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The Rise of the Raidin
An eighteen-year-old-girl with extraordinary powers must defend her high school from dragons, with only her friends and protectors to help her.
Dragons attacking her school is about to be the least of her worries.
Jennifer Monroe is an average eighteen-year-old girl, and she knows it. Which is precisely why no one—least of all herself—would suspect anything extraordinary from the quiet, boring girl who only has a few good friends to call her own. But that all got flipped on its head about a year ago, when two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four-legged creatures barged into her life.
Now over a year later, Jen leads a double life. Mild mannered, quiet, high schooler by day; dragon slayer and raw-energy-wielding-warrior (in training) by night. Juggling SAT scores, papers, and mastering the art of flying, she’s managed to keep her friends and family oblivious of her hybrid abilities and continue on track for college. Everything was going swimmingly.
Until one normal, foggy, November morning, when a dragon crashed through the clouds, heralding a small army to descend on her high school.
All for little, forgettable her.
Faced with the responsibility of an entire high school, Jen has to rely on her minimal training and the know-how of her protectors to survive the day. But there’s more going on than she realizes, and her world is about to be thrown on its head.
Dragons attacking her school is about to be the least of her worries.
Jennifer Monroe is an average eighteen-year-old girl, and she knows it. Which is precisely why no one—least of all herself—would suspect anything extraordinary from the quiet, boring girl who only has a few good friends to call her own. But that all got flipped on its head about a year ago, when two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four-legged creatures barged into her life.
Now over a year later, Jen leads a double life. Mild mannered, quiet, high schooler by day; dragon slayer and raw-energy-wielding-warrior (in training) by night. Juggling SAT scores, papers, and mastering the art of flying, she’s managed to keep her friends and family oblivious of her hybrid abilities and continue on track for college. Everything was going swimmingly.
Until one normal, foggy, November morning, when a dragon crashed through the clouds, heralding a small army to descend on her high school.
All for little, forgettable her.
Faced with the responsibility of an entire high school, Jen has to rely on her minimal training and the know-how of her protectors to survive the day. But there’s more going on than she realizes, and her world is about to be thrown on its head.
367 pages, Paperback
Published November 1, 2021
About the author
Susan L Markloff
12 books40 followersSusan Markloff spent a majority of her childhood pretending to live in other worlds. Coupled with her admiration for fantastical stories, she crafted one of her own. Studying writing at Houghton College, she learned how to hone her skills as an author, writing first drafts of five books during her college career. The Rise of the Raidin is her debut novel and the first in the Human-Born Era series. To date, she has published 3 novels and 6 novellas, winning a total of 4 awards for her books.
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January 17, 2023
Okay, I'm READY for this review. First, I'm gonna state that my rating is a 4.5 stars, but I round up.
Now, I have to start by commenting on the narration. GEEZ. Even though there's a lot of narration in the book, I've never read an author make it sound so entertaining or story like. It feels like you're reading those fairy tale books you grew up with, the ones that relied on the storytelling aspect alone with minimal dialogue. Almost every line in this book read like a story in itself. Don't worry, though, there's plenty of dialogue, too, and 90% of the time, it's hilarious. (I'm looking at you, Krelien, Ar'on, and Ryan.)
Characterization was absolutely lovely! Personally, I didn't struggle telling the difference between any of the characters despite the large cast. It took me about three or four (3–4) chapters to know who's who. I thought Markloff did a wonderful job in showing everyone's personalities through their dialogue. It made for quick favorites right in the beginning of the book.
The fight scenes, I was most impressed with. I've never read fight scenes that flow so naturally while being paced well. And Markloff's description of how powers are used are awesome! The WORLD BUILDING in this book is *stunning*! Respect for that!
Speaking of visuals, so much of this book read like a movie to me. I adored that I could see this so well in my head. It was great because this book honestly satisfied the story that my inner child always wanted to read about: about what would happen if I had special powers that the whole school found out about. If I could be special. I got to live through that fantasy through Jen Monroe.
I only have three (4) critiques (listed from most minor to most major):
1) A few times, the writing came across more as a screenplay instead of a novel. In other words, a lot of details about what the characters were doing as they spoke felt more like directions to an actor rather than visuals for a book due to how often those actions were described. (I'm learning this about my own writing as well. It's an easy mistake to fall into.)
2) One more round of edits for the book isn't exactly necessary but would've been nice, just to get rid of a few typos and fix some mechanics.
3) EVERYONE felt like authentic people and said what I felt they would've except for a small handful of the high school kids, especially Evelyn. They felt more like high schooler archetypes. As Markloff is not a student in high school, though, I can't fault her too much for this. And it's just another thing to learn for future works! Otherwise, it just disturbed the reading flow a bit, because the rest of the story was going so well until those somewhat iffy pieces of dialogue.
4) This one may be personal preference, but it was how the chosen one aspect of this book was portrayed. I don't necessarily have an issue with the chosen one trope, but personally, I wasn't a fan of Jen being the most powerful Human-Born (and, technically, being) ever. While there are six others to look forward to, Jen being the most powerful sort of felt out of place and often used, and it kind of devalued the other six HBs for me. But I'm sure that Markloff will find a way to pull this off in the future books!
I have to finally state the pacing of the book. I thought that the pacing was immaculate. Just brilliant. I'm not a fan of training scenes, but the one that we had in the beginning communicated just enough for me. (***MINOR SPOILER***) Especially when Jen had "accidental training" when the attack first hit the school, that was separated enough from the previous training scene and had high-enough stakes for me to stay interested. (***end of spoilers***) I thought we had enough calm and establishment in the beginning and knew enough (or, at least, what we needed to) about Jen by the time we hit the rising action. From then on, everything progressed how I felt it should've. Markloff paid attention to the details of this and had it all: the principal being involved, security, lockdown, an assembly meeting, news and reporters, the army, everything; and I respect her for that instead of blowing over it all. I never though that the story fell flat until MAYBE the falling action. Perhaps some of the explanations could've been condensed.
Otherwise, I sincerely believe that my critiques are not anything that should deter readers from picking this up. I definitely don't think the book has earned the average rating that it has. But that's just my disappointment in the reviewers, not the author. Seriously, it's a wonderful 4–5-star book, and I don't believe that you will regret giving it a read.
FINAL NOTE: THE EPILOGUE. JUST. WHAT. Cregorous, my guy, u need therapy.
Now, I have to start by commenting on the narration. GEEZ. Even though there's a lot of narration in the book, I've never read an author make it sound so entertaining or story like. It feels like you're reading those fairy tale books you grew up with, the ones that relied on the storytelling aspect alone with minimal dialogue. Almost every line in this book read like a story in itself. Don't worry, though, there's plenty of dialogue, too, and 90% of the time, it's hilarious. (I'm looking at you, Krelien, Ar'on, and Ryan.)
Characterization was absolutely lovely! Personally, I didn't struggle telling the difference between any of the characters despite the large cast. It took me about three or four (3–4) chapters to know who's who. I thought Markloff did a wonderful job in showing everyone's personalities through their dialogue. It made for quick favorites right in the beginning of the book.
The fight scenes, I was most impressed with. I've never read fight scenes that flow so naturally while being paced well. And Markloff's description of how powers are used are awesome! The WORLD BUILDING in this book is *stunning*! Respect for that!
Speaking of visuals, so much of this book read like a movie to me. I adored that I could see this so well in my head. It was great because this book honestly satisfied the story that my inner child always wanted to read about: about what would happen if I had special powers that the whole school found out about. If I could be special. I got to live through that fantasy through Jen Monroe.
I only have three (4) critiques (listed from most minor to most major):
1) A few times, the writing came across more as a screenplay instead of a novel. In other words, a lot of details about what the characters were doing as they spoke felt more like directions to an actor rather than visuals for a book due to how often those actions were described. (I'm learning this about my own writing as well. It's an easy mistake to fall into.)
2) One more round of edits for the book isn't exactly necessary but would've been nice, just to get rid of a few typos and fix some mechanics.
