Actual rating 4.5 stars rounded up to 5.
I thoroughly enjoyed this second book in the Journal Through Time series by Sarah Stephens. In this novel, The Hanging at the Hollow Tree, Stephens has given readers another well-crafted semi-cozy mystery that is even better than the first, which I also enjoyed immensely.
This second book gives us more insight and background on both Riley Finch's and Jack Winston's characters, so that they are becoming "real people." And there are some truly interesting secondary characters who are becoming more well rounded as well. I especially like the character development of Jack's constable, Thomas Miller. The mentor/protege relationship between these two men is quite satisfying to read about, and I expect (hope) that this continues to develop further. It's often frustrating in mysteries when you have a main detective who seems so irritatingly brilliant surrounded by inept or clueless underlings that there's no room for real character growth. Stephens has avoided this and given readers a respectful and collegial partnership, as well as a main detective who freely admits he is also learning his craft.
The mystery itself was intriguing and complex, and, while I had my suspicions about the person who was finally shown to be the perpetrator, there were enough plausible alternative suspects to make the final revelation not a foregone conclusion. I very much liked that there was a parallel situation going on in Riley's time that made her research for Jack's investigation all that more relevant and urgent. It added another layer to Riley's research activities and to the connection between these two distant partners.
I am eager to see how Riley's friendship deepens with Johnny Winston, Jack's great grandson. This could present some interesting issues in a later novel: will Johnny find out about Riley's magical communication with his ancestor, and what effect could that have on their relationship? And what if Jack learns of Riley's friendship with his descendant? Would it make their relationship more awkward or make them closer?
I found the writing and plotting effective. Stephens has a way with descriptions that really helps to set the scene well without being overwhelming, and the alternating timelines were not confusing to keep track of because of the connecting thread of the journal communication and the way the mystery unraveled. The writing is smooth; it doesn't get bogged down with overly complex sentence structures that make it hard to decipher what's going on or what is meant. I did see a couple of places with structural errors or missing words, but as this is an ARC, I assume (hope) these will be caught in a final proofreading pass.
My only quibble (hence the 1/2 star deduction) is feeling that a loose end was left hanging regarding how and why Reginald Sawyer became so prominent and wealthy - there was only a vague reference, and I was hoping for a bit more. But this does not detract from what is an enjoyable and intriguing mystery, and I look forward to the next in the series.
Thank you to Book Sirens and Sarah Stephens for the opportunity to read this Advanced Review Copy, which I received for free, and for which am leaving this honest review voluntarily.