This book is a bit hard to rate, but I´ll end up with a two-star rating, because I simply didn´t enjoy it for the most part.
This book is a little bit over the place, I don´t know if I´m more frustrated for having finished and seeing all the plot holes but also the possibilities this story had, or if I´m frustrated that I just didn´t drop it. In any case here it goes.
One thing that I really struggled with, was that the characters don't feel fleshed out or have their own voices, everyone reads the same and there are three different narrators in total and that is one thing I really dislike in books, I think the author could have worked better in bringing more unique voices to each one so they could feel a little separated from each other and not have the same voice. Another thing was that the writing itself did not suit this story at all, apart from having a very raw and draft kind of tone, this story would have benefitted so much from a more atmospheric and descriptive story.
Another point that lies tied with the writing, is that the first narrator of the book paints a very different picture from the other though, and although that works as a plot point, in terms of writing it made first chunk (about 50%) really feel different from the rest both thematically and in tone, and I keep thinking that if I never pushed through I wouldn´t know the rest of the story that is so different, and also the first part was really a slog. I couldn´t tell one character from another (what´s up with Chelsea and Chase these names are so similar) and their relationships to one another, and there seemed like the story wasn´t going anywhere, and it was so dragged it really bummed me.
Then we have a major shift in point of view and the paranormal aspect really comes into play, and I loved it. I love this plot simply putting it. I just felt that if the writing was different, and the character construction in the first part of the novel was different, I would´ve loved it so much, I would´ve cared so much more and that is really a bummer. One thing I have to say about this is that there are so many book comparisons made when marketing a book "this is a mix of y meets x" and in my experience most of the time it really is just a stretch or a pure market card and not really anything to deal with the story but in this case, they weren't lying. What really bums me is the amount of wasted potential that could have made this story great.
I really thought if I should rate this a 3 star since I really did enjoy this plot aspect, but here is the thing: more commonly books have flaws in the plot, you feel like things could be different, if there was a different choice or path, if things ended in another way. Fewer times, the book has an excellent plot but such poor writing that you just can´t overlook it. This is the case here. I really wish I could give this one a higher rating, but I just can´t. The overall reading experience left me more pissed of than not, and a plot/plot twist cannot be the only thing holding a book when everything else sucks.
There was more revelations at the third part in the novel with another pov change, this narrator was the one I cared for the least and also these chapters felt more jumbled and messy than the previous ones. Again, I enjoyed the twist, but I just really didn´t care about the character or like the writing.
Like I said earlier, this was a difficult one to rate. I had numerous problems with it that I cannot overlook, but it wasn´t a complete waste, when you analyze it like this.
↠ 2 stars✨