Sorry, no. Hell, no.
I don't care how insecure, desperate, and in love Dan is. His treatment of someone he should put above everyone and everything else is vile.
I don't want you to be stuck in a marriage with me, so I will viciouslu hurt you and divorce you. I will give you space. Oh, so now you're not with me like I want? Well, I will screw you then insult you. Oh, well, now that I think I want you, I will corner you into a business deal by using blackmail, pressure, guilt, and obligation. But wait, just merge months ago, I wanted to give you freedom to choose me; but now that I viciously stab you in the chest and twist the knife. Seeing you angry and jealous is fun. I love always having you off balance, insecure, and so confused that you don't know what is up or down between us.
I'm so much older than you and I feel ancient, yet I want to control your decisions and force your hand to choose me and what I want. Because what I want is best for you. But I don't really want control because you need to choose me but I am won't give you any other choice but me.
I love you. I hate you. I lust for you. You're not that good in bed. I want to touch you. No, don't touch me.
Jesus Macaroni and Cheese!! How is this romance?! I adore romance, but if I was Alyssa; I would just shut it all down.
Not worth my entire self-worth, mental health to have this d*ckhead jerk me around for years instead of just having enough godd*am balls to just be open and honest and ask if he could have a loving relationship.
If this is what people think is epic love or whatever, I don't know what is wrong with them.
Anyone who deliberately hurts me to "do the right thing" because they don't have enough spine to lay their heart out isn't worthy of my love.
This entire effing book is a mind f*ck of one completely clueless virgin girl who doesn't know any better and an emotionally constipated adult man.
Sorry, but if you're entire romance premise is a monumental failure of basic communication skills, than you aren't a good author. You just build tension through frustration. Dan is a f*cking idiot who can use his words and Alyssa is an orphan girl who doesn't understand that she is being abused.