3) EVERYONE felt like authentic people and said what I felt they would've except for a small handful of the high school kids, especially Evelyn. They felt more like high schooler archetypes. As Markloff is not a student in high school, though, I can't fault her too much for this. And it's just another thing to learn for future works! Otherwise, it just disturbed the reading flow a bit, because the rest of the story was going so well until those somewhat iffy pieces of dialogue.
4) This one may be personal preference, but it was how the chosen one aspect of this book was portrayed. I don't necessarily have an issue with the chosen one trope, but personally, I wasn't a fan of Jen being the most powerful Human-Born (and, technically, being) ever. While there are six others to look forward to, Jen being the most powerful sort of felt out of place and often used, and it kind of devalued the other six HBs for me. But I'm sure that Markloff will find a way to pull this off in the future books!
I have to finally state the pacing of the book. I thought that the pacing was immaculate. Just brilliant. I'm not a fan of training scenes, but the one that we had in the beginning communicated just enough for me. (***MINOR SPOILER***) Especially when Jen had "accidental training" when the attack first hit the school, that was separated enough from the previous training scene and had high-enough stakes for me to stay interested. (***end of spoilers***) I thought we had enough calm and establishment in the beginning and knew enough (or, at least, what we needed to) about Jen by the time we hit the rising action. From then on, everything progressed how I felt it should've. Markloff paid attention to the details of this and had it all: the principal being involved, security, lockdown, an assembly meeting, news and reporters, the army, everything; and I respect her for that instead of blowing over it all. I never though that the story fell flat until MAYBE the falling action. Perhaps some of the explanations could've been condensed.
Otherwise, I sincerely believe that my critiques are not anything that should deter readers from picking this up. I definitely don't think the book has earned the average rating that it has. But that's just my disappointment in the reviewers, not the author. Seriously, it's a wonderful 4–5-star book, and I don't believe that you will regret giving it a read.
FINAL NOTE: THE EPILOGUE. JUST. WHAT. Cregorous, my guy, u need therapy.
March 2, 2022
The Rise of the Raidin by Susan L. Markloff is an urban fantasy featuring a hybrid 18-year-old who has unique powers. She lives a double life, one one hand she’s a normal teenager and on the other she’s training to fight an evil who is after her and other hybrids.
I thought the premise of this book was very interesting and it gave me Percy Jackson vibes. I enjoyed the action, and world-building. I think it’s one of my favorite parts of this book. The characters and all of the different creatures in this book added to the fantasy and it was interesting to see how everything worked together. Markloff has done an amazing job creating unique and interesting characters.
I think I would have enjoyed the book more if there was more background on Jennifer learning about her powers and her experience while training. This left me confused while reading the book and maybe flashbacks or more information about hybrids and the main conflict in the book. It felt like the book “starts” in the middle. It’s a wild concept, but I’m curious to see what happens in the next book.
Rating: 3.5/5 ⭐⭐⭐💫
I thought the premise of this book was very interesting and it gave me Percy Jackson vibes. I enjoyed the action, and world-building. I think it’s one of my favorite parts of this book. The characters and all of the different creatures in this book added to the fantasy and it was interesting to see how everything worked together. Markloff has done an amazing job creating unique and interesting characters.
I think I would have enjoyed the book more if there was more background on Jennifer learning about her powers and her experience while training. This left me confused while reading the book and maybe flashbacks or more information about hybrids and the main conflict in the book. It felt like the book “starts” in the middle. It’s a wild concept, but I’m curious to see what happens in the next book.
Rating: 3.5/5 ⭐⭐⭐💫
June 21, 2023
This was an enjoyable ya fantasy! I loved jumping into this world filled with dragons and other magical creatures! I enjoyed following Jen as she learned about her Dragonborn abilities and as she fought to defend her high school from dragons. This was a very well written story with a lot of characters and action scenes. I loved how this book had information on name pronunciations, a glossary of key terms as well as character and location information in the back of the book. I found this information very helpful as I jumped into this world full of dragons and unfamiliar terms. This book also had some great character illustrations! Overall I really enjoyed this one.
July 7, 2023
There were so many things I loved about this book! Most importantly we’re the vibes: Guardians of the Galaxy most predominantly! It was intense, but there was always humor at moments to break up the intensity. The cast of characters (many of which are not human) engage in hilarious banter while also fighting for their lives against dragons.
I typically can’t handle a huge cast of characters in my mind, but the characters’ familiarity with each other helped a ton.
This book is more of a fantasy, but it’s got sci-fi elements that I just love. Advanced weapons, energy-based abilities, portals to another world, and war with sentient fantasy creatures! It’s like every single element of the “cool” stories I grew up with were woven into this single story!
Did I mention a prophecy that connects children from our world to the fate of some other world? How about the gigantic blaring signs of some major plot twists in the future books? A crazy powerful villain in charge of vast armies who would sink outrageously low and doesn’t care one bit for the lives of his soldiers?
There’s no way I can explain everything in this one review!
One thing I thought was interesting was that the author started the book about a year into the main character’s training. At first, it felt like we missed out on seeing her find out about her powers, but it actually helped the pacing of the story tremendously. We didn’t get bogged down with too many unnecessary details. The hero didn’t save the day a week after she learned she was important. We just got thrust right into the action! I think this decision was ambitious from the author, and I personally liked it a lot because it helped the main character not feel quite as overpowered.
There were some minor things I could be nit-picky about, and maybe they would bother others for me than me, but I really enjoyed this book, and I will argue all day that it’s greater than the sum of its parts!
I am absolutely looking forward to the next book in the series!
I typically can’t handle a huge cast of characters in my mind, but the characters’ familiarity with each other helped a ton.
This book is more of a fantasy, but it’s got sci-fi elements that I just love. Advanced weapons, energy-based abilities, portals to another world, and war with sentient fantasy creatures! It’s like every single element of the “cool” stories I grew up with were woven into this single story!
Did I mention a prophecy that connects children from our world to the fate of some other world? How about the gigantic blaring signs of some major plot twists in the future books? A crazy powerful villain in charge of vast armies who would sink outrageously low and doesn’t care one bit for the lives of his soldiers?
There’s no way I can explain everything in this one review!
One thing I thought was interesting was that the author started the book about a year into the main character’s training. At first, it felt like we missed out on seeing her find out about her powers, but it actually helped the pacing of the story tremendously. We didn’t get bogged down with too many unnecessary details. The hero didn’t save the day a week after she learned she was important. We just got thrust right into the action! I think this decision was ambitious from the author, and I personally liked it a lot because it helped the main character not feel quite as overpowered.
There were some minor things I could be nit-picky about, and maybe they would bother others for me than me, but I really enjoyed this book, and I will argue all day that it’s greater than the sum of its parts!
I am absolutely looking forward to the next book in the series!
February 4, 2023
The Rise of The Raidin is a fast-paced, intense, and otherwise enjoyable read.
Without diving into spoiler territory, the majority of the book takes place within one building, and yet there is no cease in the action.
I adored the character cast and cannot wait to reunite with them in The Ties That Bind. If you ask me who my favorite character is… I would have no choice but to provide you with a list.
If you read and loved Percy Jackson, then I would recommend Rise. It takes a twist with its own mythology, while still containing the sarcasm in battle we love.
Without diving into spoiler territory, the majority of the book takes place within one building, and yet there is no cease in the action.
I adored the character cast and cannot wait to reunite with them in The Ties That Bind. If you ask me who my favorite character is… I would have no choice but to provide you with a list.
If you read and loved Percy Jackson, then I would recommend Rise. It takes a twist with its own mythology, while still containing the sarcasm in battle we love.
February 25, 2022
I had no idea how to rate this book. I really really liked it!! AND GUYS THAT COVER!!
TROTR is a pretty concise read following a snarky protag and her group of (hot according the book multiple times) teachers, as she faces of evil dragons and a hecka cool villain dude who besiege her school.
