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The Apprentice Storyteller
The Alchemist meets fantasy with a splash of space opera.Viola Alerion, a renowned storyteller in the Haldrian Empire, wants to be left in peace. For years, she’s been hounded by her past, never to find a moment’s rest. Then she meets a boy who wants to become her apprentice. He refuses to take no for an answer, and she reluctantly yields, even though she knows taking him with her could endanger his life. As their journey progresses, Viola begins to understand she’s not the only teacher in the equation. The nameless boy also has something to teach, but Viola makes for a reluctant student.
Can she give way to possibility and embrace a future in alignment with what she’s always wanted? Can she find the courage to embrace the principles that will transform her life? Can she overcome her circumstances and face her past? Or will she keep on running with nowhere to hide?
And what of the boy who guards untold secrets and exhibits mysterious powers that defy belief?
The e-book of The Apprentice Storyteller also includes exclusive access to "Viola's Guide to Achieving the Impossible". This workbook to help guide you through the first steps towards achieving your own dream is based on key transformational principles from the DreamBuilder™ Course and is not intended for publication. The workbook is only accessible through The Apprentice Storyteller e-book. The link to Viola's Guide to Achieving the Impossible is embedded in a concealed place. This is a treasure hunt.
Can she give way to possibility and embrace a future in alignment with what she’s always wanted? Can she find the courage to embrace the principles that will transform her life? Can she overcome her circumstances and face her past? Or will she keep on running with nowhere to hide?
And what of the boy who guards untold secrets and exhibits mysterious powers that defy belief?
The e-book of The Apprentice Storyteller also includes exclusive access to "Viola's Guide to Achieving the Impossible". This workbook to help guide you through the first steps towards achieving your own dream is based on key transformational principles from the DreamBuilder™ Course and is not intended for publication. The workbook is only accessible through The Apprentice Storyteller e-book. The link to Viola's Guide to Achieving the Impossible is embedded in a concealed place. This is a treasure hunt.
- GenresFantasyScience Fiction
318 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 8, 2020
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April 6, 2021
Do you know those tales of old that are best listened to on a cold winter night around a roaring fire...
Those enchanting tales told by a masterbard who will have you hanging on his every single word...
Lyrical and enthralling not only due to the beauty of the prose, but that of the tale itself...
This here is one of those!
The Alchemist meets fantasy with a splash of space opera. - This is what the blurb tagline advertises and this is exactly what we get.
Viola Alerion, a renowned storyteller in the Haldrian Empire, wants to be left in peace. For years, she’s been hounded by her past, never to find a moment’s rest. Always afraid of being caught and always on the run. And the last thing that she needs is an apprentice. She doesn't take apprentices. She never has and never shall. Because her life is too full of danger to drag someone else into it.
'Don't get involved. Don't get attached.' That is Viola's policy. And it works just fine. Until the night she meets a young boy determined to have her as his Master.
Viola's heart instantly goes out to him. The 'small and frail child that he is.' But she's a wanted woman and her conscience couldn't bear it if she dragged him into her mess.
When the boy refuses to take no for an answer, Viola reluctantly yields, even though she knows taking him with her could endanger his life.
As their journey progresses, Viola is slowly forced to acknowledge she’s not the only teacher in the equation. Her new apprentice has something to teach too, but Viola makes for a reluctant student.
'She feels the cold shell she's spent years honing softening from the inside out, and she feels threatened by the change.'
In a kill-or-be-killed world, where every day is a fight for survival, Viola does what it takes whenever needed. But her new apprentice slowly makes her see it all in a different light. He may at first seem like a hairbrained fanatic sprouting 'ridiculous nonsense about gods and pre-destiny' - all gobbledygook and hogwash Viola doesn't believe in. And yet, as Viola will slowly discover, the boy is so much more. He guards untold secrets and exhibits mysterious powers that defy belief. And Viola will need to find the courage to embrace the new principles he brings forwards to transform her life and open a path to a future in alignment with what she’s always wanted
'The small inflections in her voice weave a tapestry of enchanted places, daring adventure, and characters more real than anyone he knows.'
This is how people see Viola, the empire's greatest known storyteller. And yet, the same stands true for the writer of this book here. Because this is one vivid and beautifully written tale.
The Apprentice Storyteller is by all means not a fast paced read. It's heavily focused on character development, as well as offering a lot of food for thought. And this is why it may not appeal to all readers out there. The wordbuilding is great and the plot is solid but pacing is slower at times, therefore I wouldn't recommend it to readers who want fast-paced action.
If however, you are one of those readers who want great characters that leap from the page, lots of feeling and emotion as well as stuff to think upon, this tale here is a real treat!
"My suffering might be my own but we all suffer in one way or another. It is what I do with what I have that should count, that could make a difference."
This book is a reminder that we are never too old to do the things we are meant to do. It is a nudge to be better, do better and have the courage to grab life by the horns and do what needs to be done. It's fantasy to learn from.
Happy reading everyone
and
'be the change you want to see.'
Find this review and more on my book review and cover art blog The Magic Book Corner
Those enchanting tales told by a masterbard who will have you hanging on his every single word...
Lyrical and enthralling not only due to the beauty of the prose, but that of the tale itself...
This here is one of those!
The Alchemist meets fantasy with a splash of space opera. - This is what the blurb tagline advertises and this is exactly what we get.
Viola Alerion, a renowned storyteller in the Haldrian Empire, wants to be left in peace. For years, she’s been hounded by her past, never to find a moment’s rest. Always afraid of being caught and always on the run. And the last thing that she needs is an apprentice. She doesn't take apprentices. She never has and never shall. Because her life is too full of danger to drag someone else into it.
'Don't get involved. Don't get attached.' That is Viola's policy. And it works just fine. Until the night she meets a young boy determined to have her as his Master.
