Jack is a man who likes to leave bodies with a spiral wound cut in to their flesh and a jack-in-the-box next to them in the streets of London.
Inspector Lestrade and Doctor Watson have no choice. They have to call the retired Sherlock Holmes back from his self-imposed exile in Sussex, but will the great detective himself be able to prevent more blood being spilt on the city streets?
This was great! I got a copy of this because I adore the authors other books so I knew it would be a great book regardless. I've never read a story with Holmes and Watson as the characters before, so I wasn't too sure what to expect. Right from the first page, I knew I'd love it! The killer was excellent, really well crafted and very clever, as was the plot. The whole theme absolutely worked in my opinion. There were twists and bits I didn't see coming too. This is one of those books where you will lose yourself and be off into another vibrant and intricate world altogether. Absolutely brilliant and highly recommended.
Although this book was not the standard helping of Holmes and associates, it was a very in-depth look at the toll solving all those crimes in the past had taken on all who knew Holmes, as well as Holmes himself. I liked it immensely.
There was a time as a teenage girl in high school that Sherlock Holmes was my favorite character and Sir Arthur Conan Doyle was my favorite author. I gobbled up these books as fast as I could read them and check out another from the library. I was thrilled to find out that author Patrick Scattergood recently released his own Sherlock Holmes story, and I could not be more pleased. I feel the story was true to the original characters' nature, and the plot twists and turns had me guessing throughout the book. One, in particular, had me gasping out loud as I read. Scattergood is an amazing storyteller, and he truly knows how to bring characters who merely exist on a page to life in the eyes of a reader.
Some of my favorite lines from the book:
"They'd both felt the length of the journey masquerading as aches in their bodies."
"That fellow is short on manners but long on disappearing."
"A heavy-set man with mutton-chop facial hair that came closer to engulfing his entire face with each passing day."
"...leaving Leonardson stewing in his own anger, like a piece of beef roasting in its own juices."
Nope... The idea was good. The writing has a nice poetic rhythm to it, but... The time frame is early 1900s. Sherlock Holmes is retired, but a very serious case comes up and he's called back to London. The story is told in third person, so you see the point of view from several characters. But it was all TOO morbid. Lestrade, Watson, and Holmes argue a lot. They use their first names frequently (a little weird). People meeting Holmes for the first time just call him Sherlock (still weird). The characters complain a bit (ok, A lot), and it's usually taking jabs at each for being, or feeling, inferior. They kinda talk to each other like petulant children than respectable grown adults. Holmes doesn't really solve the case. Most things happen by chance, especially near the end. Also, things got a little drawn out, and there were a few loose threads left unmentioned or resolved... The writing is clean, but there's several missing words. All in all, don't read this.
I downgraded my score of 5, because this is the WORST editted Holmes e-story I have ever read, among hundreds of them.
The e-stories usually flub the editing chore to some extent, and I don't really know why, other than laziness and smugness that your readers don't really care nor deserve any better.
But this story - often there are 2-3 errors per page interrupting the reader's flow: Doubled words, missing words, even wrong words possibly inserted by a rogue "search & replace" tool. And sometimes a heavily rewritten paragraph is jumbled up so much, with missing elements that completely obscure the author's intent.
So why not create a pool of rotating editors at low cost, so all the Holmes writers can get at least a once-over, since they often don't seem to do their own proofreading?
The story was good, the personalities well written. I had extreme Anxiety over the lack of proofreading. Words that were changed because spell check probably changed them and nothing proofed! If you are writing, the basic step is to proofread your work. Such a distraction from the text.
Excellent characters, a lot of surprises, more psychological aspects , and human emotions as the characters have aged. Other than a couple of dropped words within sentences.. Great job!