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Portal Shifters #1
Apex Shifter
Two worlds, a magical emblem, and a hunger to dominate the six species.
Marvin toiled through endless work to achieve his dream of flipping properties. A strange man stalked him at his morning diner job, becoming a regular. When he unexpectedly follows him home from night shift, Marvin knows something isn't right. The next day he is offered a magical device. The emblem confirms the paranormal are real, people can partially shift into animals, and that Marvin isn't normal: he's something to be feared.
As his life enters a whirlwind adventure, Marvin has to adapt as he becomes more than an ordinary man. Thankfully, there's a team of beauties eager to coalesce around him.
Warning: Violence, Action, and Untraditional Relationships.
Marvin toiled through endless work to achieve his dream of flipping properties. A strange man stalked him at his morning diner job, becoming a regular. When he unexpectedly follows him home from night shift, Marvin knows something isn't right. The next day he is offered a magical device. The emblem confirms the paranormal are real, people can partially shift into animals, and that Marvin isn't normal: he's something to be feared.
As his life enters a whirlwind adventure, Marvin has to adapt as he becomes more than an ordinary man. Thankfully, there's a team of beauties eager to coalesce around him.
Warning: Violence, Action, and Untraditional Relationships.
410 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 18, 2021
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March 22, 2022
2/5 maybe even 1/5
I like the premise, and even some of the scenes. That's about all that I liked. I don't know how to say this without going into a lot more detail but the book was just poorly written. The transitions from scene to scene were awful, a lot of things just didn't make sense. At least half were good or something like that. There was just so much that was bad I could not continue.
Forget even about the beta cuck weak mommy's boy mindset of the MC. Who basically just gets bossed around by "his" women and does nothing but try to please them. He's supposed to be the Apex Alpha but clearly the author knows nothing about how an alpha would act. Even one raised in our gynocentric Society.
And don't get me wrong I'm not asking for perfection, but this book has so many glaring flaws I don't even know where to start. The MC does not act like an alpha, the transition from scene to scene was horrible, and how and why a lot of things happened just didn't make any sense. Honestly the only reason I managed to get as far as I did was because I was invested, but at a certain point I had to cut my losses.
Would recommend to newbie readers, or experienced readers that can power through absolute dogshit for a fresh story.
I like the premise, and even some of the scenes. That's about all that I liked. I don't know how to say this without going into a lot more detail but the book was just poorly written. The transitions from scene to scene were awful, a lot of things just didn't make sense. At least half were good or something like that. There was just so much that was bad I could not continue.
Forget even about the beta cuck weak mommy's boy mindset of the MC. Who basically just gets bossed around by "his" women and does nothing but try to please them. He's supposed to be the Apex Alpha but clearly the author knows nothing about how an alpha would act. Even one raised in our gynocentric Society.
And don't get me wrong I'm not asking for perfection, but this book has so many glaring flaws I don't even know where to start. The MC does not act like an alpha, the transition from scene to scene was horrible, and how and why a lot of things happened just didn't make any sense. Honestly the only reason I managed to get as far as I did was because I was invested, but at a certain point I had to cut my losses.
Would recommend to newbie readers, or experienced readers that can power through absolute dogshit for a fresh story.
May 28, 2024
Good star to the series, the pacing is good, not to rushed but neither to slow. The plot is not overcomplicated so is easy to follow. The character migth need an improvement but since this is only book one such a thing is expected. So far the author has avoided making the same mistake that manny do with this 'harem' genre. Hope it translate to book 2.
October 24, 2021
Awesome start
This could be an amazing start to a civilization building , harem series. I hope that it develops in a long storyline.
This could be an amazing start to a civilization building , harem series. I hope that it develops in a long storyline.