The best thing about this book? Hands down the world. So freaking cool. I'm rarely into worldbuilding. I'm more of a characters kinda gal, but this book really had me turning pages to learn more about these super cool creatures and powers and how cool Markloff managed DRAGON HYBRIDS. LIKE SUCH A COOL CONCEPT.
Best character was Krelien. I like his chaos with a hint of a tragic backstory. He felt like such a good match as a mentor/uncle/older brother figure for Jen.
All the Zaheri were SO cool.
While it took me like the entire book to tell them apart, I ended up really liking them, and the whole concept of them.
Like why hasn't another book had a group of teachers sent to help take care of a chosen one??? It's genius.
The plot was good, pretty fantastic actually, but it also felt...off. And then I realized it was because this book starts in what feels like the MIDDLE of a book. This feels like a really well-written climax of a novel.
I really wish we got to see more of Jen living more of a double life, and more training sessions.
The one training session we did get was EPIC, along with every fight scene in this book. SO. WELL. DONE.
THis was more of a personal nitpick, but as a highschool senior, I feel like the high school seniors in this books just...didn't act like highschool seniors. No one calls each other homie or broski, unless you're in sixth grade and think you're cool. The mean girl felt ripped out a more mature disney channel movie, and Jen was the "not-like-other-girls" with no makeup and pink, on top of already feeling a bit OP
(a bit more on that: it seemed like the entire book was Jen just getting more and more powerful...just because she was born that way? She didn't earn this power and didn't have much weakness. She was quite literally conceived with it.
I did like how she seemed to struggle with trauma toward the end, and I really hope that's explored more since it gave her more realism and depth :)).
But those are my personal opinions! Of course, it might not be the same for others. :D
The ending and epilogue HAD to have been the best part. The writing was ominous and intriguing. And the villain is so so interesting. What a creepy turn it took...
I was not expecting that one twist OR the epilogue at all.
Overall, I'd recommend!! I have a feeling that the second book will be even better and IM HYPED.
Content: Very clean, minor kissing between adults, cussing with some pretty strong language such as w*ore, b**ch, hell, and b*stard (used as an insult) (though it was sadly one of the few accurate things about high schoolers :\).
TROTR is a pretty concise read following a snarky protag and her group of (hot according the book multiple times) teachers, as she faces of evil dragons and a hecka cool villain dude who besiege her school.
The best thing about this book? Hands down the world. So freaking cool. I'm rarely into worldbuilding. I'm more of a characters kinda gal, but this book really had me turning pages to learn more about these super cool creatures and powers and how cool Markloff managed DRAGON HYBRIDS. LIKE SUCH A COOL CONCEPT.
Best character was Krelien. I like his chaos with a hint of a tragic backstory. He felt like such a good match as a mentor/uncle/older brother figure for Jen.
All the Zaheri were SO cool.
While it took me like the entire book to tell them apart, I ended up really liking them, and the whole concept of them.
Like why hasn't another book had a group of teachers sent to help take care of a chosen one??? It's genius.
The plot was good, pretty fantastic actually, but it also felt...off. And then I realized it was because this book starts in what feels like the MIDDLE of a book. This feels like a really well-written climax of a novel.
I really wish we got to see more of Jen living more of a double life, and more training sessions.
The one training session we did get was EPIC, along with every fight scene in this book. SO. WELL. DONE.
THis was more of a personal nitpick, but as a highschool senior, I feel like the high school seniors in this books just...didn't act like highschool seniors. No one calls each other homie or broski, unless you're in sixth grade and think you're cool. The mean girl felt ripped out a more mature disney channel movie, and Jen was the "not-like-other-girls" with no makeup and pink, on top of already feeling a bit OP
(a bit more on that: it seemed like the entire book was Jen just getting more and more powerful...just because she was born that way? She didn't earn this power and didn't have much weakness. She was quite literally conceived with it.
I did like how she seemed to struggle with trauma toward the end, and I really hope that's explored more since it gave her more realism and depth :)).
But those are my personal opinions! Of course, it might not be the same for others. :D
The ending and epilogue HAD to have been the best part. The writing was ominous and intriguing. And the villain is so so interesting. What a creepy turn it took...
I was not expecting that one twist OR the epilogue at all.
Overall, I'd recommend!! I have a feeling that the second book will be even better and IM HYPED.
Content: Very clean, minor kissing between adults, cussing with some pretty strong language such as w*ore, b**ch, hell, and b*stard (used as an insult) (though it was sadly one of the few accurate things about high schoolers :\).
December 4, 2021
It’s not about the weapon. It’s about how you wield it. Your energy is a part of you, and any good swordsman will tell you that a blade is an extension of themselves.
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Jennifer Monroe is an average eighteen-year-old girl, and she knows it.
Which is precisely why no one-least of all herself-would suspect anything extraordinary from the quiet, boring girl who only has a few good friends to call her own. But that all got flipped on its head about a year ago, when two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four-legged creatures barged into her life.
Now over a year later, Jen leads a double life. Mild mannered, quiet, high schooler by day; dragon slayer and raw-energy-wielding-warrior (in training) by night. Juggling SAT scores, papers, and mastering the art of flying, she's managed to keep her friends and family oblivious of her hybrid abilities and continue on a track for college. Everything was going swimmingly.
Until one normal, foggy, November morning, when a dragon crashed through the clouds, heralding a small army to descend on her high school.
All for little, forgettable her.
Making her realize that maybe there's a whole lot more going on than she originally thought.
🦄🦄🦄
The Rise of the Raidin (The Human-Born Era) is a YA Paranormal and Urban Fantasy novel by Susan L. Markloff. It's an unputdownable book that's perfect for those who love fantasy that's based on Earth (don't worry there are certain scenes that may not be based on Earth 😉) and how heroes balance their lives while trying not to crash and burn.
Jen's normal life is on the rock as it is, now add her newfound 'abilities', seems to be on the brink, but like all protagonists she pushes through. I love that we get to see what her life's like without the battles and the dragons. But, I do think we get to see her develop in a way we'd expect a normal teenager to progress, (with or without her 'extra-curricular activities'). But, I also loved the other characters in the story. Everyone's personality shone and no one was bland or feel like they don't have a purpose in the story, however there's a part of me that wishes I could get to know a little bit more about them because there's this air of doubt and mystrey surrounding certain characters and it'll be interesting to see how that progresses.
The fight scenes in this book was * chef's kiss * and I couldn't get enough of the way the plot developed. The ending has left me waiting to read book 2 and the anticipation is killing me.
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Rated 8.5/10
Melina L.
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Jennifer Monroe is an average eighteen-year-old girl, and she knows it.
Which is precisely why no one-least of all herself-would suspect anything extraordinary from the quiet, boring girl who only has a few good friends to call her own. But that all got flipped on its head about a year ago, when two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four-legged creatures barged into her life.
Now over a year later, Jen leads a double life. Mild mannered, quiet, high schooler by day; dragon slayer and raw-energy-wielding-warrior (in training) by night. Juggling SAT scores, papers, and mastering the art of flying, she's managed to keep her friends and family oblivious of her hybrid abilities and continue on a track for college. Everything was going swimmingly.
Until one normal, foggy, November morning, when a dragon crashed through the clouds, heralding a small army to descend on her high school.
All for little, forgettable her.
Making her realize that maybe there's a whole lot more going on than she originally thought.
🦄🦄🦄
The Rise of the Raidin (The Human-Born Era) is a YA Paranormal and Urban Fantasy novel by Susan L. Markloff. It's an unputdownable book that's perfect for those who love fantasy that's based on Earth (don't worry there are certain scenes that may not be based on Earth 😉) and how heroes balance their lives while trying not to crash and burn.
