Forgot to post my updated review, here it is:
My rating with this one changed a few times, when I first read I thought damn was pretty good, then I thought about it for a while and thought no that was really good, then I read it again today before writing the review and thought no I REALLY like this😅
This is a very short story, only 21 pages and can be read in a few minutes, but it hits the ground running and throws you into an incredibly tense scenario, I was so anxious reading it (in a good way). The premise in very gripping and you're immediately invested in what the hell is going on, the writing is solid, structured and very well written for a debut. I'm a big fan of short stories and have read some great ones this year, and this is right up there with the best. The big pull of this story is the ending, I'll say no more on that.
One of the things I was most impressed with was how well the story flowed for such a short amount of pages, it's incredibly intense for the majority, it then pulls you back into a slower, more even pace, giving you a sense of security, then punches you in the stomach with brilliantly executed ending. It's very difficult, with short stories, to keep a readers interest without giving away what you're building to. And harding, in my opinion executed this perfectly.
I've been informed this story is set to lead into a similar themed collection in the future. One I'll be very eager to get my hands on, a really interesting blend of concepts delivered a really intriguing view of what's to come