The Soul Stealer might be the worst book I have ever read, and reading it was like being hit over the head with a cast iron pan. Unfortunately I cannot recommend it to anyone. Not only is it sexist to the extreme, but there are so many unsavory elements like kidnapping, torture, rape and much more. The story is supposed to be set in present day Los Angeles, but the attitudes of the characters are straight from the 1970s. Masterton paints an awful picture of Hollywood and the movie business, and while I’m sure a lot of this stuff goes on in real life, I doubt it’s as extreme as this (taking out the supernatural elements, of course).
Setting aside the horrible characters, I was surprised how bad the writing is, especially since the author is fairly well known and has published a lot of books. The author didn’t even try to make the characters convincing. The story takes place in Los Angeles, and as a native I can tell you NO ONE speaks like this. The characters all sound like thugs straight out of 1970s Brooklyn. Also, if you live here, you become familiar with the movie business by osmosis, whether you are involved it in or not. In one scene, Trinity and Nemo are looking for clues on a movie set (and you have to ignore the fact that they just wandered onto it without anyone stopping them, lol), and Trinity, oddly enough, does not even know what a movie set is. She thinks the “room” they are in is real! OMG.
The female characters are basically dishrags. They can’t make any decisions for themselves and need a man’s opinion to do anything. Even the main female character who is trying to solve the mystery of her dead friend needs a man by her side in order to get things done. This was so offensive to me I honestly can’t believe this was even published, and the actions of the characters are so out of touch with reality that I figure the author must have been channeling another era while he was writing the story.
The last thing I want to mention is the graphic violence. I’ve read a fair amount of it, and when it makes sense for the story it works. But here it’s just sensationalized, as if the author were doing everything possible to shock his readers instead of delivering an actual story. It was gross and distasteful and unnecessary, in my opinion. Things like tying a woman down and graphically describing cutting off her tongue (for absolutely no good reason), or tying down a man, cutting off his balls and force feeding them to him (I am not kidding) for absolutely no good reason just made me want to throw up.
Add in uneven pacing, a mystery that doesn’t make any sense, and ridiculous twists, and you have a book that, in my opinion, needed a whole lot more editing to make it even slightly palatable.