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The Five Kingdoms #1
The Prince's Man
Rustam Chalice, hedonist, dance tutor and spy, loves his life, never better than when he’s bedding a gorgeous woman.
So when the kingdom he serves is threatened from within, he leaps into action. Only trouble is, the spy master, Prince Hal, teams him up with an untouchable aristocratic assassin who despises him.
And to make matters worse, she’s the most beautiful woman in the Five Kingdoms.
Plunged into a desperate journey over the mountains, the mismatched pair struggle to survive deadly wildlife, the machinations of a spiteful god - and each other.
They must also keep alive a sickly elf they need as a political pawn. But when the elf reveals that Rustam has magic of his own, he is forced to question his identity, his sanity and worst, his loyalty to his prince.
For in Tyr-en, all magic users are put to death.
So when the kingdom he serves is threatened from within, he leaps into action. Only trouble is, the spy master, Prince Hal, teams him up with an untouchable aristocratic assassin who despises him.
And to make matters worse, she’s the most beautiful woman in the Five Kingdoms.
Plunged into a desperate journey over the mountains, the mismatched pair struggle to survive deadly wildlife, the machinations of a spiteful god - and each other.
They must also keep alive a sickly elf they need as a political pawn. But when the elf reveals that Rustam has magic of his own, he is forced to question his identity, his sanity and worst, his loyalty to his prince.
For in Tyr-en, all magic users are put to death.
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Deborah Jay
11 books114 followersDeborah Jay writes fast-paced fantasy adventures featuring quirky characters and multi-layered plots – just what she likes to read.
Fortunate to live near Loch Ness in the majestic, mystery-filled Scottish Highlands with her partner and a pack of rescue dogs, she can often be found lurking in secluded glens and forests, researching locations for her books. Her taste for the good things in life is kept in check by the expense of keeping too many dressage horses, and her complete inability to cook.
THE PRINCE’S MAN is her debut novel; first in a trilogy and winner of a UK Arts Board award. Book #2, THE PRINCE'S SON, and #3, THE PRINCE'S PROTEGE, are also available, with the concluding book of the quartet, THE PRINCE'S HEIR due out on December 14th 2021.
Also published are urban fantasy DESPRITE MEASURES and short story SPRITE NIGHT, both in the CALEDONIAN SPRITE series.
She has published a multi-author SFF anthology which features her SF story, PERFECT FIT.
She has non-fiction equestrian titles published under her professional name of Debby Lush.
Find out more about Deborah at https://deborahjayauthor.com/ or follow Deborah on twitter https://twitter.com/DeborahJay2 and facebook https://www.facebook.com/DeborahJay
Fortunate to live near Loch Ness in the majestic, mystery-filled Scottish Highlands with her partner and a pack of rescue dogs, she can often be found lurking in secluded glens and forests, researching locations for her books. Her taste for the good things in life is kept in check by the expense of keeping too many dressage horses, and her complete inability to cook.
THE PRINCE’S MAN is her debut novel; first in a trilogy and winner of a UK Arts Board award. Book #2, THE PRINCE'S SON, and #3, THE PRINCE'S PROTEGE, are also available, with the concluding book of the quartet, THE PRINCE'S HEIR due out on December 14th 2021.
Also published are urban fantasy DESPRITE MEASURES and short story SPRITE NIGHT, both in the CALEDONIAN SPRITE series.
She has published a multi-author SFF anthology which features her SF story, PERFECT FIT.
She has non-fiction equestrian titles published under her professional name of Debby Lush.
Find out more about Deborah at https://deborahjayauthor.com/ or follow Deborah on twitter https://twitter.com/DeborahJay2 and facebook https://www.facebook.com/DeborahJay
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January 3, 2021
One of the best fantasy novels I have read in ages, The Prince’s Man combines court intrigue, nefarious plots, and dazzling realms. Rustam (Rusty) Chalice is a debonair dance master who lives a double life as a spy in the service of his prince, while also frequenting the beds of highborn ladies.
His life takes a turn when he is forced to team with Dart, the court’s royal assassin—a woman—with the goal of transporting a sickly elf across hostile, mountainous territory. Through the arduous journey, all three characters undergo brutal transformations and evolve as they are tested time and again, forced to rely on one another. At the same time, threats to the throne involve a traitorous noble, an illegitimate heir, and a diabolical torturer. There are layers upon layers of plot, all woven neatly together for a satisfying conclusion in this first book of what promises to be a stellar trilogy.
I was smitten with all three of the lead characters, especially Rustam who undergoes the most compelling transformation of all. You can’t read this book and not be caught up in the lives of Jay’s rakish spy, Risada, Elwaes and so many others. Even the secondary characters are fleshed out and vibrantly written. We meet so many along the journey, yet each leaves a distinctive mark.
The writing is exquisite, layered with beautifully detailed descriptions of enthralling realms, fantastical creatures, and breathless adventure. Every bit as riveting are the cloak-and-dagger machinations of several royal houses and the cruel manipulations of power-hungry men who seek the throne. From the moment I opened the first pages, I was sucked into the author’s expertly crafted world of intrigue and danger. A truly engaging story. Although book one delivers a wrap to the story as presented, I look forward to continuing for the full scope in books two and three. Highly recommended!