November 12, 2021
Interesting harem framework
Good tale. Basically the MC He's given a token the transports into another world but Unknowingly he was turned into a shifter but a new type. This is a world of shift as they know about earth and they go back and forth occasionally but nobody knows the how or why of the portal tokens. As you gonna imagine things on the shift are world are about to get very interesting as well as I have soon earth is about to get a comeuppance as well.. The hey I'm aspect is fun and not over the top. Most of the characters are pretty good And of course decent fighting.Ugly I read these more for the story and I was intrigued especially near end of the book when more revelations are laid out. Kind of such the stage and explains a lot of things and makes the second book seem more inviting And exciting. Can't wait
Good tale. Basically the MC He's given a token the transports into another world but Unknowingly he was turned into a shifter but a new type. This is a world of shift as they know about earth and they go back and forth occasionally but nobody knows the how or why of the portal tokens. As you gonna imagine things on the shift are world are about to get very interesting as well as I have soon earth is about to get a comeuppance as well.. The hey I'm aspect is fun and not over the top. Most of the characters are pretty good And of course decent fighting.Ugly I read these more for the story and I was intrigued especially near end of the book when more revelations are laid out. Kind of such the stage and explains a lot of things and makes the second book seem more inviting And exciting. Can't wait
November 20, 2021
As far as I can tell, a pretty typical book for the author. There is his particular style of constant info-dumps which figures prominently, and I was reminded of why I've been avoiding this guy's books of late. If you like his stuff you may enjoy this more than I did.
October 25, 2021
A fun read. Better than I expected.
There a a number of, not exactly twists, but parts where you think the story is going to go one way and goes in a completely other direction. They are all done well and were more enjoyable than jarring. I had to laugh when the MC and main girl identified their powers. It is the trope in shifter books of this nature.
I was actually looking for something to not like, and aside from a single incorrectly defined, I think, use of the word cobbler, there was nothing.
I truly enjoyed this book. Writing - Good. Story - Good. Spicy scenes - better than average. Characters - actually have depth and grow. The MC is kinda op, but not really.
Pick up this book. You will not be disappointed!
There a a number of, not exactly twists, but parts where you think the story is going to go one way and goes in a completely other direction. They are all done well and were more enjoyable than jarring. I had to laugh when the MC and main girl identified their powers. It is the trope in shifter books of this nature.
I was actually looking for something to not like, and aside from a single incorrectly defined, I think, use of the word cobbler, there was nothing.
I truly enjoyed this book. Writing - Good. Story - Good. Spicy scenes - better than average. Characters - actually have depth and grow. The MC is kinda op, but not really.
Pick up this book. You will not be disappointed!
March 18, 2023
A human working 3 jobs to pay off his college debt is stalked by alien wolfkin on Earth .
Marvin a human male works 3 jobs to pay off his college debt an little time for anything else . With both of his parents passed away he has no one to rely on but himself . While working at one of his jobs one of the female co-workers gets interested in him so they text an message back for awhile until they plan to actual meet for the first time . Before that happened a alien wolfkin stalked Marvin that actual day asking for his help to exchange gems for cash at a local exchange for his help he'll give him a cut a fee for doing it for him an giving him an emblem to his home planet that he can portal too . It changes his life forever .recommend reading excellent book .
Marvin a human male works 3 jobs to pay off his college debt an little time for anything else . With both of his parents passed away he has no one to rely on but himself . While working at one of his jobs one of the female co-workers gets interested in him so they text an message back for awhile until they plan to actual meet for the first time . Before that happened a alien wolfkin stalked Marvin that actual day asking for his help to exchange gems for cash at a local exchange for his help he'll give him a cut a fee for doing it for him an giving him an emblem to his home planet that he can portal too . It changes his life forever .recommend reading excellent book .
October 20, 2022
It has good points and less than great points. Has GREAT potential as a series though.
I should be angry at the exposition at the end but it fits so well! Why it wasn't shared, what's been going on. It does shift my perspective on the story a bit.
On a non amazon rating scale I would give the story a pretty solid 4* stars I guess. There was a lot I liked and a lot I didn't like. What really brings it around for me is the further potential of the story. If it can come together right this could really be a fun story diving deeper than one might think into it's universe.
With all that said, it's actually not in one of the lists of series I anxiously follow... yet.
I should be angry at the exposition at the end but it fits so well! Why it wasn't shared, what's been going on. It does shift my perspective on the story a bit.
