⭐︎2.75 stars!⭐︎
This was alright. Luca and Marcel were okay together. Luca was very cute (although, which super wealthy person - who got that rich on their own in the business world - is that cute and sweet and stutter-y? Idk) and sweet, and Marcel was kind but tough.
But things happened way too fast between these two. They did the whole get married in vegas thing after a day of knowing each other, but...sober? And we don't even get to see it, just them the next morning and Marcel freaking out a tad even though he was apparently of sound mind when they got married???
And we get a little smut between these two, but idk why it couldn't have shown them going all the way? It felt like at that point that the author wanted the story to get to the end and so sped things up and did telling more than showing. Yes, even for a short story, showing things is possible instead of telling.
They were having a sweet connection the first half, but then kinda lost it the second half - with the telling us they made lots of love and telling us they got married and then telling us they were happy forever - and I just wish them getting married (while sober) in vegas that quickly had made more sense. That their connection could have been better. (Like why can't they been dating even a few weeks, or months, before doing it? Like it's still quick but not a just a DAY of knowing each other quick.)
But still, they were cute together at first and the beginning was fun and funny at times.
Not too bad, but could have been better, even for a short. Short stories don't have to equal "okay-ish" like a connection can be established better and a relationship built up better, in my opinion. Also this ended about 20 to 30% before the actual ending, because there's a preview for Hostile Takeover at the end. So it was even shorter than what the page count led me to believe (and hey, those extra pages could have been used for this story instead of the next, to improve it, I think.)
So that's why I'm giving this 2.75 stars rounded up, instead of any higher. This could have been better.
But, I am excited to dive into Hostile Takeover. The premise sounds promising and if it is actually a good enemies-to-lovers or rivals-to-lovers or close to that, I'm excited to dive into it!