His life takes a turn when he is forced to team with Dart, the court’s royal assassin—a woman—with the goal of transporting a sickly elf across hostile, mountainous territory. Through the arduous journey, all three characters undergo brutal transformations and evolve as they are tested time and again, forced to rely on one another. At the same time, threats to the throne involve a traitorous noble, an illegitimate heir, and a diabolical torturer. There are layers upon layers of plot, all woven neatly together for a satisfying conclusion in this first book of what promises to be a stellar trilogy.
I was smitten with all three of the lead characters, especially Rustam who undergoes the most compelling transformation of all. You can’t read this book and not be caught up in the lives of Jay’s rakish spy, Risada, Elwaes and so many others. Even the secondary characters are fleshed out and vibrantly written. We meet so many along the journey, yet each leaves a distinctive mark.
The writing is exquisite, layered with beautifully detailed descriptions of enthralling realms, fantastical creatures, and breathless adventure. Every bit as riveting are the cloak-and-dagger machinations of several royal houses and the cruel manipulations of power-hungry men who seek the throne. From the moment I opened the first pages, I was sucked into the author’s expertly crafted world of intrigue and danger. A truly engaging story. Although book one delivers a wrap to the story as presented, I look forward to continuing for the full scope in books two and three. Highly recommended!
November 23, 2013
This exciting and enchanting novel is very approachably written. Jay follows the basic format of a fantasy tale but he story itself is extremely unique. You can’t help but get caught up in the amazing world that Jay presents to her readers. At times I felt like I was watching a reel, I was so caught up in Jay’s descriptions of each and every scene. Not only that, but this novel is extremely well written and edited, allowing you to flow seamlessly into this world. Jay neither talks up nor down to her audience. Her story balances perfectly in that margin in between. Her very in-depth and intricate plot is told in a very captivating manner. It is gripping even through the battle scenes, which are suspenseful without being gory or dirty.
This novel presents a well-developed cast that is full of interesting individuals who carry the story forward very well. Jay’s unique character names make it easy to remember everyone and who did what. The natural interactions between the characters make everything very easy to relate to. Jay also incorporates some very eloquent dialogue into this story, but it always fits with the characters in question. Although it isn’t the everyday language that one typically encounters it is fluid and enhances the characters in question. It also helps to differentiate between the different classes of the very well defined social structure within this tale, where everyone has their place even if they don’t necessarily accept it fully. Through this, court intrigue makes a play that definitely keeps you wanting more.
Overall, this was a captivating fantasy with just a touch of reality. It’s the perfect escape from the everyday.
Please note that I received this novel free of charge from the author in exchange for an honest review.
This novel presents a well-developed cast that is full of interesting individuals who carry the story forward very well. Jay’s unique character names make it easy to remember everyone and who did what. The natural interactions between the characters make everything very easy to relate to. Jay also incorporates some very eloquent dialogue into this story, but it always fits with the characters in question. Although it isn’t the everyday language that one typically encounters it is fluid and enhances the characters in question. It also helps to differentiate between the different classes of the very well defined social structure within this tale, where everyone has their place even if they don’t necessarily accept it fully. Through this, court intrigue makes a play that definitely keeps you wanting more.
Overall, this was a captivating fantasy with just a touch of reality. It’s the perfect escape from the everyday.
Please note that I received this novel free of charge from the author in exchange for an honest review.
July 6, 2018
Deborah Jay's The Prince's Man (Amazon Digital Services 2014) is a beautifully told epic of noble people, magic, elves, and vicious trolls. Rusty is a bon vivant male companion to wealthy women and undercover spy in the service of his king. To save the kingdom, he partners with a woman--something that just isn't done in this fantastical world--and together they rescue a captured elf in the hope it will garner the assistance of his kinsmen. As they travel the long journey required to return him to his home, they face trolls, sprites, and elementals, each with their own goals and none of which help the pair succeed. When they finally reach their destination, they find this is only the beginning of a mission fraught with danger, unusual alliances, and death-defying consequences.
This elaborately constructed world of royalty and spies, intrigue and romance, is truly is a mix of fantasy and 007. In so many ways, it resembles the delightful conniving multilayered world of the French and British court life with its flirtatious characters, the one-upmanship of lords and ladies, and the subterfuge that can surface at any moment to threaten the ruler. But when you add an elixir that offers the fountain of youth, the price of victory or defeat skyrockets. This award-winning story, the first in the Five Kingdoms series, is intricately woven, dramatically told, and filled with twists and turns that will keep every reader guessing.
This elaborately constructed world of royalty and spies, intrigue and romance, is truly is a mix of fantasy and 007. In so many ways, it resembles the delightful conniving multilayered world of the French and British court life with its flirtatious characters, the one-upmanship of lords and ladies, and the subterfuge that can surface at any moment to threaten the ruler. But when you add an elixir that offers the fountain of youth, the price of victory or defeat skyrockets. This award-winning story, the first in the Five Kingdoms series, is intricately woven, dramatically told, and filled with twists and turns that will keep every reader guessing.
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November 7, 2021Think James Bond meets Lord of the Rings
THE PRINCE'S MAN is book #1 of a quartet inspired by my frustration with the James Bond franchise that refused to allow James to develop as a character, combined with my love of Lord of the Rings.
Rustam Chalice's story began from this desire to expand and deepen a shallow spy's life, and what better medium than the vast scope of a fantasy world? Thus, the Five Kingdoms were born.
This is what a few readers have said about the series:
“A brilliantly paced story in a beautifully crafted world.”