Viola's heart instantly goes out to him. The 'small and frail child that he is.' But she's a wanted woman and her conscience couldn't bear it if she dragged him into her mess.
When the boy refuses to take no for an answer, Viola reluctantly yields, even though she knows taking him with her could endanger his life.
As their journey progresses, Viola is slowly forced to acknowledge she’s not the only teacher in the equation. Her new apprentice has something to teach too, but Viola makes for a reluctant student.
'She feels the cold shell she's spent years honing softening from the inside out, and she feels threatened by the change.'
In a kill-or-be-killed world, where every day is a fight for survival, Viola does what it takes whenever needed. But her new apprentice slowly makes her see it all in a different light. He may at first seem like a hairbrained fanatic sprouting 'ridiculous nonsense about gods and pre-destiny' - all gobbledygook and hogwash Viola doesn't believe in. And yet, as Viola will slowly discover, the boy is so much more. He guards untold secrets and exhibits mysterious powers that defy belief. And Viola will need to find the courage to embrace the new principles he brings forwards to transform her life and open a path to a future in alignment with what she’s always wanted
'The small inflections in her voice weave a tapestry of enchanted places, daring adventure, and characters more real than anyone he knows.'
This is how people see Viola, the empire's greatest known storyteller. And yet, the same stands true for the writer of this book here. Because this is one vivid and beautifully written tale.
The Apprentice Storyteller is by all means not a fast paced read. It's heavily focused on character development, as well as offering a lot of food for thought. And this is why it may not appeal to all readers out there. The wordbuilding is great and the plot is solid but pacing is slower at times, therefore I wouldn't recommend it to readers who want fast-paced action.
If however, you are one of those readers who want great characters that leap from the page, lots of feeling and emotion as well as stuff to think upon, this tale here is a real treat!
"My suffering might be my own but we all suffer in one way or another. It is what I do with what I have that should count, that could make a difference."
This book is a reminder that we are never too old to do the things we are meant to do. It is a nudge to be better, do better and have the courage to grab life by the horns and do what needs to be done. It's fantasy to learn from.
Happy reading everyone
and
'be the change you want to see.'
Find this review and more on my book review and cover art blog The Magic Book Corner
November 1, 2021
Viola is the best and most famous storyteller in all the lands. She's never had an apprentice before, and as far as she's concerned she never will! Then she meets a boy who was rejected by his own people and who follows her around like a lost puppy.
The boy (his name doesn't get revealed for a loooong time so it doesn't feel right for me to do it, therefore he's still "the boy") is determined to become her apprentice no matter what. Viola tells him "no" over and over again, but he has faith, and eventually she says yes.
Together they discover the magic of storytelling and learn important life lessons along the way, all while running from Viola's mysterious past.
Viola annoyed the hell out of me for a good chunk of the book. I'm glad the boy is so positive and kept trying regardless because if I was in his shoes I would've given up.
She does get better and it looks like she really needed him to light her way. He is wise beyond his years which I'm a little on the fence about, but I still related to him more than Viola (because of the faith part).
Still, I like how they gradually become friends and don't want to part ways. It's cute.
I kept forgetting that this wasn't set in the middle ages, that was the main vibe I was getting. Then a space ship would show up and I'd go "OH RIGHT". I think it's a combination of the poetic language used and the lack of technology around them.
I'd like to see more of this world, this was way, way too short.
The boy (his name doesn't get revealed for a loooong time so it doesn't feel right for me to do it, therefore he's still "the boy") is determined to become her apprentice no matter what. Viola tells him "no" over and over again, but he has faith, and eventually she says yes.
Together they discover the magic of storytelling and learn important life lessons along the way, all while running from Viola's mysterious past.
Viola annoyed the hell out of me for a good chunk of the book. I'm glad the boy is so positive and kept trying regardless because if I was in his shoes I would've given up.
She does get better and it looks like she really needed him to light her way. He is wise beyond his years which I'm a little on the fence about, but I still related to him more than Viola (because of the faith part).
Still, I like how they gradually become friends and don't want to part ways. It's cute.
I kept forgetting that this wasn't set in the middle ages, that was the main vibe I was getting. Then a space ship would show up and I'd go "OH RIGHT". I think it's a combination of the poetic language used and the lack of technology around them.
I'd like to see more of this world, this was way, way too short.
January 7, 2021
Another quick but great read from Astrid V.J!
Thank you so much to the author and BookFox Tours for having me on the Instagram tour!
Briefly - I found this to be slightly less readable than the Siblings Tale duology and Gisela's Passion, due to the deep philosophical/religious points and how a lot of points are repeated.
I do massively enjoy the content though
Viola was the archivist telling the Siblings' Tale and it was cool to see part of her story. I think she had a great character arc and I also wonder what happened in all those years between Elisabeth and Edvard and now. Good character arc on the boy too but I don't know what I think about an outcast child having that kind of religious and philosophical depth.
Love the innate magic, world building, descriptions, and writing as always though
Read in two days with no regrets, and I'll continue to be a definite reader of anything Astrid writes!
Thank you so much to the author and BookFox Tours for having me on the Instagram tour!
Briefly - I found this to be slightly less readable than the Siblings Tale duology and Gisela's Passion, due to the deep philosophical/religious points and how a lot of points are repeated.
I do massively enjoy the content though
Viola was the archivist telling the Siblings' Tale and it was cool to see part of her story. I think she had a great character arc and I also wonder what happened in all those years between Elisabeth and Edvard and now. Good character arc on the boy too but I don't know what I think about an outcast child having that kind of religious and philosophical depth.
Love the innate magic, world building, descriptions, and writing as always though
Read in two days with no regrets, and I'll continue to be a definite reader of anything Astrid writes!
December 27, 2020
The apprentice storyteller is an undeniable reflection of the author writing skills, which sometimes have even a poetic approach.
I have to say that the first half of the book it was really slow paced, but then Astrid made up in the second half where the story was much more intriguing and I couldn’t put the book down.
