Daring the Billionaire, Book 1 of The Billionaire Hart series (formerly known by the title Alpha Billionaire, and Book 2 of The Lords of Gotham series), was about Tristan "Tris" Hart, second oldest brother of the three Hart brothers who owned the Sterling Hotel together, and Laney Hathaway, textile designer.
Tristan, who always felt like he lived in the shadow of both his older and his younger brothers, had been going on a week-long "sex" cruise for many years. Known to the members as the "Devil cruise", it used to be an open "themed" cruise until too many people got involved and they had to make it more secret and exclusive. Before leaving for his most recent cruise, his cousin's wife dared him to just talk to a woman and get to know her rather than indulging in his usual escapades.
Laney, who had not only been working at her current job since she graduated college, had also been enamored with her coworker/boss for the last three years. When the head of the main boss of the company had handed out Christmas gifts, some of which were tickets for different cruises, Laney chose to go on the same one that her boss would be going on, (which just so happened to be the same cruise that Tristan would be on as well) with the idea of informing her boss of her feelings in hopes he would return them favorably.
Laney and Tris (as he was known by the members of the sex club that attended the yearly travel arrangements) met almost as soon as they embarked on the ship when she tripped and fell in front of him. From that point on, the two of them were almost constantly together. However, Laney was unaware of the reasons that both her boss and Tristan had chosen the cruise. She was under the impression it was just an ordinary trip. However, it didn't remain a secret for long.
There were so many things about this story that were funny, but there were just as many things that didn't quite gel together. While the angst and drama were high, the other emotions that filled the pages were more or less outrageously disproportionate for the circumstances to which they applied.
Tristan's character, which was supposed to be an Alpha of the sex club, was actually quite the introvert in "real life". I mean, whoever heard of an "Alpha" that blushed...A LOT?! Well, Tristan did throughout the cruise. He was more insecure than his cruise persona portrayed him to be, all due to the fact he was the middle son and had "daddy issues" because they were abandoned by their father at an early age. Laney, who was also abandoned by her mother, at least had her grandmother to raise her. However, even her character didn't quite fit the scene. She, too, was written to be more of an introvert than an extrovert. However, while on the cruise, she was the aggressor/instigator in her pursuit of both Tristan and her boss although once she met Tristan, her boss wasn't quite that important anymore.
The storyline and the plot were a tad incongruous and just fell flat for most of the book. Laney, who was going to pursue her boss, ended up with the "alpha" of a sex club who, for his part, was supposed to be this "great sex god" of the club, only to turn out to be something completely opposite. It all fell apart too easily. Even the relationship between Tristan and Laney was weak. The sexy scenes, the spice, and the chemistry were all at an extremely low level, especially since it was supposed to be a sex club cruise. The sexy scenes were too tame (not that I minded, but you'd think it would have been much more graphic given the idea behind the storyline, right?). Even the title was off. Tristan was dared by his cousin's wife...not by anyone on the cruise, but the dare happened in the prequel...NOT in this story. In fact, the cousin and his wife never made an appearance in this story at all.
Once again, this book had the potential to be a really good story, but it just didn't flow well enough to earn a rating higher than 3 stars. If you're going to write an "alpha male", you have to MAKE him the alpha and not a wimp. Tristan had such potential but he wasn't given the chance. Laney could have been better too. She started off strong, but she lost her backbone halfway through the story and never truly recovered it. I'd love to see the author take this book and re-work it. The characters definitely deserved better treatment.