“Adventure, heartache, murder, horses, mayhem, elves; the list gallops on, bursting with action in this well written novel set in a completely believable world. Attention grabbing story and underlying layers of detail make it a ‘can’t put downer’.”
“The conflict Mrs. Jay uses between these characters is so vivid and real. It’s an amazing world she created, that reminded me a bit of Lord of the Rings/The Game of Thrones. The fighting scenes throughout the novel were done perfectly. Not too gory and yet we could still see and feel what her characters go through. The story is an amazing read.”
"Please note, that it is advisable to start this book when you have a block of time to dedicate to it. Starting an hour before needing to leave the house will make you late, I should know”
So, if you love action, intrigue, and magic, spiced with a touch of romance, then click below to go to your favourite retailer site, and lose yourself in this captivating fantasy adventure.
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THE PRINCE'S MAN is book #1 of a quartet inspired by my frustration with the James Bond franchise that refused to allow James to develop as a character, combined with my love of Lord of the Rings.
Rustam Chalice's story began from this desire to expand and deepen a shallow spy's life, and what better medium than the vast scope of a fantasy world? Thus, the Five Kingdoms were born.
This is what a few readers have said about the series:
“A brilliantly paced story in a beautifully crafted world.”
“Adventure, heartache, murder, horses, mayhem, elves; the list gallops on, bursting with action in this well written novel set in a completely believable world. Attention grabbing story and underlying layers of detail make it a ‘can’t put downer’.”
“The conflict Mrs. Jay uses between these characters is so vivid and real. It’s an amazing world she created, that reminded me a bit of Lord of the Rings/The Game of Thrones. The fighting scenes throughout the novel were done perfectly. Not too gory and yet we could still see and feel what her characters go through. The story is an amazing read.”
"Please note, that it is advisable to start this book when you have a block of time to dedicate to it. Starting an hour before needing to leave the house will make you late, I should know”
So, if you love action, intrigue, and magic, spiced with a touch of romance, then click below to go to your favourite retailer site, and lose yourself in this captivating fantasy adventure.
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July 29, 2013
Tyr-en is one of the Five Kingdoms, and prides itself on being the most educated and civilised. But even in a country run by noble Families (all ranked by land and wealth), not everybody is acting honestly.
The closest relative to King Marten, Prince Halnashead, is in charge of security and recruits those best at playing the game of subterfuge. Two of his best agents are Charmer and Dart must work together to discover who is behind a plot to usurp the throne.
Rustam, also known as Charmer (no further explanation needed) is a talented dancer, who is confident in himself and in his unswerving loyalty to Halnashead and Marten. He never feels out of his depth, and his only real worry is making sure his appearance remains perfect.
Risada, our assassin Dart, is on the surface a respectable lady of the Second house. She keeps herself distant from the rest of the nobles, hardened by a constant fear and worry for her younger brother, and a desire to finally find her parents' killer.
The story initially revolves around the splendour of the noble houses, where the game is much more subtle, while they hone in on their suspects. But when they find things are on a bigger scale than they could have imagined, they suddenly finding themselves in the wilderness as they try to both escape their enemy and find new allies.
Jay paints a vivid world, that we are treated to in this dangerous adventure that tests our heroes to every limit. Including having them question everything they had ever taken for granted.
Rustam's trials and changes are most clearly portrayed. He was a very effective spy, but he develops some very useful extra skills, as well as throwing off the shallow persona and actually taking time to think about the world around him.
Risada stays true to herself, and to her friends the whole way through, but it is clear that the adventure has also opened her mind to possibilities she never considered.
I loved all the extra characters that were around, either in the background, or just coming forward for a chapter or two. They were all convincingly strong and well-written.
Princess Annasala; Betha; Leith - Jay has a knack for writing strong female characters.
And of course, we can't forget Nightstalker!
There were a couple of niggles I had with reading this story that stopped the flow a little. I found the section in the mountains, and the repeated troll problem a little long; I just wanted them to get to Kishtan.
Also I found it unclear how old Lord Melcard was, he kept being described as a handsome man, with dark features, always very reserved etc. I got the feeling that he was slightly older than Rustam and Marten etc. But then there was the reveal that the elf had been captive for possibly 30 years or more, which would make him twice that if he had been the one to do the capturing.
There was also a small issue with the format of the text. Whenever an Italic thought was used, the font of the whole paragraph was larger. I thought my eyes were playing tricks at first.
But overall, a bloody good read, with adventure and plenty of amusing turns. I can't wait for the next in the series!
The closest relative to King Marten, Prince Halnashead, is in charge of security and recruits those best at playing the game of subterfuge. Two of his best agents are Charmer and Dart must work together to discover who is behind a plot to usurp the throne.
Rustam, also known as Charmer (no further explanation needed) is a talented dancer, who is confident in himself and in his unswerving loyalty to Halnashead and Marten. He never feels out of his depth, and his only real worry is making sure his appearance remains perfect.
Risada, our assassin Dart, is on the surface a respectable lady of the Second house. She keeps herself distant from the rest of the nobles, hardened by a constant fear and worry for her younger brother, and a desire to finally find her parents' killer.
The story initially revolves around the splendour of the noble houses, where the game is much more subtle, while they hone in on their suspects. But when they find things are on a bigger scale than they could have imagined, they suddenly finding themselves in the wilderness as they try to both escape their enemy and find new allies.