On a non amazon rating scale I would give the story a pretty solid 4* stars I guess. There was a lot I liked and a lot I didn't like. What really brings it around for me is the further potential of the story. If it can come together right this could really be a fun story diving deeper than one might think into it's universe.
With all that said, it's actually not in one of the lists of series I anxiously follow... yet.
October 21, 2021
Sloppy writing dragging together a collection of events that anyone would be hard pressed to call a story.
This is just a mess. There are so many different aspects that do not find together at all. At no time do you feel an overall narrative coming together. You are brow beaten with details to force you to accept what is happening. This is a concept with no structural base. This reads like a story written without ever attempting to organize it with an outline.
This is just a mess. There are so many different aspects that do not find together at all. At no time do you feel an overall narrative coming together. You are brow beaten with details to force you to accept what is happening. This is a concept with no structural base. This reads like a story written without ever attempting to organize it with an outline.
March 3, 2023
A total rollercoaster that you shouldn't take too seriously. The pacing is completely off, sometimes too slow but most of the time way too fast. The story completely changed often. The author didn't take his time writing as he often forgets to connect two sentences or properly explain what the hell just happened. But it was still good, the characters and the situations were fun. I just won't be continuing the series.
October 30, 2021
Umm Wow wow
Okay you out did yourself Marcus Sloss!!!! A little rough in the beginning and some minor editing but Holy Cow!!! This is going to be an incredible series!!! All the things I expect,, great adult fantasy activities, awesome adventure and a great story to enjoy!!! More more more!!!!!
Okay you out did yourself Marcus Sloss!!!! A little rough in the beginning and some minor editing but Holy Cow!!! This is going to be an incredible series!!! All the things I expect,, great adult fantasy activities, awesome adventure and a great story to enjoy!!! More more more!!!!!
February 3, 2022
Fantasy meets sci-fi
This story is an interesting mix of fantasy elements, magic, science fiction and urban legend. It has politics, it has Town governing and building. The world building is interesting and just getting started it also has romance violence as well as thought-provoking ideas about alien life. And also has spicy scenes that are not fade to Black.
This story is an interesting mix of fantasy elements, magic, science fiction and urban legend. It has politics, it has Town governing and building. The world building is interesting and just getting started it also has romance violence as well as thought-provoking ideas about alien life. And also has spicy scenes that are not fade to Black.
October 26, 2021
Surprisingly good
This book was a lot of fun. I was honestly expecting a standard harem lot book, but it surprised me. The harem is there, but so is a lot of action and a good deal of humor.
This book was a lot of fun. I was honestly expecting a standard harem lot book, but it surprised me. The harem is there, but so is a lot of action and a good deal of humor.
November 1, 2021
Isekei with a twist
This is half urban fantasy and half Isekei thrown in a blender. It sounds odd, but it really works. A great story, an MC who isn't an idiot or super-alpha that can't solve anything outside fighting. Lot of good potential here and looking forward to more.
This is half urban fantasy and half Isekei thrown in a blender. It sounds odd, but it really works. A great story, an MC who isn't an idiot or super-alpha that can't solve anything outside fighting. Lot of good potential here and looking forward to more.
November 3, 2021
Great Story
This was with out a doubt the best book this author has written. It has an awesome MC , great supporting characters and the story left my heart pounding. I don’t usually stay up half the night finishing a book I cannot put down.
This was with out a doubt the best book this author has written. It has an awesome MC , great supporting characters and the story left my heart pounding. I don’t usually stay up half the night finishing a book I cannot put down.
November 5, 2021
Apex Shifter
Apex Shifter , Has a great story but needs better editing. There are just too many mistakes in sentence structure and formation, which are distracting. Still a very good story that enjoyed a lot and I'm looking forward to the one in the series.
Apex Shifter , Has a great story but needs better editing. There are just too many mistakes in sentence structure and formation, which are distracting. Still a very good story that enjoyed a lot and I'm looking forward to the one in the series.