Jen's normal life is on the rock as it is, now add her newfound 'abilities', seems to be on the brink, but like all protagonists she pushes through. I love that we get to see what her life's like without the battles and the dragons. But, I do think we get to see her develop in a way we'd expect a normal teenager to progress, (with or without her 'extra-curricular activities'). But, I also loved the other characters in the story. Everyone's personality shone and no one was bland or feel like they don't have a purpose in the story, however there's a part of me that wishes I could get to know a little bit more about them because there's this air of doubt and mystrey surrounding certain characters and it'll be interesting to see how that progresses.
The fight scenes in this book was * chef's kiss * and I couldn't get enough of the way the plot developed. The ending has left me waiting to read book 2 and the anticipation is killing me.
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Rated 8.5/10
Melina L.
April 8, 2022
Heartiest gratitude to @rrbooktours and @susanlmarkloff for the advanced review copy and a spot in the tour!
⭐Title: The Rise of Raidin
⭐Publication Date: November 1st, 2021
⭐Genre: YA Fantasy/ Urban Fantasy.
⭐Personal Rating: 🌵🌵🌵🌵 (3.65 rounded up to 4)
🌵My Thoughts:
The Rise of The Raidin' by Susan L. Markloff surprised me in a good way. It had action, humour, powerful imaginary beasts, twisted villain, caring friends and family, a little bit of romance and surpassed my initial expectations by a large margin. I was reminded once again why I adore the Percy Jackson series so much. The world building was amazing, it sucked me right in. I came to love Jen, our stubborn, fearless female protagonist. Most of the times when stories promise a badass Female lead, I end up being disappointed after reading the book. They start off great, meet a guy in the middle and turn all lovey dovey. So glad it didn't happen in this case. There are crushes involved but Susan kept it as realistic as possible. As a human-born hybrid Jen undergoes a series of shocking events that leaves her rattled to the bones. She processes her trauma slowly like a normal person than bouncing right back like fictional heroes. I loveeed that. Her friends, protectors and mentors : the Zaheri were so awesome characters! Tyron's protectiveness, Krelien being chaotic, cool Kaldok, rational Blaze, old man Ar'on all added something unique to the story. The fight scenes were lit. However, I am a bit disappointed with how the plot progresses. It doesn't have any flashbacks or explain the beginning of Jen's journey, it picks up the story in the middle which is why it got confusing at several points. I also had a hard time understanding who was who, what's a jumper, why Jen is special and so on. There's a glossary at the end which I didn't know before finishing the book. It might've come to my aid. Overall, a very refreshing read.
⭐Title: The Rise of Raidin
⭐Publication Date: November 1st, 2021
⭐Genre: YA Fantasy/ Urban Fantasy.
⭐Personal Rating: 🌵🌵🌵🌵 (3.65 rounded up to 4)
🌵My Thoughts:
The Rise of The Raidin' by Susan L. Markloff surprised me in a good way. It had action, humour, powerful imaginary beasts, twisted villain, caring friends and family, a little bit of romance and surpassed my initial expectations by a large margin. I was reminded once again why I adore the Percy Jackson series so much. The world building was amazing, it sucked me right in. I came to love Jen, our stubborn, fearless female protagonist. Most of the times when stories promise a badass Female lead, I end up being disappointed after reading the book. They start off great, meet a guy in the middle and turn all lovey dovey. So glad it didn't happen in this case. There are crushes involved but Susan kept it as realistic as possible. As a human-born hybrid Jen undergoes a series of shocking events that leaves her rattled to the bones. She processes her trauma slowly like a normal person than bouncing right back like fictional heroes. I loveeed that. Her friends, protectors and mentors : the Zaheri were so awesome characters! Tyron's protectiveness, Krelien being chaotic, cool Kaldok, rational Blaze, old man Ar'on all added something unique to the story. The fight scenes were lit. However, I am a bit disappointed with how the plot progresses. It doesn't have any flashbacks or explain the beginning of Jen's journey, it picks up the story in the middle which is why it got confusing at several points. I also had a hard time understanding who was who, what's a jumper, why Jen is special and so on. There's a glossary at the end which I didn't know before finishing the book. It might've come to my aid. Overall, a very refreshing read.
April 8, 2022
3.5 stars
I just want to thank the author for providing me with an advanced review copy of this book in exchange for my honest review and I want to thank Shannon for allowing me a spot on this tour.
The first thing I’m going to mention is the cover because that’s what initially drew me to the book. I then read the synopsis and was instantly intrigued. Jen is a senior in high school. She is also what is known as a human born and she has powers, and she has 6 guardians known as Zaheri which she has been working with for over a year when the book starts. I feel like we were thrown into this story with not enough backstory. I would have liked to have gotten a little bit of her training and her actually meeting her Zaheri and learning about her powers.
The beginning of the book was a little bit slow and hard for me to really get into but once the action started happening, I was pulled in. There were times where I felt like what was happening in the book didn’t make sense. What I mean by that is when they are first attacked, they have a bit of a reprieve, but during that reprieve they were worried about taking showers and changing clothes or just sitting around talking. I don’t know I just feel like their priorities weren’t straight.
Jen is definitely a strong protagonist, but she also came off whiny at times which bugged me. I loved all of the Zaheri, but I will say I had a hard time keeping up with who is who. Overall, I did enjoy this book, but the execution could have used a little bit of work. I could see myself reading the next book in the series to see where these characters go next.
I just want to thank the author for providing me with an advanced review copy of this book in exchange for my honest review and I want to thank Shannon for allowing me a spot on this tour.
The first thing I’m going to mention is the cover because that’s what initially drew me to the book. I then read the synopsis and was instantly intrigued. Jen is a senior in high school. She is also what is known as a human born and she has powers, and she has 6 guardians known as Zaheri which she has been working with for over a year when the book starts. I feel like we were thrown into this story with not enough backstory. I would have liked to have gotten a little bit of her training and her actually meeting her Zaheri and learning about her powers.
The beginning of the book was a little bit slow and hard for me to really get into but once the action started happening, I was pulled in. There were times where I felt like what was happening in the book didn’t make sense. What I mean by that is when they are first attacked, they have a bit of a reprieve, but during that reprieve they were worried about taking showers and changing clothes or just sitting around talking. I don’t know I just feel like their priorities weren’t straight.
Jen is definitely a strong protagonist, but she also came off whiny at times which bugged me. I loved all of the Zaheri, but I will say I had a hard time keeping up with who is who. Overall, I did enjoy this book, but the execution could have used a little bit of work. I could see myself reading the next book in the series to see where these characters go next.
April 10, 2022
My favorite genre is fantasy and I read a lot of YA so when the tour invite for The Rise of Raidin by Susan L. Markloff came through, I jumped at the chance. I’m glad I did! What a great read!!
Jen is am intriguing main character. She leads quite the double life and I think the differences in what she allows people to see in her personality depending on whether she’s at school or slaying dragons is really compelling. Quiet at school, snarky and quit witted when battling the dragons.
The world building is really cool in this book. The creatures and powers are unique and I found myself drawn into the story. There isn’t any info dumping, just wonderful world building which is what I like to see in a novel!
The writing is great and so are the character and the world. Overall, I enjoyed this quite a bit and would recommend to YA Fantasy readers.
Thank you to R&R Book Tours for the free review copy. All opinions are my own and unbiased.
Jen is am intriguing main character. She leads quite the double life and I think the differences in what she allows people to see in her personality depending on whether she’s at school or slaying dragons is really compelling. Quiet at school, snarky and quit witted when battling the dragons.
The world building is really cool in this book. The creatures and powers are unique and I found myself drawn into the story. There isn’t any info dumping, just wonderful world building which is what I like to see in a novel!
The writing is great and so are the character and the world. Overall, I enjoyed this quite a bit and would recommend to YA Fantasy readers.
Thank you to R&R Book Tours for the free review copy. All opinions are my own and unbiased.
March 30, 2023
So I stumbled across Susan Markloff's IG page by accident only to realize after the fact that I went to college and was good friends with her sister. After stalking her page for a bit, I really felt like I was going to love her books, and I was totally right! It gives me Percy Jackson vibes, with fantastical beasts and magic right in the middle of a modern, high school setting. Sometimes with fantasy, the writing style and elements of the story and the world are heightened and kind of formal (think Narnia or LotR). Nothing wrong with that of course, but it's also kind of cool to have the characters use modern slang alongside their ancient magic.
