authors and we get dialogue
after dialogue how & what an author has to go through to publish their books. How “Indy”
writers are the thing these days & the pros/cons of hiring a Publisher/Editor or going solo.
Apparently going solo you make more money and if everyone has an Editor to help them
rewrite lots, catch mistakes, etc., why then do we have such crappy books out there these days?
Safety:
- Since it’s a 15 year separation, Hero is of course not celibate. He said he tried to forget her as “hard as he could with other women but never could”. No past history mentioned for heroine. One can only assume she was frozen since she had a hard time interacting with people.
- NO OW/OM drama. His ex does come briefly into the picture but he ignores her.
- No intimate scenes with OP. Totally Safe.