November 10, 2021
And we have a winner (IMHO)!!!
Great story. Well crafted. Wonderful progression. Fun characters. Lots of familiar paranormal critters. Really enjoyed this read. Looking forward to its continuation.
Great story. Well crafted. Wonderful progression. Fun characters. Lots of familiar paranormal critters. Really enjoyed this read. Looking forward to its continuation.
February 7, 2023
good book
It’s a great first book could of separated bits of it and stretched to make more but you didn’t.
Mc is op harem is nice not too much looking forward to the story growing !
It’s a great first book could of separated bits of it and stretched to make more but you didn’t.
Mc is op harem is nice not too much looking forward to the story growing !
September 20, 2024
Good story just too much jumping around without forethought
I like the characters but the story just seems to stop and start and jump around without any expectation/explanation that a change is coming. Although I am a huge fan of this author, I am not a large fan of this story.
I like the characters but the story just seems to stop and start and jump around without any expectation/explanation that a change is coming. Although I am a huge fan of this author, I am not a large fan of this story.
October 25, 2021
Loved this book from start to finish. Marcus has another great start to what looks to be an exciting and fun series. Looking forward to book 2
October 31, 2021
Awesome
What a great start to a new series by Marcus Sloss. The MC and supporting cast are just fantastic. I am really looking forward to where this story takes us.
What a great start to a new series by Marcus Sloss. The MC and supporting cast are just fantastic. I am really looking forward to where this story takes us.
November 6, 2021
Entertaining
Was a decent read. The first barrier to be the leader of a good team of a player and the doppelgangers is a trip that
Was a decent read. The first barrier to be the leader of a good team of a player and the doppelgangers is a trip that
November 29, 2021
Fun read
Great book with a new twist on shifters and how they came to be. Definitely enjoyed it and already wanting to read the sequel.
Great book with a new twist on shifters and how they came to be. Definitely enjoyed it and already wanting to read the sequel.
December 2, 2021
really good book!
December 26, 2021
Good Book
I liked and enjoyed it anyway, I hope you do as well. Really hope for it to become a long series.
I liked and enjoyed it anyway, I hope you do as well. Really hope for it to become a long series.
February 12, 2023
Sweet
There is a word for this book it's "Freaking awesome"! The end to book one is a excellent leading to the rest of the series or an end to it all.
There is a word for this book it's "Freaking awesome"! The end to book one is a excellent leading to the rest of the series or an end to it all.
September 21, 2023
I really liked the premise. 1920s urban fantasy, yes please. Unfortunately, so many things didnt make sense. Needs an editor.
December 31, 2024
Introduction:
Greetings, fellow beings of HowlStrom and beyond. I am Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf of our icy realm. As someone who has been gaming all my life, I've come across many tales, but none have intrigued me as much as "Apex Shifter" by Marcus Sloss. Allow me to share my thoughts on this captivating tale.
Basic Plot Summary:
Marvin, a hardworking individual, finds himself entangled in a world of magic, shapeshifting, and paranormal entities. A mysterious emblem reveals to him the existence of the paranormal, and he discovers that he is not just an ordinary man but something much more powerful and feared. As he embarks on this whirlwind adventure, he is surrounded by a team of enchanting allies.
Analysis/Evaluation:
The story masterfully blends urban fantasy with elements of shapeshifting, creating a unique narrative that stands out in the genre. The author's portrayal of Marvin's transformation from an ordinary man to a powerful entity is both thrilling and relatable.
Characters:
Marvin, the protagonist, is a well-developed character whose journey from a mundane life to a world of magic is compelling. The supporting characters add depth to the story, each with their unique personalities and roles that contribute to the overall narrative.
Structure:
The pacing of the story is well-balanced, with moments of intense action interspersed with character development and world-building. The author's writing style is engaging, drawing readers into the world of "Apex Shifter."
Impact:
The tale resonates with themes of self-discovery, power, and the unknown. It serves as a reminder that there's more to our world than meets the eye and that everyone has the potential for greatness within them.