The second book in the series was just released (I'm in the middle of it now), and it too doesn't disappoint. Markloff's world is rich in detail, the characters are endearing, and the storyline is well-planned and well-executed. You can tell there is a lot of thought and detail put into the history of her world (and original creatures), even things we might never see on the page. Well worth the read!
The second book in the series was just released (I'm in the middle of it now), and it too doesn't disappoint. Markloff's world is rich in detail, the characters are endearing, and the storyline is well-planned and well-executed. You can tell there is a lot of thought and detail put into the history of her world (and original creatures), even things we might never see on the page. Well worth the read!
December 21, 2022
From the very first page, Markloff pulls you striaght into the action and never lets go. Seriously, it was like watching a movie playing in my head: from dragon attacks in parking lots to the final battle in the hallways of her highschool. I love Jen's character. She's tough and resiliant, but grounded because of the double life she has to lead in balancing the trials of highschool along with chaotic magic and training. I think most readers, teens or adults, will love her arc as she learns to control her powers and finds out who she truely is. And the big baddie, Cregorous, came out of left field (in a good way). He's more than your typical villain. The final chapter gives us some juicy insight to what may come to play with Cregorous and Jen in book two. This is the start of an incredible series!
January 7, 2023
Adventurous Story
Adventurous story of a teenage girl with a unique gift. She is a human born hybrid, meant to save the world. The first book in this series had me hooked on the unique characters and plot. Looking forward to the next book.
Adventurous story of a teenage girl with a unique gift. She is a human born hybrid, meant to save the world. The first book in this series had me hooked on the unique characters and plot. Looking forward to the next book.
February 22, 2022
This book follows Jennifer who seems to be a normal 18 year old going to high school. She has friends, and a crush on a boy. It seems like everything is normal, except she's actually a hybrid and has been training with other hybrids who are her guardians to help her hone her powers and learn combat to help them fight dragons that keep appearing from alternate dimensions on Earth. Little does she know they are preparing her to fight the evil hybrid Cregorous who is after her and other human-born hybrids. And it is up to her to stop him.
I wanted to like this book, but it did not quite live up to my expectations.
Some things I liked: I think the idea and concept of this story is great! The urban fantasy, with hybrids, dragons, werewolves, and other unique creatures, from alternate dimensions. This girl who has these awesome powers, strength, and healing abilities. I really enjoyed the plot idea, and I really enjoyed the characters. There are quite a few cast of characters, but they were each individual characters and unique and different personalities. Jennifer at times irritated me, however, she is a teenager and well, she acted like it. She had her moments though. I will say my favorite character was Krelian! I LOVE him. He was such a bright and optimistic spot in this story with his jokes and sassiness. They really needed that with all the chaos that was going on. There is also a Glossary in the back of the book that has a pronunciation guide, and an explanation of each character and each creature mentioned in the book, which is useful.
Now some things I was disappointed in(maybe some very slight spoilers): I thought this book would start off with Jennifer learning about her powers and who she is and we go along with her throughout the year with the other hybrids learning more about them and where they are from, but this actually starts already after a year and a half and she's known what she is and has been training. Now, that would be okay, except we are literally left in the dark about anything and everything until halfway through the book. I spent the first half of the book very confused about what a hybrid was, or who the hybrids are that are protecting and training her, as well as what some of the creatures were, or why dragons are appearing on Earth. I think a lot of that should have been integrated throughout the book rather than wait until the Glossary to read what some of the creatures are. It would have helped having it explained along the way throughout that year and a half she's training with them, but it turns out Jennifer did not actually know anything either, which I thought was odd because she finds out what she is and just blindly accepts it and starts training with these strangers? I just needed a bit more clarification and explanation as to why. As well as, a better understanding of the random dimensions and worlds within those dimensions, and why she's a hybrid and the rest of her family is not(that probably confused me the most). Maybe more will be explained in the next book.
I really did enjoy the plot of the book, and the characters, I just think the execution and explanation of everything was lacking and should have been integrated throughout the book from the start. And that would have made this a fantastic story! If you do love Percy Jackson, I think you would enjoy this book, especially if you also love dragons.
Thank you to the author and RRBook Tours for the free ARC to read. All thoughts are my own.
I wanted to like this book, but it did not quite live up to my expectations.
Some things I liked: I think the idea and concept of this story is great! The urban fantasy, with hybrids, dragons, werewolves, and other unique creatures, from alternate dimensions. This girl who has these awesome powers, strength, and healing abilities. I really enjoyed the plot idea, and I really enjoyed the characters. There are quite a few cast of characters, but they were each individual characters and unique and different personalities. Jennifer at times irritated me, however, she is a teenager and well, she acted like it. She had her moments though. I will say my favorite character was Krelian! I LOVE him. He was such a bright and optimistic spot in this story with his jokes and sassiness. They really needed that with all the chaos that was going on. There is also a Glossary in the back of the book that has a pronunciation guide, and an explanation of each character and each creature mentioned in the book, which is useful.
Now some things I was disappointed in(maybe some very slight spoilers): I thought this book would start off with Jennifer learning about her powers and who she is and we go along with her throughout the year with the other hybrids learning more about them and where they are from, but this actually starts already after a year and a half and she's known what she is and has been training. Now, that would be okay, except we are literally left in the dark about anything and everything until halfway through the book. I spent the first half of the book very confused about what a hybrid was, or who the hybrids are that are protecting and training her, as well as what some of the creatures were, or why dragons are appearing on Earth. I think a lot of that should have been integrated throughout the book rather than wait until the Glossary to read what some of the creatures are. It would have helped having it explained along the way throughout that year and a half she's training with them, but it turns out Jennifer did not actually know anything either, which I thought was odd because she finds out what she is and just blindly accepts it and starts training with these strangers? I just needed a bit more clarification and explanation as to why. As well as, a better understanding of the random dimensions and worlds within those dimensions, and why she's a hybrid and the rest of her family is not(that probably confused me the most). Maybe more will be explained in the next book.
I really did enjoy the plot of the book, and the characters, I just think the execution and explanation of everything was lacking and should have been integrated throughout the book from the start. And that would have made this a fantastic story! If you do love Percy Jackson, I think you would enjoy this book, especially if you also love dragons.
Thank you to the author and RRBook Tours for the free ARC to read. All thoughts are my own.
February 26, 2022
RATING:
3.5 STARS
The Rise of the Raidin by Susan L. Markloff is an amazing new urban fantasy book complete with lots of fantastical creatures and unique powers for our heroine. Readers who pick up The Rise of the Raidin can expect an action-packed entertaining read. On the surface, Jen has a fairly average life for a high schooler. In reality, she has to balance the regular teenager things with the other side of her double life and her new abilities. Will she able to help defend her school and determine what’s really be happening before it's too late?
The worldbuilding was the shining star of this book. I loved all the different species of creatures that made an appearance in this book. I enjoyed how the setting was split between various places on Earth and other locations. And I will reiterate something I’ve said in many other reviews - dragons make every story better, no matter what.
The pace of this book was also well executed. Undoubtedly a page-turner, there was never a moment when the story was in danger of losing my attention and/or interest. The fight scenes were AMAZING. And that ending was a total cliffhanger - I can’t not read the second book now, because I need to know what happens next.
Overall, a fantastic young adult fantasy read. I would recommend this book to those who would enjoy an urban fantasy story with great worldbuilding and hilarious banter between characters. I look forward to reading the next installment in The Human-Born Era series in the future! As a side note from my review, I want to express my appreciation for the glossary and pronunciation guide that were provided with the book. I always appreciate when an author provides references like this in a fantasy book, and I like to acknowledge when it happens.
