DNF @ 22 pgs. TWENTY-TWO. Pages.
And I'll tell you why.
The story opens with Skye in the library, looking for a book she donated, because there's a microchip hidden in it by her now-deceased husband. Suddenly, the lights go out (GASP!), the doors lock (EEK!!), and she's shut up in the library with KILLERS!!!!! Um... where are the librarians...?! Nobody ever tells us where the librarians are...
Some big, beefy guy grabs her hair, she sees a red skull tattoo on his arm, he drags her across the library (why...?), giving her time to fish out her pepper spray and douse him. She runs, he tells the others to 'kill her'... and WHY WOULDN'T HE HAVE DONE THAT WHEN HE HAD HER, if he wanted her dead? Why drag her around, first? It. Makes. No. Sense.
So she hides under this cubicle thing and calls 911, until she doesn't hide (!?!?!?!??!) and gets chased around the library by the baddies, buying stOOpid time for the cops to show up, with bullets a'flyin' and RedSkull telling his friend to get ready for 'Hawk's' contingency...
Meanwhile, Jake is new to the copshop in Nowhere, NC. He's taking his bestie's old job, now that bestie is killed in a shady car accident with knife wounds that don't match up in the witness report and the coroner report. ((ooooooooh.)) Hrm, gotta try to figure that out, but... 911 call!! And it's bestie's wife - and his ex-true-love-now-widowed-with-a-child!!! Get to the library - stat!
... she bursts out the front library doors (!!), lands at the feet of her ex-true-love-come-home and when he asks if she knows who would want to kill her, she says, "Not really."
EHHHHHHHH!!! The correct answer would be "a big beefy man with a red skull tattoo on his arm who is apparently working with someone who goes by the name 'Hawk'. But noooo.... she doesn't tell him that. Because she's an absolute idiot who does NOT deserve a book written about her.
The sergeant says, "Dang, they had a way out - the back door!" ((NO. Shit...!!! Why would we cover BOTH exits?!?!?!)) And then, "Well, they're gone." ((Who *WRITES* this crap?!!)) To which Skye says, "They're gone, I'm fine, I'm going home, they won't come after me." Because WHY - again - wouldn't they come after her?? They CAME AFTER HER THE FIRST TIME, MORON!!!! Gah, she's absolutely worthless, ridiculous, and a waste of good air.
It's okay, though, because her car blows up BEFORE she gets to it. Why would they detonate a car she's not in, yet...?? Because you KNOW they're watching, hello, in order to detonate it. It couldn't be on a timer - they don't even know if she'd be taken off by ambulance for the head wound she got in the in-library fight. NONE OF THIS MAKES SENSE!!!!!! It's so badly written, I want to bang my head against the nearest wall...
... so *NOW* she's in the ambulance, and she's having a flashback of the night her husband died in the car she and her kid and her man were in... and she relives the moment of impact, the man coming to the car with a knife... and a red skull on his arm...
WHY DIDN'T SHE TELL THE POLICE about the man who slit her husband's neck in the witness report??!?!?! And WHY didn't she put 2+2 together when she saw the red skull on the library thug's arm??? This whole thing is so stupid, I can't read another page of it.
It's badly written, full of more holes than swiss cheese, and so outrageous there aren't WORDS for it.
NO. Just no. Do better. A LOT better. And soon.
Or stop where you are and take up reading, instead.