I loved the dynamics of the relationship between the two main characters, which where so different, but yet learned so much from each other. For sure was struck me the most is how the author uses her story to empower the reader and give inputs to self-reflect on different aspects of life. In this case the main character Viola Alderon which has spend most of her existence in hiding is trying to find her way back to her purpose in life and her apprentice shows her how every difficulty encountered can be seen as door to the many opportunities leading to it.
I have to say that the first half of the book it was really slow paced, but then Astrid made up in the second half where the story was much more intriguing and I couldn’t put the book down.
I loved the dynamics of the relationship between the two main characters, which where so different, but yet learned so much from each other. For sure was struck me the most is how the author uses her story to empower the reader and give inputs to self-reflect on different aspects of life. In this case the main character Viola Alderon which has spend most of her existence in hiding is trying to find her way back to her purpose in life and her apprentice shows her how every difficulty encountered can be seen as door to the many opportunities leading to it.
August 16, 2022
This is such a unique story, a Storyteller on the run meets a young boy with his own secrets and reluctantly takes him on as her apprentice.
I read the collection of short stories before reading this and I actually preferred it that way because when the boy would begin The Sewing Princess, it would bring a smile to my face and I would know what the patrons would hearing and I felt immersed in the story even more so than before.
I like how polar opposite the two characters are in how they see the world, it is like watching a seasoned elder who has learnt to be cynical, try to understand the faith and joy that a young child can still see.
I really can't wait for the next book and this author is certainly becoming a favourite!
I read the collection of short stories before reading this and I actually preferred it that way because when the boy would begin The Sewing Princess, it would bring a smile to my face and I would know what the patrons would hearing and I felt immersed in the story even more so than before.
I like how polar opposite the two characters are in how they see the world, it is like watching a seasoned elder who has learnt to be cynical, try to understand the faith and joy that a young child can still see.
I really can't wait for the next book and this author is certainly becoming a favourite!
December 21, 2020
Word painting. It is a talent that all authors pursue, but few ever accomplish. Astrid is a master word painter. In the matter of a few short sentences, you abandon the doldrums of your daily life and cross the threshold into the world of her creation.
But it’s more than just vivid scenery. So much more. Her characters breathe with their own life, bolstered by peccadilloes and emotions that evoke those same feelings from your own soul.
Our hero is a small boy, without home or family, but what he lacks in creature comforts, he makes up for in faith. Despite his pitiful existence, he believes fully in destiny. As he said himself, “it’s by knowing things that I survive.”
Viola is worn and weary from a world that doesn’t often play fair. She abides by the motto—kill or be killed. It’s not a preference. It’s a necessity...until her apprentice teaches her that there is more power in innocence and respect than there will ever be in all the weapons in the worlds. She has a choice—discard the boy and his foreign ideals or open herself up to the idea that this frail creature might open her heart up to limitless possibilities.
Once again, Astrid has woven lessons into the layers of story with skilled precision. Each chapter will leave you thinking—not only about the remainder of this story, but your very outlook on life.
But it’s more than just vivid scenery. So much more. Her characters breathe with their own life, bolstered by peccadilloes and emotions that evoke those same feelings from your own soul.
Our hero is a small boy, without home or family, but what he lacks in creature comforts, he makes up for in faith. Despite his pitiful existence, he believes fully in destiny. As he said himself, “it’s by knowing things that I survive.”
Viola is worn and weary from a world that doesn’t often play fair. She abides by the motto—kill or be killed. It’s not a preference. It’s a necessity...until her apprentice teaches her that there is more power in innocence and respect than there will ever be in all the weapons in the worlds. She has a choice—discard the boy and his foreign ideals or open herself up to the idea that this frail creature might open her heart up to limitless possibilities.
Once again, Astrid has woven lessons into the layers of story with skilled precision. Each chapter will leave you thinking—not only about the remainder of this story, but your very outlook on life.
December 15, 2020
The author may have written about a storyteller, she herself is quite the storyteller too! Her prose is descriptive and at times poetic even. It was a joy to read, although it slowed down the pacing too much for me around the middle of the book for a bit. The pacing was picked up again later and then I couldn't stop reading!
I love the two main characters. They are each other's opposite in so many ways, which is very clear through their dialogue and life choices. Despite their differences, or perhaps in spite of it, their friendship feels very real and as a reader I felt included in it.
The view on life and the part humans play in the preservation of their environment is, despite this being a fantasy novel, close to home and the story shares many valuable life lessons.
There's one aspect I couldn't appreciate, though, and that's the one chapter (besides the epilogue) with another character's viewpoint. It distorts the flow laid out in the other chapters and it doesn't add anything critical to the plot.
I enjoyed this story a lot, especially once the pacing picked up again. I'm looking forward to the next part to see where their journey will take them!
I love the two main characters. They are each other's opposite in so many ways, which is very clear through their dialogue and life choices. Despite their differences, or perhaps in spite of it, their friendship feels very real and as a reader I felt included in it.
The view on life and the part humans play in the preservation of their environment is, despite this being a fantasy novel, close to home and the story shares many valuable life lessons.
There's one aspect I couldn't appreciate, though, and that's the one chapter (besides the epilogue) with another character's viewpoint. It distorts the flow laid out in the other chapters and it doesn't add anything critical to the plot.
I enjoyed this story a lot, especially once the pacing picked up again. I'm looking forward to the next part to see where their journey will take them!
September 2, 2022
“My suffering might be my own, but we all suffer in one way or another. It is what I do with what I have that should count, that could make a difference”
This follows the odyssey of Jo and Viola Alerion, who is a storyteller in a Haldrian Empire. Viola’s stories deeply enchanted the boy’s soul and all he wanted her to teach him the art of storytelling. It was hard to convince her but the boy did it and their odyssey begins. The odyssey is filled with struggles, self realisation, finding your purpose and following your heart.
