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The Heartfelt Life of Max Hartfield: A Middle Falls Time Travel Short Story
When he was sent to Hartfield Academy, he adopted an entirely new family, including a brother, Max. Almost 40 years after he arrived at the academy, Michael and Max still live their quiet life where they shape boys into men and men into soldiers.
A trip to the war memorials in Washington D.C. turns out to be too much for Max and he begins to fade. Max has always depended on Michael for everything, but in the end, who is really depending on who?
The Heartfelt Life of Max Hartfield is a Middle Falls Time Travel short story. It includes a bonus note from the author.
A trip to the war memorials in Washington D.C. turns out to be too much for Max and he begins to fade. Max has always depended on Michael for everything, but in the end, who is really depending on who?
The Heartfelt Life of Max Hartfield is a Middle Falls Time Travel short story. It includes a bonus note from the author.
43 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 16, 2021
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May 28, 2022
This short story absolutely tugged on all the strings of my heart ❤️❤️❤️!
July 2, 2022
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Nice to finally get back to this series:)
This will pull on your heartstrings, it was nice to come back and visit with these two.
Nice to finally get back to this series:)
This will pull on your heartstrings, it was nice to come back and visit with these two.
May 28, 2022
For all that this book is labeled Max Hartfield, it is told from the POV of Michael Hollister. It was really nice getting a reprise--since not only was he probably my favorite Middle Falls book, but he is also one of the few that we never got to see him past his twenties. We left him happily ensconced as the heir to Hartfield Academy, and didn't get to see him cycle his way to the end.
Here, the focus is on Max, but it's really a buddy story about two brothers of the heart: Max & Michael. It is a heartfelt capstone to Michael's story, and the ending especially tugs on the heartstrings.
Here, the focus is on Max, but it's really a buddy story about two brothers of the heart: Max & Michael. It is a heartfelt capstone to Michael's story, and the ending especially tugs on the heartstrings.
September 25, 2022
I am not sure how I never left a review for this book so I thought I should rectify that. I know a person with Downs Syndrome and if you do then you know that they are absolute blessings to everyone who knows them. Max Hartfield is no exception, I think Shawn Inmon must have some experience with someone with Downs based on some of the challenges that Max faces and his reactions to them. I will warn you this one will choke you up at times. So if you do not want a book to possibly make your suddenly have allergies or dust in the air you might want to skip this one. If you like getting kicked in the feels then pick this up and give it a read.
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October 3, 2022
I've read(listened t0) books 1-14 in the Middle Falls series. It's a premise that really intrigues me. I saw that there were a couple "bitty books" that were companions, and during an Audible sale, this was under $1, so I bought it - not really even reading the blurb.
As I started this ... IF this had a number (it doesn't, but authors often give their novella's fractional numbers so readers know where they fall in the series). While this series does tend to build (sometimes there are past characters reappearing for small parts), some of them don't really matter if they are read out of order. This bitty book would be 2.5 ... picking up after the events of book 2.
While the title character is Max, it's not Max's POV ... it's Micheal ... Micheal Hollister. I hadn't remembered Max right off (to have placed this book with a character already introduced earlier in the series), but it didn't take me too long to have recollections of Max, and how he and Micheal were connected and where this fit into the overall storyline.
I really liked this small story - it was short, started and finished easily in one day. Glad I picked it up ... may need to give book #2 a relisten to remember Max more.
As I started this ... IF this had a number (it doesn't, but authors often give their novella's fractional numbers so readers know where they fall in the series). While this series does tend to build (sometimes there are past characters reappearing for small parts), some of them don't really matter if they are read out of order. This bitty book would be 2.5 ... picking up after the events of book 2.
While the title character is Max, it's not Max's POV ... it's Micheal ... Micheal Hollister. I hadn't remembered Max right off (to have placed this book with a character already introduced earlier in the series), but it didn't take me too long to have recollections of Max, and how he and Micheal were connected and where this fit into the overall storyline.
I really liked this small story - it was short, started and finished easily in one day. Glad I picked it up ... may need to give book #2 a relisten to remember Max more.
September 4, 2025
Boring up until a clever twist at the very end. If you haven't read the previous books in the series to have a clue what it meant. I probably won't read further into the series because at this point it feels less like the continuation of interesting stories and characters and more like algorithm, clever marketing, and rehash
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November 18, 2021GREAT Christmas Story for all to enjoy
This is what I love most about Shawn's writing - a character from a book gets to have their 'story' told.
This one to me is a story of Brothers who choose each other- we should all be so lucky.
This is what I love most about Shawn's writing - a character from a book gets to have their 'story' told.
