Okay I have to explain why this is a 5-star read for me, because I seriously contemplated DNFing this one a number of times. Yet here we are, on my favourites shelf.
AT its essence - this book surprised me. It went in directions I wasn't expecting. Let me see if I can make sense of this. Full full spoilers.
The book opened with Harrison walking the reader through how he became engaged. Harrison feels that it's time for him to get married as he's a baron. He's not an emotive guy and isn't prone to strong feeling so he goes about his marriage rather unconventionally. Rather than courting someone, he essentially makes kind of like a pro con list until he lands on a lady that suits him. And by suits him, she's someone from a good family who holds a good reputation. Interestingly, Harrison's introduction didn't put me off side. Despite his objectively wrong way of going about a marriage, he was still sympathetic and enjoyable as a character. What added to this was being able to see his motivations. Harrison cares about his tenants. He's disapproving of his late father's terrible actions which deeply affected his mother. He worries about his wastrel brother despite him being seemingly irredeemable. He loves loves loves his half sister and craves acceptance from her. We get all this from the jump.
We also get an insight into why Harrison has gone about arranging a marriage this way. After settling on one lady, he goes through her father to arrange the engagement (all without meeting her). Again, objectively not great, but it reads well - as a emotionally closed off man trying to organise his life in a rather bumbling way.
Which takes me to Adelaide. And boy of boy, this was where Connolly lost me, then eventually won me over. Here was my live progress as I delved deeper into the book.
- 7.0% "Sooo Adeiade's a piece of work. Hopefully she improves soon or this will not be an enjoyable read."
Our introduction to Adelaide, was not at all like Harrison's. We don't get to see her before she was engaged. We don't see her finding out about the engagement. We meet her as Harrison meets her. What I'm trying to say is we don't know anything about Adelaide or her motivations before Harrision meets her. And when he meets her, she's terrible.
She's clearly unhappy that her parents have arranged a marriage for her. She's disgusted that Harrison didn't even bother to go through her but rather over the top of her head. I get that. But the way it's presented is...well...shrewish. Because I didn't know what Adelaide was supposed to be, this was all very hard to take. She was outspokenly rude and incredibly abrasive. She would start several arguments, then get offended when the heat she was putting out there was returned. Because the book started off with Harrison, and laid his background really well. The natural response to Adelaide's caustic outbursts were to dislike Adelaide, because it felt like she wasn't being fair (at best) and was being incredibly immature (at worst).
- 10% "Certainly the most spoiled, and without a doubt the most unpleasant." An actual quote from the book, where Harrison was musing on Adelaide's terrible personality.
In any case, Harrison decides to press forward with the marriage despite not liking Adelaide and being aware that Adelaide despised him. At this point I was so close to calling it a day. But I kept going because despite my deep dislike for Adelaide, I was hooked.
At this stage I thought I knew how the book would go. I was like ohh Adelaide is super spoiled (which was not what I was expecting going into the book for some reason, I think I've been reading a lot of books lately where everyone is super mature and reasonable). This book is her growth arc of realising she's been terrible and becoming a better person. Not so much. Or kind of but not that directly.
So Adelaide and Harrison marry and move tho Cornwall. Adelaide is still being shrewish but here is where Connelly struck the perfect balance in tone. Adelaide is objectively annoying. She's selfish, abrasive, vain and more than a little vapid. And boy does she have a temper. Mishandled she's irredeemable and unreadable. But how Connelly shaped Adelaide was through Harrison's eyes. Harrison sees Adelaide exactly for what she is, but he doesn't get overly bother by it. There are moments he gets irritated for sure, but he's mostly amused by her. He provokes her to get a rise out of her, for amusement (but he's never cruel). He enters the arguments she starts but with a dry wit. This takes the heat out of the Adelaide balloon and you start to warm up to her.
-32.0% "yeah okay alright i smiled"
About 30% in I started really really enjoying it. I started seeing Adelaide a little more clearly. As an incredible sheltered person who is entirely self-absorbed because of it. She isn't inately cruel or bad, she just doesn't know better. Again, we see this more though Harrison.
What also helps with all of this is the nuance of Harrison's characterisation. Because Adelaide is such a lightning rod, it's easy to view Harrison as always correct in his behaviour. But he himself tells the audience how he falls short. He owns up to how his approach to his engagement is largely to blame for Adelaide's reaction (something I hadn't considered until he broached it). And there are so many instances of this self awareness and accountability.
As the book progresses, Adelaide doesn't.....change. Not exactly. She's still the same person, but softer. And this too was delightfully surprising. Like I said, we see Adelaide through Harrison's (even though it's dual POV). So as he softens towards her, we do too. Instead of seeing her as crazy, he acknowledges that she's intense and yes at times very vapid, but he's mostly amused by her. He also grows to respect her. This meant that if all those things that made her interesting to Harrison was completely stripped away it would have felt like a betrayal to the journey that reader had been taken on. Instead by the end of the book Adelaide is still Adelaide, still super intense, but softer, warmer and better (certainly less abrasive).
I haven't touched on everything such as Harrison's sister and brother, but everything was handled perfectly. For example, as soon as Harrison's brother was introduced, I was like oh here we go, the villain. And yes he was a bad guy but he didn't take over the story. He was present in moments but ultimately this was Harrison and Adelaide's story on their journey to make their marriage work.
I just love a married couple story, it's so much more interesting than a courtship story, because the author can do interesting things with plot and pacing.
In any case, this book went from a potential DNF to a 5 star, and there's nothing I love more than when an author wins me over and completely surprises me.
Re-read 2024 comments: this is even better on the re-read. Because I knew what to expect, I wasn't taken on an emotional rollercoaster of trying to figure out if I liked the characters or not and could enjoy the journey even more. I definitely picked up on way more the second time round and appreciated the expert characterisations so much more. Still one of my absolute favourite reads.