Perhaps everyone is bound by the infinite power of universe. Viola was a renowned storyteller yet because of her past and hardships she has faced in her life, she couldn’t unlock the power of her soul and the boy was full of intricate universal magical powers. Despite the circumstances and surroundings, he did not lose faith in universe and they both chose their own path. He ventures on his odyssey to become a storyteller and he encapsulate his magical powers that is not only binding him but people around him as well. He truly realised his potential and Viola reached to her destiny. Destiny was truly a testament of life for both of them they chose. With patience and determination, one can unveil the destiny and fulfil their purpose.
This follows the odyssey of Jo and Viola Alerion, who is a storyteller in a Haldrian Empire. Viola’s stories deeply enchanted the boy’s soul and all he wanted her to teach him the art of storytelling. It was hard to convince her but the boy did it and their odyssey begins. The odyssey is filled with struggles, self realisation, finding your purpose and following your heart.
Perhaps everyone is bound by the infinite power of universe. Viola was a renowned storyteller yet because of her past and hardships she has faced in her life, she couldn’t unlock the power of her soul and the boy was full of intricate universal magical powers. Despite the circumstances and surroundings, he did not lose faith in universe and they both chose their own path. He ventures on his odyssey to become a storyteller and he encapsulate his magical powers that is not only binding him but people around him as well. He truly realised his potential and Viola reached to her destiny. Destiny was truly a testament of life for both of them they chose. With patience and determination, one can unveil the destiny and fulfil their purpose.
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October 18, 2022It was really great to revisit this story while writing Finding the Way. The transformational message is rock solid and I've built on it with the continuation of Viola's journey. I love having had the opportunity to deepen the friendship between Viola and Jo. They are such a lovely pair in this book and their friendship just gets better. I'm also super excited about the developments in Viola's character that have come up while writing the continuation of this journey. I'm also happy to report that despite Finding the Way having taken me almost 3 years to write, the continuity between the two novels is great.
July 16, 2022
The Apprentice Storyteller is the tale of a fugitive storyteller and the young- but unusually wise- apprentice whom she hesitantly takes under her wing. Both individuals carry secret pasts and special abilities. Their backgrounds and perspectives on a fractured humanity couldn’t be more contrasting. Nevertheless, it soon becomes apparent just how desperately they need one another.
The Apprentice Storyteller is a thrilling blend of fantasy, science fiction, spiritualism, and mystery. My favorite part was seeing the growth of the characters as the story and all of it’s secrets gradually unfolded. This is the first book in the author’s, Wishmaster Series. I am very much looking forward to the next installment and seeing how the journey progresses.
The Apprentice Storyteller is a thrilling blend of fantasy, science fiction, spiritualism, and mystery. My favorite part was seeing the growth of the characters as the story and all of it’s secrets gradually unfolded. This is the first book in the author’s, Wishmaster Series. I am very much looking forward to the next installment and seeing how the journey progresses.
April 11, 2021
A futuristic book where some planets are backwards and others are forwards and they chase across the sky’s. Man has killed off all of the elves, trolls, and whatever else threatens them. One princess rebelled and only wants to be a story teller. She picks up an apprentice on the way and he helps her find new meaning in life.
May 4, 2021
This was a tough book to review because I both liked and disliked it at the same time. I will start with the good. The author has a command of the English language that you seldom see. The writing is just about as good as any you will come across, and the descriptions are amazing. The present-tense active voice "showing," is what separates amateur writers from the pros. The author has got "it" whatever "it" is. The sheer technical skill of the author's writing kept me from wanted to give this story 3 stars.
So with all this lavish praise given to the writing ability, why didn't I like it? Is it just me? I double-checked other reviews, thinking maybe I was alone but found others had commented as well. That is, that the plot and story seem to take a back seat to whatever spiritual message the author was attempting to convey. Others really liked this aspect of the story, but I didn't.
Sure there is a moment of action near the beginning, there is some travel, some story-telling by the main character, and then there are LOTS philosophical debates between the two main characters. (Most of the book actually). These spiritual debates had me feeling like I was being lectured. Then there is supposedly a hidden treasure hunt that leads you to some kind of self-help workbook - huh? I don't necessarily need an action-packed novel full of good guys vs. bad guys shooting each other with laser blasters, but I would have liked some urgency, a better, more fleshed-out antagonist, etc...
I really hope the next book in the series leaves out the drugstore psychology and instead focuses more on the characters, action, the world-building, and the rich lore that is just itching to be explored. It has the foundation, and the author certainly has the ability, to make this epic.
So with all this lavish praise given to the writing ability, why didn't I like it? Is it just me? I double-checked other reviews, thinking maybe I was alone but found others had commented as well. That is, that the plot and story seem to take a back seat to whatever spiritual message the author was attempting to convey. Others really liked this aspect of the story, but I didn't.
Sure there is a moment of action near the beginning, there is some travel, some story-telling by the main character, and then there are LOTS philosophical debates between the two main characters. (Most of the book actually). These spiritual debates had me feeling like I was being lectured. Then there is supposedly a hidden treasure hunt that leads you to some kind of self-help workbook - huh? I don't necessarily need an action-packed novel full of good guys vs. bad guys shooting each other with laser blasters, but I would have liked some urgency, a better, more fleshed-out antagonist, etc...
I really hope the next book in the series leaves out the drugstore psychology and instead focuses more on the characters, action, the world-building, and the rich lore that is just itching to be explored. It has the foundation, and the author certainly has the ability, to make this epic.
December 25, 2022
Where to begin…I loved so much about this book. First, the story was far removed from my typical genre, but I’m glad I decided to read it. The Apprentice Storyteller is a sci-fi, fantasy, dystopian tale, told through the eyes of Viola Alerion, a masterful storyteller, and Jo, her young apprentice. The unlikely pair form a partnership, and over a long journey in a distant world, that partnership builds into a friendship. Not wanting to spoil anything, I won’t get too deep into the plot.