Jay paints a vivid world, that we are treated to in this dangerous adventure that tests our heroes to every limit. Including having them question everything they had ever taken for granted.
Rustam's trials and changes are most clearly portrayed. He was a very effective spy, but he develops some very useful extra skills, as well as throwing off the shallow persona and actually taking time to think about the world around him.
Risada stays true to herself, and to her friends the whole way through, but it is clear that the adventure has also opened her mind to possibilities she never considered.
I loved all the extra characters that were around, either in the background, or just coming forward for a chapter or two. They were all convincingly strong and well-written.
Princess Annasala; Betha; Leith - Jay has a knack for writing strong female characters.
And of course, we can't forget Nightstalker!
There were a couple of niggles I had with reading this story that stopped the flow a little. I found the section in the mountains, and the repeated troll problem a little long; I just wanted them to get to Kishtan.
Also I found it unclear how old Lord Melcard was, he kept being described as a handsome man, with dark features, always very reserved etc. I got the feeling that he was slightly older than Rustam and Marten etc. But then there was the reveal that the elf had been captive for possibly 30 years or more, which would make him twice that if he had been the one to do the capturing.
There was also a small issue with the format of the text. Whenever an Italic thought was used, the font of the whole paragraph was larger. I thought my eyes were playing tricks at first.
But overall, a bloody good read, with adventure and plenty of amusing turns. I can't wait for the next in the series!
February 25, 2014
Saving his kingdom seemed that simple choice – until he uncovered his heritage
Classic medieval fantasy with an unusual sinister sleuth ‘twist’!
Book 1: in the five kingdoms series is a sensational creation that blends together sweeping epic fantasy with a thoroughly modern edge to it. The mix of spellbinding romance with a dark mystery, made me feel like I was reading a Robin Hobb novel - -and yet something quite different. Amid this packed tale of deadly politics, secret assassins and old magic lies an undercurrent of an adventure {or ambitious quest} as its foundations. Fantastic characters such as rogue and ladies man Rustam Chalice and spy Prince Halnashead for instance, take you on the most entertaining journey across the vastly imaginative world.
Unlike other fantasy books ‘The Prince’s Man’ is supremely singular, and a tale that’s so intricately woven you cannot help but get lost within it. I was so mesmerized by the detailed descriptions, tangible world-building and intricate narrative that I just did not want to put this book down. Deborah Jay has created a highly believable world in which you can loose yourself entirely within, as well as a cast of unforgettable characters and creatures.
Seamless storytelling and a perfect balance of in-depth prose and dramatic action, makes this assured novel a most enjoyable read. The suspenseful and gripping battle scenes are so vivid and authentic; you are able to clearly envisage the brutality and gore. This captivating fantasy is well written and incredibly convincing hence I have no hesitation in placing it alongside Hobb, Feist, Martin and Brooks upon my bookshelf. If you enjoy fantasy with a touch of reality then this outstanding debut is definitely worth reading! Without a doubt this book for me deserves no less than 5 stars.
I was provided with a ‘PDF’ {e-copy} from the author to read, and I would like to state how my review reflects my honest and impartial opinions.
Classic medieval fantasy with an unusual sinister sleuth ‘twist’!
Book 1: in the five kingdoms series is a sensational creation that blends together sweeping epic fantasy with a thoroughly modern edge to it. The mix of spellbinding romance with a dark mystery, made me feel like I was reading a Robin Hobb novel - -and yet something quite different. Amid this packed tale of deadly politics, secret assassins and old magic lies an undercurrent of an adventure {or ambitious quest} as its foundations. Fantastic characters such as rogue and ladies man Rustam Chalice and spy Prince Halnashead for instance, take you on the most entertaining journey across the vastly imaginative world.
Unlike other fantasy books ‘The Prince’s Man’ is supremely singular, and a tale that’s so intricately woven you cannot help but get lost within it. I was so mesmerized by the detailed descriptions, tangible world-building and intricate narrative that I just did not want to put this book down. Deborah Jay has created a highly believable world in which you can loose yourself entirely within, as well as a cast of unforgettable characters and creatures.
Seamless storytelling and a perfect balance of in-depth prose and dramatic action, makes this assured novel a most enjoyable read. The suspenseful and gripping battle scenes are so vivid and authentic; you are able to clearly envisage the brutality and gore. This captivating fantasy is well written and incredibly convincing hence I have no hesitation in placing it alongside Hobb, Feist, Martin and Brooks upon my bookshelf. If you enjoy fantasy with a touch of reality then this outstanding debut is definitely worth reading! Without a doubt this book for me deserves no less than 5 stars.
I was provided with a ‘PDF’ {e-copy} from the author to read, and I would like to state how my review reflects my honest and impartial opinions.
April 10, 2021
Got this cheap off Book Bub. It wasn’t bad but not good enough to purchase any more of the books. Luckily this one had enough resolution that there isn’t any need to.
April 9, 2019
I'm not sure what I was expecting when I started reading 'The Prince's Man', but the reality blew me away. The story is a grown up fantasy reminiscent of Robin Hobb's Farseer series [which I also happen to love]. You'll find Machiavellian politics, intrigue, loyalty, a hint of love, and a cast of characters you can relate to. Yes, they have their flaws, but don't we all?
To my mind, watching the characters change and grow is at least half the fun. The other half is getting to know the world in which those characters live. In all types of speculative fiction, the world is as much of a 'character' as the characters themselves. Think how important the planet Arrakis is to the story of Dune.