Thank you to the author and Shannon at Reads and Reels Book Tours for providing me with a complimentary review copy of The Rise of the Raidin. I appreciate the opportunity to read and review the book immensely! Please note - I voluntarily read and reviewed The Rise of the Raidin. All opinions expressed in the review are my own and not influenced in any way.
The Rise of the Raidin by Susan L. Markloff is an amazing new urban fantasy book complete with lots of fantastical creatures and unique powers for our heroine. Readers who pick up The Rise of the Raidin can expect an action-packed entertaining read. On the surface, Jen has a fairly average life for a high schooler. In reality, she has to balance the regular teenager things with the other side of her double life and her new abilities. Will she able to help defend her school and determine what’s really be happening before it's too late?
The worldbuilding was the shining star of this book. I loved all the different species of creatures that made an appearance in this book. I enjoyed how the setting was split between various places on Earth and other locations. And I will reiterate something I’ve said in many other reviews - dragons make every story better, no matter what.
The pace of this book was also well executed. Undoubtedly a page-turner, there was never a moment when the story was in danger of losing my attention and/or interest. The fight scenes were AMAZING. And that ending was a total cliffhanger - I can’t not read the second book now, because I need to know what happens next.
Overall, a fantastic young adult fantasy read. I would recommend this book to those who would enjoy an urban fantasy story with great worldbuilding and hilarious banter between characters. I look forward to reading the next installment in The Human-Born Era series in the future! As a side note from my review, I want to express my appreciation for the glossary and pronunciation guide that were provided with the book. I always appreciate when an author provides references like this in a fantasy book, and I like to acknowledge when it happens.
Thank you to the author and Shannon at Reads and Reels Book Tours for providing me with a complimentary review copy of The Rise of the Raidin. I appreciate the opportunity to read and review the book immensely! Please note - I voluntarily read and reviewed The Rise of the Raidin. All opinions expressed in the review are my own and not influenced in any way.
May 31, 2024
Jennifer Monroe seems like an ordinary eighteen-year-old girl, living a typical, uneventful life with a small circle of friends. That is, until her world is upended by the arrival of two imposing men, a goofball, a werewolf, and two large four-legged creatures about a year ago. This encounter sets the stage for an extraordinary journey. Now, Jennifer leads a double life. By day, she is just a high school student. By night, she transforms into a dragon slayer and a fierce warrior in training. But her worlds collide in a spectacular way when a dragon crashes into her high school.
The Rise of the Raidin, by Susan L. Markoff, masterfully blends the realms of fantasy with the mundane, creating a captivating and thrilling narrative. The book is beautifully illustrated by Gabrielle Ragusi and Michaella Barnum, which enhances the immersive experience of this "not so average" teenager's adventures. The story itself is engaging, exciting, and visually stimulating. Even without the illustrations, Markoff's vivid descriptions allow readers to vividly imagine the world she has crafted.
The narration is consistently entertaining, ensuring that the reader's interest never wanes. The fight scenes are particularly impressive. They are depicted with such realism and perfect pacing that it feels as though you are watching a movie unfold. Jennifer's character introduction leaves a bit of mystery, sparking curiosity about her background and character development. This intriguing enigma adds depth to the story, making readers eager to learn more about the main character as the plot unfolds.
The Rise of the Raidin is an entertaining read with extraordinary world-building. The story stays with you long after you've finished it. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a thrilling fantasy adventure.
The Rise of the Raidin, by Susan L. Markoff, masterfully blends the realms of fantasy with the mundane, creating a captivating and thrilling narrative. The book is beautifully illustrated by Gabrielle Ragusi and Michaella Barnum, which enhances the immersive experience of this "not so average" teenager's adventures. The story itself is engaging, exciting, and visually stimulating. Even without the illustrations, Markoff's vivid descriptions allow readers to vividly imagine the world she has crafted.
The narration is consistently entertaining, ensuring that the reader's interest never wanes. The fight scenes are particularly impressive. They are depicted with such realism and perfect pacing that it feels as though you are watching a movie unfold. Jennifer's character introduction leaves a bit of mystery, sparking curiosity about her background and character development. This intriguing enigma adds depth to the story, making readers eager to learn more about the main character as the plot unfolds.
The Rise of the Raidin is an entertaining read with extraordinary world-building. The story stays with you long after you've finished it. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a thrilling fantasy adventure.
March 4, 2022
4.5 Stars
The synopsis gives me total Buffy vibes! I ended up enjoying this just as much as I hoped I would! This is a pretty clean YA paranormal novel. Just a little bit of swearing but no sex or too gory fighting.
Ok so the few things that were bothersome - first, I felt Jen was really annoying at the beginning of the book. She's self centered and a complete teenager in that whole I know everything so I'm gonna do whatever I want and ignore others that know better. Second, the book just jumps off with no info. Thankfully, there's a glossary in the back that helped me figure things out until the explanation comes around page 150. There's a lot going on between the fact that she has powers and the different species of alien types that it gets confusing fast. Plus, there's a whole nother world and political system. But once you get it all figured out buckle up because this is a fun fast paced novel!!
I really enjoy all of Jen's relationships! The way she lives and gets along with her family and especially her sister. And I enjoy her group of friends and the way they unconditionally get each other. Their loyalty to each other is admirable and fun to read. My favorite part? Jen and her Zaheri!! I love the found family trope!! They way they just get each other but still manage to annoy each other was so much fun. The banter is great!! I love that Jen isn't in love with her mentor even though he's ridiculously good looking. It's a nice change! Also, I love the chosen one trope! The relationships are the best part! But that doesn't take away from the battle scenes! They're freakin epic!! Well written and very entertaining!
I honestly can't wait to read the next book in this series! It's a fun YA sci-fi paranormal read!!
The synopsis gives me total Buffy vibes! I ended up enjoying this just as much as I hoped I would! This is a pretty clean YA paranormal novel. Just a little bit of swearing but no sex or too gory fighting.
Ok so the few things that were bothersome - first, I felt Jen was really annoying at the beginning of the book. She's self centered and a complete teenager in that whole I know everything so I'm gonna do whatever I want and ignore others that know better. Second, the book just jumps off with no info. Thankfully, there's a glossary in the back that helped me figure things out until the explanation comes around page 150. There's a lot going on between the fact that she has powers and the different species of alien types that it gets confusing fast. Plus, there's a whole nother world and political system. But once you get it all figured out buckle up because this is a fun fast paced novel!!
I really enjoy all of Jen's relationships! The way she lives and gets along with her family and especially her sister. And I enjoy her group of friends and the way they unconditionally get each other. Their loyalty to each other is admirable and fun to read. My favorite part? Jen and her Zaheri!! I love the found family trope!! They way they just get each other but still manage to annoy each other was so much fun. The banter is great!! I love that Jen isn't in love with her mentor even though he's ridiculously good looking. It's a nice change! Also, I love the chosen one trope! The relationships are the best part! But that doesn't take away from the battle scenes! They're freakin epic!! Well written and very entertaining!
I honestly can't wait to read the next book in this series! It's a fun YA sci-fi paranormal read!!
April 29, 2023
4/5 stars - cool, action-packed urban fantasy book.
The Rise of the Raidin is an action-packed urban fantasy book. Rise features a large cast of characters which is a lot of fun (my personal favorite is Krelien). They're funny and have a good group dynamic.
Rise also includes a number of original creatures. It's really cool, but it did make the first chapter a little confusing. Since the main character, Jen is already aware of her connection to this world; we don't get to learn about it with her. Instead, we have to catch up. Luckily, there is a glossary in the back of the book. A quick look over that made things much clearer.
As I mentioned before, Jen already knows about the fantasy world she's involved in, the World of Tilion. On the one hand, I wish we were learning about the World of Tilion with Jen, but at the same time, I like that she had been training for over a year. Her abilities/training was well handled. It felt realistic, which is good considering so much of Rise was action.