I will say that the author’s grasp of language is truly amazing. Astrid V.J. is wordsmith in the greatest sense, able to create starkly detailed images through her uniquely descriptive writing. As an author, I’ll admit feelings of envy over her sentence-crafting abilities as I read this book.
The story had a nice mix of adventure, philosophy, spirituality, and suspense. I wouldn’t call it an action packed thriller by any means, but it didn’t need it…the story certainly held up without it. I really enjoyed some of the futuristic technology and other references… they were very creative and seemingly well researched. Indeed entertaining!
This read has a lot to offer, and was an easy 5-star for me. It’s nice to know this author has a sizable body of work to choose from, including a sequel to this book. I’ll definitely be reading more of Astrid’s work in the future!
I will say that the author’s grasp of language is truly amazing. Astrid V.J. is wordsmith in the greatest sense, able to create starkly detailed images through her uniquely descriptive writing. As an author, I’ll admit feelings of envy over her sentence-crafting abilities as I read this book.
The story had a nice mix of adventure, philosophy, spirituality, and suspense. I wouldn’t call it an action packed thriller by any means, but it didn’t need it…the story certainly held up without it. I really enjoyed some of the futuristic technology and other references… they were very creative and seemingly well researched. Indeed entertaining!
This read has a lot to offer, and was an easy 5-star for me. It’s nice to know this author has a sizable body of work to choose from, including a sequel to this book. I’ll definitely be reading more of Astrid’s work in the future!
March 1, 2021
Engaging sci-fi fantasy
This is a blend of sci-fi and fantasy. Viola Alerion is a renowned storyteller with a secret, who wants to be left in peace, but she meets a boy who wants to become her apprentice. As their journey develops, Viola begins to understand she’s not the only teacher in the equation. Their adventure starts off well as the two outcasts embark on a perilous journey, but I found the deeper philosophical moments of reflection threw me out of the story. Otherwise, the author has created an interesting world with great characters who are believable and impressive.
This is a blend of sci-fi and fantasy. Viola Alerion is a renowned storyteller with a secret, who wants to be left in peace, but she meets a boy who wants to become her apprentice. As their journey develops, Viola begins to understand she’s not the only teacher in the equation. Their adventure starts off well as the two outcasts embark on a perilous journey, but I found the deeper philosophical moments of reflection threw me out of the story. Otherwise, the author has created an interesting world with great characters who are believable and impressive.
December 29, 2021
Five spellbound stars 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for The Apprentice Storyteller by Astrid V.J.
“You believe but what you see
You receive but what you give”
I only realized where these words came from when reading the Acknowledgments at the end of this book, yet deep in my heart, the lines of this particular song kept repeating itself while reading the story. That said, Astrid V.J. is a Master Storyteller herself. This tale had me enthralled right from the beginning.
❓Do you believe in a higher power to give you guidance through life? The dichotomy of the two main characters is apparent right from the beginning.
🧑🏻The boy is a believer: “We’re all children of the Great Parent. The Mother-Father wants us to succeed but also gives us the freedom to choose our own way.” There’s a path laid out for him in the grand scheme of things that is in accordance with his own desires. It is up to him how to achieve both, and the first step on his journey is becoming the apprentice of Viola Alerion, the empire’s greatest known storyteller.
👩🏻Viola is the complete opposite of the boy. Disillusioned from decades on the move, she struggles with her chosen existence. She’s lost faith in herself and the path she is traveling. “Yes, I made a choice once, and I have been regretting it ever since. Hunted my entire adult life because I decided to become a storyteller.”
As the stories of the two unlikely companions unfold, you get drawn into a web of purpose and prophecy, sickness and suffering, intrigue and politics.
Which part will these two play in the universe unfolding to the reader’s eyes? Is there truly a purpose behind their existence, or will all the achievements of Viola Alerion, Master of Words, greatest storyteller to grace this empire, be lost and forgotten one day?
I refuse to think so. Call me a believer if you like. There is a path these two are destined to walk. “If you don’t believe that you can do something today to make tomorrow better, then you have lost your right to judge. Each one of us must play our part.”
❗️I cannot wait to read the next book as they follow their destiny, because: “There are no coincidences, only a carefully laid out plan that we muddle our way through because we’re flawed human beings.”
“You believe but what you see
You receive but what you give”
I only realized where these words came from when reading the Acknowledgments at the end of this book, yet deep in my heart, the lines of this particular song kept repeating itself while reading the story. That said, Astrid V.J. is a Master Storyteller herself. This tale had me enthralled right from the beginning.
❓Do you believe in a higher power to give you guidance through life? The dichotomy of the two main characters is apparent right from the beginning.
🧑🏻The boy is a believer: “We’re all children of the Great Parent. The Mother-Father wants us to succeed but also gives us the freedom to choose our own way.” There’s a path laid out for him in the grand scheme of things that is in accordance with his own desires. It is up to him how to achieve both, and the first step on his journey is becoming the apprentice of Viola Alerion, the empire’s greatest known storyteller.
👩🏻Viola is the complete opposite of the boy. Disillusioned from decades on the move, she struggles with her chosen existence. She’s lost faith in herself and the path she is traveling. “Yes, I made a choice once, and I have been regretting it ever since. Hunted my entire adult life because I decided to become a storyteller.”
As the stories of the two unlikely companions unfold, you get drawn into a web of purpose and prophecy, sickness and suffering, intrigue and politics.
Which part will these two play in the universe unfolding to the reader’s eyes? Is there truly a purpose behind their existence, or will all the achievements of Viola Alerion, Master of Words, greatest storyteller to grace this empire, be lost and forgotten one day?
I refuse to think so. Call me a believer if you like. There is a path these two are destined to walk. “If you don’t believe that you can do something today to make tomorrow better, then you have lost your right to judge. Each one of us must play our part.”
