The premise was good but it felt rushed - the characters and back story weren’t developed enough. Spelling and grammar were distracting. I think it could do with a re-edit and the story plumped out a bit more.
Words don’t even DESCRIBE this book. It’s my first book I have finished since high school, and I am almost 32 years old, like next weekend no joke, but this plot kept me on my toes: toe nails to be exact! I loved the way Cain was all demanding and dominant, and how Frejai was a warrior and strong and doesn’t bend to his ways and demands. I love love love this book!! I cried several times, so much my eyes blurred up my vision and I couldnt see, because it was drenching my contacts. Oh the soft tender moments and the heart wrenching climax (the story not the other kind which there is plenty of that in the book). So so good. I couldn’t put it down. I read it on my phone, and thought the black background with the white letters were going to be too much for me to handle, but I myself was a warrior and pushed through and read the whole book. I read it when I was tired and so sleepy mg eyes were shutting, but I just couldn’t get enough! I wanted more. I couldn’t wait to get off work to find time to read it. It took me two weeks to read being a mother and working, but I managed to finish it. Each time I had to put it down, I wanted to read more but couldn’t. I’m sad that I finished it, because now I have to go find another that will interest me enough to finish the entire book. There are error mistakes in writing, I caught on to but nothing serious that made me put the book down aka not read it online. Kind of be hard to put down a digital copy. Lol. Try it out. Great all around!!