As readers we want to step out of our everyday lives and get lost in another world. And the author does not disappoint. The otherness of The Prince's Man is evident right from the start, but there are no boring info. dumps. We learn about the world in the same way we learn about the human characters, by watching the story unfold, a bit at a time.
And finally, I'd like to say something about the plot. It. Is. Not. Predictable. To me, that's one of the book's greatest strengths. I like to be surprised, and nothing puts me off more than 'the same old same old'. In The Prince's Man, the author kept me guessing right to the end.
I'm looking forward to reading the next book of the series, and I highly recommend this one to anyone who likes a story with real meat on its bones.
To my mind, watching the characters change and grow is at least half the fun. The other half is getting to know the world in which those characters live. In all types of speculative fiction, the world is as much of a 'character' as the characters themselves. Think how important the planet Arrakis is to the story of Dune.
As readers we want to step out of our everyday lives and get lost in another world. And the author does not disappoint. The otherness of The Prince's Man is evident right from the start, but there are no boring info. dumps. We learn about the world in the same way we learn about the human characters, by watching the story unfold, a bit at a time.
And finally, I'd like to say something about the plot. It. Is. Not. Predictable. To me, that's one of the book's greatest strengths. I like to be surprised, and nothing puts me off more than 'the same old same old'. In The Prince's Man, the author kept me guessing right to the end.
I'm looking forward to reading the next book of the series, and I highly recommend this one to anyone who likes a story with real meat on its bones.
September 24, 2019
I thoroughly enjoyed this entertaining and skillfully-written fantasy novel. I was particularly taken with the tight narrative, not a wasted scene or conversation, every word counting as the story unfolded. This contributed to a quick pace and complimented the well-considered plot that comes together with a satisfying ending. Though the first in a series, The Prince’s Man can also be read as a stand-alone.
All that good stuff, and then there’s more… the characters are fabulous, deeply flawed and sympathetic at the same time. The relationship between Rustam and Risada takes center stage. There are hints of a romantic attraction but the reader is saved from moon eyes and heaving chests by a very real tension based on past experiences, current loyalties, and objectives. Despite being allies, there’s a lot of loathing going on here. I love that.
Elves, trolls, and were-cats throw the story into the classic fantasy genre and are integral to the plot and underlying theme of the book. The political machinations are realistic enough to be recognizable today. Prejudices, bigotry, genocide, and beliefs in cultural superiority are alive and well in her world-building. The characters are forced to revisit their worldviews, but just like in real life, they will only open their eyes so wide. And Jay doesn’t hold back on the brutality.
I’m looking forward to reading the next in the series and seeing what happens to the two main characters as well as a host of others who intrigued me no end. Recommended for anyone who loves a good fantasy.
All that good stuff, and then there’s more… the characters are fabulous, deeply flawed and sympathetic at the same time. The relationship between Rustam and Risada takes center stage. There are hints of a romantic attraction but the reader is saved from moon eyes and heaving chests by a very real tension based on past experiences, current loyalties, and objectives. Despite being allies, there’s a lot of loathing going on here. I love that.
Elves, trolls, and were-cats throw the story into the classic fantasy genre and are integral to the plot and underlying theme of the book. The political machinations are realistic enough to be recognizable today. Prejudices, bigotry, genocide, and beliefs in cultural superiority are alive and well in her world-building. The characters are forced to revisit their worldviews, but just like in real life, they will only open their eyes so wide. And Jay doesn’t hold back on the brutality.
I’m looking forward to reading the next in the series and seeing what happens to the two main characters as well as a host of others who intrigued me no end. Recommended for anyone who loves a good fantasy.
July 21, 2013
I know, I know. I never give 5 stars to anything, but I finished this book and went immediately to “Where’s the next one”. Which of course, there isn’t. The one I read was an advanced reader’s copy I got in exchange for an honest review, but I assure you that I will definitely be watching this author so that I can snap up whatever else she comes out with!
Back to the book. The Prince’s man is set in a fantasy world where mankind has been trying to survive on a new land for a hundred years and more. Since they escaped from a land full of magic and a war with the fae. There are several kingdoms, which appear to be an approximation of medieval Europe. None of the kingdoms get on particularly well of course.
We follow Rustam Chalice (Rusty) as the kingdom appears about to topple. Someone is selling the secret to eternal life and making a lot of money. That money appears to be going to fund a private army. Something the young king’s uncle, the spymaster as it were, cannot allow any of the families to do. When the families have fought before, it was disastrous and it doesn’t look to be any less so now. Especially for the royals and those who are loyal to them.
It’s an epic adventure with several well formed and engaging characters. As well as Rusty we have the cold Lady Risada Delgano vas Domn. Who saw her parent’s murdered when she was but 6 years old. She raised her brother, the Lord Iain Merschenko vas Domn to rule the second house but is struggling to let go of the reins (in true medieval style, women cannot rule a family). The interactions between these two as well as the other, less loyal characters, are both believable and unpredictable. It’s been a while since I didn’t know what was going to happen next in a book!
Add into that magic which is both awed and feared and you have the perfect epic fantasy adventure in a style that will have you gripped to every word. Please note, that it is advisable to start this book when you have a block of time to dedicate to it. Starting an hour before needing to leave the house will make you late, I should know. Read time approx. 5 – 6 hours. (Again, remember that I read quite fast. It’s 5904 locations on kindle so compare it to the time you take to read books of a similar length for a personal estimate)
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Back to the book. The Prince’s man is set in a fantasy world where mankind has been trying to survive on a new land for a hundred years and more. Since they escaped from a land full of magic and a war with the fae. There are several kingdoms, which appear to be an approximation of medieval Europe. None of the kingdoms get on particularly well of course.