❗️I cannot wait to read the next book as they follow their destiny, because: “There are no coincidences, only a carefully laid out plan that we muddle our way through because we’re flawed human beings.”
June 26, 2022
This is book 1 in the Wishmaster series.
Such a beautifully written almost poetic tale. The strengths lie in the perfect placement and beauty of words, the thoughts (philosophical, considered,) and the growing relationship between the Storyteller Viola and her young apprentice who has supernatural powers.
Viola has been a loner on the run for twenty eight years and her mysterious background is hidden until much later in the book. Now, in mid life she longs to settle down and live a simple life: "she dreams of a life living in harmony with her purpose as a storyteller, but where she can also stay in one place. She sees herself sitting in a window, her fingers flying over the keys as she records new tales onto a device."
Her apprentice is just thirteen and spiritually wise for his years, but there is a vulnerability about him too. In some ways, roles are reversed as he becomes a teacher to the older storyteller. In time, the two, (who surprisingly have much in common,) learn to trust, teach, appreciate and value each other.
The first half of the tale is perhaps a little slow, giving details of both the characters but speeds up towards the end with more 'action,' and a magical portal!
Overall, I would say this is not so much for readers who like action packed stories. This is more for those who love the wonder, magic and beauty of storytelling, secrets, and thoughtful reflections of life. And for those who appreciate a beguiling story which is focused on two main characters with less emphasis on secondary characters.
The Apprentice Storyteller also has a planetary futuristic aspect, with spacecrafts, and different lands. Jo, the apprentice, comes from his home planet Mshrali. There are deep discussions about the damage humans do to the world, to the peoples, "We have marginalised, killed and driven to extinction all the other beings such as elves, kobolds, and trolls," and the rainforests: "the serpent in the forest," which is referred to as "a levianthan."
I am sure there are many more revelations to follow. A beguiling and interesting start to the series. I thoroughly enjoyed. Highly recommended.
Such a beautifully written almost poetic tale. The strengths lie in the perfect placement and beauty of words, the thoughts (philosophical, considered,) and the growing relationship between the Storyteller Viola and her young apprentice who has supernatural powers.
Viola has been a loner on the run for twenty eight years and her mysterious background is hidden until much later in the book. Now, in mid life she longs to settle down and live a simple life: "she dreams of a life living in harmony with her purpose as a storyteller, but where she can also stay in one place. She sees herself sitting in a window, her fingers flying over the keys as she records new tales onto a device."
Her apprentice is just thirteen and spiritually wise for his years, but there is a vulnerability about him too. In some ways, roles are reversed as he becomes a teacher to the older storyteller. In time, the two, (who surprisingly have much in common,) learn to trust, teach, appreciate and value each other.
The first half of the tale is perhaps a little slow, giving details of both the characters but speeds up towards the end with more 'action,' and a magical portal!
Overall, I would say this is not so much for readers who like action packed stories. This is more for those who love the wonder, magic and beauty of storytelling, secrets, and thoughtful reflections of life. And for those who appreciate a beguiling story which is focused on two main characters with less emphasis on secondary characters.
The Apprentice Storyteller also has a planetary futuristic aspect, with spacecrafts, and different lands. Jo, the apprentice, comes from his home planet Mshrali. There are deep discussions about the damage humans do to the world, to the peoples, "We have marginalised, killed and driven to extinction all the other beings such as elves, kobolds, and trolls," and the rainforests: "the serpent in the forest," which is referred to as "a levianthan."
I am sure there are many more revelations to follow. A beguiling and interesting start to the series. I thoroughly enjoyed. Highly recommended.
June 29, 2022
I’d read book one of Astrid’s, Elisabeth and Edvard’s World Series, and I was very impressed with her style of writing. The Apprentice Storyteller—which is book one of her Wishmaster series—overstepped my initial impressions and left me in awe.
We shift between perspectives of a young boy, Jo, and the greatest storyteller known to the Haldrian Empire, Viola Alerion. Jo is instantly attracted to Viola’s magical tales and sets his sight on becoming her apprentice. However, Viola isn’t one to take another under her wing, especially a young boy that’s far too familiar with poverty. Jo soon finds out Viola has plenty of reason for her lone wolf nature, but his mysterious background just may give Viola answers in a way she never thought possible.
Viola and the boy’s polar opposite personalities make for a deeply intriguing read, especially when it came to their growing relationship and compelling character development throughout the book. Astrid’s unique talent of painting vivid pictures with words was thoroughly enjoyable, and she did an outstanding job in building a magical world tethered with realism.
My only real gripe is that the story came to an end lol but that’s the sort of book we all love to read, right? Overall, simply an amazing, immersive read that I highly recommend. The book was also filled with thought provoking dialogue, one of which I’ll gladly leave as closure.
“Our choices are what make life meaningful. Yes, there’s destruction and death, but there’s also so much light and life. There are people who do the right thing, and there are people like you, who hurt for all that’s wrong in this universe. It would be easy to achieve change if you all accepted that you had a part to play and have the power to bring about the life you long for. There’s success and there’s failure; there’s action and inaction. The universe is filled with opposites, precisely so we may have a choice.”
We shift between perspectives of a young boy, Jo, and the greatest storyteller known to the Haldrian Empire, Viola Alerion. Jo is instantly attracted to Viola’s magical tales and sets his sight on becoming her apprentice. However, Viola isn’t one to take another under her wing, especially a young boy that’s far too familiar with poverty. Jo soon finds out Viola has plenty of reason for her lone wolf nature, but his mysterious background just may give Viola answers in a way she never thought possible.
Viola and the boy’s polar opposite personalities make for a deeply intriguing read, especially when it came to their growing relationship and compelling character development throughout the book. Astrid’s unique talent of painting vivid pictures with words was thoroughly enjoyable, and she did an outstanding job in building a magical world tethered with realism.