This one to me is a story of Brothers who choose each other- we should all be so lucky.
November 22, 2021
A Wonderful Tale.
Without spoilers, this is a warm and heartfelt story. A perfect novella to read during the holidays. Highly recommended for anyone who enjoys family-based stories.
Without spoilers, this is a warm and heartfelt story. A perfect novella to read during the holidays. Highly recommended for anyone who enjoys family-based stories.
April 18, 2022
It's a good (and a little bit) heartwarming story, although there's no time travel in it, although a little twist at the end. I felt like I spent my money unnecessarily on this one. The only part I liked about this story was that it feels like the epilogue of Michael Hollister.
May 23, 2022
Another great Middle Falls book. This is a short story, but don’t read it until you have read the first and second books of the series. A nice story with familiar characters and a nice little twist at the end.
November 4, 2024
I love all the Middle Falls books
Reading all the Middle Falls books and love everyone of them. They make me laugh and cry. The stories are so touching. I only have a few left but these are stories I can read again.
Reading all the Middle Falls books and love everyone of them. They make me laugh and cry. The stories are so touching. I only have a few left but these are stories I can read again.
January 1, 2026
This was a short story that revisited Michael Hollister and his “brother” Max Hartfield. I enjoyed getting the chance to read more about Michael and Max. It was a very short story, but I did enjoy how it concluded.
August 6, 2026
Micheal and Max still live together at Hartford after 40 years. Micheal plans a Washington D.C trip that goes bad when Max gets ill. Micheal realizes he needed Max just as much. Max and Micheal both end up passing through this book peacefully.
November 10, 2021
Cozy little story that will only make sense to - or be appreciated by - readers familiar with the rest of the series
November 17, 2021
💜😌
It’s short, but a beautiful read. Hopefully, if you’ve the earlier books in this series, you’d get the full impact of Michael and Max’s story.
It’s short, but a beautiful read. Hopefully, if you’ve the earlier books in this series, you’d get the full impact of Michael and Max’s story.
November 21, 2021
lovely
Middle falls stories are always touching, Max and Michael’s especially so. Great series, one of those you buy without even reading the synopsis.
Middle falls stories are always touching, Max and Michael’s especially so. Great series, one of those you buy without even reading the synopsis.
November 21, 2021
Great series
As with all of the series which I have now this is a wonderful story with just a little twist right on the last page
As with all of the series which I have now this is a wonderful story with just a little twist right on the last page
November 27, 2021
The heartfelt Life of Max Hartfield
A good short story. A nice ending to the series. The exhibits are inspiring and emotional for those that lived through them.
A good short story. A nice ending to the series. The exhibits are inspiring and emotional for those that lived through them.
December 15, 2021
This was such a touching little story, I was wondering what happened at the Academy.
August 26, 2022
This made me believe in how the people that cross paths with us do so because there is a higher plan in motion. How beautiful that is. If only we appreciated it more. Life is better because of the people we get to share it with, and they walk with us until we don't need them anymore... And that is fine, too.
August 30, 2023
Such a great addition to the Middle Falls stories. A quick listen on audible and I had tears in my eyes at the end.
November 20, 2023
This short fit nicely into the series where it belonged.
December 7, 2023
I loved this character and the Micheal story very much.
June 1, 2024
Love
Loved this short sweet story. Max’s response to Curt’s question about why it took him so long to reach Heaven, “Michael needed me”. Was so heart warming.
Loved this short sweet story. Max’s response to Curt’s question about why it took him so long to reach Heaven, “Michael needed me”. Was so heart warming.
June 21, 2024
Not long enough to be as heartfelt as one may want. Touching ending.
October 13, 2024
Brothers' love
Caring for someone else was such a special thing. Michael truly cared for Max. Max as well was a truly loving person.
Caring for someone else was such a special thing. Michael truly cared for Max. Max as well was a truly loving person.
November 19, 2025
I'm still not crying. You are too.
I'm glad it ended the way it did. I won't ruin it for anyone . Not as much of a tear jerker as the last
I'm glad it ended the way it did. I won't ruin it for anyone . Not as much of a tear jerker as the last
February 9, 2026
Good Ol' Max!
What a wonderful surprise to find this short story about Max after just finishing Books 1 and 2. Delightful twist in the story. I loved it.
What a wonderful surprise to find this short story about Max after just finishing Books 1 and 2. Delightful twist in the story. I loved it.
May 22, 2026
Max is adorable. This was a nice book to read
May 14, 2022
Always love these stories. I wonder what Max’s life was like before Hollister’s Redemption.
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