Rise was different from most books I read. I usually stick with the classic fantasy quest books, but Rise isn't a quest book (although there is travel teased for the sequel, so that should be fun). It centers around one major event/day and the action/fighting involved. It may not be my usual style, but I really enjoyed Rise.
Before I end this review, I want to circle back to Krelien. I love him so much! He is introduced as a fun, comic relief character, but the more we get to know him, the more depth we see. I'm really excited to see how he develops across the series (and to see how many phrases he messes up).
In short, Rise was a great book, and I'll absolutely be continuing the series.
The Rise of the Raidin is an action-packed urban fantasy book. Rise features a large cast of characters which is a lot of fun (my personal favorite is Krelien). They're funny and have a good group dynamic.
Rise also includes a number of original creatures. It's really cool, but it did make the first chapter a little confusing. Since the main character, Jen is already aware of her connection to this world; we don't get to learn about it with her. Instead, we have to catch up. Luckily, there is a glossary in the back of the book. A quick look over that made things much clearer.
As I mentioned before, Jen already knows about the fantasy world she's involved in, the World of Tilion. On the one hand, I wish we were learning about the World of Tilion with Jen, but at the same time, I like that she had been training for over a year. Her abilities/training was well handled. It felt realistic, which is good considering so much of Rise was action.
Rise was different from most books I read. I usually stick with the classic fantasy quest books, but Rise isn't a quest book (although there is travel teased for the sequel, so that should be fun). It centers around one major event/day and the action/fighting involved. It may not be my usual style, but I really enjoyed Rise.
Before I end this review, I want to circle back to Krelien. I love him so much! He is introduced as a fun, comic relief character, but the more we get to know him, the more depth we see. I'm really excited to see how he develops across the series (and to see how many phrases he messes up).
In short, Rise was a great book, and I'll absolutely be continuing the series.
March 23, 2022
The synopsis was very intriguing that I was quite excited to read this book. Unfortunately, there are some things that didn't make me fully enjoyed this story.
Let's talk about the good things first.
I really like the concept of the plot where the main character is living a double life, a good student during the day but a badass girl training with to fight dragons at night. How cool is that ?!
This story is packed with lots of action scenes with unique and fascinating world building as well as different magical creatures in it.
Despite it all being good, some parts of the story got me confused which can pull me out of the story sometimes.
There's not a lot of explanation until halfway into the story about how the other world came to exist, the main character's hybrid abilities or anything about her protectors from the other world. It makes me feel like I was thrown in the middle of something.
It would've been less confusing if there are some flashback scenes to where the main character first know about this hidden world that she's actually a part of. A brief explanation throughout the story instead of giving long details about each creature in the glossary. So, the reader can have a glimpse of what's happening as the story progress.
Overall, it was an okay read for me. To be honest, it has potentials to become a great series. Dragons, werewolves and a big prophecy will surely attract fantasy readers.
I hope there will be more explanation as the story progress if there's ever new things being introduced to the series.
I received an advance review copy for free from BookSirens, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Let's talk about the good things first.
I really like the concept of the plot where the main character is living a double life, a good student during the day but a badass girl training with to fight dragons at night. How cool is that ?!
This story is packed with lots of action scenes with unique and fascinating world building as well as different magical creatures in it.
Despite it all being good, some parts of the story got me confused which can pull me out of the story sometimes.
There's not a lot of explanation until halfway into the story about how the other world came to exist, the main character's hybrid abilities or anything about her protectors from the other world. It makes me feel like I was thrown in the middle of something.
It would've been less confusing if there are some flashback scenes to where the main character first know about this hidden world that she's actually a part of. A brief explanation throughout the story instead of giving long details about each creature in the glossary. So, the reader can have a glimpse of what's happening as the story progress.
Overall, it was an okay read for me. To be honest, it has potentials to become a great series. Dragons, werewolves and a big prophecy will surely attract fantasy readers.
I hope there will be more explanation as the story progress if there's ever new things being introduced to the series.
I received an advance review copy for free from BookSirens, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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March 31, 2026A charming, high-energy debut where the quiet girl becomes the dragon slayer
Susan L Markloff delivers exactly what the premise promises: an eighteen year old who believes herself average until two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four legged creatures barge into her life. Jennifer Monroe's double life, mild mannered high schooler by day and raw energy wielding warrior in training by night, creates genuine tension between the ordinary and epic.
What distinguishes this from standard chosen one narratives is Markloff's commitment to Jen's self perception as forgettable. She juggles SAT scores and papers while mastering flight, keeps her hybrid abilities hidden from friends and family, maintains college track focus even as her protectors prepare her for dragon slaying. The November morning when a dragon crashes through clouds heralding an army to her high school transforms her carefully constructed balance into impossible demand. The realization that there is a whole lot more going on than she originally thought feels earned rather than arbitrary because Jen has spent a year learning precisely how extraordinary she must become. With 58 ratings and 35 reviews indicating solid reader engagement, this series launch demonstrates the power of trusting young adult readers with protagonists who resist their own heroism. For fans of "Percy Jackson" or "The Mortal Instruments," this offers similar pleasures with distinctive focus on the mundane costs of magical destiny.
Susan L Markloff delivers exactly what the premise promises: an eighteen year old who believes herself average until two imposing men, a complete goofball, a werewolf, and two large four legged creatures barge into her life. Jennifer Monroe's double life, mild mannered high schooler by day and raw energy wielding warrior in training by night, creates genuine tension between the ordinary and epic.
What distinguishes this from standard chosen one narratives is Markloff's commitment to Jen's self perception as forgettable. She juggles SAT scores and papers while mastering flight, keeps her hybrid abilities hidden from friends and family, maintains college track focus even as her protectors prepare her for dragon slaying. The November morning when a dragon crashes through clouds heralding an army to her high school transforms her carefully constructed balance into impossible demand. The realization that there is a whole lot more going on than she originally thought feels earned rather than arbitrary because Jen has spent a year learning precisely how extraordinary she must become. With 58 ratings and 35 reviews indicating solid reader engagement, this series launch demonstrates the power of trusting young adult readers with protagonists who resist their own heroism. For fans of "Percy Jackson" or "The Mortal Instruments," this offers similar pleasures with distinctive focus on the mundane costs of magical destiny.
August 1, 2025
I really enjoyed this book. All the characters had great personalities, and while it takes a hot minute to get used to all the names, powers, and worldbuilding going on, there's a spoiler-free Glossary in the back that's super helpful!
I was a little confused at the beginning, because it never mentioned the moment Jen learned of her nature. It's just a year and a half later when she's off training that we start. Also, the POV really confused me for a minute. I thought it was third limited (or third close, depending on what you call it), where you only see through one set of eyes at a time, but this POV is more cinematic, switching POV's quickly. While it was confusing, I eventually got the hang of it, and had fun with the story.
Content: As said by the author herself, about the level of a PG 13 Marvel movie, mild swearing (not by MC's), some crude name-calling, and violence. I liked the more detailed battle scenes, but I know it's not for everyone. Many times do characters come out with blood all over (which is realistic and not mentioned in many novels, so I liked the mix-up)
Romance is one kiss by a side character, and crush between FMC and side character
Maybe the only reason this didn't get five stars was the Epiloge. It was about the bad guy, and kinda creepy. Let's just say, I'm concered for his mental health...
I'll probably read the next one in the series just to see if the series progresses well and makes things better, because I do like the characters and want to see them kick the bad guy's backside. Cause he's a creepster.
Might recommend? For epic fantasy fans who love in-depth worldbuilding like Lord of the Rings and Cosmere, at about a Brandon Sanderson maturity level. Did enjoy, will probably read the next one to see if series is worth finishing!
I was a little confused at the beginning, because it never mentioned the moment Jen learned of her nature. It's just a year and a half later when she's off training that we start. Also, the POV really confused me for a minute. I thought it was third limited (or third close, depending on what you call it), where you only see through one set of eyes at a time, but this POV is more cinematic, switching POV's quickly. While it was confusing, I eventually got the hang of it, and had fun with the story.
