The Short Version: A modern day Argentinian folktale that doubles as a discourse on immigration and otherness inside and outside our own communities that just failed to grab me and keep me captivated
The Long Version: I got to listen to the audiobook ARC of this title thanks to NetGalley and Macmillan Audio
This is a Fantasy title I hadn’t seen anywhere as a much anticipated title so I was surprised a story with such an intriguing description in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy realm had slipped past my notice.
Unfortunately this title just isn’t one I can shout from the rooftops as it was a bit of a chore to get through for me. The strange part about it is putting my finger on the problem(s) is a little difficult. The characters aren’t poorly constructed, though I didn’t really get invested into them. The plot marches along at a steady clip and there’s some twisting and turning, with mysterious supernatural powers being unraveled throughout. It’s just one of those books where despite a lot of elements that seem to stand solidly on their own, the story as a whole just doesn’t meld into a compelling narrative.
The first issue is that I didn’t realize until after reading that this was a sequel, so I’m sure a lot of that investment building occurred in the first book. I wasn’t willing to go back and explore the first book to try and re-evaluate so my opinions should be taken with a grain of salt. Also I do think a big part of the issue for me was the level of Spanglish in this story. There are portions where characters will speak in Spanish then the dialogue is repeated in English, there were also lots of places, concepts, etc… that were identified with Spanish names. I think if I read this as opposed to listening to the audiobook, it would have been far less jarring and much easier to get onboard with the story and really enjoy it.
So while I could appreciate the narrative and what the author was going for, everything just felt fine, not spectacular. The characters were reasonably well constructed, and their abilities were interesting, and the magic system had some decent thought put into it, I just never got invested in their struggle. The pacing was solid, the action unfolds at a consistent clip, and there weren’t lulls in action in the story, but I didn’t care about the events all that much either. I liked the ending,
Overall a 3 for me. It’s not poorly written and I see all the elements there for a story I should have loved, but for whatever reason, I just never got invested in this one. Probably very enjoyable for a large group of other readers, especially people who speak Spanish. Also probably a better title to read than listen to as the random Spanish phrases interspersed really threw me off.
Component Ratings
Concept/Idea: 3.5 out of 5
Protagonist: 2 out of 5
Antagonists: 1 out of 5
Supporting Characters: 3 out of 5
Character development: 3.5 out of 5
Plot: 3 out of 5
Pacing: 4 out of 5
Prose: 4.5 out of 5
Dialogue: 4 out of 5
Narrator’s performance: 4 out of 5
Ending: 3 out of 5