We follow Rustam Chalice (Rusty) as the kingdom appears about to topple. Someone is selling the secret to eternal life and making a lot of money. That money appears to be going to fund a private army. Something the young king’s uncle, the spymaster as it were, cannot allow any of the families to do. When the families have fought before, it was disastrous and it doesn’t look to be any less so now. Especially for the royals and those who are loyal to them.
It’s an epic adventure with several well formed and engaging characters. As well as Rusty we have the cold Lady Risada Delgano vas Domn. Who saw her parent’s murdered when she was but 6 years old. She raised her brother, the Lord Iain Merschenko vas Domn to rule the second house but is struggling to let go of the reins (in true medieval style, women cannot rule a family). The interactions between these two as well as the other, less loyal characters, are both believable and unpredictable. It’s been a while since I didn’t know what was going to happen next in a book!
Add into that magic which is both awed and feared and you have the perfect epic fantasy adventure in a style that will have you gripped to every word. Please note, that it is advisable to start this book when you have a block of time to dedicate to it. Starting an hour before needing to leave the house will make you late, I should know. Read time approx. 5 – 6 hours. (Again, remember that I read quite fast. It’s 5904 locations on kindle so compare it to the time you take to read books of a similar length for a personal estimate)
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August 9, 2016
The writing is fairly well done with few distractions. The plot is intriguing and certainly interesting once you get past the first 1/3 or so of the book. The characters feel fleshed out and develop a sort of connection with the reader. I like the idea for the book, I just did not enjoy the enormous wealth of information and set-up at the very start. There is so much to absorb and learn all at once it makes for a struggle to keep reading. Once past that point, the rest of the book is an enjoyable read and certainly has potential. I received an evaluation copy from the author in exchange for an honest review. This in no way influenced my opinion, which may differ from your own. No compensation beyond the single copy has been accepted. Read more reviews and find your next favorite book, or win your own copy of a book or a kindle fire on my blog.
December 4, 2014
Reminiscent of Game of Thrones, this delightful fantasy will hold your attention from beginning to end. Although I do not normally enjoy fantasy, I picked it because someone compared it to GOT. This author has an amazing career ahead of her as her characters are well drawn, the story moves quickly and the plot and sub plots are compelling.
There are no grammatical or punctuation errors, and the writing style draws the reader in.
Thank you Ms. Jay for writing such an awesome work!
There are no grammatical or punctuation errors, and the writing style draws the reader in.
Thank you Ms. Jay for writing such an awesome work!
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October 5, 2016DNF at 10%
I tried. I read other reviews that said the MC grows and learns, but I just couldn't get past him being a womanizer. The book started with a few hints, that he spends nights with the ladies, that he uses wives to get secrets about their husbands, but it soon grew more explicit.
I loved the culture idea with the houses and that a noble's rank depends on how much land they own. The "game" and intrigue seemed like they were going to be exciting and complicated, too.
I tried. I read other reviews that said the MC grows and learns, but I just couldn't get past him being a womanizer. The book started with a few hints, that he spends nights with the ladies, that he uses wives to get secrets about their husbands, but it soon grew more explicit.
I loved the culture idea with the houses and that a noble's rank depends on how much land they own. The "game" and intrigue seemed like they were going to be exciting and complicated, too.
October 19, 2018
now i am hooked. This was such a great, easy and creative book. i was hooked after the first page.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
The characters were easy to fall in love with and follow, along with the story. the author made the mental visions so easy and vivid of the surroundings and the characters actions felt so real.
i would highly recommend this author and this book.
December 31, 2021
2 1/2. Decent story. Problem was I didn’t care about anyone or any of the societies, and one evil character was a bit over the top evil, and there was an uncharacteristic error by one person at the end. So for me most of the story dragged. I was also distracted by the author’s favourite words “whilst” and “fitful”. So no, I won’t be reading the next.
February 15, 2014
3.5/5.0
This is a diverting, character-driven fantasy book.
Read full review in the 2014 February issue of InD’tale Magazine.
This is a diverting, character-driven fantasy book.
Read full review in the 2014 February issue of InD’tale Magazine.
February 24, 2022
This book felt neverending, and not the easiest book for me to read. I'm not sure if I even want to read the next book, maybe eventually.
It's hard for me to put into words my thoughts about this book, except I'm glad I finally finished it
It's hard for me to put into words my thoughts about this book, except I'm glad I finally finished it
February 27, 2019
“The Prince’s Man,” begins with an introduction to the young Risada, as she listens in on a conversation between her parents. There’s trouble between the different houses in the kingdom, and Risada’s mother believes there is a spy in their midst. An assassin hiding in the shadows of the room steps forth and murders both her mother and father. From that day forward, Risada vows revenge on whoever killed her parents.
Twenty years later, the game is revealed when Rustam Chalice, an undercover spy in service to Prince Halnashead delivers to him the elixir of eternity, which of course gives eternal life to anyone who drinks it.
