I really liked this book at the beginning but not so much by the end. I felt like it tried to do too much and left way too many questions unanswered.
I liked certain elements of this story. Beginning with the story of Nu Wa (the Chinese creation myth) is so good and I actually found this to be incredibly interesting. Then it shifts to a future dystopian story about Miranda, a little girl born with a peculiar smell. I liked all this stuff. I liked the future world with the corporations taking over and having their own cities with their own laws. I liked the mystery of Miranda's condition, the scaly legs, the hints of the connections to Nu Wa, and the memory disease. I really liked the stuff with Miranda's parents, especially with the suit that her dad uses to earn money (a virtual reality world where he "collects taxes" somehow and gets the crap kicked out of him every night). All this stuff is good and is the set up to a good dystopian story, but let me explain why it gets ruined (at least for me).
Every time the story starts to get really interesting, the author shifts to a second narrative. The second story is a different version of Nu Wa in the 19th century China. These parts of the story start out as being historical fiction with slight magical elements, then shift to being full on magic realism/fantasy. Just as this Nu Wa story starts to get interesting, the story shifts back to Miranda. Then by the time the next Miranda chapter ends, I'll forget what was going on with Nu Wa and then it shifts again. More than just the two different narratives that share only a loose connection, they are totally different genres. Historical fiction vs a slightly fantasy dystopian future don't go well together. Then there is the Nu Wa chapter where she travels to the land of Mist and Forgetfulness which is like total magic realism that doesn't fit with the Miranda chapters or the previous Nu Wa chapters.
I was also extremely dissatisfied with how both stories end. I'll try to avoid spoilers here. The Nu Wa story ends by answering a major question in the Miranda storyline. This is okay but I kind of wanted more of an actual ending to the Nu Wa plot. The Miranda plot doesn't answer questions of the tax suit, the corrupt corporations, the Nu Wa connection, or even the memory sickness. Instead the ending shifts focus to the issue of the clones (something that isn't even introduced until the last 100 pages). I was so disappointed! I found the setup in the first few chapters to be so interesting and then was left with no sense of resolution. Even the whole Nu Wa aspects feel like they were incidental to the actual story since it ends without Miranda really understanding it.
I started to feel like things in the second half of the book were just poorly written. Miranda sells the rights to the songs... for what reason? Seriously. Her parents made her promise not to sell and Miranda is never motivated by money. But this guy makes an offer, she says maybe, then no, then finally yes and takes the money and almost immediately loses it. It is set up like Miranda wants this guy to protect her from the Doctor guy, but then she takes the money and runs and is immediately caught by the doctor. Nu Wa loses the ability to speak Chinese as a curse yet when she goes home, her brother always seems to know what she is trying to say. The author constantly draws attention to this too... but it is so lazy. If you want to curse her with the inability to communicate then actually make it hard for her to communicate. She had been missing for 50 years too and then when she shows up looking as young as the day she left, everyone is just like "oh wow, you're back" Like they aren't phased by this.
This book is hard to rate because I really did like the first half of the story but I found the second half to be pretty awful.