Content: As said by the author herself, about the level of a PG 13 Marvel movie, mild swearing (not by MC's), some crude name-calling, and violence. I liked the more detailed battle scenes, but I know it's not for everyone. Many times do characters come out with blood all over (which is realistic and not mentioned in many novels, so I liked the mix-up)
Romance is one kiss by a side character, and crush between FMC and side character
Maybe the only reason this didn't get five stars was the Epiloge. It was about the bad guy, and kinda creepy. Let's just say, I'm concered for his mental health...
I'll probably read the next one in the series just to see if the series progresses well and makes things better, because I do like the characters and want to see them kick the bad guy's backside. Cause he's a creepster.
Might recommend? For epic fantasy fans who love in-depth worldbuilding like Lord of the Rings and Cosmere, at about a Brandon Sanderson maturity level. Did enjoy, will probably read the next one to see if series is worth finishing!
January 4, 2024
Rise of Raidin follows the story of eighteen-year-old Jennifer Monroe as she refines the use of her powers and discovers just how great a role she plays in defeating a powerful enemy. This book is a great combination of action, great character development, and some heart felt moments between characters, making for a well-balanced read!
Jennifer is one of the most realistic main characters I’ve ever had the pleasure of getting to know, and her character growth was easily one of my favorites parts of this book.
Surrounding Jennifer is a whole cast of diverse characters both from planet Earth and a whole different realm! From other human-like individuals to humanoid animals to dragons and dragon hybrids, the fantasy elements of this book was well-fleshed out. I only wish I had pictures to refer to whenever a creature was mentioned, just so I could have a clearer image of what it looked like while I was reading.
While I really enjoyed reading Rise of Raidin, there was something that poked out at me while reading. The story started in the middle. Much of Jennifer’s early training and meeting her Zaheri, or protectors, was cut out of this book. At the point the story starts, she’s already used to her powers, and the bonds built between her and her Zaheri are already forged. As a result, I felt really confused when I started reading, but the ride became smoother as the book went on. In my opinion, the plot, character development, and twist ending made up for it.
So, Rise of Raidin rating:
3.5/5 and highly recommend if you like a great twist on the fantasy genre, a balanced book with great action and character development, and an eyebrow-raising twist ending.
Jennifer is one of the most realistic main characters I’ve ever had the pleasure of getting to know, and her character growth was easily one of my favorites parts of this book.
Surrounding Jennifer is a whole cast of diverse characters both from planet Earth and a whole different realm! From other human-like individuals to humanoid animals to dragons and dragon hybrids, the fantasy elements of this book was well-fleshed out. I only wish I had pictures to refer to whenever a creature was mentioned, just so I could have a clearer image of what it looked like while I was reading.
While I really enjoyed reading Rise of Raidin, there was something that poked out at me while reading. The story started in the middle. Much of Jennifer’s early training and meeting her Zaheri, or protectors, was cut out of this book. At the point the story starts, she’s already used to her powers, and the bonds built between her and her Zaheri are already forged. As a result, I felt really confused when I started reading, but the ride became smoother as the book went on. In my opinion, the plot, character development, and twist ending made up for it.
So, Rise of Raidin rating:
3.5/5 and highly recommend if you like a great twist on the fantasy genre, a balanced book with great action and character development, and an eyebrow-raising twist ending.
January 21, 2022
High school girl against a group of monsters. The synopsis of this book gave me Percy Jackson vibes but with a female main protagonist so I thought I would really get into it. However, I spent much of the first part of the book confused. I felt like I missed a book somehow and started the series in the second book. While the writing and banter between the characters was well-done, better explanations of the creatures you encounter would have been helpful. As you get deeper into the story, you begin to understand better what Jen really is but I think I would have been more engaged in the story earlier if there had been a brief explanation about what a Zaheri actually is or why they didn’t approach her until she was 17 to explain her powers. I found after the fact a lot of info after the epilogue but I wonder why that wasn’t just worked into the story. Maybe it was just not my main genre but this one wasn’t really my cup of tea.
I received an advanced free copy of this book from BookSirens and this is my honest review.
I received an advanced free copy of this book from BookSirens and this is my honest review.
August 4, 2023
This was a great YA read and just in general a great sci-fi and fantasy read. I love YA reads when people are still in high school and this was a fantastic high school book filled with drama and also so much more!
This is about Jennifer who is living a double life with normal school and then at night she is a warrior. Well in training but who can say that's a bad thing;) And then there is this boy who she likes, and he is a normal boy too of course, so yeah there's that. Jennifer can wield energy and kick butt too. So that is a doomed relationship it seems, but one can't tell.
This book was well written, and the characters were well developed too! I love this author's writing style! She really captures high school drama well and other wordly drama too!
And I would be interested to see where the story goes in the next book with Jennifer and Cregorous heads.
This is about Jennifer who is living a double life with normal school and then at night she is a warrior. Well in training but who can say that's a bad thing;) And then there is this boy who she likes, and he is a normal boy too of course, so yeah there's that. Jennifer can wield energy and kick butt too. So that is a doomed relationship it seems, but one can't tell.
This book was well written, and the characters were well developed too! I love this author's writing style! She really captures high school drama well and other wordly drama too!
And I would be interested to see where the story goes in the next book with Jennifer and Cregorous heads.
June 18, 2023
The first book from The Human Born Era series, The Rise of the Raidin, is, also, the first book I have read by Susan L Markloff. I thought it was an interesting book to read. It was full of action, adventure, and magic. Even though it took me a few chapters to get into it, I was captivated from start to end. I liked it.
I am giving The Rise of the Raidin four stars. I believe fans of young adult paranormal and fantasy fiction will want to give this one a read. I would be interested to finding out what happens next in the follow up in The Human Born Era, The Ties That Bind.
I received a hard cover copy of Susan L Markloff's The Rise of the Raidin from the publisher, but was not required to write a positive review. This review is one hundred percent my own honest opinion.
I am giving The Rise of the Raidin four stars. I believe fans of young adult paranormal and fantasy fiction will want to give this one a read. I would be interested to finding out what happens next in the follow up in The Human Born Era, The Ties That Bind.
I received a hard cover copy of Susan L Markloff's The Rise of the Raidin from the publisher, but was not required to write a positive review. This review is one hundred percent my own honest opinion.
January 21, 2022
The Rise of the Raidin is Book 1 in The Human-Born Era by Susan K Markloff. This fantasy is interesting. Jennifer is a contemporary teenager living on Earth and in High School. Oh, she also has energy power. She trains in a different dimension at night and goes to school during the day. Until a Dragon shows up at school and Jennifer must save everyone! This story has so much action along with werewolves, dragons, and other creatures. I thought the characters were well developed and the writing was interesting and had a good pace. I enjoyed this book and am looking forward to reading Book 2 and seeing what happens next. I received an arc for free and am leaving my review voluntarily.
January 13, 2022
An interesting and fun story. I love the main character. She is strong and gutsy. I would have liked a little more description of all of the characters. But overall they seemed great. It has an entertaining plot with lots of interaction and fighting. No sexual content but there is teen crushes. I recommend it for all ages. I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
January 7, 2024
This is such a great read! I need a TV show or movie ASAP!
The characters are amazing, the story is so elaborate and detailed, the world building is *chefs kiss*! I HIGHLY recommend this book to anyone who loves fun character dynamics, urban fantasy or amazing world building!
The characters are amazing, the story is so elaborate and detailed, the world building is *chefs kiss*! I HIGHLY recommend this book to anyone who loves fun character dynamics, urban fantasy or amazing world building!
May 30, 2024
Omg that ending. Loved the details in this and what they’re fighting for. It had a little bit of a clean/YA version of Crescent City feel to it with it being urban fantasy with a sitcom comedy to it.
March 1, 2025
Very exciting read, especially for someone who is familiar with the halls of “Southridge” high school’s inspiration. This is a cool fantasy world that Markloff has created and the characters are well developed.
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