My only real gripe is that the story came to an end lol but that’s the sort of book we all love to read, right? Overall, simply an amazing, immersive read that I highly recommend. The book was also filled with thought provoking dialogue, one of which I’ll gladly leave as closure.
“Our choices are what make life meaningful. Yes, there’s destruction and death, but there’s also so much light and life. There are people who do the right thing, and there are people like you, who hurt for all that’s wrong in this universe. It would be easy to achieve change if you all accepted that you had a part to play and have the power to bring about the life you long for. There’s success and there’s failure; there’s action and inaction. The universe is filled with opposites, precisely so we may have a choice.”
August 21, 2023
The story of a master story teller who is on the run and has been for a long time. Her solitary loneliness is interrupted one night when a starving boy approaches her and begs her to let him be her apprentice. She refuses but he follows her and finally she gives in and lets him accompany her.
This book deals with their adventures and though the boy wanted to learn from the master on how to be a storyteller, it also turns out that the storyteller becomes the student to the boys philosophy of how to look at life.
Through all the trials they face they stay together until Viola’s past catches up to her and she knows they will need to part. However, fate intervenes and they reunite to share a final few adventures before that final parting.
There are a lot of nuggets of wisdom in this book and
it is one you may need to read again to understand it all. The main thing though is that we can choose to change ourselves and what we do even though we can’t force others to follow our path.
I recommend this book as one which can change your life if you embrace your dreams and are determined to do all you can to achieve them!
This book deals with their adventures and though the boy wanted to learn from the master on how to be a storyteller, it also turns out that the storyteller becomes the student to the boys philosophy of how to look at life.
Through all the trials they face they stay together until Viola’s past catches up to her and she knows they will need to part. However, fate intervenes and they reunite to share a final few adventures before that final parting.
There are a lot of nuggets of wisdom in this book and
it is one you may need to read again to understand it all. The main thing though is that we can choose to change ourselves and what we do even though we can’t force others to follow our path.
I recommend this book as one which can change your life if you embrace your dreams and are determined to do all you can to achieve them!
December 19, 2020
The Alchemist meets Star Wars
This is the book I like most out of the ones I’ve read so far by this author. A woman on the run reluctantly pairing up with a boy too wise for his age definitely reminded me of Star Wars - if Leia’s parents had never approved of her rebelling. What you end up after reading this story is a feeling - quiet contemplation combined with hope. Different bits of the book will speak out to different people - the themes of loneliness and being shunned for not doing the expected, the wavering resolve of even the strongest of us needing buttressing from the most downtrodden, the magic, the fight scenes, the famous by association themes. The book is a journey where every writer will recognise finding their feet, like Viola who chose her gift and became the most fabled storyteller, although her family destined her for something else. I loved the flow of the story, the dialogue, the Sheherezade-like interludes of stories from a different kind of lore. If you love Coelho’s books, this one will definitely make you think. And feel. And yearn. The spaceships and jumping from one planet to another will appeal to Star Wars fans and the fans of Cloud Atlas, alike. Totally recommend for lovers of speculative fiction, space operas, transformational fiction and fiction in general.
This is the book I like most out of the ones I’ve read so far by this author. A woman on the run reluctantly pairing up with a boy too wise for his age definitely reminded me of Star Wars - if Leia’s parents had never approved of her rebelling. What you end up after reading this story is a feeling - quiet contemplation combined with hope. Different bits of the book will speak out to different people - the themes of loneliness and being shunned for not doing the expected, the wavering resolve of even the strongest of us needing buttressing from the most downtrodden, the magic, the fight scenes, the famous by association themes. The book is a journey where every writer will recognise finding their feet, like Viola who chose her gift and became the most fabled storyteller, although her family destined her for something else. I loved the flow of the story, the dialogue, the Sheherezade-like interludes of stories from a different kind of lore. If you love Coelho’s books, this one will definitely make you think. And feel. And yearn. The spaceships and jumping from one planet to another will appeal to Star Wars fans and the fans of Cloud Atlas, alike. Totally recommend for lovers of speculative fiction, space operas, transformational fiction and fiction in general.
April 15, 2021
The book intrigued me from the first moment I saw it. Personally I do not read sci-fi books, but this book changed my mind to read more of this genre. It made me very curious and I was not disappointed. I recommend this book for lovers of fantasy/sci-fi, which perfectly blends elements of fantasy and sci-fi in a way you've never seen done before.
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Viola and Jo, the main characters will be in my memory for so long after reading this book. Their journey, full of obstacles and magic will cling you to the book so much that you wouldn't want to put it down. In addition to adventures, this book is full of lessons about life and fate where their meaning is treated with a great mastery by the author.
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I'm really happy that this book precedes to the other three books of Wishmaster Series: " Finding the Way: Book 1.5", "Becoming Spellwright: Book 2", "Master Wordmage: Book 3". I can't wait to read them all. 😍😍
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Viola and Jo, the main characters will be in my memory for so long after reading this book. Their journey, full of obstacles and magic will cling you to the book so much that you wouldn't want to put it down. In addition to adventures, this book is full of lessons about life and fate where their meaning is treated with a great mastery by the author.
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I'm really happy that this book precedes to the other three books of Wishmaster Series: " Finding the Way: Book 1.5", "Becoming Spellwright: Book 2", "Master Wordmage: Book 3". I can't wait to read them all. 😍😍
December 20, 2020
Great world building and strong character development
The Apprentice Storyteller takes an alien setting and makes it even more interesting through a highly original premise: the use of stories and storytelling as something that can hold incredible power.
The novel follows an apprentice in this power as he leaves his cult-like upbringing and pursues a master storyteller, who is on the run from a mysterious past. They must rely on the apprentice’s intuition and the master’s cunning to stay alive in this harsh setting.