Hook and Thesis:
The introduction of the mysterious emblem and Marvin's discovery of his unique abilities serves as a powerful hook, drawing readers into the story. The underlying thesis revolves around the exploration of one's true potential and the challenges that come with newfound power.
Praise and Critique:
The story is commendable for its unique blend of genres and well-developed characters. However, some reviews suggest that the book could benefit from better editing, with minor issues in sentence structure and formation. Despite these critiques, the overall narrative remains strong and engaging.
Evaluation:
"Apex Shifter" is a captivating tale that offers a fresh perspective on the urban fantasy genre. While there are areas for improvement, the story's strengths outweigh its weaknesses, making it a must-read for fans of fantasy and shapeshifting narratives.
Comparison:
While many stories delve into the world of shapeshifters and magic, "Apex Shifter" stands out for its unique blend of urban fantasy elements. It offers a fresh take on familiar themes, setting it apart from other tales in the genre.
Conclusion:
In the icy realms of HowlStrom, tales of magic and adventure are cherished. "Apex Shifter" by Marcus Sloss is one such tale that has left a lasting impression on me. With its engaging narrative, well-developed characters, and unique blend of genres, it is a story that will resonate with readers for years to come. I, Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf, highly recommend this tale to all who seek a thrilling adventure.
May the icy winds of HowlStrom guide your path.
Greetings, fellow beings of HowlStrom and beyond. I am Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf of our icy realm. As someone who has been gaming all my life, I've come across many tales, but none have intrigued me as much as "Apex Shifter" by Marcus Sloss. Allow me to share my thoughts on this captivating tale.
Basic Plot Summary:
Marvin, a hardworking individual, finds himself entangled in a world of magic, shapeshifting, and paranormal entities. A mysterious emblem reveals to him the existence of the paranormal, and he discovers that he is not just an ordinary man but something much more powerful and feared. As he embarks on this whirlwind adventure, he is surrounded by a team of enchanting allies.
Analysis/Evaluation:
The story masterfully blends urban fantasy with elements of shapeshifting, creating a unique narrative that stands out in the genre. The author's portrayal of Marvin's transformation from an ordinary man to a powerful entity is both thrilling and relatable.
Characters:
Marvin, the protagonist, is a well-developed character whose journey from a mundane life to a world of magic is compelling. The supporting characters add depth to the story, each with their unique personalities and roles that contribute to the overall narrative.
Structure:
The pacing of the story is well-balanced, with moments of intense action interspersed with character development and world-building. The author's writing style is engaging, drawing readers into the world of "Apex Shifter."
Impact:
The tale resonates with themes of self-discovery, power, and the unknown. It serves as a reminder that there's more to our world than meets the eye and that everyone has the potential for greatness within them.
Hook and Thesis:
The introduction of the mysterious emblem and Marvin's discovery of his unique abilities serves as a powerful hook, drawing readers into the story. The underlying thesis revolves around the exploration of one's true potential and the challenges that come with newfound power.
Praise and Critique:
The story is commendable for its unique blend of genres and well-developed characters. However, some reviews suggest that the book could benefit from better editing, with minor issues in sentence structure and formation. Despite these critiques, the overall narrative remains strong and engaging.
Evaluation:
"Apex Shifter" is a captivating tale that offers a fresh perspective on the urban fantasy genre. While there are areas for improvement, the story's strengths outweigh its weaknesses, making it a must-read for fans of fantasy and shapeshifting narratives.
Comparison:
While many stories delve into the world of shapeshifters and magic, "Apex Shifter" stands out for its unique blend of urban fantasy elements. It offers a fresh take on familiar themes, setting it apart from other tales in the genre.
Conclusion:
In the icy realms of HowlStrom, tales of magic and adventure are cherished. "Apex Shifter" by Marcus Sloss is one such tale that has left a lasting impression on me. With its engaging narrative, well-developed characters, and unique blend of genres, it is a story that will resonate with readers for years to come. I, Kiba Snowpaw, the Alpha Ice Wolf, highly recommend this tale to all who seek a thrilling adventure.
May the icy winds of HowlStrom guide your path.
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