The political stability of the Kingdom of Tyr-en is at stake, and the veracity of the elixir’s power is questioned. The potion requires elven magic to be effective, and after the wars which ravished the kingdom, all magic has been banned. Additionally, the prince fears that whoever is selling the concoction is using the proceeds to fund some type of military action against him.
To save the kingdom, Chalice partners with Risada and together they save Elwaes, the captured elf, abused by Lord Melcard Rees-Charlay and Doctor Hensar, the resident physician for their domain. The poor creature requires immediate medical attention which must be given by his Elven community. Chalice and Risada set off after Prince Halnashead agrees on the journey believing the Elves will align with his kingdom.
The journey is long and treacherous. Along the way, the threesome is tormented by trolls, sprites, disgusting worm-like creatures, and many other trials and tribulations. Their journey heats up with the character addition of a water elemental who takes a liking to Chalice, pleasuring him in ways no human woman possibly could. The seducer becomes the seduced, and I would say Chalice has finally met his match.
There’s also high sexual tension between Chalice and Risalda, who manages to stay out of reach. But that wasn’t really the story. For me, it was Chalice’s connection to Elwaes and how he discovers his own magical abilities which transform his entire belief system. Along the way, this Casanova learns humility and acceptance, qualities that are sure to come into play in subsequent novels.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. In epic-fantasy, there are always new names, locations, and cultural nuances to be learned because of the world building. I took my time and immersed myself in this unusual and fascinating land. Be ready for the ending, because now I can’t wait to read the second book in the series, “The Prince’s Son: The Five Kingdoms: Book Two.”
MY RATING
Character Believability: 5
Flow and Pace: 5
Reader Engagement: 5
Reader Enrichment: 5
Reader Enjoyment: 5
Overall Rate: 5 out of 5 Stars
Twenty years later, the game is revealed when Rustam Chalice, an undercover spy in service to Prince Halnashead delivers to him the elixir of eternity, which of course gives eternal life to anyone who drinks it.
The political stability of the Kingdom of Tyr-en is at stake, and the veracity of the elixir’s power is questioned. The potion requires elven magic to be effective, and after the wars which ravished the kingdom, all magic has been banned. Additionally, the prince fears that whoever is selling the concoction is using the proceeds to fund some type of military action against him.
To save the kingdom, Chalice partners with Risada and together they save Elwaes, the captured elf, abused by Lord Melcard Rees-Charlay and Doctor Hensar, the resident physician for their domain. The poor creature requires immediate medical attention which must be given by his Elven community. Chalice and Risada set off after Prince Halnashead agrees on the journey believing the Elves will align with his kingdom.
The journey is long and treacherous. Along the way, the threesome is tormented by trolls, sprites, disgusting worm-like creatures, and many other trials and tribulations. Their journey heats up with the character addition of a water elemental who takes a liking to Chalice, pleasuring him in ways no human woman possibly could. The seducer becomes the seduced, and I would say Chalice has finally met his match.
There’s also high sexual tension between Chalice and Risalda, who manages to stay out of reach. But that wasn’t really the story. For me, it was Chalice’s connection to Elwaes and how he discovers his own magical abilities which transform his entire belief system. Along the way, this Casanova learns humility and acceptance, qualities that are sure to come into play in subsequent novels.
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. In epic-fantasy, there are always new names, locations, and cultural nuances to be learned because of the world building. I took my time and immersed myself in this unusual and fascinating land. Be ready for the ending, because now I can’t wait to read the second book in the series, “The Prince’s Son: The Five Kingdoms: Book Two.”
MY RATING
Character Believability: 5
Flow and Pace: 5
Reader Engagement: 5
Reader Enrichment: 5
Reader Enjoyment: 5
Overall Rate: 5 out of 5 Stars
May 22, 2023
Charming gigolo and dance tutor Rustam Chalice is also a spy for Prince Halnashead. When rumors of war threaten the survival of his kingdom, the Prince has Rustam team up with antagonist female assassin Risada to find allies before they lose everything.
The Prince’s Man is an intriguing page-turner filled with conflict, adventure, political backstabbing and scary creatures. A couple of torture scenes are not for the highly sensitive, and although they’re not graphically described, the implication was enough to make me cringe.
The author created intriguing worlds that contrast with one another in an appealing way. While the kingdom of Tyr-en is complex with twenty major houses and a clearly defined class system, it’s still easy to understand how it works.
Rustam and Risada face plenty of inner and external conflict as they grapple with numerous threats, their relationship, and the changes they experience in themselves on this dangerous journey. It’s a compelling story that fantasy readers will surely enjoy. Highly recommended.
The Prince’s Man is an intriguing page-turner filled with conflict, adventure, political backstabbing and scary creatures. A couple of torture scenes are not for the highly sensitive, and although they’re not graphically described, the implication was enough to make me cringe.
The author created intriguing worlds that contrast with one another in an appealing way. While the kingdom of Tyr-en is complex with twenty major houses and a clearly defined class system, it’s still easy to understand how it works.
Rustam and Risada face plenty of inner and external conflict as they grapple with numerous threats, their relationship, and the changes they experience in themselves on this dangerous journey. It’s a compelling story that fantasy readers will surely enjoy. Highly recommended.