A ton of deep character development and world building follows (you can definitely tell that Astrid V.J.‘a background is in Anthropology) and the ending will leave you wanting more. I look forward to future works by Astrid.
The Apprentice Storyteller takes an alien setting and makes it even more interesting through a highly original premise: the use of stories and storytelling as something that can hold incredible power.
The novel follows an apprentice in this power as he leaves his cult-like upbringing and pursues a master storyteller, who is on the run from a mysterious past. They must rely on the apprentice’s intuition and the master’s cunning to stay alive in this harsh setting.
A ton of deep character development and world building follows (you can definitely tell that Astrid V.J.‘a background is in Anthropology) and the ending will leave you wanting more. I look forward to future works by Astrid.
December 31, 2020
I put off reading this book for a while because it didn't truly sound like something I would be interested in. I was wrong. It is, in fact, a wonderful tale about a traveling storyteller who reluctantly takes on an apprentice while she is running from those she escaped from long ago.
I was also very happy to see at the end that this is going to be a series, and I can't wait to keep reading in the worlds created here. This blend of epic fantasy and scifi space travel works so well together.
The main characters are so different, yet it is impossible for me to pick a favorite or decide who's story I am more interested in continuing. Thankfully, with multiple books already planned, it doesn't seem like I'll have to choose.
I was also very happy to see at the end that this is going to be a series, and I can't wait to keep reading in the worlds created here. This blend of epic fantasy and scifi space travel works so well together.
The main characters are so different, yet it is impossible for me to pick a favorite or decide who's story I am more interested in continuing. Thankfully, with multiple books already planned, it doesn't seem like I'll have to choose.
June 25, 2024
Fantastical adventure awaits
A blessed young boy forces an apprenticeship upon the empires most talented teller of stories. However, she is being chased both literally and figuratively. The boy and the woman manage to grow and evolve as they each challenge one another along their journey.
This was a very well written story, however, it did not keep my interest strong enough to become a quick read despite being concise. The world building was minimal and only enough to move the story along. The characters experienced growth through their journey, however the reader does not truly experience it. This was a story where we are told what is happening, instead of shown. Although it is masterful in it's own right, as well as intelligent and well thought out, it was lacking in depth of emotion. There was no feeling or urgency for these characters. I found myself reading to find out what happens; but without care for what does happen.
Still I think at some point, I will continue the story just to see what becomes of Viola and Jo. Shear curiosity at this point.
A blessed young boy forces an apprenticeship upon the empires most talented teller of stories. However, she is being chased both literally and figuratively. The boy and the woman manage to grow and evolve as they each challenge one another along their journey.
This was a very well written story, however, it did not keep my interest strong enough to become a quick read despite being concise. The world building was minimal and only enough to move the story along. The characters experienced growth through their journey, however the reader does not truly experience it. This was a story where we are told what is happening, instead of shown. Although it is masterful in it's own right, as well as intelligent and well thought out, it was lacking in depth of emotion. There was no feeling or urgency for these characters. I found myself reading to find out what happens; but without care for what does happen.
Still I think at some point, I will continue the story just to see what becomes of Viola and Jo. Shear curiosity at this point.
December 20, 2020
Astrid's stories are unlike anything I've seen before. Her writing style is fresh and unique. The Apprentice Storyteller was a pure joy to read. It has the elements of fantasy and deep philosophical fiction that makes you think. I fell in love with the characters and enjoyed their journey. I cannot wait for the next book in this series.
*I received an advanced copy of the book, and this is my honest review*.
*I received an advanced copy of the book, and this is my honest review*.
December 30, 2020
A Fascinating story!
I loved the beginning of this book, the wonderfully descriptive words that drew me into this unusual story: “as he smiles up into her violet gaze”
An interesting, fascinating plot that held my attention. It sent out a great message about humanity and the good and evil of human society.
“Thats why you’re guided by a moral compass in the first place.”
I am now looking forward to reading the sequel!
I loved the beginning of this book, the wonderfully descriptive words that drew me into this unusual story: “as he smiles up into her violet gaze”
An interesting, fascinating plot that held my attention. It sent out a great message about humanity and the good and evil of human society.
“Thats why you’re guided by a moral compass in the first place.”
I am now looking forward to reading the sequel!
December 21, 2020
Astrid has a very whimsical, lengthy style that carries you down a calm river of thought. This book is more introspection than action, but is an interesting read nonetheless from the perspective of not giving up on yourself. I don’t agree with all the theological pieces, but thought the execution was good.
December 31, 2020
A wonderful mix between fantasy and sci-fi that leaves you longing for more.
There is great world building, detailed characters whit strong development, and Astrid paints this world so well that you fall into it and never want to get back to reality.
There is great world building, detailed characters whit strong development, and Astrid paints this world so well that you fall into it and never want to get back to reality.
June 23, 2022
An interesting mix of magic and scifi elements within this story give it an interesting flair.
I would have liked to get to know Viola and her why a bit more right off the bat. It would have hooked me into the story better. I found my self asking why do I care? A few times during the first half of the book.
Much of the identity of both main characters is revealed very slowly. It kept me reading but also kept me from being fully invested. I am still glad I finished and am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book.
I would have liked to get to know Viola and her why a bit more right off the bat. It would have hooked me into the story better. I found my self asking why do I care? A few times during the first half of the book.
Much of the identity of both main characters is revealed very slowly. It kept me reading but also kept me from being fully invested. I am still glad I finished and am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book.
October 15, 2022
I loved the connection with each story and how the progression of the book was done so professionally and creatively by the author.
I felt like I was reading memories, it was so beautiful, adventurous and imaginative.
Loved it from start to finish!
I felt like I was reading memories, it was so beautiful, adventurous and imaginative.
Loved it from start to finish!
December 31, 2020
A mysterious orphan with unknown powers, a jaded storyteller on the run, a dying world. What a wonderful book!
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