August 11, 2025
“The Prince’s Man” is an exciting fantasy with settings and characters that pulled me right into it. It starts with a young girl, Risada, who watches her parents being brutally killed as she protects her little brother. Years later, this grown-up Lady Risada, the court’s secret assassin, teams up with Rustam, the court seducer and clandestine spy, to save their kingdom from a hostile takeover. While magic has been banned and feared in their realm, they rescue a tortured elf, Elwaes, from a cruel doctor. They have to survive the trek through the mountains with a sick elf to seek crucial support on the other side. The journey forces them to deal with magical beings, including trolls, a water seducer, and a werecat. Although there is an attraction between Risada and Rustam, there is also a lack of trust and borderline hatred from Risada. Their relationship is fascinating as it progresses, but I love how Rustam and the elf, Elwaes connect. A story I found hard to put down, and I look forward to seeing what happens next in the Five Kingdoms Series. I can highly recommend this!
September 18, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this epic fantasy book. The story is full of twists and turns and surprises. Yet it did not take too long to suspect who the bad guys were. The two main characters are Rustam (male) and Risada (female). Their relationship is quite intertwined from the start. Revelations as the story progressed did evolve their relationship. They repeatedly found themselves in difficult situations. There were a number of significant supporting characters, and some of those evolved over time. The magic is hidden at first and then slowly came to light. I found the ending very satisfying, and wanting for the next book to continue the evolution. Once I got engaged in the story it was hard to put the book down. If you love an engaging fantasy story, then I highly recommend this one.
December 26, 2021
I guessed the final twist pretty much from the start of the book. I can either describe the story as utterly predictable, or package it as a brilliant demonstration of foreshadowing...
The main character wasn't all that interesting. Think James Bond, without the excitement. The plot is a been there done that, save the kingdom from the usurper affaire. The background of the kingdom does have one interesting attribute. It was created by people who fled from another place, across the sea... That really isn't developed, so maybe it is the setup for something later in the series?
The book was nothing special.
The main character wasn't all that interesting. Think James Bond, without the excitement. The plot is a been there done that, save the kingdom from the usurper affaire. The background of the kingdom does have one interesting attribute. It was created by people who fled from another place, across the sea... That really isn't developed, so maybe it is the setup for something later in the series?
The book was nothing special.
December 17, 2020
Risada, Rustam, Anasala, Halnashead, Iain, Elwaes,
Risada witnessed her parents assassination, but escaped with her baby brother, Iain. She and Rustam have rescued Elwaes, an elf, from Lord Melcard and his doctor, adviser, and torturerer. Risada, Rustam, & Elwaes escape Melcard across the mountains, seeking to reach the kingdom of Kishran and hoping to receive aid to prevent the fall of Tyr-en to a usurper.
Characterization & plotting are excellent.
Characterization and plotting are excellent.
Risada witnessed her parents assassination, but escaped with her baby brother, Iain. She and Rustam have rescued Elwaes, an elf, from Lord Melcard and his doctor, adviser, and torturerer. Risada, Rustam, & Elwaes escape Melcard across the mountains, seeking to reach the kingdom of Kishran and hoping to receive aid to prevent the fall of Tyr-en to a usurper.
Characterization & plotting are excellent.
Characterization and plotting are excellent.
December 31, 2020
I have to admit I wasn't expecting a lot from this novel, but I was very pleasantly surprised. Jay does a great job of twisting a lot of fantasy tropes on their head and populating the book with a lot of well-drawn and fascinating characters. The plot twists and revelations were beautifully placed and carefully foreshadowed, even if they did come as a surprise.
A great story with characters you actually do care about and root for.
A great story with characters you actually do care about and root for.
September 8, 2025
The Prince’s Man by Deborah Jay is a captivating blend of fantasy, intrigue, and adventure that grips you from the very first chapter. Jay skillfully weaves a tale of espionage, magic, and courtly politics, creating a richly imagined world where danger lurks behind every secret and alliance.
For fans of fast-paced fantasy with a touch of mystery and intrigue, The Prince’s Man is an absolute gem and a story that will leave you eager to dive into the rest of the series.
Highly recommended
For fans of fast-paced fantasy with a touch of mystery and intrigue, The Prince’s Man is an absolute gem and a story that will leave you eager to dive into the rest of the series.
Highly recommended
October 13, 2022
Not a bad book, long but well written. Rustum is considered a player in the Prince's spy network, but he is also a Master Dancer and a playboy. Rustum and Risida are sent to a neighboring kingdom in the mountains in order to get reinforcements to help against The Bastard, who wants to take over the Kingdom of Tyr-en.
January 22, 2024
Magic, politics and twisted love affairs
I read a lot of fantasy and I couldn't put this one down. Wonderful plot twists along with magic and the superstitious fear of magic in the 5 kingdoms as well as love affairs. Whatever you do, Deborah, keep up this realm of stories
I read a lot of fantasy and I couldn't put this one down. Wonderful plot twists along with magic and the superstitious fear of magic in the 5 kingdoms as well as love affairs. Whatever you do, Deborah, keep up this realm of stories
February 4, 2018
This was an enjoyable easy read. Good characters, decent story.
January 2, 2021
Fast paced fantasy
Really enjoyed these characters. The story sucks you into their lives and doesn’t let you go. I am looking forward to the second book.
Really enjoyed these characters. The story sucks you into their lives and doesn’t let you go. I am looking forward to the second book.
December 21, 2021
GoT has a rival
Love magic, unwilling and willing heroes? Political machinations and sword fights? Sexy spies and beautiful yet deadly women? This book is for you.
Love magic, unwilling and willing heroes? Political machinations and sword fights? Sexy spies and beautiful yet deadly women? This book is for you.
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